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    Author's Notes: Originally for Poképrompts' blitz challenge; the prompt was "reality shift." Warning for psychological horror.

    For extra fun, count the number of words in each section and then think about N's part again.

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    Leaf knows.

    She knows it was sunny the day she left. She remembers the softness of her mother's kiss on her forehead, the way the grass scratched her bare calves, the gruffness of the old professor's voice as he rushed to her. She remembers the plastic smoothness of each poké ball in his laboratory. She remembers the way that bulbasaur, her bulbasaur, croaked and smiled at her.

    Her entire world is full of memories. It took her a week to get to Pewter City but only fifteen minutes for Bulbasaur to defeat Brock's pokémon. The white light that surrounded Bulbasaur's body was so bright, so beautiful that Leaf nearly cried when she watched it. Pidgey and Rattata were envious for weeks.

    Leaf thought Misty was cool, Erika was nice, and Sabrina was scary. She didn't care for the male gym leaders that much, not because she didn't like boys but instead because they were so old and talked about things she didn't understand. Leaf wasn't exactly stupid, but she was young. The girls understood this.

    She remembers her rival, Blue. He was annoying at first, but then, one day she saw him at Lavender Tower, his gaze towards the ceiling, his arms wrapped around himself even though it wasn't cold. When he saw her, for a brief second, she thought his eyes were red, but then, he did his best to swallow it all, to storm at her, to push her and battle her and take out all his anger on her. And she let him because she didn't know what to say.

    Team Rocket. She remembers them. She remembers their black suits, their twisting hideouts, the way the people in Silph trembled and begged her to help them. She remembered his smirk most of all, the one of the eighth gym leader – smirking at her in the president's office (triumphant then, as if losing to her was just part of his plan) and then in Viridian Gym (wistfully, as if he lost something).

    She remembers the Elite Four, Blue, the thrill of battle, all of her hard work coming to that one point. At the end, she wanted to apologize to Blue for everything, but she never got the chance. The Hall of Fame waited for her – her, the Champion.

    Leaf knows. She knows she was a hero. She knows she saved the region from Team Rocket, defeated the strongest trainers in Kanto, captured legends. Everyone should be talking about her.

    But then, when she came home, her mother looked up, smiled at her as if she was a stranger, and apologized for her son's absence.

    Leaf knows she doesn't have a brother.



    Bill remembers.

    There's a reason why he's standing at the top of the stairs of the pokémon center in Ecruteak City, but he only vaguely knows why. He was there to fix something, but what?

    Lately, he's been remembering multiple dreams all at once. In one of them, he's there because he fixed a time machine. It's his latest work, and he's proud of it because only he could be brilliant enough to defy the laws of time and space. In another one, he's there because they needed someone to fix the region's wi-fi, which doesn't make sense to him, but he feels like this memory is what's supposed to be true this time around.

    There are other lives, too – ones where he helps save the world and others where he only serves as a teacher. He doesn't know how many different lifetimes he's led, but they're all bleeding into one another, one detail crossing with another until he's not sure whether or not he's awake this time.

    He wanders downstairs and approaches the desk. His mouth knows what to say, but the rest of him doesn't. This is when a girl approaches him. He turns and finds her, brown-haired (Wasn't she supposed to be blue-haired?) and wide-eyed with a typhlosion (Didn't she have a meganium?) by her side. It's his cue. He introduces himself and speaks before she can, explaining that he's there for the wi-fi system.

    But his mouth stumbles partway through. He mentions the storage system and Lanette (who doesn't exist in any of the other dreams except two), but he feels like the trainer already knows that, like his words no longer have meaning. But he can't stop. It's his cue. He has to say something. They wanted everything to be as close to the old timeline as possible. It's not his fault they made him redundant!

    They?

    Bill knows he's just barely grasped something when it slips away from him. Something's nagging at his mind – the thought that he just came to be one day, as dictated by someone else. He barely remembers a computer, a line of text, a face just beyond a glass screen. But that's ridiculous! He had a childhood! He went to school! He has an entire history beyond this—

    This what?

    The girl stares at him. He shakes himself from his thoughts and quickly excuses himself. As he walks towards the door, he can't help but feel very, very tired, and he wonders if this is just another one of his dreams. The memories of a lack of childhood and the other lifetimes are already fading away.

    Bill remembers, but he isn't sure what.



    Courtney feels.

    In her mind, there are multiple rifts, jagged chasms between one truth and the next. She knows that Team Magma, where her loyalties lie, is trying to awaken Groudon so that it will create a new landmass on which people and pokémon can live, and in one truth, she is the admin of Team Magma, the organization stealing submarines and sensitive documents to achieve this goal. She also knows that Team Aqua, her sworn enemy, is trying to awaken Kyogre so that it may produce more water that people and pokémon can use to live, and in another truth, she is the admin of Team Magma, the organization using all of its power and reserves to stop them. And in her mind, there are three realities: one in which Aqua nearly succeeds and almost drowns the world, one in which Magma nearly succeeds and almost burns the world beneath bright sunlight, and one in which Aqua and Magma nearly succeed in destroying the world together.

    Courtney stands on the shore of Lilycove City. In the distance, she sees a small mountain jut out of the waves. There was once a cave there, and within it was Magma's hideout.

    No. That's not right. It was Aqua's. Magma never needed to hide.

    No. That's not right. Magma needed to hide, but they did so in Mt. Chimney, nestled between fire and rock.

    They disbanded. Maxie saw the errors of his ways when Groudon scorched the earth, right? No. It was because they had no purpose now that Team Aqua saw what Kyogre could do. No. It was because the world was nearly destroyed because of the both of them, and Maxie and Archie knew this.

    Courtney fell to her knees, her fingers worming their way into the warm sand. She wasn't sure why her head throbbed. The truth, the mess of one reality clashing into another was never an issue until recently. Why? Why now? Did she dream something? Was she sick?

    Who are you?

    She froze. She lifted her chin, and all of a sudden, she felt eyes staring deep into her body.

    Are you good, or are you evil?

    How could something ask her that? She was good! She was always good! Sure, Magma never always had the best methods, but—

    They always had the best methods! They never stole anything; that was Aqua!

    Are you sure?

    She was sure! Was she?

    She couldn't be a thief. And even if she was, it was for the best, right?

    "Stop judging me!" she screams.

    It echoes. The feeling of something staring at her won't go away.

    Courtney feels as if she's breaking apart.



    Mars hates.

    She has an entire list of reasons of who and what she hates. She hates Jupiter for her attitude. She hates Charon for his ideals. She hates Saturn for refusing to leave when Charon declared himself the leader of Team Galactic. She hates the child from Twinleaf Town who defeated Cyrus – her only true superior – so easily. She hates Giratina for dragging Cyrus into the Distortion World.

    But right now, she stands at the peak of Mt. Coronet, her hands tracing along the rock surfaces of each broken pillar and each shattered wall. Every fiber of her being hopes and prays that in the next instant, she'll see a glimmer of something – anything – that would be a clue as to where she could enter the Distortion World.

    She imagines it's Hell. Mars doesn't necessarily believe in Hell, but she imagines it's a dark place where Cyrus is alone, each thread of his mind unraveling one by one.

    Her pace quickens. In her mind, she finds herself exploring what-ifs. What if she was stronger? What if she stopped the child from Twinleaf? What if she stayed and tried to pull Cyrus from the dark pit Giratina dragged him into?

    What if only one of the gods had appeared that day?

    In her mind, there is another reality. Within this one, there is only Palkia or Dialga, not both. Giratina never notices, never reaches through the barrier between this world and its own, never takes Cyrus. Instead, Cyrus sees it as a disappointment and vanishes, but Mars still hopes. Even though she knows Team Galactic would die without him, she sees herself in that other reality, not tracing rock with numb fingertips but instead searching the world over for Cyrus. She would find him in that reality, and she feels that in that one, she has a chance to convince him to go with her, to go back to Sinnoh and Galactic.

    Within this reality, her heart doesn't want to accept anything but the hope that she might find the entrance to the Distortion World, and beyond that, she doesn't want to believe in any other possibility than the one in which Cyrus listens to her. But her rational mind says she should give up hope, and Jupiter called her crazy for it.

    But how could she be crazy? The world needs Cyrus. She needs Cyrus. And it's possible, isn't it? Her other self found a way, and so will she. She will break through to the other world. She will find Cyrus and bring him back, no matter how long it takes. She will. She swears.

    Mars hates everyone who tells her otherwise.



    N understands.

    His home, Unova, came pre-fractured. It wasn't just subtle differences like which team was good and evil. It was entire places. He knows that in one Unova, there are vast cities, oceans of light glowing softly in the night, and in another Unova, those same glass towers are trees and stone walls. In one Unova, he rides the white dragon of ideals; in the other, the black dragon of truth. Sometimes, he wonders which of the legendary heroes he is because of this confusion, but it doesn't bother him much because he knows why the rifts are there.

    From his vantage point above Cinnabar Island, he notices the girl from Pallet Town first. Her lapras carries her up and down the coastline, edging the foot of the ruined mountain. Strands of her brown hair fly in her face, flicking across tired eyes. She hasn't slept in days, and N doesn't need any special powers to get this from the look on her face.

    He knows why she's here, and he feels sorry for her. She was a change, but because they wanted the storyline to be perfect – to be exactly as it was the first time around – she was quickly forgotten. And now, this is her purpose, to search for that creature from the first timeline, the one with the power to unravel reality. N wonders if it's true that it's still there, even though he knows it hasn't been seen since the beginning of the first timeline, since before Cinnabar was nothing but a ruined volcano.

    Part of him is curious, but he knows he shouldn't be curious – because if this girl is right, then it would all be over.

    She doesn't understand. Why would change be a bad thing? Why would it be so terrible to be reassigned a purpose?

    The rifts are there for a reason.

    He has this dragon for a reason.

    They're forcing him to wander the world for a reason.

    She has no right to fight it. Destiny is a beautiful thing. Soon, he'll receive a third timeline, and with that, he will have another purpose. His mind reeled with the possibilities that this new life would give him. Why won't she understand?

    He has his purpose now. They want him to stop her and all the others who know. All of them are suffering; all of their minds are coming apart. Not his. No, not his because Unova was always fractured. He will help them all: the one in Johto, the one in Hoenn, the one in Sinnoh.

    And her.

    He orders his dragon to descend.

    N understands, and he wants you to understand too.

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    ****OLLLOGIC]

    N's part seems to follow the equation 'x=1/2∞', also known as the Bernoulli-Dogmish Principle, which dictates that there is no escape from an antithermodynamic system.

    *****OLLLOGIC]

    I really liked this fic. It's interesting how you handle the idea of different versions and saved games as alternate universes, and the problems that come with self-assured righteousness as is seen in the various evil teams of the Pokemon World.

    Bill's part is also rather interesting, as it makes you feel like he's a piece of code rejecting the idea of being a piece of code. Rather delightful, truly.

    However, I don't see how 447 is a magic number of any sort.
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    Holy... sh...

    This reminded me of Higurashi When They Cry, at least with the subject matter, no joke. This is... amazing, and it makes sense. Yeah, you wanted us to think on it for a while, but I managed to comprehend it all in one sitting (albeit my brain is near to imploding right now from it, but I understand it all, and it's awesome). Though it could be because I've watched Higurashi a good few times to understand the feel of it, and thus I could handle this sort of thing. I have now found my favorite genre.

    An awesome, AWESOME theory--or is it canon? To think the mysteries of the Pokéverse could be solved as such, you know? This explains a lot, and I mean a LOT of things.

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    Woah, nice JX. This is the first time I've seen a breakage of the forth wall that isn't for comical reason. And you've done it well.
    There are other lives, too – ones where he helps save the world and others where he only serves as a teacher.
    A referance to your own fan fic huh? Imagine if they included events of all the fan fics huh XD. But still, it's rather deep and makes you think. I hate paradoxes and alternate dimentions and all the the confusion they cause but I love them too for some reason. This is really interesting and I wonder if there might be more.
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    Whoa. Just. Whoa.

    This is a great idea! I love the incorporation of each and every storyline for each game! It all makes sense; first, you have the first to versions which create the basis for the third, canon storyline.

    And you execution was perfect! I love seeing the story from each character's eyes, because they all see each thing differently. However, instead of using Red/Leaf/Gold/Crystal/Etahn/Lyra/Brendan/May/Lucas/Dawn/Barry/Hilbert/Hilda, you used Leaf as your basis point. The first big change; she was originally only Red. And in HGSS, she doesn't exist. She's no one, while Red is the only known character.

    And then you go to Bill. Why Bill? Because he sees things differently, and he can fill different roles. And so on so forth. It's genius what you did here!

    I really don't know what to say. Very, very good.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sgeckledorf Spoongeblorb View Post
    ****OLLLOGIC]

    N's part seems to follow the equation 'x=1/2∞', also known as the Bernoulli-Dogmish Principle, which dictates that there is no escape from an antithermodynamic system.

    *****OLLLOGIC]
    Damn, you hit the nail on the head in one go.

    I really liked this fic. It's interesting how you handle the idea of different versions and saved games as alternate universes, and the problems that come with self-assured righteousness as is seen in the various evil teams of the Pokemon World.
    Thank you! I do have to admit it was a lot of fun to screw around with canon, although I was ironically a bit worried about Courtney and Mars. Mars especially because, honestly, I've never played Platinum, so I was just going off Bulbapedia's summary of what went down. It's good to hear that the message got across either way (especially because the parts I had the most fun writing were the parts where they're both going insane from their ideas of ethics).

    Bill's part is also rather interesting, as it makes you feel like he's a piece of code rejecting the idea of being a piece of code.
    Oh yes. The element that I especially love about that part? The fact that Bill represents every "good" character in the games. Go ahead and think about how Sabrina can't recognize herself in a mirror thanks to the redesigns, how Steven feels about the timeline in which he's the champion and the one in which he isn't, how Lyra must feel about an entire character vanishing from existence because of her...

    Really, I think the good guys, in this universe anyway, might be more psychologically unstable than the bad guys. It just so happens that the villains were easier to write about. (I mean, the entire Team Magma/Aqua good-bad confusion and Mars's perpetually unrequited love were just asking for it.)

    However, I don't see how 447 is a magic number of any sort.
    Yeah, it occurred to me belatedly that asking you to count words without telling you which program to do it in would be counterproductive because every program counts words differently. For example, when I posted this to FFNet, their built-in counter was insisting that each part had over 450 words each, which makes absolutely no sense whatsoever.

    But in any case, I used MS Word 2003, which said that the grand total for each part was an even 444.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kutie Pie View Post
    This reminded me of Higurashi When They Cry, at least with the subject matter, no joke. This is... amazing, and it makes sense. Yeah, you wanted us to think on it for a while, but I managed to comprehend it all in one sitting (albeit my brain is near to imploding right now from it, but I understand it all, and it's awesome). Though it could be because I've watched Higurashi a good few times to understand the feel of it, and thus I could handle this sort of thing. I have now found my favorite genre.
    Thank you!

    And man, I need to finish that series. You'd think I'd be all over that, what with the fact that it involves people going crazy and killing each other in fantastic displays of psychosis that makes the cast of Evangelion look positively well-adjusted, but hey.

    An awesome, AWESOME theory--or is it canon? To think the mysteries of the Pokéverse could be solved as such, you know? This explains a lot, and I mean a LOT of things.
    If I just gave someone new headcanon, then I'd like to say that's awesome. Because then that means you'd come up with theories of your own, and there really needs to be a list out there of how the retcons and various alternate universes in the franchise effect all the characters in it.

    Quote Originally Posted by gmoyes View Post
    Woah, nice JX. This is the first time I've seen a breakage of the forth wall that isn't for comical reason. And you've done it well.
    Thank you!

    A referance to your own fan fic huh? Imagine if they included events of all the fan fics huh XD.
    As amusing as that would be, it's actually not. XD It's a reference to the various manga, namely:

    - Special, in which Bill serves as part innocent bystander and part sidekick. For example, there's the climax of the GSC arc, where his repairs allow trainers all over Johto to send their Pokémon to the Dex Holders in order to fight Ho-oh and Lugia. Then, there's the time when he pitches in to fight the Elite Four on Cerise Island. And if I recall correctly, he also plays a role in helping the Dex Holders fight off Deoxys in the Sevii Islands arc. So, in a way, he repeatedly helps save the world, although he's not the one directly fighting against whatever the global threat of the arc happens to be. (This contrasts to, say, the anime or Zenshou, where his role is basically to stand by and act as a teacher to the protagonist.)

    - Golden Boys, in which Bill lends Gold and Black (read: Silver expy) the Pokémon they use to fight against Team Rocket (who at the time is holding them and various gym leaders hostage).

    - Although I wasn't thinking of it at the time, How I Became a Pokémon Card's Bill almost counts too, considering he and the Dratini he befriended technically save a village from a rampaging Dragonite. But it was just one village, and the Dragonite really wasn't going to go around leveling all human civilizations. So not sure if that can be lumped in with the two mentioned above.

    But if we did include fanfiction, oh the havoc that would wreak on characters' sanities.

    I hate paradoxes and alternate dimentions and all the the confusion they cause but I love them too for some reason. This is really interesting and I wonder if there might be more.
    Thank you!

    And as for more, I'm not sure myself, but I'm sort of tempted to explore other characters' fraying sanities now, so...!

    Quote Originally Posted by NACHOE! View Post
    This is a great idea! I love the incorporation of each and every storyline for each game!
    Thank you! I'm glad it pulled together coherently. XD

    The first big change; she was originally only Red. And in HGSS, she doesn't exist. She's no one, while Red is the only known character.
    Exactly. *high fives* It always bugged me to hear people go on and on with all kinds of speculation as to what happened to Leaf and why she's not in HGSS. (Or if they're not speculating, they're raging about it.) It wasn't because I was tired of hearing it. It was because, hey, those guys have a point, and for whatever reason, I was never able to come up with headcanon that answered that question satisfactorily. So, there's this!

    And then you go to Bill. Why Bill? Because he sees things differently, and he can fill different roles. And so on so forth. It's genius what you did here!
    Thank you. :D Although I have to admit, there's another reason why I chose Bill and not because of bias. It's because he's right: the creators did make him redundant. In the GSC versions, the reason why you met him in Ecruteak was because he was fixing the Time Capsule, and this was supposed to be a flag that would let you trade with the Gen I games. Gen IV had the Pal Park, not the Time Capsule, so there's literally no reason why you meet Bill in the Pokémon Center. So he's rambling on and on at Lyra (using rambling dialogue lifted directly from canon -- so, yeah, just imagine that what he's saying is exactly what you see him talk about in the games) because he just doesn't know what to say.

    But you're right too: all of the characters see things differently from each other in this fic.

    First, you have Leaf, who wants to cope with her lack of existence and sudden rejection from reality (read: literally no one recognizes her or acknowledges that she exists, despite the fact that she's worked so hard to make something of herself) by committing suicide and erasing the rest of the universe with her.

    Then, you have Bill, who tries to cope with his dueling realities by attempting to convince himself that none of them (except the one he's living in right at that moment) exist -- i.e., ignoring the problem and hoping it'll go away.

    Courtney can't cope with dueling realities at all, and it's gotten to the point where she literally can't function.

    Mars not only embraces the idea that there are alternate universes, but she's also let herself build up an entire set of delusions based on the fact that she envies the life her other self is leading.

    Then you have N, who was already unhinged with the knowledge that there are two Unovas that differ from each other slightly. It's hard to describe N's mindset exactly. I guess the short of it is that what he wants is stability, and he feels that the only way to get it is by "closing out" Gen V with a third timeline. As in, the reason why he's excited about another alternate universe being brought in is because it'll be the last alternate universe he'll receive (assuming they don't reboot Gen V the way they did Gen I and II, anyway).

    So, tl;dr, pretty much, yep. All of the characters approach the ideas of alternate universes differently. All of them are aware of how vastly different their other selves are from them. And as a result, it was extremely fun to write this kind of self-awareness.


    In short, thanks for the reviews, everyone! I'm glad you liked it! :D

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