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    Default Warstory:Volcarona's comeback


    In this battle I was testing out a set on a certain pokemon,but when the battle started I for some reason couldn't focus and ended up making stupid mistakes(overpredicting etc) in result my "test subject"didn't do any good.
    This my first Warstory.Enjoy^^



    Battle between D.Gray and ****
    started!
    Tier: Standard OU
    Rule: Unrated
    Rule: Sleep Clause
    Rule: Freeze Clause
    Rule: Disallow Spects
    Rule: Species Clause
    Rule: Wifi Battle
    Rule: Self-KO Clause

    D.Gray sent out Rotom-H!
    **** sent out Politoed!
    The foe's Politoed's Drizzle made it rain!


    I see he's using a Rain team so I used my Rotom-H(Mistake number 1)to get his Politoed even though I had no idea if it was scarfed or defensive Politoed.

    Turn 1

    **** called Politoed back!
    **** sent out Jolteon!

    Rotom-H used Volt Switch!
    The foe's Jolteon's Volt Absorb absorbs the attack!
    Rain continues to fall!


    When he switched to Jolt I assumed he was running Defensive Politoed and here comes mistake number2...

    Turn 2

    The foe's Jolteon used Substitute!
    The foe's Jolteon made a substitute!

    Rotom-H used Trick!
    The foe's Jolteon's Substitute blocked Trick!
    Rain continues to fall!


    My Rotom is holding a Flame Orb in order to burn Dragonites or Tyranitars that come in thinking I'm locked to Overheat.I know he has a Dragonite on his team...but what do I do?I try to burn his Jolt-_-

    Turn 3

    D.Gray called Rotom-H back!
    D.Gray sent out Ninetales!

    Ninetales's Drought intensified the sun's rays!

    The foe's Jolteon used Thunder!
    Ninetales lost 66% of its health!
    Ninetales was paralyzed!
    The sunlight is strong!

    Ninetales restored a little HP using its Leftovers!


    K now even though I have a Dugtrio I decide to go to Ninetales(though in my defense I didn't want him to spam 100%accurate Thunders).He hits Thunder in Sun and paralyzes me...

    Turn 4

    **** called Jolteon back!
    **** sent out Dugtrio!

    D.Gray called Ninetales back!
    D.Gray sent out Dugtrio!
    The sunlight is strong!


    Now we have the same idea and go for Dugtrio...trapping each other...

    Turn 5

    The foe's Dugtrio used Earthquake!
    Dugtrio lost 97% of its health!

    Dugtrio used Stealth Rock!
    Pointed stones float in the air around ****'s team!
    The sunlight is strong!


    He goes for Earthquake I go for Rocks(I like to think that this was my first non-stupid move of the match)

    Turn 6

    Dugtrio used Sucker Punch!
    But it failed!

    The foe's Dugtrio used Stealth Rock!
    Pointed stones float in the air around D.Gray's team!
    The sunlight is strong!



    I honestly thought he was Choice so I went for Sucker Punch hoping to at least deal some damage to it before dying...but no...he was sashed... and got Rocks up.
    Turn 7

    Dugtrio used Sucker Punch!
    The foe's Dugtrio lost 60% of its health!

    The foe's Dugtrio used Earthquake!
    Dugtrio lost 2% of its health!

    Dugtrio fainted!
    The sunlight is strong!

    D.Gray sent out Dragonite!
    Pointed stones dug into Dragonite!



    Nothing to do now besides using Sucker Punch and let him kill me.Anyways I see his team doesn't have a single Steel type so I figured Dnite could at least deal some damage to him
    Turn 8

    **** called Dugtrio back!
    **** sent out Politoed!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Politoed!

    The foe's Politoed's Drizzle made it rain!

    Dragonite used Dragon Dance!
    Dragonite's Attack rose!
    Dragonite's Speed rose!
    Rain continues to fall!


    I go for DD he switches to Politoed and I for some reason do this:

    Turn 9

    The foe's Politoed used Ice Beam!
    It's super-effective! A critical hit! Dragonite lost 75% of its health!

    Dragonite fainted!
    Rain continues to fall!

    D.Gray sent out Volcarona!
    Pointed stones dug into Volcarona!



    ...yeah....With My Dragonite down I had pretty given up on winning but I at least know for sure that he's scarfed and locked in Ice Beam and maybe just maybe I'll get enough Quiver Dances to win this with Volcarona
    Turn 10

    **** called Politoed back!
    **** sent out Tornadus!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Tornadus!

    Volcarona used Quiver Dance!
    Volcarona's Special Attack rose!
    Volcarona's Special Defense rose!
    Volcarona's Speed rose!
    Rain continues to fall!

    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!



    **** Tornadus and its raining so Fiery Dance's power probably won't kill him
    Turn 11

    D.Gray called Volcarona back!
    D.Gray sent out Rotom-H!
    Pointed stones dug into Rotom-H!

    The foe's Tornadus used Hurricane!
    It's not very effective... Rotom-H lost 56% of its health!
    Rotom-H became confused!
    Rain continues to fall!



    I didn't want to lose Volcarona and Rotom is my best thing to take a Hurricane.
    Turn 12

    **** called Tornadus back!
    **** sent out Jolteon!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Jolteon!

    Rotom-H is confused!

    Rotom-H used Volt Switch!
    The foe's Jolteon's Volt Absorb absorbs the attack!
    Rain continues to fall!



    Again with the ******* Jolteon-_-
    Turn 13

    D.Gray called Rotom-H back!
    D.Gray sent out Ninetales!
    Pointed stones dug into Ninetales!

    Ninetales's Drought intensified the sun's rays!

    The foe's Jolteon used Substitute!
    The foe's Jolteon made a substitute!
    The sunlight is strong!

    Ninetales restored a little HP using its Leftovers!



    This time Ninetales was really my best choice and with sun up all I have to do is hope that Thunder's low accuracy in Sun makes it miss
    Turn 14

    The foe's Jolteon used Thunder!
    The attack of the foe's Jolteon missed!

    Ninetales used Fire Blast!
    The foe's Jolteon's substitute faded!
    The sunlight is strong!

    Ninetales restored a little HP using its Leftovers!



    Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
    Turn 15

    D.Gray called Ninetales back!
    D.Gray sent out Venusaur!
    Pointed stones dug into Venusaur!

    The foe's Jolteon used Thunder!
    It's not very effective... Venusaur lost 30% of its health!
    The sunlight is strong!



    With his sub down and having missed one Thunder I decided to go with the odds(50/50) and switch to venu which turned out to be good idea.
    Turn 16

    **** called Jolteon back!
    **** sent out Dragonite!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Dragonite!

    Venusaur used Sleep Powder!
    The foe's Dragonite fell asleep!
    The sunlight is strong!

    The foe's Dragonite restored a little HP using its Leftovers!



    The 2 things that I hate the most in this world are:homework and facing a Lum Berry Dragonite with a Sun team.Luckily for me hes running Leftovers=D
    Turn 17

    **** called Dragonite back!
    **** sent out Politoed!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Politoed!

    The foe's Politoed's Drizzle made it rain!

    Venusaur used Hidden Power!
    It's not very effective... The foe's Politoed lost 14% of its health!
    Venusaur is hurt by its life orb!
    Rain continues to fall!



    I go with Hidden Power Ice...and he switches...to Politoed...ruining my sun...
    Turn 18

    D.Gray called Venusaur back!
    D.Gray sent out Ninetales!
    Pointed stones dug into Ninetales!

    Ninetales's Drought intensified the sun's rays!

    The foe's Politoed used Ice Beam!
    It's not very effective... Ninetales lost 2% of its health!

    Ninetales fainted!
    The sunlight is strong!

    D.Gray sent out Venusaur!
    Pointed stones dug into Venusaur!


    K so I knew he was scarfed and didn't think he would use Hydro Pump on Venusaur so I sacrificed my Ninetales and got sun back.Now Sun+Venusaur vs Politoed his next move was so obvious even my dog could've seen it coming.

    Turn 19

    **** called Politoed back!
    **** sent out Dragonite!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Dragonite!

    Venusaur used SolarBeam!
    It's not very effective... The foe's Dragonite lost 15% of its health!
    Venusaur is hurt by its life orb!
    The sunlight is strong!

    The foe's Dragonite restored a little HP using its Leftovers!




    Turn 20

    **** called Dragonite back!
    **** sent out Politoed!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Politoed!

    The foe's Politoed's Drizzle made it rain!

    Venusaur used Sunny Day!

    The sunlight turned harsh!
    The sunlight is strong!



    K that was it no more stupid mistakes I made a great prediction(its actually a meh prediction but anyways)and use Sunny Day expecting him to switch to Politoed
    Turn 21

    **** called Politoed back!
    **** sent out Dragonite!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Dragonite!

    Venusaur used SolarBeam!
    It's not very effective... The foe's Dragonite lost 14% of its health!
    Venusaur is hurt by its life orb!
    The sunlight is strong!

    The foe's Dragonite restored a little HP using its Leftovers!



    .....K no more stupid mistakes starting now
    Turn 22

    D.Gray called Venusaur back!
    D.Gray sent out Volcarona!
    Pointed stones dug into Volcarona!

    The foe's Dragonite is fast asleep!
    The sunlight is strong!

    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    The foe's Dragonite restored a little HP using its Leftovers!



    Right now all he has to do to win is wake up and volca will die because it's health is very low and I only have venusaur and rotom left and they die in the switch in.So this is it...may god be with me...
    Turn 23

    Volcarona used Quiver Dance!
    Volcarona's Special Attack rose!
    Volcarona's Special Defense rose!
    Volcarona's Speed rose!

    The foe's Dragonite is fast asleep!
    The sunlight is strong!

    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    The foe's Dragonite restored a little HP using its Leftovers!



    Come on sleep for just one more turn D=
    Turn 24

    Volcarona used Fiery Dance!
    It's not very effective... The foe's Dragonite lost 26% of its health!

    The foe's Dragonite fainted!
    Volcarona's Special Attack rose!

    The sunlight faded!
    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    **** sent out Politoed!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Politoed!

    The foe's Politoed's Drizzle made it rain!




    Turn 25

    Volcarona used Bug Buzz!
    The foe's Politoed lost 35% of its health!

    The foe's Politoed fainted!
    Rain continues to fall!
    K even though I killed his Dragonite my Volcarona's health is too low so I can't celebrate plus I'm only at 1+
    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    **** sent out Tornadus!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Tornadus!



    Politoed is gone but now Tornadus resists Bug Buzz and its raining
    Turn 26

    Volcarona used Bug Buzz!
    It's not very effective... The foe's Tornadus lost 50% of its health!

    The foe's Tornadus fainted!
    Rain continues to fall!

    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    **** sent out Dugtrio!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Dugtrio!


    Thankfully his Tornadus health was at 50% allowing me to kill it

    Turn 27

    Volcarona used Fiery Dance!
    The foe's Dugtrio lost 33% of its health!

    The foe's Dugtrio fainted!
    Volcarona's Special Attack rose!
    Rain continues to fall!

    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    **** sent out Jolteon!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Jolteon!



    Turn 28

    Volcarona used Bug Buzz!
    The foe's Jolteon lost 50% of its health!

    The foe's Jolteon fainted!
    Rain continues to fall!

    Volcarona restored a little HP using its Leftovers!
    **** sent out Starmie!
    Pointed stones dug into the foe's Starmie!


    K I didn't want to risk an lose this battle because of a stupid mistake.
    My next move is pretty obvious.
    Turn 29

    Volcarona used Bug Buzz!
    It's super-effective! The foe's Starmie lost 87% of its health!

    The foe's Starmie fainted!

    D.Gray won the battle!




    I decided to not show my opponent's name because I didn't asked him if I could use this battle for my warstory.
    I'm also aware that I sucked in the whole matched and hadn't his Dragonite stayed asleep I would've lost so don't be a douche
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    Warstory Props:
    Pics.
    Commentary explained what you were trying to accomplish.
    Awareness of the situation at all times.
    Sweeping with volcarona even when SR was on your side.

    Cons: Bad prediction. The first time you volt switched on jolteon was not your fault, but you could have predicted that the second time.
    You relied on hax on one turn, which directed the rest of the battle.(your commentary on turn 23 supports this.)

    Overall: 7.5 out of 10. Pretty good warstory, especially if this was your first one. The battle could have been a bit better though.
    Yep we should ban baton pass, and weather too. Oh and Trick Room, I'm tired of having to worry about Trick Room all the time. Just ban the move Trick Room, and prankster, it's broken. Ban all status moves on prankster users, they're too cheap. Oh and ban Probopass to it's so cheap. Just ban everything except Magikarp with splash.
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    THANK YOU
    god took a while for someone to notice this
    yes i relied on hax on that turn but in that moment that was my best option since hadnt i gone for the quiver dance his pokes would outspeed and kill.besides i assumed he had extremespeed for some reason when he didnt so it wasnt as haxy as i made it sound
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    Was a bit difficult to read in terms of grammar & punctuation, but I'm wondering where you got those small HP bars?
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    DNite would've died if you just went for the HP Ice instead of Sleep Powder.


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    Quote Originally Posted by x_vandslaux_x View Post
    DNite would've died if you just went for the HP Ice instead of Sleep Powder.
    Venasaur probably did that to try and set up. A dragonite on a rain team likely has Hurricane.

    I don't really blame you for those stupid mistakes, I've had those days myself....I think this a story I can really relate to.
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    Great come from behind victory


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    horrible read you're terrible

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    Quote Originally Posted by Cometk View Post
    horrible read you're terrible
    one thing to say:
    6-1 ;p
    edit:vandslaux yes hp ice would've killed dnite but i just decided to play safe and that saved me because if i had use hp ice poli would then come in and kill all my weakened poke.So what actually saved me wasnt luck...it was my stupidity=)
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    No offense, but you're not that good of a battler, but your writing was good. 6/10


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    Oh well. We all have our off days. -w-

    Don't think so much next time!






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    Yes No offense

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pichu47 View Post
    No offense, but you're not that good of a battler, but your writing was good. 6/10
    You obviously don't know D. Gray that well...

    Anyway, the warstory was okay. I feel the same way about it that irock did. The pics and explanations were nice, but I think you could've posted a better battle then this one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pichu47 View Post
    No offense, but you're not that good of a battler, but your writing was good. 6/10
    no offense but youre a complete noob compared to me(chew)

    and phoopes i might post one battle from when i laddering a few days ago.i actually played well in that day =D
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    ^Well, most of your predictions were way off, mabye you just had a bad day.


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    Loved the images you used. Good game. :3
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    Quote Originally Posted by Pichu47 View Post
    ^Well, most of your predictions were way off, mabye you just had a bad day.
    That is clearly what happened. I'm assuming they are a great battler and wasn't thinking strait. That happens to me every now and then, yesterday I swapped a Gliscor in on a Jellicent....
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    Quote Originally Posted by D.Gray Man View Post
    no offense but youre a complete noob compared to me(chew)

    and phoopes i might post one battle from when i laddering a few days ago.i actually played well in that day =D
    yup, says the man that used to post this advice for every team:

    Ninja Shedinja

    Shedinja @ Air Balloon
    Trait: Wonder Guard
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
    Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
    - Substitute
    - Sandstorm
    - Final Gambit
    - Hyper Beam


    With the right spread Shedinja becomes almost impossible to kill. With the given EVs it can survive up to100+ bullet punches from 6+adamant banded technician Scizor, Outrage from 6+adamant banded rivalry Haxorus etc etc.
    the moves are pretty simple:
    sub to check if ttar has fire blast, Stone Edge, Crunch or any kind of move at all. Sandstorm to stop sun which boost fire attacks and that might get Shedinja killed in 500 turns, final gambit to ohko bliss in the switch in if its very weakened (though scarf Magikarp might also work) and hyper beam because of stab Air Baloon because of earth power Heatran and hidden power ground Magikarp

    I saved it Gray 8D

    OT: Good battle for a bad day :3


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    cool story 12/10

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gray™ View Post
    no offense but youre a complete noob compared to me
    "no offense" Certainly, well said. The word "noob" wasn't meant to be an insult when invented.

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    necrobump. prepare to be closed.
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    I've honestly never seen a warstory closed because of bumping. These aren't discussion threads, so it's fine to bump it in order to offer advice, rate it, or whatever. Besides, there's so few warstories that it's not like you're knocking more active threads off the front page or something.

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    cool battle.

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