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    Default Max's New Adventures

    Hi everyone! Dear readers, I want to present you my story about Max, who is finally 10-year old and who are going to get and catch his own Pokemon.
    Firstly, I want to thank bobandbill, who approved it and helped me a lot.
    Secondly, I want to say that I made it like the anime, so it is suitable for all ages. I am very desired to make the best fic about Max adventures as a trainer.
    But only you can decide about my success in it. By reading it of course!
    I hope you'll enjoy reading it!)

    Here will be a PM list
        Spoiler:- PM list:

    Chapter List:

    Max's New Adventures: The beginning!

    The 1st Chapter: The Starter Pokemon!

    The 2nd Chapter: First Battle!

    The 3rd Chapter: The home is where the Start is!

    The 4th Chapter: The first step is always the hardest!

    The 5th Chapter: A road to success!

    The 6th Chapter: The Master Quiz!

    The 7th Chapter: Unprepared Experience!

    The 8th Chapter: The Lucky Ending!

    The 9th chapter: All the way to Devon!

    The 10th Chapter: Taking a different path to Dewford!

    The 11th Chapter: Finding a way out!(Part One)

    The 12th Chapter: Finding a way out!(Part Two)

    The 13th Chapter: A call indeed!

    The 14th Chapter: Remembering is always a good thing!

    The 15th Chapter: It’s getting buggy here!

    The 16th Chapter: The second badge is on the wave!

    The 17th Chapter: When the things go another way! (Part One!)

    The 18th Chapter: When the things go another way! (Part Two!)

    Max's New Adventures: In a search for the friend!

    The 19th Chapter: Grow while you can!

    The 20th Chapter: Gotta’ see you later!

    The 21st Chapter: Electric road showdown!

    The 22nd Chapter: Fight your fear, Mudkip!

    The 23rd chapter: New Mauville trouble!

    The 24th Chapter: Elekid is my new friend!

    The 25th Chapter: Let's charge for the Gym battle!

    The 26th Chapter: Electrifying gym battle! (Part One)

    The 27th Chapter: Electrifying gym battle! (Part Two)

    The 28th Chapter: What's next, Max?

    The 29th Chapter: Fasten your sea belt!

    The 30th Chapter: A friend's in need!

    Max's New Adventures: The meeting of the old friends!

    The 31st Chapter: The reunion!

    The 32nd Chapter: Training never hurts!

    The 33rd Chapter: Round one, begin! (Part One)

    The 34th Chapter: Round one, begin! (Part Two)

    The 35th Chapter: Second round is a way to look around!

    The 36th Chapter: Aqua battle! Piplup vs Empoleon!

    The 37th chapter: The show goes on!

    The 1st chapter: The Starter Pokemon!

    Narrator: “Pokemon! The amazing creatures you can find everywhere in the Pokemon world! The land, the sky and the sea, all is inhabited by them. And let’s take ourselves to the Petalburg City in the Hoenn region, where ten year old boy, Max, is ready to start his journey!”

    (Max is sitting in his room and is packing his bag.)

    Max: “Finally! This day has come, I am ready to have my own Pokemon! I am so excited!”

    (Caroline comes in.)

    Caroline (looks at Max and asks him with a soft and nice voice): “Are you ready, dear?”

    Max (answers happily with voice full of energy): “Of course I am, Mom!”

    Caroline (smiles): “Great! Let’s go downstairs. Your father is waiting for you.”

    (They go downstairs, while they are going, the gym and their house is shown. Norman is sitting on the sofa and looking at TV. The battle between Steven and Drake is shown.)

    Battle Announcer (almost shouts): “The intensive battle between Champion Steven and Elite Four Drake is coming to the end. Drake has only one Pokemon left. Can he change the course of the battle?”

    (At this time Max is excited seeing this battle and sits with Norman.)

    Drake (takes the Pokeball out of his belt): “Flygon, show us your dragon powers!”

    Flygon (with a determined look): “Fly-yy-gon!”

    Battle Announcer: “Drake sends out Flygon while Steven is sticking with his Aggron”

    Steven (to Aggron): “Use Double-Edge!”

    (Aggron`s whole body glows white and he runs in Flygon.)

    Drake (is confident in Flygon): “Dodge it. You can do it Flygon!”

    (Flygon dodges the attack by flying higher.)

    Steven (smiles maliciously): “Not this time!”

    (Aggron jumps using it powerful tail and strikes Flygon. Flygon falls on the land and hardly gets up.)

    Drake: “Use Dig”

    (Flygon borrows its way under the ground.)

    Steven (shouts): “Earthquake!”

    (Aggron jumps and shakes the entire field. Flygon flies out of the land and is really near to give up.)

    Drake: “Dragon Pulse!”

    (Flygon releases a blue energy ball out of his mouth. The ball hits Aggron hard.)

    Steven: “Stay strong Aggron, use Ice beam!”

    (Aggron releases Ice beam, Drake command Flygon to dodge, but it is too tired and it is hit and Flygon is knocked out.)

    Drake (looking at Flygon’s Pokeball): “Thanks Flygon! You battled hard.”

    Steven: “Good job, Aggron. Return.”

    Battle Announcer: “Well, that’s it! The intense battle came to the end and we see the friendly handshake between these two skilled battlers!”

    Max: “That was an amazing battle! Steven was cool like always.”

    Norman (turns the TV off and stands): “Well, son, I see you are ready.”

    Max: “Sure I am, Daddy.”

    Norman (with a deep voice): “You are so grown-up now, I can’t believe the time passed so quickly”

    Max: “I will become the powerful Pokemon trainer and you’ll be proud of me”

    Norman: “I have no doubt about that”

    Max: “And you’ll battle me like you promised”

    Norman(nods): “You know I will, and I look forward to this day. So, Max, go in my car. I’ll take you to the Professor Birch’s lab.”

    Max: “Okay, let’s head to the Littleroot Town!”

    (Norman and Max sit in the car and are ready to go.)

    Max (to Caroline): “Bye Mom!”

    Caroline: “Bye, dear, take care!”

    Norman: “Bye, sweetie! Will be soon!”

    (Max and Norman drive to the Littleroot Town, and while they are getting there, they see many wild Pokemon they are passing by.)

    Max: “Wow! So many Pokemon, and very soon I will travel and see them all. ”

    Norman (agrees): “Yes, there are plenty of Pokemon in the Hoenn region.”

    (Max keeps watching at Pokemon and soon after they arrive at Littleroot town.)

    Norman (pointing at the building): “Here it is, the Professor Birch’s lab.”

    (Norman parks the car.)

    Max: “It really is and I can’t wait! Let’s go there!”

    (Max runs to the lab. He doesn't bother waiting Norman. All he wants now, is only one thing: to get his starter pokemon.)

    Norman (goes out of car): “You are so excited, huh? Okay okay, wait for me!”

    (At this time Professor Birch and his assistant are talking in the lab.)

    Professor Birch’s Assistant: “Are you ready, Professor? You know, the boy will come very soon to choose his starter Pokemon.”

    Professor Birch (breathes deeply and says with tired, low voice): “I know that. I checked the Pokemon and they are in good shape and are ready to go.”

    (Max rings the doorbell.)


    Professor Birch (surprised): “What is that?”

    Professor Birch’s Assistant: “It is a new doorbell I bought yesterday.”

    Professor Birch (displeased): “Oh, you could have told me, I could help you with that.”

    (The scene shows Max and Norman standing out on the other side of the door.)

    Max: “Well, where are they?”

    Norman (asks with a wondering voice): “Professor Birch, are you there?”

    (The door finally opens.)

    Professor Birch: “Yes, sorry for waiting. So, Max, how are you feeling today? Ready for your first Pokemon?”

    Max (adjusts his glasses and then exclaims): “I feel better than ever! Of course I am, Professor! So, show me Pokemon, will you?”

    (And stares at Birch with a cute face and bright wide eyes.)

    Professor Birch (laughs): “So impatient, are we? Okay, let’s go in our main room.”

    (All of them go into the main room, where all the devices and instruments are.)

    Professor Birch: “Here we are. So Max…”

    (Takes three Pokeballs. Norman smiles and watches at Max’s reaction.)

    Max (acts in a childish way, crosses his arms.): “Wow! I am thrilled. Can’t wait!”

    Professor Birch (takes the first one): “As you know, trainers in the Hoenn region may start with one of the three following Pokemon. Go Mudkip!”

    Mudkip (comes out of Pokeball, then he opens his eyes and smiles): “Mudkip!”

    Max (can’t believe that it is happening to him): “A-a-a! Mudkip, how cool! I can’t believe that that is not a dream!”

    Professor Birch (takes the second one and throws it): “Go! Treecko!”

    Treecko (comes out of its Pokeball, stands in a cool way and seriously says): “Tree-eecko!”

    Max (exclaims once again): “Treecko is a very cool Pokemon as well!”

    Professor Birch: “And the final Pokemon, Torchic, come on out!”

    Torchic (appears and stands like the cute Pokemon and says with a nice voice): “To-oorchic.”

    Professor Birch (looks at Max and tells him with a friendly voice): “So, Max, make your choice.”

    Max (looking at all three of them): “So, Torchic, Mudkip and Treecko. Man, wish May was here with me. So, whom I gonna choose?”
    (Then Max remembers when he first saw May’s starter Pokemon.)

    Norman (looks at May and tells her with a curious tone): “Tell me May, what kind of Pokemon did you get from Professor Birch anyway?”

    Max (looks at her too and is excited): “Yeah, May, tell us what did you get?”

    May (smiles, stands and takes her Pokeball): “Torchic, come on out!”

    (Torchic comes out of his Pokeball)

    Max (displeased and shouts): “Wha-a-a-a-a-a-t? Why did you pick that? If it were me, I would definitely have picked a Treecko”.
    Max (stands with closed eyes and tells Professor Birch): “Professor, I made up my mind.”

    Professor Birch (asks with a voice full of interest): “So, what would it be, Max?”

    Max (smiles): “I pick Treecko!”

    Treecko (smiles and jumps on Max’s shoulder): “Treecko!”

    Professor Birch: “Well, it looks like Treecko is happy with your choice.”

    (Professor Birch returns Mudkip and Torchic, goes to his table, takes Pokedex and five Pokeballs. Then he takes Treecko’s Pokeball and gives these 6 PokeBalls to Max.)

    Professor Birch: “So, this is your Pokedex, it can show all the Pokemon from Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, and Sinnoh regions. Here are your Pokeballs as well as Treecko’s Pokeball. So, good luck on your journey, I know that you’ll be fine and become a great Pokemon trainer.”

    Max: “Thanks very much, Professor! Okay, Treecko, let’s check you out in the Pokedex!”

    Treecko (obeys):”Treecko.”

    Pokedex:” Treecko, the Wood Gecko Pokémon. Treecko are able to climb smooth vertical walls and use their thick tail to attack opponents. Since Treecko build their nests in large trees it is said that those trees will live a very long life.”

    Max: “Awesome! (To Treecko). Well, Treecko, welcome to my team!”

    Treecko (winks and smiles): “Ckooo!!”

    Max (to Birch): “Thanks again, Professor”

    Norman (to Birch): “Yes, you helped us a lot, Professor!”

    Professor Birch (shakes Norman’s hand): “My pleasure!”

    Norman (to Birch’s assistant): “Thank you for your help as well.”

    Professor Birch’s Assistant: “You are welcome.”

    Norman (to Max): “So, it is time to come, Max”

    Max (recalling his Treecko): “Return, Treecko!” (then answers Norman): “Okay, daddy, let’s go!”

    Both Max and Norman (sit in their car and drive off the lab): “Bye everyone! Bye!”

    Professor Birch and his assistant (stand near the lab and wave their hands): “Bye!”

    (Max and Norman drive out of sight.)

    Professor Birch (tells his assistant): “Well, next time we’ll buy this doorbell together.”

    Professor Birch’s Assistant (closing his face with a hand): “Oh my…”

    (Then Norman and Max are driving and Norman tells Max): “So, son, anything more I can help you with?”

    Max: “Yes, I have one friend to meet with…”

    The end of 1st chapter.

    It is all for now, but I will write more)
    Last edited by RealRaymon; 22nd March 2013 at 12:05 PM.

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