Last edited by aggiegwyn; 5th July 2012 at 12:09 AM.
Not bad. The humor's subtle, and I like subtle humor. I'm sure it's rather common in Nuzlocke comics to make the art a bit rushed to give it this... word-I-can't-think-of-at-the-moment feel, but looking through your gallery, I can see you do have a style I'd like to see more of. While I can see it, if the art was a little bit cleaner, I'd pick it out in a flash.
And of course, I'm always envious of people when it comes to the size of comics like this. I can never seem to get it, and I get frustrated way too easily xD. So yeah. I'd like to see some more of these adventures, and see how creative you can get.
Well thank you! I'm happy to hear it. And yes, reading through it again I noticed it was very rushed, so this time I'm slowing things down, so that the reader can actually sort of grasp what's going on. And thank you! I'm glad that you like my other style as well, it's very relaxing to draw those, and I enjoy making them. I should have an update sometime this week, hopefully.
Here's the second page: [link]
Not a bad page, I had a good chuckle here and there, but the text should be readable. It'd look better if you just type them out through PhotoShop or whatever program you're using.
yah, I considered that after the last page. I may edit it later so that that's how it works. Thank you!
I like making reviews:
♂ Spongebob Lv 17 or higher
♀ Dee-dee Lv 15 or higher
♂ Aang Lv 7 or higher
♂ Dexter Lv 7 or higher
(not in battle though)
Last edited by ★ Lucario ★; 15th June 2012 at 5:25 PM.
Yah, that's pretty accurate. XD
I have run into Caterpie, Metapod, and Spearow, but they did do much beyond die, so there wasn't a point to adding them into the comic. XD
thanks for the review!
First of all: YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYNUZLOCKEYAYAYAYAY AYAYPOKEMONYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYHUMORYAYAYAY
Second of all:YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
Third of all: Not what the first and second things are.
Fourth of all: Never knew that the trainers could be so bada**. Wish they could in the games.
I make tons of references. If you can spot any of them, please tell me and you'll get pie! Now you'll have to pay for the pie, but it's pie nevertheless.
Oh god that one ended up being huge.
Well, long story made short my aunt saved over my file on the game, so the question is...is it really over?