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    Here is my first war story I have ever done. I don't claim to be some awesome trainer, in fact, I am convinced that I thoroughly suck. But, this is the first battle I have ever completed that think is worthy of to be a war story. Please ignore poor quality images, especially the stealth rock... So here it goes. My RU team versus his Uber team.

    Brutaka-

    FA3110-


    Start of turn 1


    Drapion used Toxic Spikes!
    Poison spikes were scattered all around the feet of FA3110's team!

    The foe's Forretress used Stealth Rock!
    Pointed stones float in the air around Brutaka's team!


    So, its the first turn. Its my Drapion against his Forretress. I was only worried about setting up this first turn, as I methodically do in every game. I should have realized that Forretress is a nasty one too. It throws up a Stealth Rock. I see this is gonna be a problem, as my Articuno is gonna take 50% damage later. But there isn't anything I can do about it now.

    Start of turn 2


    Drapion used Earthquake!
    The foe's Forretress lost 14% of its health!


    The foe's Forretress used Toxic Spikes!

    Poison spikes were scattered all around the feet of Brutaka's team!

    I honestly didn't know what would be best to do, so I said to heck with it and launched an Earthquake. It did only 14% damage. This is gonna take a while...And then he goes and lays out a Toxic Spikes. I know this battle is gonna be a tough one, and I am sure I was done from the start. Articuno's gonna eat it later, I thought.


    Start of turn 3


    The foe's Forretress used Spikes!
    Spikes were scattered all around the feet of Brutaka's team!

    Drapion used Whirlwind!
    FA3110 called Forretress back!
    The foe's Deoxys-S was dragged out!

    The foe's Deoxys-S was poisoned!
    The foe's Deoxys-S is exerting its Pressure!

    The foe's Deoxys-S is hurt by poison!

    It throws yet another entry hazard. Too bad I wasn't starting with a Taunt user. Oh well. I whirlwind it, hoping to Toxify a pokemon. It blows Forretress away, and a Deoxys-S pops out. Its immediately poisoned. Great, a legendary, I'm done for now...I think.



    Start of turn 4


    The foe's Deoxys-S used Fire Punch!
    Drapion lost 21% of its health!

    Drapion used Crunch!
    It's super effective!
    The foe's Deoxys-S lost 84% of its health!
    The foe's Deoxys-S's Defense fell!


    Drapion restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    The foe's Deoxys-S is hurt by poison!
    The foe's Deoxys-S fainted!
    FA3110 sent out Forretress!

    It uses a fire punch, and knocks out fifth of my health. But I still stand. I use a super-effective, STAB Crunch, knocking out nearly 85% of its health. It also lowers its defense. I soon learn that it doesn't matter, as the Toxic leeches away the last drizzle of health, and Deoxys-s goes down with hardly more than a small skirmish. His forretress returns to the stage.

    Start of turn 5


    The foe's Forretress used Gyro Ball!
    Drapion lost 70 HP! (20% of its health)

    Drapion used Whirlwind!

    FA3110 called Forretress back!
    The foe's cloyster was poisoned!
    The foe's cloyster was dragged out!

    Drapion restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

    The foe's cloyster is hurt by poison!

    The forretress shaves off another 20% of my health. It blow it away again, not wanting to deal with the thing. A cloyster is thrown out. It becomes posioned, just like I planned. Nothing to0 epic to comment here.

    Start of turn 6


    Drapion used Crunch!
    The foe's cloyster lost 17% of its health!

    The foe's cloyster used Icicle Crash!

    Drapion lost 34% of its health!

    Drapion restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    The foe's cloyster restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

    The foe's cloyster is hurt by poison!

    I use a crunch, shaving a clean 17% of its damage away. Then, it uses Icicle Crash, doing more damage to my poor Drapion. It isn't gonna last much longer...

    Start of turn 7


    Drapion used Crunch!

    The foe's cloyster lost 17% of its health!

    The foe's cloyster used Icicle Crash!

    The attack of the foe's cloyster missed!

    Drapion restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    The foe's cloyster restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

    The foe's cloyster is hurt by poison!

    Icicle Crash misses, leaving an extra turn for Leftover gain, and toxic to hurt his cloyster.

    Start of turn 8


    Drapion used Crunch!

    The foe's cloyster lost 16% of its health!

    The foe's cloyster used Icicle Crash!

    Drapion lost 111 HP! (32% of its health)

    Drapion restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    The foe's cloyster restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

    The foe's cloyster is hurt by poison!

    The way I figure it, Drapion is living on borrowed time now. But I resolve myself to take out the Cloyster before I go down.


    Start of turn 9


    Drapion used Crunch!
    The foe's cloyster lost 17% of its health!
    The foe's cloyster fainted!


    Drapion restored a little HP using its Leftovers!

    FA3110 sent out Ninjask!

    With one final Crunch, Cloyster is knocked out. Then the little speedster, nincada comes out. I smell trouble brewing.

    Start of turn 10


    The foe's Ninjask used U-turn!
    The foe's Ninjask's Bug Gem raised U-turn's power!

    Drapion lost 96 HP! (27% of its health)
    Drapion fainted!

    FA3110 called Ninjask back!
    FA3110 sent out Forretress!


    Brutaka sent out Samurott!
    Pointed stones dug into Samurott!
    Samurott is hurt by spikes!

    Samurott was poisoned!

    True to my suspicions, Ninjask KO's Drapion with a gem boosted u-turn. Forretress returns to the field, and I release my Samurott. Then, all the entry hazards take their turn, diminishing my health and delivering a nasty poison. I sent out Samurott, because i know all four of Forretress's moves now, and Gyro Ball wouldn't do much.


    Start of turn 11


    Samurott used Swords Dance!
    Samurott's Attack sharply rose!


    The foe's Forretress used Gyro Ball!

    It's not very effective...
    Samurott lost 40 HP! (10% of its health)


    Samurott is hurt by poison!

    I begin to set-up my Samurott, and he does a lowsy 10% damage to me. I pay attention to the posion, as it will only get worse...

    Start of turn 12


    Samurott used Aqua Jet!
    The foe's Forretress lost 34% of its health!
    Samurott is hurt by its Life Orb!


    The foe's Forretress used Gyro Ball!

    It's not very effective...
    A critical hit!
    Samurott lost 20% of its health!


    Samurott is hurt by poison!

    I Aqua Jet his pokemon, taking priority speed. It does a third of health in damage. His gyro ball then strikes a critical hit, which still isn't powerful. But its enough for what happens next...

    Start of turn 13


    Samurott used Waterfall!
    A critical hit!
    The foe's Forretress lost 53% of its health!
    The foe's Forretress fainted!
    Samurott is hurt by its Life Orb!
    Samurott fainted!


    FA3110 sent out Ninjask!

    Brutaka sent out Articuno!
    Pointed stones dug into Articuno!

    Articuno is exerting its Pressure!


    I use waterfall, and score a critical hit on him this time. What are the odds! Well, my life orb kills me too, so both pokemon faint at once. I throw out my Articuno, and take a nasty toll from that stealth rock. His ninjask returns.

    Start of turn 14


    The foe's Ninjask used U-turn!
    It's not very effective...
    Articuno lost 13% of its health!

    FA3110 called Ninjask back!
    FA3110 sent out Jirachi!


    Articuno used Roost!
    Articuno landed on the ground!
    Articuno regained health!

    Articuno restored a little HP using its Leftovers!


    Like I figured he would, Ninjask uses its U-turn, and brings out a Jirachi. Oh no, a steel type. Well, I use the turn to roost, gaining some need hit points.

    Start of turn 15


    The foe's Jirachi used Psychic!
    Articuno lost 25% of its health!

    Articuno used Ice Beam!

    It's not very effective...
    The foe's Jirachi lost 16% of its health!


    The foe's Jirachi restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    Articuno restored a little HP using its Leftovers!


    I didn't feel like switching, though I probably should have. He inflicts a forth damage to me, and use a weak ice beam on him. Stupid, huh? I know, i didn't think to switch at the time.

    Start of turn 16


    The foe's Jirachi used Psychic!
    Articuno lost 25% of its health!
    Articuno's Sp. Def. fell!

    Articuno used Ice Beam!
    It's not very effective...
    The foe's Jirachi lost 15% of its health!

    The foe's Jirachi restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    Articuno restored a little HP using its Leftovers!


    He takes out another 25%. My Sp. Def falls this time. Next turn, the psychic will hurt more than this turn. I use another pathetic Ice beam.


    Start of turn 17


    The foe's Jirachi used Psychic!

    Articuno lost 145 HP! (37% of its health)

    Articuno used Roar!

    FA3110 called Jirachi back!
    The foe's Ninjask was dragged out!


    Articuno restored a little HP using its Leftovers!


    The Sp. Def lowered in the last turn hurts me more, but I decided enough is enough, and roared him away. And its the return of Ninjask, hurray...

    Start of turn 18


    The foe's Ninjask used Aerial Ace!
    Articuno lost 89 HP! (23% of its health)
    Articuno fainted!


    The foe's Ninjask's Speed Boost increases its speed!
    The foe's Ninjask's Speed rose!
    Brutaka sent out Gardevoir!
    Pointed stones dug into Gardevoir!
    Gardevoir is hurt by spikes!

    Gardevoir was poisoned!

    Gardevoir traced the foe's Ninjask's Speed Boost!

    I was expecting a U-turn, but he goes with arial ace. That's two pokemon that Nincada has under its belt now. Don't ask me why I threw out Gardevior. I only had three pokemon left(Gardevior, Absol, and Sableye), and this one was the best. Gardevior traces the Ninjask's speed boost, which is nice. it turns out though, that it doesn't matter.

    Start of turn 19


    The foe's Ninjask used U-turn!
    It's super effective!
    Gardevoir lost 209 HP! (75% of its health)
    Gardevoir fainted!

    FA3110 called Ninjask back!
    FA3110 sent out Kyogre!

    The foe's Kyogre was poisoned!

    The foe's Kyogre's Drizzle made it rain!

    Rain continues to fall!

    The foe's Kyogre is hurt by poison!
    Brutaka sent out Absol!
    Pointed stones dug into Absol!
    Absol is hurt by spikes!

    Absol was poisoned!

    Luckily, its a U-turn, which though knocks out Gardevior, it gets rid of the nincada problem at least for now. And then out comes Kyogre. If i was unsure before, now I know he's playing with ubers. The rain comes into play, but it doesn't actually help or harm this time. I decide Absol is my best bet this time.

    Start of turn 20


    Absol used Swords Dance!
    Absol's Attack sharply rose!


    The foe's Kyogre used Aqua Ring!
    The foe's Kyogre surrounded itself with a veil of water!

    Rain continues to fall!
    The foe's Kyogre restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    Aqua ring restored the foe's Kyogre's HP.

    Absol is hurt by poison!
    The foe's Kyogre is hurt by poison!


    We're in the final leg now, and I begin to set up Absol. A boosted Absol is a powerful force, if somewhat fragile. Kyogre uses an Aqua Ring, giving me that free turn for Swords Dance. Knowing how weak Absol is, I thought I would be out this turn. But I was lucky, I guess.


    Start of turn 21


    Absol used Sucker Punch!
    The foe's Kyogre lost 87% of its health!
    The foe's Kyogre fainted!
    Absol is hurt by its Life Orb!


    Rain continues to fall!

    Absol is hurt by poison!
    FA3110 sent out Ninjask!

    Hoping to get an attack in before I hit it, I use Sucker Punch. Its a priority move. If it failed, it would matter, becuase that means he wont be doing a direct attack. But lands, and much to my surprise at the time, the STAB, Life orb, +1 atk sucker punch hits, and defeats Kyogre in one shot. Nice. Nanjask again, comes out.


    Start of turn 22


    Absol used Sucker Punch!
    The foe's Ninjask lost 100% of its health!
    The foe's Ninjask fainted!
    Absol is hurt by its Life Orb!

    Rain continues to fall!

    Absol is hurt by poison!
    FA3110 sent out Jirachi!

    This time, as i see red for all the damage that buggers done, I know I must kill it. My one Sucker Punch again fells the dang bug, saving me from the lethal U-turn. His last pokemon, Jirachi makes its last stand. This is gonna be good.


    Start of turn 23


    The foe's Jirachi used Wish!

    Absol used Superpower!
    A critical hit!
    The foe's Jirachi lost 79% of its health!
    The foe's Jirachi fainted!
    Absol's Attack fell!
    Absol's Defense fell!
    Absol is hurt by its Life Orb!


    With a last ditch attack, I select Superpower, after a bit of mental arguements. It decided to use wish, maybe in case if it survived. No such luck, as my Superpower gains a critical hit, and defeats the Jirachi once and for all.


    Like I said in the beginning, I am a novice at this. I am just amazed at my turn around win. I know I made some sloppy mistakes, but I won. Any criticism is appreciated, and welcomed. I am only human, so I know there are a few grammatical and/or mathematical errors. And thank you again for taking your time to read this. If you want, here's the whole log:
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    Aqua Ring Kyogre. A_A Eh guess others may find some amusement out of this.
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    Wow. This is really good even though its a first story. I really loved it!

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    This isn't RU vs Uber, its RU vs Bad OU + a terrible Kyogre. This was a terrible battle.

    Which is a shame because you wrote the warstory very well. I'm going to lock this because although the story was very well written, the battle was awful.

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