Still trying to catch up. I read Ch. 17. When I read the bit with Raticate, I thought you were going to just rip-off the TV show. I'm glad you didn't. I liked the bit with Garados. No one ever thinks of grabbing and throwing a Pokeball away, good job.
EDIT: I'm now caught up! The Lavender Town-inspired chapter is good. h Poke is creepy, and you handled the atmosphere well. I hope you get the next chapter done soon.
Last edited by pacman000; 19th November 2012 at 11:13 PM.
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