That I agree with, but that wasn't the point I was trying to make. I was talking specifically about the capitalisation - ie you had Bug Pokemon/type and later bug Pokemon/type. That's inconsistent; keep it to one or the other. It's like half the time saying Potion and the other half potion for instance, or Bulbasaur and bulbasaur in the same story; it doesn't make sense to have it both ways.Bug Pokemon was said by Forrest, and Bug Type was said by Randy. I mean that different people can call the same thing differently, don't you agree)
Also you're still lacking in the spaces between names/dialogue and directions/descriptions (Max(To Randy): for instance; should be Max (To Randy) It might be tedious to fix but it would help a lot with the presentation; as said, every time there isn't that space (nearly every line or two) it's slightly distracting from the story.