Pokemon: Tyson's Journey!

[TheSirPeras]

Chapter 5 [Arrival in Pallet Town!]


After the SS Kanto Trips arrived in Pallet Town, Ash and Tyson left the boat. They went to Ash’s house and slept there since it was late. They woke up at 11.

“Hey Tyson do you want to come with me to Prof Oak’s lab? I wanna see him and my old friends too!” asked Ash to Tyson

“Sure let’s go! Can’t wait to meet Prof. Oak!” said Tyson happily

Ash and Tyson started walking to the lab and saw a billboard. It said “P1 Tournament! Go to Route 1 to test your fighting skills!” and it had a picture of an old face and a Primeape.

“Woah! That’s Anthony and my old Primeape!”

“So you had a Primeape?! That’s cool! Surprising I never saw you use it in the league!” said Tyson

“Yeah I didn’t spend a lot of time with it, since some days after I caught him I left him with Anthony to train… When is the P1 Tournament?”

“It says it’s… in three days! I wish I had a fighting type so I could participate in it!” said Tyson

“I think I may end up using my Scraggy…” said Ash

“Ok, let’s go to the lab then”

They then continued walking to the lab. In the way, Tyson noticed how pure the air of Pallet was. All the trees, the plants, the Nature. They saw many Pokemon living in the trees, such as Pidgey’s, Hoothoot’s and Sentret’s. How clean Pallet Town was.

“Man this looks like a great place to live! So many places to play and rest!” said Tyson

“Yeah I was pretty lucky to grow up here. Living next to the professor and all those Pokemon. I was pretty lucky…” replied Ash

“I wish I could have played with all those wild Pokemon when I was younger” said Tyson smiling

“Oh well let’s keep going”

They kept walking to the lab until they finally arrived there. Ash rang the bell and Tracey opened the door.

“Ash! How are you?! What are you doing here?” asked Tracey

“Hey Tracey! I am pretty good, and this is Tyson my new friend! He’s a new trainer. I am heading to Viridian Forest but decided to say hi!” replied Ash

“Hey I’m Tyson!” as he said this he called on Snorunt “And this is my friend, Snorunt!”

Then Prof Oak appeared and introduced himself to Tyson.

“Hi Professor! My name is Tyson and this is my Pokemon, a Snorunt!” said Tyson

“Glad to meet you Tyson! Come in guys, I’ll prepare us some tea and you can tell us what your goal is Tyson.”

As they went in the lab, Tyson asked Ash if he could see his Pokemon, and Ash and Tracey took him outside, while the professor was inside preparing tea.

“Well this is where all the Pokemon live! Oh wait a bit, come out here!” said Tracey as he called on his Pokemon.

“Woah cool Pokemon Tracey!” said Tyson

There was a Scizor, a Marill, a Venomoth, a Combee and a Sawsbuck.

“Woah, Scyther and Venonat evolved, and you caught new Pokemon!” said Ash

“Yeah! I evolved Scyther when I traveled to Johto with the Professor to research about the legendary dogs. Venonat evolved when I was taking a course in Johto to see how close me and Venonat were! I caught a Combee a couple of days ago when a baby Magby Prof Oak is taking care of put a tree on fire accidentally. Deerling was caught when I traveled to Unova with the Professor. It evolved later in Unova.” Said Tracey, happy for his Pokemon

“By legendary dogs, do you mean Suicune, Raikou and Entei Tracey?” asked Tyson

“Yes. I saw Suicune but only for a couple of seconds. It was in a sacred forest. I heard Celebi live there, but I’m really not sure. The Prof was looking for Entei and I told him about Suicune, but he won’t tell me if Celebi live there or not…”

As Tracey said this, Ash smiled and thought of when he met Celebi back in Johto. After explaining to Tyson, they heard a sound. Like an earthquake sound, but worse.

“Woah, what’s this?!” asked Tyson worried

Ash and Tracey started laughing, and then a bunch of Tauros appeared.

“These are my Tauros Tyson!” said Ash

Then many other Pokemon appeared. There was Bulbasaur, Kingler, Muk, even Snorlax appeared! There was Totodile, Noctowl, Donphan, Sceptile, Torkoal, Glalie, Infernape, Staraptor, Torterra, Gible, Oshawott, Snivy, Leavanny, Unfezant, Pignite, Krookodile, Palpitoad and Scraggy. Then he called on his Pokemon, Boldore, Corphish, Buizel, Meganium and Quilava. Tyson was surprised from seeing so many Pokemon, but was very happy from seeing all of them.

“That is so cool!” said Tyson, as he called on Snorunt.

Snorunt started talking to Ash’s Pokemon, while Ash was also talking to some of his Pokemon. Tracey’s were also bonding with Ash’s Pokemon.

“Hey guys, tea is ready, let’s go inside!” said Professor Oak

They started going inside, and some Pokemon followed them. They sat down and Prof Oak started asking Tyson what he wanted to do.

“I wanna win the Pokemon league! I know it will be very tough though.” said Tyson

“Well, do you have badges yet?”

“No, I just started my journey. I’m not sure where I should go first though, still thinking of possibilities…”

“Well why don’t you go to Viridian City? I heard there is finally a new gym there, so it may be good for you! You should try it!” said Prof Oak

“Well then that’s decided, Viridian City it is! Well it’s getting late now, I should go! I’m gonna get tickets for the P1 tournament, and I want to participate… but I don’t have a fighting type…” said Tyson, laughing in a way

“Uhmm I see… Ash are you participating?” asked Prof Oak

“Yeah, probably with Scraggy!”

“Ok that’s good!”

“Well I really have to go now, good bye Prof, Tracey, Ash!”

“Wait up, I’ll go with you Tyson!” said Ash

Ash and Tyson left and continued to Viridian City.

[End of Chapter 5]

[OshaMijuWott]

I enjoy your story! It will be interesting to see tyson's fighting type!

[RealRaymon]

That is a really nice story!
I was excited reading battle with Bayleef and to See ash returning to Pallet Town! So, now both of us have chapters, in which Ash is in Pallet Town
But I was dissapointed that Snorunt didn't meet Glalie though, well he met him, but you didn't write much about it

[TheSirPeras]

That is a really nice story!
I was excited reading battle with Bayleef and to See ash returning to Pallet Town! So, now both of us have chapters, in which Ash is in Pallet Town
But I was dissapointed that Snorunt didn't meet Glalie though, well he met him, but you didn't write much about it

I didn't do it because I wanted Ash to evolve an older Pokemon but whenever they battle I am planning on doing that the big battle xD Thanks

I enjoy your story! It will be interesting to see tyson's fighting type!

Thanks! Next chapter will be the P1 tournament so don't miss it

[TheSirPeras]

Chapter 6 [P1 Tournament! The tough Fighting type! [Part 1] ]

After Ash and Tyson left Pallet Town, they camped in Route 1 due to being night already. Before they left, Ash took the chance to trade his Boldore for his Scraggy to get ready for the P1 Tournament. After the night, they woke up and continued walking to the P1 Tournament.

“Look there it is!!” said Tyson excited.

“Finally! Oh man look at all those fighting types!!” said Ash, also very excited for the tournament

“Yeah, there’s a Hitmonlee, a Hitmontop, a Machoke, a Heracross and many others! Woah who are those Pokemon??” asked Tyson to Ash, while pointing at all the different fighting types

“That’s a Mienshao! It’s from the Unova region.” answered Ash.

“I had never heard of that Pokemon…”

As Ash and Tyson were talking about all the Pokemon gathered, Tyson noticed a Hitmonchan punching the air, as if it was training alone.

“Hey Ash, look at that Hitmonchan!” said Tyson.

“That Hitmonchan looks quite strong. It seems to be wild, so I don’t know what it could be doing here…” said Ash confused.

“Maybe it wants to enter the tournament but can’t since it doesn’t have a trainer?” asked Tyson.

As Tyson said this, Hitmonchan looked at Tyson and Ash and started walking away and went behind the P1 tournament stadium, where there was nobody.

“Hey Tyson I’m gonna sign up for the tournament ok? See you later!” said Ash

“Ok good luck Ash!” replied Tyson

Then Tyson thought to himself “I think I will observe Hitmonchan’s training for a while…”. Tyson ran behind the stadium but didn’t find any Pokemon. After looking around he saw Hitmonchan walking away to the forest. He followed it and saw a group of Hitmonchan. Then Hitmonchan and an older Hitmonchan started fighting. It was a friendly fight though, kind of like a training battle. After both Hitmonchan using some moves like Thunder Punch, Bullet Punch and Mach Punch, they stopped the battle.

“What are they doing..?” said Tyson

Tyson was still observing both Pokemon, when he heard a familiar voice behind him.

“I believe that’s a family of Hitmonchan. They’re probably just increasing their training skills…” said Marion, Tyson’s old friend.
“Marion! What are you doing here??” asked Tyson.

“I came here to participate with my Pokemon, a Makuhita! Then I saw you were here too, and decided to go say hi, but you came running here so I followed you…” said Marion.

“Oh that’s cool! Hey tell me how are your Pokemon??” asked Tyson

“Why don’t you see for yourself? Come out here guys!” said Marion.

A Squirtle, a Graveler and a Makuhita came out.

“Woah those are cool Pokemon!” said Tyson excited.

“Yeah! Oh wait I forgot to sign up! Gotta go Tyson bye bye!!” said Marion as he left.

“Ok bye! Agh I’m hungry… I know!” said Tyson, as he then called on Snorunt. “Snorunt are you hungry?”

“Snoww runt!!” said Snorunt

“Ok well here’s some Pokemon food Tracey gave me. And a Sandwich for me!” said Tyson.

As they were eating, the Hitmonchan noticed Tyson and Snorunt again. He grinned and started training his punching moves against trees. He used a Bullet Punch so powerful that it knocked down a tree, which knocked out several trees. One of the trees was going to fall on Tyson and Snorunt.

“Huh?! Snorunt watch out!!” screamed Tyson, as he put his body between Snorunt and the tree.

Hitmonchan heard this and ran quickly to Tyson. He grabbed Tyson and Snorunt and saved them.

“Woah! Thanks Hitmonchan!” said Tyson happy.

“Snorunt!!” said Snorunt, in a thankful way.

“Hitmon! Chan chan!”

Afterwards, the group of Hitmonchan came and they all started saying something to the Hitmonchan that saved Tyson. After some minutes Hitmonchan started talking to Tyson. Tyson realized Hitmonchan wanted to go with Tyson, but only after a battle.

“Ok let’s do it then!! Snorunt are you ready??”

“Snorunt!!”

“Chan! Chan hitmonchan!”

“Snorunt use Blizzard!”

As Snorunt blew snow from his mouth, Hitmonchan tried to counterattack with Bullet Bunch, but ended up getting hit by Blizzard. It was knocked down, but Hitmonchan got back up. Hitmonchan used Thunderpunch afterwards.

“Snorunt, use Protect!”

Snorunt avoided the ThunderPunch, and Hitmonchan was once again knocked down. Hitmonchan then got back up and used Mach Punch.

“Snorunt, watch out!”

Snorunt then got hit by Mach Punch, but it used Blizzard again. Hitmonchan managed to dodge it, and used another Mach Punch.
“Uh… I know! Snorunt bite his Mach Punch!”

Snorunt grabbed Hitmonchan’s hand and knocked it down. Hitmonchan was then knocked out.

“Oh yeah! Go Pokeball!”

The Pokeball turned about four times and then stopped. Hitmonchan was captured!

“Yeah we got a Hitmonchan!” exclaimed Tyson.

Tyson then sent out Hitmonchan, and greeted him, who was happy. Hitmonchan said good bye to his friends, and Tyson left to go sign up. He ran to the P1 Stadium and managed to sign up with Hitmonchan. He went inside and saw Ash and his Scraggy. Tyson told Ash what happened and Ash congratulated him.

“Good job for your first capture Tyson!” said Ash.

“Thanks Ash! I’m so happy!” said Tyson very happy.

Then Ash heard a voice he knew. It was Anthony and his Primeape.

“Hello Ash! How are you?! Long time no see huh?!” said Anthony.

“Anthony! Primeape! How are you guys? I missed you a lot Primeape! I bet you are the strongest fighting type now!”
Ash and Primeape hugged and Anthony told Ash that whoever won the P1 Tournament would have to defeat him and his Primeape. Then Anthony left since the Tournament was about to begin. The first round was announced, and Tyson was going to fight Marion and Makuhita, while Ash would fight another participant. Ash and his Scraggy defeated a Riolu and then it was Tyson’s turn.

“Ready to lose Tyson?” asked Marion.

“We’ll see about that!” said Tyson grinning.

“Let the battle begin!” said the referee.

“Go Hitmonchan! Use Bullet Punch!”

“Makuhita go! Try to dodge it!”

Hitmonchan managed to hit Makuhita due to Bullet Punch hitting first.

“Makuhita are you okay??” asked Marion

“Maku!!”

“Ok let’s go! Use Arm Thrust!” said Marion

“No way! Hitmonchan use ThunderPunch!”

Both moves ended up colliding several times, until Hitmonchan’s Thunder Punch was more powerful, knocking Makuhita down.

“Makuhita get up you can do it!” said Marion

Makuhita got up, but fell down again, and the battle was over.

“Yes! Good job Hitmonchan!!”

“You did great Makuhita. Now return.” Said Marion “Congrats Tyson! Good luck for later battles!”

After this round, Ash congratulated Tyson for his first win in a Trainer Battle. The next round was the quarter finals, and Ash battled a Machoke, and Tyson beat a Gurdurr. Then in the semi finals, Ash and Tyson would battle.

“Good luck Tyson! You’ll need it…” said Ash smiling

“Hah good luck to you too” said Tyson also smiling.

“Let the battle begin!” said the ref

[End of Chapter 6]

[OshaMijuWott]

Interesting chapter, would've liked to see tyson with a tyrogue, but oh well. I'm guess there's gonna be a Scraggy vs. Primeape final. But, isn't primeape still ash's and not anthony's, just in training?

[TheSirPeras]

Don't forget Scraggy is still a young Pokemon...
Yeah technically Primeape is Ash's but since he's in training with Anthony he's technically being used by Anthony

[TheSirPeras]

Chapter 7 [P1 Tournament! The tough Fighting type! {Part 2}]

After Tyson, Ash and Marion entered the P1 tournament, Tyson and Marion were paired up to battle. Tyson’s Hitmonchan defeated Marion’s Makuhita, and after another battle, Tyson has now to battle Ash.

“Ok go Scraggy!” said Ash, in an enthusiastic way.

“Ha we won’t lose to you this time Ash! Go Hitmonchan, give it all!” said Tyson, excited for another battle with his hero.
“The Semi Finals first battle, between Ash and Tyson will begin! Ash will use the Pokemon from Unova, Scraggy, while Tyson will be using Hitmonchan from Kanto! The winner will move to the finals, and battle the winner of the other Semi Finals! Now, let the battle begin!” said the Ref.

“Ok Hitmonchan, use Bullet Punch!” said Tyson.

“Scraggy, pull your pants up as a defense mechanism!” said Ash, confident on Scraggy.

Hitmonchan’s gloves became silver, and started punching Scraggy very quick, but Scraggy managed to avoid taking damage.

“Ughh… Oh I know, Hitmonchan, now use Mach Punch with your right hand on Scraggy’s head, and try a Thunder Punch with the left hand on Scraggy’s body!” said Tyson, who remembered Blane’s and Magmortar’s strategy of using two moves at the same time.

“Scraggy, dodge and use Hi Jump Kick!”

Hitmonchan used Mach Punch and then tried Thunder Punch, but didn’t manage to, due to him not having great coordination.
Scraggy still dodged Mach Punch and hit Hitmonchan with Hi Jump Kick. Hitmonchan was hit back against the ropes of the stadium.

“Hitmonchan, are you okay?” asked Tyson worried.

“Chann!!” said Hitmonchan confident about turning the battle around.

“That’s the spirit buddy!” said Tyson, about to tell Hitmonchan what to do, but being interrupted by Ash’s commands.

“Scraggy, use Leer and then Hi Jump Kick!” said Ash

Scraggy went in front of Hitmonchan and lowered his defenses, and then jumped up, preparing a Hi Jump Kick. Scraggy then started going down, to hit Hitmonchan.

“Hitmonchan, use Thunder Punch on the air!” said Tyson, smiling.

Hitmonchan used Thunder Punch on the air right before Scraggy went near him, and got hit by the sparks the Thunder Punch left. Scraggy then fell and got damaged.

“Let’s finish this, Hitmonchan use Bullet Punch!” said Tyson, confident in the battle.

Hitmonchan’s gloves became silver and started punching Scraggy a couple of times.

“Now! Mach Punch!!”

Hitmonchan used Mach Punch as his final hit, which knocked out Scraggy.

“Folks, there we have it! The first finalist is Tyson, and his Hitmonchan!!” said the announcer of the P1 tournament.

“You did great Scraggy! Return, you deserve a good rest buddy!” said Ash, as he returned Scraggy.

“Yes!! Come here Hitmonchan!!” said Tyson, as he high fived his Pokemon, and then hugged him.

After the battle, Ash and Tyson went inside the participants’ room and watched the other semi final.

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“Ok finish it Mienshao!!” said one of the semi-finalists, as his Mienshao defeated the opponent’s Machoke.

“Folks, the other finalist is Lois and her Mienshao!!”
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“Well, I have to go, time for the finals Ash!” said Tyson, looking forward for his match.

“Ok good luck Tyson! Win this for me and Scraggy okay?” said Ash smiling.

Tyson walked to the stadium with his Hitmonchan by his side and waved at the people. He noticed Marion was there watching. Then, he saw Lois walk to the stadium with her Mienshao. They both entered the Ring and Tyson wanted to shake her hand, but Lois was arrogant and ignored him. Mienshao though, said hi to Hitmonchan and Tyson.

“The finals of the P1 tournament of 2012 are about to begin! Our two finalists are two new participants, so it’s very surprising they’re both in the finals!! Rules are the same! Tyson from Cinnabar Island and his Hitmonchan are going up against Lois from Mistralton City in Unova and her Mienshao! Let the battle begin!” said the announcer.

“Ok let the battle begin!” said the Ref.

“Alright Mienshao, use Bounce!” said Lois, when Mienshao jumped high to some bars on the ceiling.

“Ok be careful Hitmonchan! Look up and prepare yourself! When you see Mienshao close to you, use Thunder Punch on the air!” said Tyson, thinking of his strategy against Scraggy.

Mienshao then came down. Hitmonchan was starting to use Thunder Punch.

“Mienshao use Acrobatics now!” said Lois.

As Mienshao was going down, he started moving very fast all over the place, and then hit Hitmonchan hard. Hitmonchan was knocked down.

“Hitmonchan?! Are you ok??” asked Tyson.

“Hitt… Monchan!!” said Hitmonchan, hurt but still able to battle.

“Ok, now use Thunder Punch, while Mienshao is close!” said Tyson.

Hitmonchan used a quick Thunder Punch, hitting Mienshao hard against the ropes of the ring.

“Mienshao, use Aura Sphere!!” said Lois.

“Hitmonchan hit it back with Mach Punch!” said Tyson.

Mienshao used Aura Sphere but it got destroyed by Mach Punch.

“Now use Bullet Punch!!” said Tyson while Hitmonchan hit Mienshao hard.

“Mienshao, can you continue??” asked Lois.

Mienshao said yes, and Lois started grinning.

“Mienshao, use… Reversal!” said Lois.

Since Mienshao was starting to be very tired, it grabbed Hitmonchan, jumped and threw it down again. Hitmonchan was very tired and damaged.

“Hitmonchan!! Are you alright?” asked Tyson, worried.

“Hitmonchan!!” said Hitmonchan still up for the battle.

“Ok let’s try again, Thunder Punch and Mach Punch combo!!” said Tyson

Hitmonchan ran to Mienshao, but still didn’t manage to use both moves. He still managed to hit with Thunder Punch. It did some damage and left Mienshao paralyzed.

“Mienshao no!!” said Lois “Use Bounce, let’s finish this!”

Mienshao couldn’t move though, and Hitmonchan used Bullet Punch last, defeating Mienshao.

“And the winner is… Tyson and Hitmonchan!!” screamed the announcer.

“YES WE DID IT BUDDY!! HIGH FIVE!” said Tyson, high fiving Hitmonchan.

“You’re good!” Lois went up to Tyson and shook his hand.

“Thanks, your Mienshao was great too!” said Tyson.

“Hey just cuz you won doesn’t mean you’re still as good as me… I have five badges… and you have no badges!” said Lois, grinning and laughing in an evil way.

“Whatever you say Lois…” replied Tyson, happy for winning.

After the battle, Tyson received the prize, and received a Macho Brace. He gave it to Hitmonchan, who was very happy.

“Stay in your seats folks, the last battle is gonna go down now! Tyson against the champion of the P1 tournament, Anthony will happen in twenty minutes! Don’t miss it!”

Tyson and Lois went back to the participants’ room and Ash congratulated both. Ash said that Lois’s strategy was good but Hitmonchan was simply stronger.

“Hey Lois where did you get your badges??” asked Tyson.

“These are from Fuchsia, Celadon, Cerulean, Pewter and Viridian. I don’t have badges from Unova yet though, since I had to move when I was eight. Before, my best friend gave me a Pokemon egg from his parents and it hatched into a Mienfoo… And now it’s a Mienshao…” said Lois.

“That’s really cool! I hope I visit Unova someday…” said Tyson.

“You could come with me later and go to the Unova’s Pokemon league!!” said Lois excited for the idea.

“That’s a great idea! Hey why don’t you come with us??” asked Tyson to her.

“Hey just because I told you about going to Unova doesn’t mean we’re still friends, I was just excited for going back to Unova, that’s all!”

“Oh cmon Lois, it’s more fun to travel with more people…” said Ash.

“Ha fine, I’ll go with you guys…” said Lois, convinced.

“Ladies and Gentleman, get ready to watch the final showdown, Primeape VS Hitmonchan!!” said the announcer.

Tyson and Anthony were both on the ring, and had their Pokemon.

“Let the battle begin!!” said the Ref.

“Ok Primeape… use Focus Blast!”

“Hitmonchan defend with Mach Punch!”

Primeape used Focus Blast, and Hitmonchan tried to defend himself with Mach Punch, but Focus Blast was too powerful, knocking Hitmonchan back.

“Hitmonchan try to use Bullet Punch!”

Hitmonchan used Bullet Punch and hit Primeape, but it did no damage.

“Primeape, use Giga Impact!!”

Primeape used Giga Impact, and ended up knocking out Hitmonchan.

“Well there you go folks, the legendary Anthony defeated Tyson in two moves! Not the first time we’ve seen this happen though!”

Tyson and Anthony shook eachother’s hands and Ash also shook Anthony’s hand. They all ended up leaving the stadium and went to a hotel next to the stadium where everyone that worked there slept there, including Anthony. They had dinner there and slept there too. During the rest of that day, Ash and Primeape had some training sessions to spend some time again, while Tyson trained Snorunt against Mienshao. The next day, they left to Viridian City.

[End of Chapter 7]

[TheSirPeras]

Can someone give me feedback on the battles I did in these two last chapters? Cuz the next one is the gym battle and I wanna make a good gym battle

[Chibi_Muffin]

I liked how you described the attacks, you did use a lot of similar description (like tired for both Mienshao and Hitmonchan, you could have said things like they were gasping or sweating) and I think you could have also used more description, but the description you did have was good. I find it a bit odd that Tyson won his first tournament against Ash and Lois (both have Gym badges and thus have trained for a while, he doesn't and has only been training for a couple of weeks, so they would have more experience and stronger Pokemon) with a newly caught Pokemon. Winning things too easily when logically they should lose or at least struggle to win is a sign of a character being a Mary Sue - a character that is perfect and has unreasonable things happen to them just because the author wants it. I'm not saying Tyson appears to be a Mary Sue character right now for me (it is one battle), but that you might want to balance him out a bit. He shouldn't win all of the time, especially against experienced trainers.

I also have a bit of a preference for a battle that could show the Pokemon's personalities. Right now, you write in a simplistic 'Pokemon attacked, this is what happened' style. There are two things that I am going to recommend. First, you can describe battles more, such as the effect on the environment and how the Pokemon are affected more deeply (like 'struggling to stand, gasping for air' instead of just tired) in order to make them more tense. Secondly, the Pokemon's personal reactions could be showed off. A shy Pokemon could cower from a tough looking opponent, a tough Pokemon could attack before it gives orders, a brave Pokemon could keep getting up even when it is exhausted. This could also make it more interesting - remember, Poemon aren't machines, they are alive and so have their own thoughts and feelings. I think your trainers could have a bit more personality as well, which could be shown through their actions (what they like doing or choose to do) as well as how they act towards others.

Here's my advice. I do quite like the way you write battles, I just thought I'd give you some things to think about.

[TheSirPeras]

Thank you very much, that's exactly the kind of feedback I needed at the moment
I made Tyson win because he had lost the two other battles and I wanted to show some progress. I think it's reasonable that Hitmonchan beat Scraggy though, since Scraggy really isn't that strong. Against Lois, I had two ideas : Lois wins because Tyson was over confident or vice versa, and the latter appealed to me more. But don't worry Tyson will not be the perfect trainer he's gonna lose often at the beginning.
I will definitely try to improve the battle interactions, describe in more detail and give personalities!!
Thank you very much!!

[TheSirPeras]

Chapter 8 [Viridian Gym Battle! Hitmonchan & Snorunt VS Dugtrio & Nidoking!]

After Tyson defeated Lois in the finals of the P1 Tournament, and Lois joined the group, they all set off for Viridian City.

“Look guys there it is!!” said Tyson in an excited way “Let’s go to the gym right now!”.

“Wait can we stop by the Pokemon Center? I’m very hungry right now…” asked Lois, when suddenly her stomach did the annoying sound that announces hunger.

“Ahhh c’mon Lois!! Just because you’ve won the badge doesn’t mean I can’t… Arghh” said Tyson, annoyed at Lois.

As Tyson said this, Tyson’s face and Lois’s face went against each other, in a rivalry way.

“C’mon guys don’t fight! Let’s go to the center, I’m also hungry…” said Ash

“Pika Pi!!” said Pikachu, trying to separate Tyson and Lois.

Tyson, Ash and Lois then walked to the Pokemon Center. When they arrived, they asked Nurse Joy if she could do a usual check up for all the Pokemon. Nurse Joy took the Pokemon, and they went to sit down.

“So who has food..?” asked Lois, with an annoyed face at Tyson.

“Ash has it. He has sandwiches from some days ago.” said Tyson, day-dreaming for some food.

“Uhh no I thought you had them Tyson…” said Ash with a suspicious voice.

“Oh noo!!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhh” said Lois, raging on Tyson “It’s all your fault you little-“

“Your Pokemon are fine, here they are” said Nurse Joy with the usual happy voice.

As Nurse Joy said this, Tyson and Lois took their Pokeballs and called on their Pokemon. Out came Snorunt, Hitmonchan, Mienshao, and three new Pokemon Lois had. A Munchlax, a Kadabra and a Murkrow.

“Woah those are some cool Pokemon! Where did you get them?

“I got them throughout my journey here… Munchlax was the last one I caught though.”

“Hey look, Hitmonchan and Mienshao are already good friends!” said Tyson happy to see Hitmonchan talk to Mienshao.

Hitmonchan then asked if he could have a battle with Mienshao. Both trainers said yes and ran outside, while Ash decided to go get some sandwiches.

“Ok let’s do this! Hitmonchan start with Thunder Punch!”

“Hit! Chan Chan!!” said Hitmonchan excited for another battle, as Hitmonchan loved battling.

Hitmonchan jumped high up, and as he went down he used Thunder Punch, hitting Mienshao hard. Both Pokemon then smirked, and got ready for more.

“Mienshao, use Aura Sphere!”

Mienshao put his arms up, and a blue light ball started appearing. Mienshao did an evil yet friendly look, and released the Aura Sphere against Hitmonchan. Hitmonchan tried to destroy the move with a punching move, but the Sphere was more powerful, knocking Hitmonchan back.

“Hitmonchan, are you okay??” asked Tyson, worried about his friend.

“Hitmonchan! Chann chan!” said Hitmonchan, ready for more.

“Wait we should stop now, you have a gym battle to do, let’s not get Hitmonchan tired.” said Lois, surprised Tyson hadn’t gone to the gym yet.

“The gym… OH RIGHT THE GYM!! I have to go Lois, byee!!” said Tyson, returning Snorunt and Hitmonchan.

“Wait Tyson lemme go with you!” said Lois, running after Tyson, but stopping. She wrote a note and gave it to Nurse Joy, and then ran after Tyson. Even though she couldn’t see Tyson, she knew where the gym was.

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As Tyson opened the door, he screamed “Hello?”. The building was big, and Tyson heard the word “Hello” again, due to the echo. He then got a reply from a manly voice, probably no more than 20 years old. It was the gym leader from Viridian City.
“My name is Tyson, and I’m from Cinnabar Island! I want to battle with you!”

“Well hello, my name is Blue. I’m the leader of the Viridian Gym! I specialize in Ground type Pokemon, if you couldn’t see from the field.”

Tyson then looked at the field, and saw how it had a rocky texture and many holes, probably due to all the Dig moves.

“Ground types huh? That’s awesome! C’mon let’s battle!!” said Tyson, even more excited for the match now.

“Sure! It’s a 3 on 3!” said Blue, looking forward for a good match.

“Uhh 3..? I only have two Pokemon…” said Tyson, feeling ashamed for it.

“Two Pokemon..? Well then let’s have a double battle, why not.” Said Blue, since he still wanted a battle.

“Awesome! Let’s get at it!”

As Tyson and Blue got ready for the match, Lois entered the gym quietly. She tried to remain unseen.

“This will be a double battle. The challenger Tyson has the right for the first move! Let the battle begin!”

“Alright, go Himonchan! Go Snorunt!” said Tyson, as both his Pokemon came out. Hitmonchan started punching the air to warm up while Snorunt looked at him.

“Go Dugtrio, go Nidoking! Win this for me!” said Blue, in a calm voice.

Nidoking and Hitmonchan looked at each other, and grinned.

“Ok Snorunt hit both of them with Blizzard, while Hitmonchan, you can use Bullet Punch on Nidoking!”

Hitmonchan ran to Nidoking and hit with many quick punches, while Snorunt used Blizzard. Due to lack of coordination, Blizzard ended up hitting Hitmonchan though, who got frozen.

“Wait what the?? Snorunt you weren’t supposed to hit Hitmonchan!” said Tyson.

“Runt??” said Snorunt worried for Hitmonchan

“Oh God, this will be fun…” said Lois to herself.

Blue smirked, and told Dugtrio to use Earthquake, while Nidoking jumped to avoid the move.

“Watch out Snorunt, use Protect!!”

“Snorunt!” said Snorunt, who jumped in front Hitmonchan who was still frozen, to try and protect him from any harm.

“Nidoking, Earth Power, now!” said Blue “The way I play with the ground is great don’t you think, Tyson? said Blue being sarcastic.

Snorunt’s Protect worked at the beginning but after a while all the rocks from the moves broke it, and hit Snorunt hard. They also destroyed the ice around Hitmonchan.

“Hitmonchan!! Hit!! Monchan!!” argued Hitmonchan with Snorunt for freezing him.

“Snoww….” said Snorunt as an apology, but he was also afraid of Hitmonchan being mad.

“Guys come on, pull it together!” said Tyson, as Blue gave commands to his Pokemon.

“Ok, Dugtrio use Night Slash, and Nidoking use Trash!”

Dugtrio targeted Hitmonchan with his move and he was moving quickly to him, when Hitmonchan was still arguing with
Snorunt. As Dugtio came very close to Hitmonchan, Hitmonchan simply punched it away like nothing. Then Nidoking appeared from behind and was about to use Trash on Hitmonchan, but Snorunt managed to use Blizzard, throwing Nidoking against the wall.

“Chan? Hitmonchan chan!” said Hitmonchan to Snorunt with a happy voice, and then lifted his thumb to Snorunt.

“Sno? Runt Snorunt!” said Snorunt happy for them finally starting to work well.

“Ok guys, let’s do it! Hitmonchan, use Mach Punch on Nidoking, and Snorunt use Blizzard on Dugtrio!”

“Runt/Chan!” said both his Pokemon at the same time.

“Nidoking, use Trash when Hitmonchan approaches you!”

Hitmonchan and Nidoking went next to each other, and both started using many physical moves on each other. Hitmonchan used plenty of Mach Punches and Bullet Punches, while Nidoking kept using Trash and punching/kicking Hitmonchan.

“Hitmonchan, get him, your better!” said Tyson trying to get Hitmonchan more confident and therefore stronger.

“No way, Nidoking get him!” said Blue who was finally interested in the match.

Both Pokemon kept hitting each other. Then both of them moved back and stopped. They both smirked and winked. Nidoking fell on the floor and was unable to battle. Right after that, Hitmonchan fell too.

“Return Hitmonchan! You were great buddy, you helped a lot!” said Tyson.

“Nidoking you were fantastic, come back!” said Blue “Now it’s a one on one huh… hmm”

“Ok Snorunt, use Bite!”

“Dugtrio use Dig!”

Snorunt tried to bite Dugtrio, but ended up hitting the floor. Lois started laughing when that happened, and Tyson noticed her. He tried to ignore her so he wouldn’t get distracted.

“Snorunt, watch out!” said Tyson, trying to hear where Dugtrio was, but failing.

Dugtrio came out and hit Snorunt hard from under him, throwing Snorunt up, who then fell.

“Snorunt can you continue??” asked Tyson

“Sno… Runt Snorunt!” said Snorunt, trying his best for Tyson.

“Ok then use Blizzard!”

Snorunt blew a lot of snow against Dugtrio and managed to deal some damage. Dugtrio then used Sandstorm.

“Humph… Dugtrio use Earthquake!”

“Snorunt use Protect and then Bite!” said Tyson, hoping to get the final hit.

Snorunt managed to avoid the Earthquake, and then jumped on to Dugtrio. Snorunt missed Dugtrio though, and both him and Tyson were surprised.

“Dugtrio’s ability is Sand Veil, Tyson. It raises its evasion in a Sandstorm.” Said Blue.

“Ok then use Blizzard!”

“Use Earthquake!”

Both attacks collided, but Blizzard managed to blow the rocks from the Earthquake back, hitting Dugtrio. A big dust of cloud appeared, and when it faded, Dugtrio was unable to battle.

“Huh… we… we won!!” screamed Tyson.

“Congratulations Tyson. You managed to beat me. Is this your first gym badge?” asked Blue.

“Yes so it means a lot to me!” said Tyson happy.

“Well here you have it, your first badge!” said Blue as he gave Tyson his badge.

“Thank you a lot!” said Tyson happy.

“You were great Tyson!”

“No, it was all thanks to Snorunt!” said Tyson, as he walked up to Snorunt and thanked him.

Tyson returned Snorunt, and left the gym wth Lois.

“Congrats Tyson, you actually won!” said Lois, mocking him.

“Oh shut up!” said Tyson laughing.

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“Uhh… where’s everybody??” asked Ash as he walked in the Pokemon Center with six sandwiches.

[End of chapter 8]

[TheSirPeras]

Any feedback on the gym battle? xD

[OshaMijuWott]

I'm confused as to why ash is traveling with him, he has already traveled kanto twice, is he really doing it a third?

[TheSirPeras]

Some chapters ago he said he would go with Tyson until the Viridian forest, which is what will happen next time, a chapter for Ash now

[TheSirPeras]

Chapter 9 [ Neo Team Rocket VS Ash & Pidgeot!]
After Tyson earned his first gym, they all set off to the Viridian Forest, to go see Ash’s old friend. They made sure they brought sandwiches this time though, just in case. They left Viridian City quickly and headed into a house, with a dark green sign, saying “Viridian Forest, house for the bug types!”. As they entered the house, the door made a creepy sound, and closed on itself.

“Woah what was that?!” asked Lois scared but yet interested in the mystery around the door “It’s time for Lois to solve another mystery guys, come with me!”.

“Uh? What’s gotten into her..?” asked Tyson to Ash, when the latter simply let out a giggle.

The house was dark, but smelled the way cleaned floors smell like. It smelled like detergent. Suddenly, they heard a noise coming from the other side of the room. Detective Lois went up to it to check, and suddenly an old person jumped.

“BUH! Hahahahah!” said the old man laughing his head off.

Lois was on the floor, and it seemed like she had had a heart attack.

“Oh don’t mind an old man, he’s just trying to have fun…” said the old man again.

“Uhmm okay then… Hello, my name is Tyson, this is Ash and that’s Lois… Well if she is still alive that is…” said Tyson, smiling but being creeped out inside by the old man.

“Well what are you guys up to? Stealing Pokemon from an old man? Oh God, the generation of today is too sneaky I tell ya…”

“What, no? We just want to get past…” said Tyson starting to think the old guy might be a pedophile.

“Oh I apologize then… I thought you wanted to steal my Staraptor and my Ampharos… You can come out guys…” said the old guy, in a weak but relieved voice, as a Staraptor and an Ampharos came out from behind the desk in the house “You see, some weird guys came to this house when I was asleep. I woke up due to all their noise… And I heard them talk about stealing these flying types of the Viridian Forest…”

“FLYING TYPES?! Tell me all you know!” said Ash enraged about the thoughts of Pidgeot being attacked at the moment.

“Well that’s really all I know young fella…” said the old guy.

As he said this, Ash stormed out of the house to the forest going after the guys that said that. Tyson and Lois went after him, but ended up losing his track. They decided to make a bonfire and cook some food, but ended up realizing Ash had the food.

“Damnit not again!!! IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT YOU LITTLE-!” said Lois, before being interrupted by someone.

“Hey you two! What are you doing here?!” asked a creepy guy, about 20 years old. He was dressed in a Purple uniform with Purple pants, a black “R” in the middle of the shirt and on the side of the pants. He also had a triangular hat with, yet again another black “R” on it.

“Uh, who are you..?” asked Lois and Tyson in unison.

“I am Deivid, Mr Deivid for you two noobs! You either leave the forest or you’ll be in a lot of trouble, noobs…”

“Oh really? Well if you want a fight, you’ll get one! Go Snorunt, go Hitmonchan!” said Tyson, looking forward for another match.

“Sno… Snorunt Runt!” said Snorunt looking mad at Deivid.

“Humph, it’s your decision…” said Deivid as he spat on the floor “Go Houndoom! Use Nasty Plot…”

“Nasty Plot? Hahahaha you gotta be kidding me, Snorunt use Bite!”

Houndoom started thinking of terrible things and then dodged Snorunt’s bite.

“Sno?” said Snorunt, annoyed for missing.

“Houndoom, use Inferno!”

Houndoom did a very evil look at the Pokemon and then used Inferno, automatically OHKO’ing both his Pokemon.

“Humph… Easy. Hey you girl, your next!”

“I don’t think so, come out here Munchlax!”

Munchlax came out, yawned loudly and sat down. Lois tried to get him up, but there was no chance.

“Argh… Come back… Go Murkrow!”

“Murkrow!!!” said Murkrow looking confident for being used in a battle.

“Use Aerial Ace and then use Shadow Ball!”

Murkrow started flying quickly and then disappeared, and appeared behind Houndoom hitting him, and then it used a quick Shadow Ball. Houndoom then used Flamethrower, but Murkrow dodged it, and used Sucker Punch, defeating Houndoom. Deivid then ran away.
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“Pidgeot, are you there??!” yelled Ash to the air, looking for his old Pokemon.

“Pikaa Piiii!” helped Pikachu.

Then, a big shadow appeared over Ash and Pikachu, who looked up and saw a Fearow.

“Huh, you’re… you are that Fearow!” yelled Ash, turning his hat ready for another battle.

“Fearow Fearow!” said Fearow, worried for some reason.

“Pika pi?” asked Pikachu, trying to understand what he was saying.

“Fear fearow Fearow! ROWW ROWW! Feaaaaaaarowww!”

Pikachu then told Ash what happened.

“You mean Pidgeot was captured by these weird looking men? Oh that’s it, c’mon Pikachu! Oh wait, Fearow thank you so much for that information.”

Pikachu and Ash ran off looking for Pidgeot and got followed by Fearow. Ash noticed this and as he was running he asked since when Fearow cared about Pidgeot. Fearow said that they had to work together to get the weird grunt to leave the forest but Pidgeot ended up being captured.

“A’ right, you wanna help us then. That’s cool thanks Fearow!”

Ash, Pikachu and Fearow ran for about 5 mns, and they got to this bigger tree. They hid behind some bushes and saw a helicopter about to take off, and more weird grunts with purple outfits and black “R’s”. He noticed a bunch of Pidgeotto’s and Pidgey’s and even Spearow’s in a big net behind, and then noticed his Pidgeot in a bigger sack going inside the helicopter. Ash flipped out and ran to the helicopter, pushing some grunts away. As he jumped to the net and released all the bird Pokemon, the helicopter went on and started flying up. Many of the bird Pokemon just flew away, but some of them stayed behind trying to attack some of the grunts, as revenge.
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“Huh what’s that sound Lois?” asked Tyson to her female companion, after hearing some bird sounds coming from somewhere.

“Is that a flock of… Spearow?! asked Lois.

“Yes… I have a feeling it’s because of that Deivid guy… and I have a feeling Ash is involved in this… let’s go Lois!” said Tyson, as he ran to the direction that the Spearow came from.

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“Hey kid, come down now!” screamed a man that looked much more formal than the others. Apart from that, he had a suitcase with a Black “R” and had thick glasses that allowed him to see through walls, although all he would see is the shape of the body with a pink-purple color. The man had short hair with gel on the front, and had a muscled body.

The helicopter was still in the air, not moving due to Ash.

“No way, Pikachu use Thunder on the grunts down there!” commanded Ash, still very mad “Who are you guys anyways?!”

“My name is Jont, and I’m the leader of a new organization in Kanto, the Neo Team Rocket. The old Team Rocket got destroyed some years ago, but some of the leaders after Giovanni decided to bring back Team Rocket, and created the strongest, Neo Team Rocket.” said the guy with the think glasses.

“Team Rocket again huh? I’ve defeated too many of you guys already, and this time it won’t be different!” said Ash, as Pikachu kept attacking the several Pokemon being sent out by the other grunts.

As Jont and Ash had a talk, Tyson and Lois finally arrived at the tree and saw Ash in trouble. Fearow was still hiding, but decided to go help Ash, and flew to him. Ash jumped on Fearow and broke the mirrors of the helicopter and tried to destroy it, although it didn’t work.

“It’s made of metal little kid… Simple physical attacks won’t do anything… now. Go, Cacturne, Go Drapion!” said Jont.

“Hey that’s no fair game, come out Hitmonchan and Snorunt!” said Tyson angered at all the guys.

“Yes, you too Murkrow, Kadabra, Mienshao and Munchlax!”

Fearow flew down to Tyson and Lois, and they came up with a quick strategy while the other Pokemon fought. Ash would go save his Pokemon, and Tyson and Lois would fight the Neo grunts.

“Ok Hitmonchan, Snorunt, use Blizzard and Thunder Punch!”

“Murkrow, use Dark Pulse, Kadabra use Psychic and Future Sight, Mienshao use Aura Sphere, Munchlax use… uh nevermind, return Munchlax…” said Lois, feeling ashamed of Munchlax.

With these attacks, many of the Pokemon being used by the grunts, like Golbat’s and Umbreon’s were defeated.

“Huh those noobs again huh? This will be interesting…” said Deivid “Houndoom use Inferno and Flamethrower!”

Houndoom used these moves and ended up knocking out Snorunt and Murkrow. Kadabra’s future sight happened after this, and it made a huge hole on the ground and many of the other Pokemon were defeated too. As this battle was going on, Ash and Fearow went up to the helicopter and went in it. Ash got the sack where Pidgeot was stuck in and saved it.

“Pidgeot! Long time no see buddy!!!! How are you??”

“Pidg!! Pidgeott!”

“That’s great! Ok Pidgeot, we gotta defeat those guys out there that stole you, you up for it?”

“Pidgeott!” said Pidgeot ready.

Pidgeot and Fearow and Ash went down to the floor and used a bunch of flying type moves, defeating Jont’s Pokemon, together with the other Pokemon’s moves.

“Humph, let’s go everybody we’ve gotten enough information already!” said Jont, as he jumped in the helicopter and it flew away.

“My glasses got enough information about the flying type’s screeches and we have enough vocal power from them, it’s enough.” said Jont.

“What will we do next?” asked Deivid.

“We shall explore the Mt Moon, I heard about several Clefairy that live there…”

The helicopter flew far away then, and Ash, Tyson, Lois, Pikachu, Pidgeot and Fearow stayed back.

“Ah that was so dangerous. Good we defeated them. Hey Pidgeot, since you and Fearow work well together now, you could come with me again, what do you say?” asked Ash.

“Pidgeott!” said Pidgeot happy for the request.

“Well, Tyson and Lois, I guess this is good bye… So long, good luck on your journeys, I’m going back to Pallet Town now.
Pidgeot, can you fly me there?”

“Pidgeott!”

“So long guys!”

Ash got on Pidgeot and started flying away, but Fearow followed him. Ash realized Fearow wanted to be captured by Ash and let him join his team, making his team stronger.

“Well that’s it… Well Lois, shall we continue?”

“Yeah… wait I’m hungry… DAMNIT ASH HAS THE SANDWICHES! ARGHHH”
[End of chapter 9]

[LadyLady]

I like the chapter, I do, but I think you should work on the Neo Team Rocket guys personality, he seems like one of the most interesting characters and you should start to make him even more interesting, I loved the reference to the first ever episode, it was nice ya know. I was hoping that ash leaving was going to be more dramatic, like Tyson loves him!? But yea, I love team rocket being back, 10 years later going strong!

[TheSirPeras]

Thank you
I will improve their personalities next time they appear thanks for the advice
About Ash's good bye, Im really not that great at creating great sad moments, but one thing I'll tell you, Ash will be back, not sure when though

[TheSirPeras]

I got a spoilerish signature guys, why don't you check it out? It has some future Pokemon Tyson will have

[TheSirPeras]

Hey guys sorry I havent been able to updatte, I was one week away without internet. Tomorrow a new chapter will be up, hopefully