Another chapeter? I didn't know ... Can I be on the PM list? Until now I never thought it was necessary.
This was a rather episodic chapter, but that's okay. It flowed well, so it worked.
Also there's this:
Funney stuff. Why can't you just catch Snorlax?
"Honestly," Red remarked as he picked up the Poké Ball containing his new Snorlax, "I can't believe nobody's thought of doing this sooner. Seriously, it's just laying there, fast asleep, and it takes nothing less than Orange's snoring to get it to so much as stir, and nobody else thinks to throw a Poké Ball at it?"
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