Heh heh. Hidey-hole.It took the police four days to find the crazy man’s hidey-hole.
Poor Dorian. That's all he can say lately.“Shut up,” Dorian replied, hastily gathering their trash.
I love this joke. It gets me every time!“Don’t be shellfish!” Dorian cackled, doubling over in laughter.
Yeah I know how this feels. People can't take their eyes off of me either.Dorian explained, attempting to take his eyes off the celebrity but not quite being able to do so.
I noticed you capitalized Pokeflect a few lines before, but not here. Nothing really wrong, just pointing it out.Shelton activated her own pokeflect.
That chapter was filled with sadness, action, awesomeness, and holy crap that was good! The return to Kanto wasn't as peaceful as it seemed to start out. The pacing was nice, the characters was awesome, and that ending gave me so many feels. An amazing return to SPPf and an amazing chapter. Oh and to Knightfall, Garrett is the guy from the bar Dorian went to after Dorian's guardian died. I cannot remember his name for the life of me. DX Keep up the amazing work. Until next time.