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Thread: Feli chronicles: Vitandes

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    Post Prologue

    Genres: Family, Adventure, Mystery, Fantasy, Hurt/Comfort
    Number of Words: 1500 - 2500 words per chapter. Currently 47, 000+ characters in the whole series.
    Age Rating: K+ to T+ Ages 12 and above
    Type of Fiction: Southern Fiction
    Content Warning: Possible child Abortion, mild blood, mild sexual and rape references, suicide references, murder references, family relations, and betrayal references.



        Spoiler:- See Chapter list here:





    “Run everyone! Run this way!” an old man shouts, looking into the distance at his dying motherland. They were invaded by shadows that deny their existence, a man protecting his people and children. Those minions seek only the power of their dark creed rise to power and placate the light of many innocent people. Inside a tunnel high in the mountains, four people are close to a portal of aquamarine behind a magical shield. Monsters of unknown forms kept on bashing the shield; attempting to kill the four people behind the shield. Just as the old man seals the gate with his magical power, three people are begging him to join them. Yet he refused their offer for he values the lives of his children.

    “Master, please don’t do this to us yet! You said to be loyal to you ‘til the end!” one of his disciples begs to listen to them.
    The two other female followers just cried, shocked at their mater’s decision. “Master! Please! We can’t live on without you!”

    “My students, if you don’t go now, we’re all going to die and many more others! My final order for the three of you is to escape! And … live on!” the old man sighs as is seal is slowly breaking. With a shallow breath, he says, “I have nothing else to teach to you all. The rest is up to all of you to know. Teach everything I've taught you to the future children. Weep if you must, but … be joyous later.”

    With one hand pointed at them, he unleashed a psychic force at them, dragging them towards the portal. “I’m taking all of you with me! Bless my children Feli; just as you have blessed a human like me.” Using the old man’s last strength, he concentrated all of his power to seal the portal with one hand. The other is to send out his most powerful element to fulfill his duty. Eliminate all of the shadows that he can to protect his beloved children. Just before he sealed the portal, he knew this will eliminate him. No way out to this fate. “Goodbye.”

    Every volcano erupts like no tomorrow. Tsunamis are rampant, flooding everything in its path. Earthquakes triggered like the planet itself will splits to many pieces. Hailstorms and rains make the world colder than hotter. The shadows are grinned to their success. Using their ultimate power, they fired a dark laser to the old man – just as the old man used his power to fulfill his duty to his new goddess. The whole planet blew out white to oblivion.
    Last edited by jireh the provider; 30th April 2013 at 2:04 AM. Reason: Updating posts

    Latest introduced chapter:
    Feli Chronicles Vitandes - Chapter 30: Veins of Flames
    Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Forgotten Life - Chapter 3: Hurricane of Foreshadowing


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