I remember writing this,When Bob ran out of the bathroom, he was in shock on what he's just seeing. He grabbed his heart very tight, breathing in and out anxiously.
"Wh.... WHAT HAPPENED TO THE CAGE!?"
He froze as he heard the faint whispers of hisses below him. He tilted his head down with the feeling of being afraid as he glanced at the tamed snake with his elongated wiggling extension of a tongue.
He leaped and pierced through Bob's hand. Bob's face is in awe, with his mouth agape as blood quickly seeps out very fast, fast as a water current. The snake forcibly pushed all of his digestive acids and all of his food into his large mouth. Bob's eyes shrunk to a grain of sand as the troubled snake prepared to blast his chunky, acidic, disturbing blast.
Bob's face was shot by it with such great force as he slipped from the water and fell down, unable to get up as he struggled to get on his feet.
Later, as Derek returns from Six Flags, he quickly ran to Bob's house. He banged the door hard, then he noticed that the door is already opened, slamming the wall of his living room.
"AAAAGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" "shatter" from a piece of glass.
Derek heard Bob's voice as he knew that the snake might have done something to him. He quickly hustled up to his room, then he cannot believe on what he just saw. The snake's head concealed Bob's whole head while he coiled his whole body, as blood quickly ran from his neck with blood and barf splattered across the room, while Derek saw the shattered glass cage.
Last edited by Quilava42; 11th January 2013 at 12:10 PM.
Helps if you stay in the same tense the whole time. Switching between past and present is a bit distracting. How long ago did you write that?
Originally Posted by Pesky Persian
Oddly enough, there isn't really that much ripping on the new Pokemon as last time, when there were only 7 Pokemon revealed ad everyone was talking about how the new generation was going to suck.
As do I. I do have some Cheetos in my dorm, but I'm not sure if they are going to be stale at this point.In other irrelevant news, I'm wishing I had something worthy to snack on. But everything looks too bland or boring right now.
My God, there are only going to be 73 1/2 Pokemon this generation!
I heard that there was a new Pokemon generation. How long until I read some reasonable opinions about it?
In other news, I finally got my first paying job today which includes greeting rich people and celebrities. All of those days of searching have finally paid off.
I think theirs gonna be some seriously twisted stuff in pokemon X and Y.
They've already set the perimeters of ideals through the concepts of certain pokemon. Time,space, alternate dimensions, alternate universes,voids, genetic manipulation, omni-present beings,telepathy, time travel, aliens... All have already been imbued into certain pokemon and the underlining themes of the environments in which these pokemon create can be seen as rather extraordinary.
Though with all these things present, theirs very little they can do to further extend the "perameters" of the themes of pokemon.
The only thing left in pokemon now.. Is to further whats in the inside.. Further develop and or upgrade the quality of the internal workings of pokemon itself.
Weather it be graphics and other things that slightly improve the game, which they are doing because of the larger amount of data being able to be stored on the ds.
They might make an immortal pokemon born from an accident or whatever. Though the external perimeters, the.. Concepts that define pokemon and its inner workings are
some what.. at their limit..
Theirs very little that could possible improve the underlining themes of the game.. Because how does one improve upon an omni present being ( arceus ), an alien, a time traveling pokemon (celebi), inter-dimension beings ( palkia and dialga), pokemons even gone as fare as to question the very origin of pokemon itself through the creation of zekrom and reshiram ( ying and yang ).
Theirs very little they can do now except further develop the internal workings of the game...
Theirs gonna be some seriously twisted pokemon that come outa this generation
And congratulations on the job.
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I don't think most of them will have a "reasonable" opinion. This is the Pokemon fandom we're talking about.
That said, it'll be hard for me, especially with no job, to justify spending $40 on a game that, when you strip away the frills, I've been playing in some form or another for fifteen years. I don't get that much satisfaction from beating a Pokemon game anymore, because I've done it so many times already. What new revelations am I likely to glean from doing it again?
Then again, Black and White had somewhat different ending sequences from the rest of the game.
I like the new thread title, cars are nice. Does anyone have a dream car? I'd love a '69 Charger. Mmmm they're beautiful.
I'd also love a Mini Cooper, they're such nice little cars.
Half Life 3 confirmed.
Haha, looks like Kirby's at it again.
How many title changes was that now? 3?
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