Your grammar has greatly improved. The only two problems I found were:
Max: "What are you doing here?" (looking at robot) "Ahh, you are stealing the electricity from generator, and" (looks at robot's eyes) "This robot is the reason why all Pokemon were so angry!"
Add a "the" inbetween all and Pokemon.
Max: "I knew it were you, Cassidy and Bart!"
Make it "I knew it was you, Cassidy and Bart!"
And again, your grammar has really improved.
Anger the Blaziken, and you get BURNED
Example of the above:
YOU: Hey Blaziken, your ugly!
BLAZIKEN: .......JO FACE!(burnnned)