Crappit, Knightfall, you stole my first review.
Anyways, the battle took up a lot of the chapter, and I felt that you used some of the same sentences from the last battle here. But Electrabuzz's funk of Electric attacks took my by surprise. I suppose I should pay more attention.
Some places, especially the place where Dugtrio's Cave was introduced, felt rushed, but it was a good chapter all the same. I'm pretty excited for what happens next. ESPECIALLY AFTER LAVENDER TOWN IS COMING O_O