Sorry I didn't reveiw in forever. ^^;;; *iz teh w0rs1 fr!end eva*
But I LOVED how everthing was working out...especially the last bit with Benny. I could just imagine as the guy was talking, the faces on Ash and Brock. XD Priceless as they were.
I love your writing style....but most of all: ZOMFG! You got out another chapter! Yay! *spaz confetti*
But really, awsome job. I so cannot wait for the next chapter. ^^