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    Hello Serebii, and welcome to my war story. This is a war story that retells a great battle i had vs. a person on Skarmbliss' VGC server. As VGC is going to be in November and in April, i decided to post this here. So sit back, relax, and ENJOY.

    My Team



    Opponent's Team



    Battle between [Drac]Draco123 and tomfoolery started!

    Tier: VGC 2012
    Mode: Doubles
    Variation: +24, -8
    Rule: Rated
    Rule: Item Clause
    Rule: Species Clause
    Rule: Wifi Battle


    As you can see by the amount of points i get on the ladder, this wasn't some n00b. This was someone who knew what he/she was doing. So, i have to play smart.

    tomfoolery sent out Kojondo! (Mienshao)
    [Drac]Draco123 sent out Latios!
    tomfoolery sent out Kirikizan! (Bisharp)
    [Drac]Draco123 sent out Metagross!



    VS



    Ok, this is a somewhat bad position for me. He uses a pokemon that gets 125 base attack Sucker Punch, and my Latios has HP ground, but i don't like the idea of a Sucker Punch hitting him in the face. Mienshao is also annoying because of Fake Out. So, to save my pokes from the opening turn damage, i just play it safe and use Protect on them both.

    Start of turn 1
    Latios used Protect!
    Latios protected itself!


    Metagross used Protect!
    Metagross protected itself!


    The foe's Kojondo used Fake Out!
    Metagross protected itself!


    The foe's Kirikizan used Substitute!
    The foe's Kirikizan made a substitute!


    - 100% - 100%


    - 100% - 75%

    CRAP, didn't want that to happen. I save Metagross from the fake out, but now the Bisharp has a Sub up. No need to keep Latios on the field, switch him out for Infernape who can threaten the Bisharp, since he resists both STABs, and can outspeed/kill the Mienshao. Also, i save Latios from a horrible Sucker Punch.

    Start of turn 2
    [Drac]Draco123 called Latios back!
    [Drac]Draco123 sent out Infernape!

    tomfoolery called Kojondo back!
    tomfoolery sent out Burungeru! (Jellicent)

    The foe's Kirikizan used Sucker Punch!
    But it failed!

    Metagross used Meteor Mash!
    It's not very effective...
    The foe's Burungeru lost 29% of its health!
    Metagross's Attack rose!


    - 100% - 100%


    - 71% - 75%

    Mixed feeling after this round. I save Latios from getting owned, but now he has a Jelli, which walls both pokemon on the field. That, and the Bisharp still has a Sub. However, i have Sash Ape so I’ll stay in and break the sub. But Meta is useless now, so may as well switch him out for Zapdos. Electric moves to hit Jelli, and he can hit Bisharp as well thanks to Heat Wave.

    Start of turn 3
    [Drac]Draco123 called Metagross back!
    [Drac]Draco123 sent out Zapdos!

    Zapdos is exerting its Pressure!
    The foe's Kirikizan used Protect!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!


    Infernape used Close Combat!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!

    The foe's Burungeru used Will-O-Wisp!
    Zapdos was burned!

    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!


    - 100% - 87%

    - 71% - 75%


    Ok, more mixed feeling about this round. Zapdos came in safely, but he came into a Will-O-Wisp, saving Metagross from a Burn. But now Zapdos get residual damage every turn. Now, figuring he would predict me to attack Jellicent, i decide to just set up the Tailwind with Zapdos, which doubles my speed for 3 turns. Hopefully this works and the Bisharp Sub can go away.

    Start of turn 4
    tomfoolery called Burungeru back!
    tomfoolery sent out Kojondo! (Mienshao)

    The foe's Kirikizan used Sucker Punch!
    But it failed!

    Infernape used Close Combat!
    It's super effective!
    The foe's Kirikizan's substitute faded!
    Infernape's Defense fell!
    Infernape's Sp. Def. fell!

    Zapdos used Tailwind!
    A tailwind started blowing behind [Drac]Draco123's team!

    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!

    - 100% - 74%

    - 100% - 75%

    Awesome, this works out great for me. He sends out Meinshao, which is frail as crap and can be KOd by any of my pokemon STAB attacks. That and the Bisharp sub is gone, meaning I can go straight for the KO next turn. However, he can Fake Out a pokemon, but question is, which one? I decide to just use Heat Wave with Zapdos, which makes him hit both while getting the KO on Bisharp (unless Occa Berry) and good damage on the Meinshao, while Ape uses CC. This way, even if he fakes one out, i can get the KO on Bisharp at least.

    Start of turn 5
    The foe's Kirikizan used Protect!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!


    Infernape used Close Combat!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!

    Zapdos used Heat Wave!
    The foe's Kojondo lost 57% of its health!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!

    The foe's Kojondo used Rock Slide!
    Infernape lost 68 HP! (45% of its health)
    It's super effective!
    Zapdos lost 72 HP! (39% of its health)
    Zapdos ate its Sitrus Berry!
    Zapdos restored some HP!

    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!

    - 55% - 74%

    - 43% - 75%

    Ok, really odd turn here. Instead of using Fake Out like I predicted, he decides to use Rock Slide on Meinshao, dealing good damage to both pokemon, but thanks to Zapdos Sitrus Berry, It'll be around for a while. But the Bisharp used Protect, sparing it from dying just yet. However, i have Tailwind, and my opponent knows this as well. At first, i wanted to just attack straight up, but realizing that Jelli can come in and eat a Close Combat, then probably stall out Tailwind with Protect, i decided against it. I decided to T-Bolt the Bisharp and Close Combat the Meinshao. If he stays in, they both die anyways. But if he switches, i can take out Jellicent, which walls all of my team, spare Zapdos and Latios, which are both scared of Bisharp. I was just hoping this works.


    Start of turn 6
    tomfoolery called Kirikizan back!
    tomfoolery sent out Burungeru! (Jellicent)

    Infernape used Close Combat!
    The foe's Kojondo lost 42% of its health!
    The foe's Kojondo fainted!
    Infernape's Defense fell!
    Infernape's Sp. Def. fell!

    Zapdos used Thunderbolt!
    It's super effective!
    The foe's Burungeru lost 70% of its health!
    The foe's Burungeru fainted!
    The foe's Burungeru's Cursed Body activates!
    Zapdos's Thunderbolt was disabled!

    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!
    tomfoolery sent out Borutorosu! (Thundurus)

    tomfoolery sent out Kirikizan! (Bisharp)

    - 55% - 61%

    - 0% - 0%

    - 75% - 100%



    YES!!! Epic Prediction is epic. I turned a close 4-4 to a 4-2 battle in my favor. However, just because the score is in my advantage, doesn’t mean that the battle is over. His Bisharp is still a threat in my eyes, seeing as he KO's Infernape now thanks to -2 Def, Zapdos thanks to burn and Latios because it's super effective. And the Thundurus outspeeds my entire team w/o Tailwind support. So, i decide to just attack here, and not try and scout what he may do.

    Start of turn 7
    The foe's Kirikizan used Protect!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!


    The foe's Borutorosu used Substitute!
    The foe's Borutorosu made a substitute!


    Infernape used Fire Blast!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!

    Zapdos used Hidden Power!
    It's super effective!
    The foe's Borutorosu's substitute faded!

    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!
    [Drac]Draco123's team tailwind petered out!

    - 55% - 48%

    - 75% - 75%

    Ok, nothing going on here. He stalled out my Tailwind with Protect on Bisharp and Sub on Thundurus. Now, it's a turn of decision. I need to get up another Tailwind to help me outspeed his team. He might use Sucker Punch on it anyways, which opens up a hole for me to kill Bisharp. No wait, Thundurus is there, can outspeed and kill me off. So, i just play it safe, Protect on Ape, Tailwind on Zapdos.

    Start of turn 8
    Infernape used Protect!
    Infernape protected itself!


    The foe's Borutorosu used Hidden Power!
    Infernape protected itself!

    Zapdos used Tailwind!
    A tailwind started blowing behind [Drac]Draco123's team!


    The foe's Kirikizan used Substitute!
    The foe's Kirikizan made a substitute!


    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!

    - 55% - 35%

    - 50% - 75%

    Ok, again with the Subbing Bisharp. Now he's #1 on the black man's list. But at least i saved ape for another attack, and i have Tailwind. All seems well, so I decide to just Fire Blast the Thundurus, and Heat Wave Zapdos, Breaking the Sub on Bisharp while dealing damage to Thundurus as well.

    Start of turn 9
    The foe's Borutorosu used Substitute!
    The foe's Borutorosu made a substitute!


    The foe's Kirikizan used Sucker Punch!
    It's not very effective...
    Infernape lost 83 HP! (54% of its health)
    Infernape fainted!
    The foe's Kirikizan is hurt by its Life Orb!

    Zapdos used Heat Wave!
    The foe's Borutorosu's substitute faded!
    It's super effective!
    The foe's Kirikizan's substitute faded!

    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!
    [Drac]Draco123 sent out Metagross!

    - 0% - 22%

    - 100% - 22%

    - 40% - 50%

    Crap, There goes Infernape. I thought he would aim for Zappy, but again he shocks me and aims for Ape. Which is good actually, as Zappy can now use Heat Wave and break both subs. Now, I'll send out Metagross, and here's where the fun beings :P

    Start of turn 10
    The foe's Borutorosu used Protect!
    The foe's Borutorosu protected itself!


    The foe's Kirikizan used Protect!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!

    Zapdos used Heat Wave!
    The foe's Borutorosu protected itself!
    The foe's Kirikizan protected itself!


    Metagross used Meteor Mash!
    The foe's Borutorosu protected itself!

    Zapdos is hurt by its burn!
    Zapdos fainted!
    [Drac]Draco123 sent out Latios!

    - 100% - 0%

    - 100% - 100%

    - 40% - 50%

    whoops, looks like zappy had less HP after all. Sorry about the HP error on Zapdos, I'll make sure to keep it better next time.

    So yeah, nothing much here. Dual Protect kills off Zappy, bringing out Latios. Now, again, Bisharp isn't my friend right now. Sucker Punch will easily KO, especially w/ LO and STAB. and Thundurus isn't helping much either, being faster than Latios. But i have a plan. Since he dual Protect last turn, there wasn't a big chance he would go for it twice. Especially since what I'm about to do isn't common on Metagross. Or in 5th gen in general. But hey, i see a way for me to win, i just hope it works out for me. So, I click on the button. I wait for him to make his move. I'm so nervous right now, i think I'm at regionals at VGC, with everyone looking at me, ready to cheer the winner. And when my opponent makes his move, all hell breaks loose. Ladies and Gentlemen, fasten your seat belts. This will be LOUD.

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    And there you have it, that a GG. 11 turns is a long time with doubles, and i enjoyed every second of it. Though i was in charge for most of the match, there was times where i felt uncomfortable. However, by thinking my plan through, i was able to win.

    Props:
    -My opponent for being a good sport and good opponent
    -Metagross, for the perfectly timed explosion
    -Zapdos, for being a constant offensive threat and helping to set up 2 Tailwinds, the last one helping Meta to outspeed and use the explosion to great effect
    -Both players, for good decisions and prediction on both sides


    Slops:
    -Not seeing the Sub on Bisharp the second time around
    -My Opponent, for not taking out Zapdos when he had the chance, instead going for Ape, which cost him the match.

    And the MVP of the match is:



    He Helped setting up both Tailwinds, and even with the burn, stayed alive long enough to put offensive pressure on his team, while supporting mine. Metagross was able to outspeed my opponent's team thanks to Tailwind, and he helped to break both subs on turn 9, making him, by far, the MVP of the match.

    SO, thats my war story for today. If i get another good battle on VGC server, i'll post it here, as always. However, most are either VERY haxy or just plain dull, unlike tis battle, which had skill and prediction on showcase today. I hope this Story helps people with their VGC teams, and in doubles in General. Thats all for now, See you guys later :P

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    Not bad at all, but Latios seemed like cannon fodder. Do you think Substitute would work better for him than Protect?

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    Quote Originally Posted by PokeMaster366 View Post
    Not bad at all, but Latios seemed like cannon fodder. Do you think Substitute would work better for him than Protect?
    Maybe, but to use it just for sucker punch is a little bit situational don't you think?

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    Nice, A vgc warstory. You said metagross was useless during the turn jelli, and Bisharp were out. So I'm guessing no earthquake on Meta? Nice team and cool warstory tho its odd he ran unova only mons.

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    Quote Originally Posted by soulsurvivor View Post
    Nice, A vgc warstory. You said metagross was useless during the turn jelli, and Bisharp were out. So I'm guessing no earthquake on Meta? Nice team and cool warstory tho its odd he ran unova only mons.
    yea, its explosion/bullet punch/meteor mash/protect

    and he's good, like 1300+ on the ladder atm, so he's really good

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    Quote Originally Posted by DragonMaster123 View Post
    yea, its explosion/bullet punch/meteor mash/protect

    and he's good, like 1300+ on the ladder atm, so he's really good
    I love that metagross variant. I don't do much PO, but on gbu I run normal gem metagross and Im at 1836 rating.


    Also What Pokemaster said you should run substitute, but something like this

    latios@dragon gem, life orb
    timid(standard ev's)
    -substitute
    -protect
    -draco meteor/dragon pulse
    -Psychic/thunderbolt/hp fire/ground

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    ^ ok i'll try it, i hope it works out.

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    Kool story bro! If I ever stop doing mono-challenges Ill post some war stories.

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    thanks twi, glad you liked it :P

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    I liked the war story, but I think you kind of over dramatized the end with all those spoilers. It was still a pretty good fight, and I was still kind of surprised about he explosion at the end.

    Anyway, there is a VCG server? I guess I'm an idiot for not knowing, I think I'll try it out. I love double battles.
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    i like that metagross set, and your team seemed very good as well.

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    yea, the ending was dramatic, no one saw it coming :P

    and yea there is, come visit and battle once in a while

    i like that metagross set, and your team seemed very good as well.
    thanks, generic sets use zen headbutt, but i used explosion bcos it helps clear out treats

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    Nice! I really liked this warstory! May i ask what the fourth move on your metagross was?




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    yea, its explosion/bullet punch/meteor mash/protect
    thats my move set, and thanks, glad you liked it =P

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    I spent 5 minuites staring at the explosion :3

    Cool story bro, and it was against a good person too.

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    lol, 1 month later, i get more posts

    yea, glad you liked Barb

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    Woo awesome loved the ending!
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    Heat wave on a Zapdos? Cool, I didn't know you could do that. Also, I liked the explosion thing, watched it for like 2 min.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlizzardFireblaze View Post
    Woo awesome loved the ending!
    Quote Originally Posted by DarkSnivy View Post
    Heat wave on a Zapdos? Cool, I didn't know you could do that. Also, I liked the explosion thing, watched it for like 2 min.
    Yea, It's a 4th Gen Move Tutor move in Platinum and i think HG/SS, i'm not 100% sure.

    And thanks alot

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    i dont think u can learn heatwave in hg and ss.



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    I never expected explosion great warstory


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    Thanks, glad you liked

    @guy on other page, you learn it as a Move Tutor, i would like if someone can confirm this for me

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    Serebii has it as a GenIV tutor move in all three: http://www.serebii.net/pokedex-bw/145.shtml

    fool thing also learns Sky Drop O_O

    edit: think I still have a Zap on HG..I'll try to check it over the weekend.


    edit2: Confirmed.

    HeartGold Battle Frontier Tutors - Zapdos

    Left: Ominous Wind/Air Cutter
    Top Right:mud slap/Ancient Power*/Signal Beam/Twister/Heat Wave/Sky Attack
    Bottom Right: Snore/Swift/Tailwind

    Ancient Power is also level-up move. The HG/SS tutors are the only way to get Tailwind and Sky Attack as they are not tutorable in Pt.
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    thanks for confirming that

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