I saw some grammar and spelling errors such as putting unnecessary letter "a"s. I understand that you are really busy with your university and stuff, so those mistakes are understandable. I liked the battle with the Magnemites and Magneton. You put a lot of detail into the fight. You are also starting to use a lot of cliffhangers (which is a good thing). Great chapter overall!
Anger the Blaziken, and you get BURNED
Example of the above:
YOU: Hey Blaziken, your ugly!
BLAZIKEN: .......JO FACE!(burnnned)