It's good that you're back. I noticed some grammar mistakes...
Elekid (watches at Pokedex and really likes it): “Bwiii…”
(there shouldn't be a "at" in the sentence)
Wattson’s Assistant: “I am good, thanks! I have good news for you?”
(there shouldn't be a question mark at the end)
Max: “Oh, you are a Wattson’s assistant! How are you?”
(there shouldn't be an "a" in the sentence)
Elekid: (is not sure) “Bwii..?” (Comes closer, focuses, and uses Brick Break on Boulder, smashing it on two parts.)
(there should be a "the" between "on" and "boulder". Also, the "b" in "boulder" doesn't need to be capitalized)
I'm pretty sure these are the only noticeable errors in the chapter.
Great chapter! I like your use of imagery in the training scenes. I was also wondering why Elekid likes the Pokedex. Maybe it just seems interesting to Elekid.
Anger the Blaziken, and you get BURNED
Example of the above:
YOU: Hey Blaziken, your ugly!
BLAZIKEN: .......JO FACE!(burnnned)