Mr. Briney: “But you saw that I have moved to Slateport. When Peeko returned here, I knew that some of my friends will come, and here you are!”
Write 'I knew that some of my friend would come, and here you are'
Mr. Briney: “Usually I test new ferries and submarines, but today I help with modeling and designing the mew ones.”
I think you should write 'Usually I test new ferries and submarines, but today I will help with modeling and designing the NEW ones.'
Archie (asks Max): “A Pacifidlog Town? Why is it so urgent?”
Mr. Briney: “Yes, he is right.” (Looks at Max sees that he realizes the situation now and looks at Archie) “So, Archie, how is the submarine doing?” (To Max) “Archie tested the submarine I was talking you about.”
Write "(To Max) 'Archie tested the submarine I was talking to you about."
(As Max goes out of the Stern’s Shipyard where he met his old friend, Mr. Briney, he sets off to a Mauville City.)
Remove 'a' before Mauville City.
Anger the Blaziken, and you get BURNED
Example of the above:
YOU: Hey Blaziken, your ugly!
BLAZIKEN: .......JO FACE!(burnnned)