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    Default rate my team please

    I am not very experienced in competitive play, but can you help me with my team?

    Slaking (M) @ Silk Scarf
    Trait: Truant
    EVs: 252 Hp / 252 Atk / 4 SPdef
    Brave Nature (+Atk, -Spd)
    - Giga Impact
    - Brick Break
    - Earthquake
    - Aerial Ace

    Snorlax (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Immunity
    EVs: 252 Hp / 200 Atk / 52 SPdef
    Serious Nature (+?, -?)
    -Brick Break
    -Earthquake
    -Return
    -Body Slam

    Chandelure (F) @ Flame Plate
    Trait: Flash Fire
    EVs: 252 SPAtk / 4 SPDef / 252 Spd
    Modest Nature (+ SPAtk, -Atk)
    -Energy Ball
    -Inferno
    -Shadow Ball
    -Flame burst

    Hydreigon (M) @ Draco Plate
    Trait: Levitate
    EVs: 252 SPAtk / 252 Spd
    Modest Nature (+ SPAtk, -Atk)
    Toxic
    Dragon Pulse
    Flamethrower
    Earthquake

    Garchomp (F) @ Rocky Helmet
    Trait: Sand Veil
    EVs: 252 Atk
    Bashful Nature (+?, -?)
    Dragon Rush
    Brick Break
    Dragon Claw
    Earthquake

    Dusknoir (F) @ Spell Tag
    Trait: Pressure
    EVs: 252 Def / 252 SPDef / 4 Atk
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SPAtk)
    Will-O-Wisp
    Shadow Punch
    Payback
    Hex


    So please rate my team, and help to improve it.


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    For Slaking, go with Adamant/Jolly instead. Slaking's got a decent speed stat so you don't want to lose that.
    And he's also holding Silk Scarf, which unfortunately only helps Giga Impact and not any other moves.
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    I don't think you need two bulky normal types I suggest getting rid of one for a rapid spinner, stealthrocker, or both.

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    ^ I agree, and if you take away Snorlax, since Slaking's already doing his job, you can give Slaking leftovers
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    Thank you. I chanced snorlax to

    Ferrothorn (F) @ Rocky Helmet
    Trait: Iron Barbs
    EVs: Still training
    Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
    Thunder Wawe
    Power Whip
    Gyro Ball
    Aerial ace

    What would be good moveset for Flygon? I am planning it for garchomps replacement, because i dont know garchomps EVs?


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    Quote Originally Posted by asdfy123 View Post
    Thank you. I chanced snorlax to

    Ferrothorn (F) @ Rocky Helmet
    Trait: Iron Barbs
    EVs: 252 HP 252 SpDef 4 Def (this what I would have)
    Sassy Nature (+Sp.Def., -Spd)
    leech seed
    Power Whip/thunder wave
    Gyro Ball/thunder wave
    protect
    What would be good moveset for Flygon? I am planning it for garchomps replacement, because i dont know garchomps EVs?
    That is my favorite move set for ferrothorn.

    Flygon @ focus sash
    trait: Levitate
    EVs: 252 Att 252 Spd 4 HP
    Adamant nature (+ Att, - SpAt)
    -Fire punch
    -U-turn/Crunch
    -Dragon tail/Dragon claw
    -Earthquake/Stone egde

    Here is my favorite moveset for flygon.

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    I got Dream World Larvitar with stealth rock. So what would be tyranitar moveset?


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    why are you using unnerve t-tar......



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    Tyranitar um... this is what I thought of.

    Tyranitar @ leftovers
    Trait: Unnerve
    Evs: 252 Att 252 HP 4 Def
    Adamant nature (+ Att, - SpAt)
    -stealth rock
    -ice fang/dragon tail/dragon claw
    -stone edge
    -earthquake

    I'm not very good with Tyranitar

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    Can i breed stealth rock from male larvitar? I dont want unnerve


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    yes, you can. do this set:

    tyranitar @chople berry
    sassy
    252 hp/64 SpA/192 SpD
    - crunch/pursuit
    - stealth rock
    - fire blast
    - ice beam



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    What if you gave Hydreigon the Life Orb or choice specs? I think this could help you greatly. Try giving it surf as well since you don't have a water type.

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    ^^^
    yes that would help alot also maybe even a dragon gem would work. just not dragon plate.

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    first lets not forget that you need descriptions otherwise it will be locked

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    Quote Originally Posted by Usatoday View Post
    first lets not forget that you need descriptions otherwise it will be locked
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