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    So I figured I'd get to everyone's reviews some time before 2013... :P

    Air Dragon:

    'He doesn't smile enough", hunh? Ooh, someone likey likeys! Wonder why she thinks Dalton likes Whit at all... after that final note, jealous, much?

    So, Dalton and Fox are travelling together. Guess that's kinda legit for the journeyfic genre. Journeys are more fun in company, after all... :P

    I must have forgotten my Grammar Nazi lenses. Either that, or it's been a while because I not only don't feel like correcting errors, but I found none to boot. Up high!

    Well, I think I've been lazy enough... gotta run!
    Does she think Dalton likes Whit, or is she just giving him grief for Whit being so much younger (the would-be game trio are all in the 14-15 range in this story, while Dalton's 17 going on 18 and Fox is a year younger). I'll never tell.

    Let's be honest, though, about Dalton. For obvious reasons, he actually needs traveling companions more than would your average journeyfic protagonist. (Read: He wouldn't last very long trying to travel on his own if he didn't have some help.)


    Emeraldfan:

    To answer your first question: Yes. O.O

    To answer your second question: Not sure. I can tell you this much, though: I won't be running Maverick Heart and this story simultaneously, so as long as this one's getting updates, Maverick Heart's on hiatus. But if I update Maverick Heart, that likely means I've made the decision to put Age of Harmony on hiatus for a while. In all honesty, I've already got this fic, Maverick Heart on hold for the time being, and a Harry Potter fanfiction that I've put a lot of my time and effort into in the last couple of months. For as much as I write, running two fics at once in different locations is ambitious. Three would be a teensy bit much.

    - EM1

    Dalton Gregg was a mostly-ordinary university student from the region once called Johto.
    Then a fateful encounter set him on a quest to change history.




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    ~~~ *** ~~~ *** ~~~
    7. The Unbound

    “Hurry up, Dalton! What’s taking you so long?!”

    A girl’s call echoed slightly into the warm, midday air. The many trees provided some shade from the sun, which had begun to grow hot. A rather wide swath had been cut through them, and it was this area that served as the pathway between Accumula Town and the neighboring Striaton City.

    A rustling nearby prompted the girl to turn in that direction. Her vibrant, orange hair flew out behind her. Meanwhile, from a thicket of knee-high grass and weeds, a tall, spindly young man emerged, hands on his knees, panting desperately.

    “Are you tired already?” the girl asked, bouncing up to him with a backpack smacking against her back. “We’ve barely been traveling for an hour!”

    Dalton’s lips pursed as he gave Fox a dirty look from his slumped-over position.

    “You’re athletic and you don’t get tired. I get it,” he said. “You try walking this or any path in cheap sandals.”

    Fox frowned and folded her arms. “You could be a bit more grateful. I got you those sandals out of my own pocket.”

    Dalton groaned in response. “That’s great… but they weren’t made for heavy traveling.”

    “Well, sorry that I didn’t have a crystal ball to predict that you’d want to just go running off on a Pokémon journey the day after I got you those clothes!” Fox exclaimed huffily, her flaming orange hair flying around her as she tossed her head and whirled around. Sionna the Vulpix, who was standing nearby watching all of this, glanced at Dalton for a moment, and then turned to Fox as she started muttering. “Should have let you parade right into Accumula Town in your birthday suit. That woulda served you right…”

    “Voool?” Sionna mewled inquisitively.

    “No. He’s being an ***,” Fox snapped – a bit childishly, Dalton thought.

    “I’m being an ***? Because I’m tired?” he retorted. He shook his head. “You know what? This was a horrible idea.”

    He started to walk off—

    You stay where you are!

    Dalton stopped dead in his tracks, not so much because of what Fox had said, but because of how she had said it – or rather, how she had screamed it. The noise was so loud that it disturbed a couple of birds (or, as Dalton had to remind himself again, probably bird Pokémon) in the nearby trees. A smattering of black shadows had taken to the air with a cacophony of twittering.

    “Don’t be an idiot,” Fox said. Suddenly she, too, was panting as if she had run a mile. “What if a Pokémon attacks you while you’re worn out?”

    Dalton glanced askance at Fox. “Then I’ll just have Nina fight it off, right?”

    Fox took a couple of deep, weary breaths. To Dalton’s surprise, her face contorted into a smile. “Look at that. You’ve actually learned something. Still, though…”

    She stepped forward. Dalton noticed that she was at the edge of a ridge. He observed her rather nervously. He had seen that same ridge from below on the way up here. It was his height at the very least, and sheer to the point that if one fell or jumped down, they could not come back except by the way he had come – down the path and up the hill through the tall grass.

    “…This seems as good a place to rest as any,” Fox commented. “We’ll stay put here for… let’s say thirty minutes. In fact…”

    She set her bag down on the ground and began to rummage through it. Dalton and Sionna both approached her, peering over her to see what she was doing. Moments later, she produced a bowl and a couple of sandwiches in plastic bags. She handed one to Dalton. It had been mashed slightly by the weight of whatever else was in her bag. Dalton had no idea what kind of meat was on it, either, but he supposed – or at least hoped – it was edible.

    She sat down cross-legged, continuing to fumble with her bag. Next, the rucksack birthed a smaller bag made of plastic, full of pellets of a dark brown color. Dalton raised an eyebrow.

    “What in—”

    “Pokémon food,” Fox answered quickly, opening the bag. It had been Dalton’s second guess, given the context. As for his first – well, that was better left unsaid. Suffice it to say that it wouldn’t have been something anyone in their right mind would have wanted to carry around in a plastic bag. Fox emptied some of the contents of this bag into the small, blue bowl. Her slowness nearly cost her a hand, as Sionna stuck her face into the bowl and began munching away with gusto. Fox grimaced. “Easy, easyhey!!

    Sionna stopped and looked up. Her muzzle was adorably dotted with fragments of her newest meal. “Vool?”

    “Slow down,” Fox said almost scoldingly. “That’s not all for you. Dalton.”

    Dalton, who had become rather distracted staring at a grayish bird creature in a nearby tree, looked at Fox with a start. “Hmm?”

    “Let Nina out of her ball,” Fox suggested. “I’m sure she could use a bite to eat, too. You, uh… you do remember how—”

    “Yeah, I got it,” Dalton interrupted, pulling the small sphere from a clip near the waist of his cargo shorts. Pushing the center button, he caused the ball to expand. “Nina, c’mon out.”

    The ball split open in the middle, spewing forth a flood of white light. This light spilled over to the ground and faded to reveal a bluish creature with large teeth and even larger ears.

    “Ni?” she seemed confused for a moment as she looked around.

    “Vool-vool!!” The intonation in Sionna’s voice was friendly and excited. A smile crossed the Nidoran’s rodentlike face, and she bounded over to join her new companion at the bowl.

    “Looks like those two have become fast friends,” Fox said, smiling at the sight of the two small Pokémon eating together before turning back to Dalton.

    “Yeah…” Dalton murmured noncommittally, still staring into the forested horizon. He shut his eyes tightly, once again trying to make sense of everything that had happened over the last couple of days. Just like the last few times he had tried it, though, he failed miserably.

    “So…” Fox intoned. “Uh… what else is interesting about you? I mean, besides the fact that you think you’re from the future?”

    Dalton sighed. This question was exasperating for a number of reasons, the first of which being rather obvious.

    “I mean…” Dalton murmured. “Interesting? Not much, I guess. I’m left-handed.”

    …And he’d only thought of that because of the fact that his sandwich was now outside the bag and in his left hand, ready for him to eat.

    “Yeah… yeah, I noticed that,” Fox commented. “You’re lucky… back about a thousand years ago, there was a time when being left-handed could get you burned at the stake.”

    Dalton nearly dropped his sandwich in horror. “Wha—why?”

    “Oh… it was thought to be a sign of a witch – or a warlock in your case. Actually,” Fox said with the air of one talking about the weather. “You’d really be screwed. They were suspicious of black-haired people back then, too. Them and… well, gingers.”

    Dalton heard Fox snicker.

    “I’m sure you’ve heard the jokes. ‘Gingers have no souls’ and that kinda crap,” Fox muttered. Smiling ironically, she commented, “People actually believed that at one point. Now, thankfully, it’s just jokes.”

    Dalton frowned. Without looking at her, he asked before he could think, “Did they make fun of you?”

    “All the time,” she sighed. “School was hell.”

    Things went silent again, mainly because Dalton didn’t know how to respond. He couldn’t tell if she was exaggerating or just being candid.

    “Something bothers me about your whole story,” Fox finally said a bit urgently.

    “And what’s that?” Dalton knew Fox didn’t believe him. The fact that she had to remind him of that every couple of hours was starting to tweak his nerves.

    “I mean, you had that little… episode when I found you yesterday,” she murmured, almost as if ashamed to bring it up. Dalton knew what she was referencing. “But, other than that, you don’t seem very bothered by the fact that you’re… according to you… on another continent over a century in the past.”

    “Well…” Dalton uttered, cutting himself short for a moment. “No, I’d be lying if I said I saw this coming… either that, or I’d be a hell of a psychic. But… I guess, after you move away for the third time and have to start all over again… you sorta start to get used to it.”

    Fox frowned. “Military brat?”

    Dalton raised an eyebrow. “Hm?”

    “No, it’s just, my one friend…” she slowed down. “That’s why he moved out to Icirrus City. His dad got reassigned. I bet he moved around a lot. There’s no telling where he is now…”

    “You mean the one that saw—” Dalton started. He had a few words in mind to finish the question. He was sure none of them would have been a good idea. “—saw you?”

    Fox let out a breathy chuckle at Dalton’s attempt to beat around the bush. “That’s a funny way of putting it. Yeah, him.”

    “I mean… but why does he matter so much?” Dalton wondered aloud. “You haven’t seen him in years, right?”

    Fox’s face fell. “Well… he was the last friend my age I had.”

    Dalton remained silent, pondering whose life had been worse up to that point. Was it better to be the one who was always moving, or the one that stayed stable and watched everyone else move on? Granted, most kids hadn’t grown up like either of them. Most kids had friends from their childhood.

    “You weren’t…” Dalton didn’t know how to phrase his next question. “I mean… there weren’t any other girls your age that you hung out with growing up?”

    “Hung out with? Sure,” Fox answered. “A few. But Accumula’s a small town – and none of them have ever been my friends – especially after we became teenagers. They sorta turned into idiots after that.”

    The last part of Fox’s statement was so disdainful, Dalton had to ask. “So you were a loner by choice?”

    “Of course not. I can’t help being different,” she snapped, now sounding very defensive. “So I wanted to talk about something other than boys or clothes – or hair care products. Just what the hell’s wrong with that? My mom was…”

    She trailed off suddenly, and Dalton frowned and lowered his half-eaten sandwich from his mouth as he suddenly realized the reason he’d caught Fox crying herself to sleep the night before.

    “She was the same way,” she said in a quiet, strangled, hollow sort of voice. “She’d always wanted a daughter. She was so happy… then she realized that I wasn’t turning into the traditional ‘girly-girl.’ But my dad didn’t care. I could be myself around my dad.”

    “Is that why you’re looking for him?” Dalton asked a bit quietly. Fox had never said this outright, but Dalton had figured it out. “To bring him back home?”

    “He’s been gone almost three years. It’s too late for us to be a proper family again,” she answered distractedly. Her sandwich gone, she was now tracing circles on the dirt with one finger. “But… I mean… he’s my dad. Of course I’d want to know if he’s still alive. Wouldn’t you look for your parents?”

    Dalton smiled mordantly. “I haven’t seen my parents in seven years. And if I never see ‘em again, it’ll be too soon.”

    Fox frowned. “Seven years? Who took care of you during that time?”

    “Nobody… and everybody,” scoffed Dalton. “I bounced around between foster parents up until I was about fourteen. Then a nice, old lady named Lucille gave me a home. But… she died. Right before – right before I came out here.”

    Even in his own head, “right before I got myself shot and traveled backwards in time” was starting to sound nuts.

    “Your parents just abandoned you?” Fox asked, her voice a completely different type of ginger than her hair.

    Dalton sighed heavily. “Yep. Left me with a family friend and just took off. I guess I sorta… semi-deserved it…”

    “No.”

    Dalton turned his head and looked at Fox. She was staring down at the ground, a hard but somewhat blank look in her blue eyes.

    “No child deserves for their parents to just disappear like that,” she said – firmly in spirit, although her voice shook horribly as if she could break down into tears at any second. “You were, what, ten? There shouldn’t be anything you do at that age that makes you deserve for your parents to just dump you like that. Nothing.”

    She shook her head vehemently.

    Dalton grimaced. “Even getting your eight-year-old sister hauled away by government officials… possibly to torture and death?”

    Fox blinked blankly as she continued staring at the ground.

    “How…?”

    “It’s like I said… the government in my time really doesn’t like Pokémon and humans mingling together,” Dalton said. “I was a big reader when I was a kid… still am. I found a coloring book in one of my library books. I wasn’t big on coloring… my sister was, so I gave it to her. Turns out it was a Pokémon coloring book. When she took it to school, the teacher saw it and turned her in to the Party. The next day, Party security forces took her away to… well, to here. At least that’s what they said. They said they were going to… to re-educate her…”

    Dalton was almost surprised at himself for getting through the entire story without the inevitable lump growing in his throat, but it finally did, and he went silent.

    “Dalton…” Fox whimpered.

    Dalton swallowed hard. “Don’t do that.”

    “Hm?” she asked, still much too tenderly. “Do what?”

    “The pity thing,” Dalton muttered, shaking his head. “I’ve seen it a million times. It’s old. It won’t make anything any better. Maybe if I could have gotten into the Society, I could have found out the truth, maybe even gotten some revenge, but… that probably won’t ever happen now.”

    Fox took a deep, staggering breath. Dalton didn’t dare look. “You could stop it.”

    “Stop it?” he repeated.

    “I mean… based on your theory,” she said, “you’ve come back in time to right before The Age of Harmony started. And since Unova was – becomes – Harmonia’s central region, then maybe it’s possible that the people who started Harmonia are in Unova right now. Maybe you could stop them?”

    “That’s a nice dream,” Dalton murmured. “But unless you know a guy named Ghetsis, there’s no chance in hell of it actually happening.”

    “Ghetsis?” repeated Fox. “Who’s –”

    “He was a regent of Harmonia. Not a king,” Dalton explained. “His son was the first king. But Ghetsis apparently thought his son was an inept ruler, so he had his son and daughter-in-law executed. Left just his infant grandson. Ghetsis ruled Harmonia with an iron fist while the true king was trying to learn how to walk. Sounds like a hell of a guy, right? He and my dad would have gotten along great.”

    “So, why Ghetsis… and not the king?” Fox asked.

    “He’s called ‘Ghetsis the Great’ where I’m from,” the black-haired youth explained. “Most of the anti-Pokémon laws… the ones that made Harmonia what it is – were passed under his regency.”

    Fox frowned. “Makes sense,” she said quietly.

    “Hey, did you say ‘Ghetsis’?”

    The shock of a third person joining the conversation startled Dalton to his feet. He whirled around. The speaker was a young boy, maybe in his preteen years. His outfit was rather normal for a kid his age. His sleeveless shirt and cap were a matching, loud orange. Black shorts covered his legs down to his knobbly knees, one of which appeared to bear a small bandage.

    Dalton frowned. “You shouldn’t butt into people’s conversations, kid.”

    “If you don’t want people to hear, you shouldn’t talk so loud,” said the boy almost snootily. “I was just walking by and heard you talking. I thought I heard you say ‘Ghetsis’, and I’ve seen a guy named ‘Ghetsis’. But since I’m ‘butting in’, I guess I’ll just leave.”

    He gave a short shrug and started to walk away, heading toward the path Dalton and Fox had taken to reach the top of the small hill.

    Dalton groaned to himself, wondering if he was going to regret his next action.

    “Hey, kid – wait a sec!”

    The boy stopped and slowly turned around toward Dalton.

    “What’s up?” he asked casually.

    “You said you’ve seen Ghetsis?” Dalton asked.

    The young boy’s face contorted in uncertainty. “I think the guy called himself Ghetsis. He was in Accumula Town just yester…wait a sec – Talia? What are you doing here?”

    Dalton did a full three-sixty, wondering what the kid meant. Fox, who had been sitting and observing the conversation, had stood up and come to Dalton’s side.

    “I could ask you the same question, Jimmy,” she answered.

    “What’s it look like I’m doing?” Jimmy, having seen an acquaintance, seemed to grow brattier by the second. “I’m up here training my Patrat. Or I was, until this brown-haired girl showed up. I tried to challenge her to a battle, and I got my *** kicked.”

    “Wow, Jimmy. You always talk like that outta your mom’s earshot?” the ginger-haired girl asked flatly.

    “Mind your business,” Jimmy snapped, fumbling with his cap and taking it off, exposing his wild, dark hat hair for a second before the cap went back on his head. “What about you? I thought your mom wouldn’t let you leave town, and now you’re out here – with your boyfriend? She’s gonna freak.”

    “First off, Dalton’s not my boyfriend,” she shot back, her ears turning pink. “Second, I don’t really care anymore. I can go wherever I want.”

    “Okay, wait, back up…” Dalton said calmly. He had ended up standing roughly between them, watching this exchange, which had left him with far more questions than answers. He turned to the boy. “Okay, so your name is Jimmy and you say you saw a guy named Ghetsis.”

    “Yep,” Jimmy said. Dalton rounded on ‘Fox’.

    “And your name isn’t really Fox, it’s Talia,” he stated. The ginger-haired girl, with an almost remorseful sigh, gave a nod. “Okay… how do you two even know each other?”

    “We’re from the same hometown, idiot,” Jimmy scoffed. “She used to go to school with my sister.”

    “Like I’m supposed to know everyone’s family histories,” Dalton snarked, finally losing his patience. “I’m not even from here.”

    Jimmy raised his eyebrows in a “that’s not my problem” facial expression.

    “Where are you from, then?” Jimmy asked. “And how do you know Talia if you’re not from Accumula?”

    “You wouldn’t believe me if I told you – okay, now back to Ghetsis,” Dalton said, all in one breath. Talia gave him a bewildered look for a moment. “What do you know about Ghetsis?”

    “I don’t feel like telling you,” Jimmy said, folding his arms.

    Dalton frowned. “Fine, then. Be that way.”

    A scampering sound of fast footfalls followed, and the rodent-like Nidoran was at her trainer’s ankle.

    “What’s that?” Jimmy asked.

    “It’s a Pokémon,” Dalton said flatly. He tried very hard not to be annoyed – after all, he’d been asking the same question the day before – but this little boy’s snotty rudeness was making it very difficult. Jimmy’s eyebrows furrowed and met in the center of his forehead.

    “Are you challenging me to a battle?” he shouted.

    “That’s exactly what I’m doing,” Dalton blurted out before thinking. Talia could tell this was spur of the moment, too.

    “What?” she uttered quickly, turning her head to look at Dalton, whose desperate brain was firing off ideas faster than he could filter them with any sort of reason.

    “And here’s the deal,” Dalton added breathlessly, as Jimmy backpedaled a couple of steps and removed a Pokéball from his belt. “If I win, you tell me everything you know about Ghetsis.”

    “And if I win?” Jimmy said, sounding maddeningly sure of himself. Dalton hesitated for a moment. He hadn’t thought of that. “How about… my info against your cash?”

    “What? Hell, no. Dalton’s not gonna go for that!” Talia exclaimed indignantly. After a few seconds of Dalton being silent, her face fell. “…Are you?”

    “How much do we have?” he finally asked deliberately.

    “About five hundred,” Talia asked, looking a bit panicked. “But that’s beside the p—”

    “Okay. Five hundred silvernotes to you if you win,” Dalton asked. Both Talia and Jimmy froze.

    “What the hell is a silvernote?” he asked slowly. “If you mean Pokémon dollar…”

    “What’s a –” Dalton stopped himself. He should have known. Pokémon dollars must have been the currency in this time of Unova. “Yeah. Five hundred Pokémon dollars.”

    “Dalton, are you nuts? That’s all the money we have left!” cried Talia. “Not to mention you’ve nev—”

    “Dude, that’s, like, more than a month’s allowance!” Jimmy’s eyes brightened with greed, as if Christmas had come early. “You’ve got yourself a deal!”

    “Thought you’d see things my way,” Dalton replied. Nina bounded up in front of him, apparently aware that a battle was about to start. Her red eyes were gleaming with unmistakable excitement. She’d been on edge the entire time they’d been walking. They’d happened upon a wild Pokémon once or twice, but Talia had always (much to Nina’s chagrin) advised them to run away, or handled it herself with Sionna. However, Dalton had been watching very intently and in doing so had picked up a few of the theories of Pokémon battling. As regret at his own rashness began to set in, he hoped that it would be enough. Otherwise, not only would he not get the information he wanted… but he and Talia would be broke.

    “C’mon out, Patrat!” Jimmy yelled, throwing his Pokéball in the air with all the strength his skinny arms could muster, which wasn’t much. Dalton watched it travel in a somewhat weak arc before bouncing against the hard dirt and exploding. The white light it spilled onto the ground formed into a creature almost more rodent-like than Nina. Two huge teeth protruded from its mouth as well. This creature, though, was brown, with striped eyes that looked almost hypnotic if one stared into them too long. Fortunately for Dalton, this was the same species of Pokémon he’d seen Talia and Sionna battle less than an hour before.

    At least I’m not going in completely blind, he thought to himself.

    “Pat…rat!” the opposing creature squeaked menacingly at Nina, who looked thoroughly unimpressed.

    “Patrat, use Tackle!” cried Jimmy. The brown rodent creature, who had been standing bipedally, went to all fours as it galloped toward Nina’s position, head lowered in a single-minded charge toward its target.

    Dalton had figured out, among other things, that certain words activated a Pokémon’s battle capabilities – almost like keys to a lock. He tried to remember some of the ones Talia had used for Sionna…

    “Amber…ember? Nina! Ember!!” he shouted.

    Nina just looked at him quizzically.

    “Ohhh, my g–” muttered Talia, burying her forehead into her palm for a moment. “Dalton, Nina doesn’t know Ember!”

    What little emotion was on Dalton’s face quickly melted off it. He swore flatly to himself. “Nina, move! Dodge! Get outta there!!”

    He grimaced for a second, hoping against all hope that Nina had at least understood the urgency in his voice, if not the words. Patrat left its feet and launched itself through the air at the Nidoran, who seemed to take forever to move from Dalton’s point of view. The muscles in her short, stubby legs uncoiled themselves in an instant as she leapt off to the side, barely avoiding Patrat. A flicker in the latter’s eyes registered the lack of impact, just a moment before the Patrat went for a painful-looking, shoulder-first crash landing into the dirt. It rolled over onto its belly and then staggered to its feet, staring at Nina mutinously.

    “Tackle it—!” Dalton yelled, not sounding as certain. Nina shook her head, moments before Patrat came flying in for a second time. This time, the brown beast hit its mark, throwing its full body weight into Nina.

    “Niiii!” the Nidoran screeched as the power of the attack drove her backward.

    “NINA!” Dalton yelled in a panic. He looked down, and heard another nasty sound of impact – no doubt Patrat had hit her again. His eyes found a couple of welts on his lower leg. He remembered vaguely what had happened the night before…

    “Patrat!” Jimmy exclaimed, his childish confidence growing with each passing second. “Use—”

    “Nina, retreat! Come back!!” Dalton interrupted him. He didn’t know exactly what Patrat had tried to do next, only that it didn’t work; the chipmunk-like Pokémon had leapt and tried to pin Nina down under itself. Nina, though, had escaped, scampering over to a spot a couple of feet in front of Dalton before turning on a dime to face their opponents.

    “Stop running away!” Jimmy snapped. “Patrat, Tackle!!”

    “Nina, use your claws!” Dalton shouted. “Scratch it with your claws!”

    Dalton figured he must have said something right, because Nina immediately darted forward. Patrat charged ahead, but missed horribly as Nina leapt straight up, raking her sharp claws across its back as it passed underneath her. Patrat let out a grating screech of pain as it landed on its face right in front of Dalton. Nina, meanwhile, landed gracefully on her feet and whirled around to face it.

    “Nii-nii!” she sang cutely, obviously taunting Patrat. The brown Pokémon snarled horribly as it sprang to its feet and charged without orders.

    “No, Patrat, no!” Jimmy yelled warningly – but his beastly companion, blinded by rage and frustration, was also deaf to his cries. Dalton froze. Patrat was advancing too fast. Nina wouldn’t have time to dodge again…

    She seemed to crumple as Patrat reached her, teetering onto her back.

    Then a violent sound of impact rang through the forest, frightening the few local bird Pokémon from their treetop nests. Patrat let out a clipped squeak as it went flying through the air. It slammed into the ground in front of Jimmy, bouncing as limply as a ragdoll, before hitting the dirt again and going completely motionless.

    Nina rolled to her feet again, facing Patrat to observe her handiwork.

    The other rodent-like creature was staggering to its feet. From this distance, Dalton could barely make out a marking on its belly that had not been there before. It looked vaguely like a pair of footprints…

    Patrat slumped forward, sinking to the ground in a dead faint.

    A convenient breeze punctuated the silence that followed. Talia’s red hair blew out to the side of her like a shroud as she looked on in shock.

    Patrat!” Jimmy cried loudly, sinking to his knees in front of the creature. He rolled the chipmunk-like monster onto its back, looked down at it for a moment, and then swore – loudly and with ear-tingling intensity. He jumped up to his feet, holding his knocked-out companion. “This isn’t fair! Everyone’s got all these rare Pokémon I’ve never seen before! How am I supposed to win a battle like this?”

    Dalton didn’t have time to feel any sympathy for Jimmy. There was business to be handled.

    “What about our deal?” he asked.

    Jimmy looked down tearfully at his Patrat and appeared to have half a mind to go back on his word. Nevertheless, he looked up, tried to keep his upper lip as stiff as possible, and began.

    “Yeah, I saw a guy named Ghetsis in Accumula yesterday,” he said. “He was a whole new kinda weird, too. He had this weird eyepatch… and a robe or something. Looked like some sorta supervillain out of a video game.”

    “Hmm. Yeah, how about that?” Dalton muttered. The Harmonian royal family didn’t appear in person often (and never in an outlying region like Johto) but when they did, their outfits were always extremely gaudy and elaborate.

    “He had a bunch of people with him. All dressed up as… I dunno what they were supposed to be. Knights or something?” Jimmy murmured. “They were carrying a flag that had a huge ‘P’ on it. Or something that looked like a ‘P’, anyways…”

    “That’s Harmonia’s flag…” Dalton whispered to himself. Talia looked at him.

    “So this Ghetsis guy introduced himself and started talking,” Jimmy answered. “It was the craziest thing I’d ever heard. He said that Pokémon were suffering because of us humans… and that we should all release our Pokémon back into the wild.”

    “You didn’t, right?” asked Talia.

    “Of course not!” Jimmy responded rather defensively. “Patrat and me are friends.”

    “You mean, ‘Patrat and I’, right?” Dalton, unable to help himself, asked.

    “You know what I meant!” snapped Jimmy. “Why should we just do what some random, creepy old geezer says, anyway? What makes him think he can just come into our town giving orders? I wish I’d chucked that rock at his head. That woulda shut him up…”

    Dalton didn’t know whether to admire the boy’s cheek or be slightly alarmed at his penchant for violence.

    “Do you know where he went after that?” he asked the younger boy.

    “No idea,” Jimmy replied. “But there’s only two places they could’ve gone, right? Either this way or back toward Nuvema Town.”

    There was a long, encroaching silence. Apparently, Jimmy had run out of things to say. He held out Patrat’s Pokéball toward the fallen creature, which was absorbed into a stream of red light and then back into the ball. He looked up at Dalton and Talia, his expression a bit grouchy.

    “Can I go now?” he asked with reluctant deference.

    “Yeah, sure,” Talia answered. “But listen… if you run across my mom, you never saw me. Got it?”

    Jimmy grimaced. Dalton couldn’t tell if Jimmy was acknowledging or ignoring her. The young boy trudged to the edge of the ridge that Dalton and Talia had been using as a picnic area, peered over it for a moment, then leapt. Dalton’s jaw dropped. He let out a clipped “Hey—”

    “He’s fine,” Talia murmured, almost dismissively. “You can jump down those… you just can’t come back up.”

    Dalton, who had nothing to add to this, simply uttered, “…Oh.”

    They stood there in silence for several somewhat awkward moments. Then Dalton whirled around, frowning. Talia’s face tensed, almost as if she knew what he was about to say before he’d started talking.

    “‘Fox’, huh?” he uttered.

    Apparently, she already had a rebuttal cocked and loaded as well. “Well… if you saw me in the forest naked and babbling nonsense, would you give me your real – never mind. Don’t answer that question.”

    For she had seen a flaw in her analogy about midway through the sentence. Dalton felt a slight temptation to smirk, but couldn’t go through with it. A very Evan-like joke had crossed his mind in that moment, but it only served to remind him of what he’d left behind. Instead, he swallowed hard. “Talia is your real name, right?”

    “Talia Renard,” she answered. Then, dispassionately, she added, “But, legally, it’s Talia Ellsburen. My mom had it changed. Ellsburen’s my mom’s maiden name, and after my dad disappeared…”

    “Oh, wow. At least she wasn’t bitter at all,” Dalton snarked.

    “I’m still Talia Renard as far as I’m concerned,” she answered. “And, once I turn seventeen in a few weeks, I’ll be able to change it back. I don’t know what the hell she thought the point of that was…”

    “So seventeen’s the age of majority here?” Dalton asked. Talia gave him a quizzical look.

    “Majority?”

    “I mean – when you legally become an adult,” Dalton explained, a bit surprised that Talia didn’t understand.

    “Oh. That majority. Yeah,” she answered.

    “It’s sixteen where I come from,” he murmured. “Then again, you also have to start school the fall after you turn four, so…”

    “Wish it was sixteen around here,” Talia sighed. “I’d have been gone almost a year ago.”

    “You don’t get along with your mom much?” asked Dalton casually. At this, Talia drew in a long breath and let it out just as slowly. She shook her head repeatedly, as if trying to ward something from her mind.

    “…You wouldn’t get it.”

    Dalton frowned. “You’d be surprised.”

    There was a long silence after Dalton made this statement – during which Dalton decided that he would move the conversation away from their family troubles. Talia, though, beat him to it:

    “You know… that was really stupid,” she said, drawing each word out and savoring the sentence as if she’d been waiting several minutes to say it.

    “Probably,” admitted Dalton flatly. “But I won, didn’t I?”

    “Yeah…” conceded Talia with a sigh. “Better lucky than good, I guess.”

    “I’m ‘lucky’?” The young man’s eyebrows climbed up toward the top of his forehead as he gave a short scoff. “Could’ve fooled me.”

    Dalton observed their picnicking spot… if it could truly be called that. It was more like they had just sat down near the edge of the ridge and started munching away at their sandwiches. He and Talia began to clean up what needed to be cleaned. Nina walked over to the bowl she’d been sharing with Sionna to find it empty. Sionna gave Nina a guilty, sheepish grin, her muzzle coated with crumbs.

    “So…” Talia uttered as they began to set off again, both Pokémon now in tow, “are you serious about this? This Pokémon training thing? I mean…”

    “What do you mean?” asked Dalton, a bit more irritably than he’d intended. His feet felt like Hell itself atop sandals that were never made for long treks between cities.

    “I just… it’s weird,” Talia remarked. She was walking astride Dalton and looking at him out of the corner of her eyes. “Usually, when someone wants to be a trainer, they dream about it for years and years…”

    “Yeah, well… usually, people don’t just drop in from a different century,” deadpanned Dalton. Talia responded to this comment with a loud huff.

    “I wish you’d stop saying that.”

    “What am I supposed to do?” questioned Dalton grumpily, his hands now in the pockets of his too-large cargo shorts. “It’s what happened.”

    “Is that what you’re gonna tell everyone who asks?” she replied, sounding a bit exasperated now. “…They’re gonna look at you like you’re some sort of freak.”

    “That’s nothing new. A lot of people have done that to me,” answered Dalton. “Hell… you’re doing it right now.”

    “I… that’s beside the point,” Talia breathed, sounding flustered. “Why did you just decide so suddenly that you wanted to be a Pokémon trainer?”

    It was a good question – one that caused Dalton to pause. He stopped walking and gazed into the bluish horizon far ahead on the path, set like a tunnel between walls of trees and foliage. He contemplated for a moment, and then he at last answered:

    “I want to know if they were telling the truth.”

    ‘They’, meaning…” Talia murmured uncertainly.

    “The Party – or… Ghetsis. I’m not even sure if it’s the same Ghetsis, but they sure have the same message,” explained Dalton. “‘Liberation.’ ‘Pokémon and humans are better off separated from each other.’”

    “They’re not!” cried Talia. She had her fists clenched and looked to be at the very apex of frustration. “Pokémon and humans are meant to live together in harmony!”

    “Who told you that?” asked Dalton simply.

    Talia dropped her head. “My… my dad.”

    “How do you know he was right?” asked Dalton. Talia’s head snapped up.

    “Of course he was right,” was her impatient reply. “How do you know he wasn’t?”

    “That’s what I want to find out,” Dalton answered seriously.

    “And what will you do when—if…” Talia asked. “…if you realize that everything you’ve been told was wrong?”

    This was an easy one. It had been one of the several thoughts consuming Dalton’s mind since he had realized what had happened to him.

    “I’d find a way to put a stop to it.”

    END

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    Dalton figured he must have said something right, because Nina immediately darted forward. Patrat charged ahead, but missed horribly as Nina leapt straight up, raking her sharp claws across its back as it passed underneath her. Patrat let out a grating screech of pain as it landed on its face right in front of Dalton. Nina, meanwhile, landed gracefully on her feet and whirled around to face it.

    “Nii-nii!” she sang cutely, obviously taunting Patrat. The brown Pokémon snarled horribly as it sprang to its feet and charged without orders.
    Nina, Nina, Nina... :P (Cookies if you get it...)

    “Patrat!” Jimmy cried loudly, sinking to his knees in front of the creature. He rolled the chipmunk-like monster onto its back, looked down at it for a moment, and then swore – loudly and with ear-tingling intensity. He jumped up to his feet, holding his knocked-out companion. “This isn’t fair! Everyone’s got all these rare Pokémon I’ve never seen before! How am I supposed to win a battle like this?”
    LOL, You mad, son? XD

    So the truth is out, and Talia/Fox just made the jollies for the week:

    Apparently, she already had a rebuttal cocked and loaded as well. “Well… if you saw me in the forest naked and babbling nonsense, would you give me your real – never mind. Don’t answer that question.”

    For she had seen a flaw in her analogy about midway through the sentence. Dalton felt a slight temptation to smirk, but couldn’t go through with it. A very Evan-like joke had crossed his mind in that moment, but it only served to remind him of what he’d left behind. Instead, he swallowed hard. “Talia is your real name, right?”
    Boys will be boys...

    So now, Dalton's gotten a lead on Ghetsis and is on his trail. As much as he trounced Jimmy, Talia/Fox is right. He does need to get his act together and soon. Luck can only take him so far...

    Definitely a good place to call a break. Now to see what comes next...

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    Dang, missed a review. I didn't think you'd have a new chapter up this soon!

    The promise of making the world of Pokémon look fresh and magical is really being fulfilled, and there's several examples I'd bring up of it being used exceptionally. One would be the ledges and jumping off of them, but not being able to climb back up - I thought that was brilliant. Introducing a seemingly inane mechanic from the games and having it make sense brings a smile to my face. And you're doing it in a trainer fic, no less. The other thing was the pragmatic battling - Dalton has to notice things like Nina's claws and infer she can scratch, instead of using Scratch. Those were the best examples I can remember right now.

    Wow, Dalton's kind of a hothead. I was almost thinking that you'd go and make him lose the battle and the money, so he has to earn it back. More info on Fox! Or, well, Talia. The fact that she adopted a cool nickname is a nice touch, and shows how she's able to make use of the fact that she's basically a runaway now.

    Uh, I think that was about it for now. In case you don't show up before 2013 comes knocking, Happy New Year! I look forward to reading more of this story, and hopefully even Maverick Heart. Oh, just one more thing.

    “Of course not!” Jimmy responded rather defensively. “Patrat and me are friends.”

    “You mean, ‘Patrat and I’, right?” Dalton, unable to help himself, asked.
    Characterization and writing 101. Kids, take notes.

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    Default I'm baaaaaack....

    Reports of my death have been greatly exaggerated. Well... if there were any reports to begin with. You're probably laughing, but I've seen things...

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    Nina, Nina, Nina... :P (Cookies if you get it...)
    Nope. Didn't get it. No cookies for me.


    LOL, You mad, son? XD
    Yep. Yep, I think he mad, son.

    In all honesty, though, the life of a NPC Pokemon Trainer in the games has gotta suck.


    Boys will be boys...

    So now, Dalton's gotten a lead on Ghetsis and is on his trail. As much as he trounced Jimmy, Talia/Fox is right. He does need to get his act together and soon. Luck can only take him so far...

    Definitely a good place to call a break. Now to see what comes next...

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    Dalton may be socially awkward and borderline neurotic, but he's still a 17-year-old guy, after all. Just because he doesn't make a habit of telling dirty jokes doesn't mean that they all go over his head. And Dalton didn't so much trounce Jimmy as that Nina's battling instincts kicked in - quite literally. He's gonna have to get his act together, and fast.



    zen_master_dude:

    Dang, missed a review. I didn't think you'd have a new chapter up this soon!
    Was this fast? I'm usually good for a chapter every 2-4 weeks. Oh well.


    The promise of making the world of Pokémon look fresh and magical is really being fulfilled, and there's several examples I'd bring up of it being used exceptionally. One would be the ledges and jumping off of them, but not being able to climb back up - I thought that was brilliant. Introducing a seemingly inane mechanic from the games and having it make sense brings a smile to my face. And you're doing it in a trainer fic, no less. The other thing was the pragmatic battling - Dalton has to notice things like Nina's claws and infer she can scratch, instead of using Scratch. Those were the best examples I can remember right now.
    I'm glad you're enjoying the setting. Even almost 9 years into fic writing, it's something I'm still trying to fine-tune. When to give readers the full description monty and when to back off the throttle a little bit and allow their own imaginations to work. If you've read any of my earlier work, you'll know that I fell toward the former end of the scale, and it made my chapters LOOOOOOOOOONG. Say, anywhere from 25 to 70+ pages. Yes, 70+ pages. I actually wrote a chapter that was 70+ pages. Took up a full 4 posts on this forum. Granted, it was a series finale featuring a full 6-on-6 battle, but that's just ridiculous on every level.

    And Dalton's battling by instinct/inference? Well, the limits are pretty obvious to that, aren't they? (Read: Most of what a Pokemon can do isn't indicated in their physical attributes.) He'll have to shape up and battle the orthodox way sooner or later. But keep in mind the fact that he wasn't originally 'trained' in the "orthodox" way... it may enable him to think outside the box later. :-)


    Wow, Dalton's kind of a hothead. I was almost thinking that you'd go and make him lose the battle and the money, so he has to earn it back. More info on Fox! Or, well, Talia. The fact that she adopted a cool nickname is a nice touch, and shows how she's able to make use of the fact that she's basically a runaway now.

    Uh, I think that was about it for now. In case you don't show up before 2013 comes knocking, Happy New Year! I look forward to reading more of this story, and hopefully even Maverick Heart.
    Talia's actually got a decision to make. Her father's particularly well known, so his name - a name that he passed on to her - may carry weight in some circles. For her, I think it'll depend on the situation. It's also, as Talia alluded to, a question of trust.

    And as for Dalton losing and earning the money back... c'mon, I had to throw him a bone at some point, right? Seeing as the last several chapters have largely consisted of the cosmos taking an enormous steaming crap all over his existence. I can be cruel, but I'm not that cruel. Heh.


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    8. Chili con Carnage
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    Dalton shut his eyes tightly, face screwed up against the assault of bright, golden light. The change in sky color was obviously a sunset, Dalton thought, as he and Talia had been walking for what must have been several hours. The canopy of trees was not nearly as thick in this area, and he could see this orange light in the distance.

    “We shouldn’t be too far from the edge of the forest now,” commented the girl in front of him. He could barely see Talia with all the light flooding in through the trees. “And don’t even think about asking for a break. We need to get to Striaton City – or at least out of this forest – by nightfall. If we don’t… well, I don’t know, and I’m not sure I want to find out.

    He became suddenly aware of the danger as the words left her lips. That would seem like the type of thing. As a rule of thumb, nighttime anywhere was a bit less safe than daytime in that same place. In a forest like this, though, they would likely be walking in pitch darkness, or close to it. A particular tree on the wayside caught Dalton’s attention. He could have sworn he’d saw two glimmering, blinking… something. Maybe (he thought as a chill went through his body) they were eyes. He also became more aware of the symphony of buzzes, trills, and distant cries that had accompanied him through his entire trek thus far. They no longer amounted to a strangely beautiful soundtrack, as they had before. In fact, Dalton was starting to think that the sounds were kind of creepy.

    The hairs on the back of his neck were standing up – then again, that might have been because an evening breeze was blowing right through the little clothing he had. He glanced ahead. He was now extremely thankful Talia had found him when she did. It wasn’t quite cold, but spending last night outside in the buff might have been more than his body could have handled.

    “You okay back there?” Talia was looking over her shoulder at him. “You seem a little bit quiet.”

    Dalton didn’t respond. He was just that way in most cases… quiet.

    “It’s all still a little bit much for you, isn’t it?” she asked seriously, turning around and frowning as she looked upon Dalton as if he was something to be pitied. Dalton averted his gaze. He hated pity. “C’mon… say something. I mean, you haven’t said anything almost all afternoon. What are you thinking? What’s going through that head of yours?”

    “… … …”

    Dalton had to shade his eyes further as they at last emerged from the forest. Talia was still a few steps in front of him at what looked like the top of a hill, but she had stopped. Dalton felt the setting sun beating against the left side of his face. He blinked furiously as his eyes tried to adjust to the new light level.

    Talia, meanwhile, was shielding her eyes and looking forward. A smile broke out across her face.

    “Hello, Striaton,” she said. “Long time no see.”

    Dalton approached the top of the hill and squinted forward. Large, blue mountains occupied the horizon, and in their shadow, buildings of various shapes sizes and colors were nestled into sprouting trees. In this place, it was almost as if nature and the advance of man had ceased to war and had agreed to a truce instead. Most of these many-floored structures sprouted from the ground like the trees, almost as if trying to blend in with the forest scenery. Dalton wondered how large the expanse of town was, but it was clearly somewhat bigger than Accumula.

    “You’ve been here before?” Dalton finally asked her.

    “Once or twice,” she answered. “Last time was four years ago. Dad had to pick up some papers from a friend of his. It was the middle of summer, so he let me tag along.”

    Dalton felt a pang of jealousy as Talia spoke so fondly of her father; he wished he’d had parents like that. He couldn’t remember his father, Floyd, being a particularly cheerful man even when the family had been relatively stable. Then again, Kallen had always been their father’s favorite. Dalton supposed his father had been proud of him at one point – he had always been a good student. What little relationship they had, though, was completely severed when Kallen was taken away.

    Dalton coped with his family issues the same way he coped with everything else. Keep moving and it’ll all just end up behind you. That’s what he told himself. That’s why he could never stop. Ever since Lucy had died, he’d felt all the pain of his last seven years of existence gaining on him again, as if the latest tragedy had somehow given his scars a second wind in their lifelong pursuit of his spirit.

    But he refused to be crushed. He refused to let himself feel too much of the pain. A bit, yes; after all, to completely deny pain was to deny reality. But he determined to leave his past behind him. He never did learn the art of painting a smile upon his face, like some people; but he’d learned to fake not crying – and that was good enough for him.

    “You’re still serious about the Pokémon trainer thing?” Talia’s voice broke him – probably fortunately – out of his daydream. He had traveled some distance without his brain having noticed. His feet, in contrast, noticed a lot; they took his reawakening to his situation as a cue to begin pulsing with pain again. Dalton’s slate gray eyes did a quick inventory of his surroundings. These buildings were all several stories high, for the most part. They had looked like toy models from up on the ridge at the forest’s edge; but Dalton knew better than that. “Dalton?

    “Hm-what?” he muttered, looking at Talia as if he’d just noticed her standing next to him.

    Earth to Dalton.” She tilted her head. “Come in. I was asking, are you still serious about being a Pokémon trainer?”

    “Wh-what? Yeah, of course I am,” he replied, wishing it hadn’t sounded quite so defensive. She grimaced, almost as if she didn’t want to respond for a second.

    “Well…” she murmured. “I thought you’d probably want to know… there’s a Gym here in town.”

    About two or three conversations came flooding back to Dalton’s memory at once.

    “Gym… like, the place where you win the badges?” he asked.

    “Yup. That’s the one,” Talia replied.

    “Where is it?” he asked quickly.

    Talia frowned. “Dalton –”

    “Where’s the Gym?” he repeated, this time more urgently. “Do you know?”

    “Dalton,” Talia repeated, more urgently as well. “I don’t think you should…”

    Dalton had run out of patience. “Hey!”

    He’d shouted at a young passerby – a teenager by the looks of her. Brunette and mini-skirted, she had jumped horribly at the yell and done a full three-sixty around her to find its source. By the time she’d turned her head around again, she was looking straight at Dalton. She gasped and jumped backward.

    “Sorry, sorry…” he muttered. “Hey, listen – do you know where the Striaton Gym is?”

    Her voice came out as something of a high-pitched squeak. Whether that was normal or because Dalton had frightened her, he didn’t know. She also looked quite flustered, as if Dalton had distracted her from something. “The Gym? I… uh… sorry. I’m not even from here. I’m here from Nacrene visiting my cousin. We came out to shop and now I can’t find her. Ohh… Charlene!

    And she walked away from him, screaming through the streets and leaving him standing there awkwardly.

    “Boy, you sure have a way with women,” Talia chimed in after a couple of seconds – tauntingly, Dalton thought.

    “Yeah, well maybe you could be a little bit more helpful,” he snapped.

    “I am being helpful,” she retorted. “There’s no point in you going to the Gym today.”

    “Why not?” asked Dalton, a bit irritated.

    “Well…” Talia hesitated. “Well, first off, the Gym closes at sundown. It’s pretty much dusk already. Second, you’d have to be an idiot to try to take on the Gym right now.”

    “Really? Why’s that?”

    “Because – well, we’ve been traveling all day,” reasoned Talia. “Even strong Pokémon need to rest before they take on a Gym. Weren’t you talking about how tired you were?”

    Dalton eyed Talia for a moment. He couldn’t help thinking that Talia wasn’t being completely truthful about why she didn’t think it was a good idea for him to challenge the Gym that evening. What was true, however, was that they had been traveling for most of the day. What was also true (although she hadn’t mentioned it) was that his feet were throbbing, and that his legs were probably going to collapse underneath him if he had to do much more walking.

    “I guess you’re right,” he finally said.

    “So where do you think we should go to rest?” she asked, sort of as if she already knew the answer to her own question.

    “I dunno,” Dalton muttered – but he had an idea. “Is there a Pokémon Center somewhere in town?”

    Her face broke out into a smile. “Look at that. You really do pick up quick.”

    They started walking again. After a bit, Dalton caught sight of a somewhat large, rustic-looking building that appeared to be some sort of restaurant. “Café Striaton” was its name, as the script lettering over its door revealed. For some reason, though, it had a sign out to its front. The sign was probably about waist-height from the ground, with a drawing of a broken circle that Dalton, after a couple of seconds’ examination, recognized as a Pokéball. Before he had the chance to ask what that meant, however, they had already passed it, and Dalton had caught sight of a quite large building in the distance. He had only seen it once before, but the distinctive red coloring and the wall of windows at its front served as a clear giveaway.

    Dalton walked past Talia and started toward the doors. She froze in mild surprise for a split second, which was lucky; right as Dalton darted for the doors, someone else darted out and smacked right into him going full-bore.

    “Oof!” Dalton grunted as the figure hit his chest and sent him staggering. He looked down. The runner had fallen right onto her behind. Her eyes were shut tight in an expression of pain. At least, Dalton was pretty sure it was a girl. She was, after all, wearing a very long, green dress…

    Long green dress? She also had golden blonde hair. She looked up at him. Her eyes already seemed to be naturally large, but they widened even further upon seeing him. It was an unmistakable look of recognition.

    …Which would make sense, thought Dalton. They’d seen each other before.

    “Wha?” The blonde girl scrambled to her feet. “It’s you! The homeless guy from Accumula! What are you doing here?”

    “Homeless?” piped in Talia. The blonde girl’s eyes shifted to those of the redhead. The former’s face went a bit pink.

    “I meant – er…” She sounded flustered. Her face fell. “Never mind. Oh, I’m late again… Cher’s gonna be so mad at me…”

    And, for the second time that evening, Dalton and Talia watched a teenage girl run off with an unknown objective.

    “Who was that?” Talia asked as they walked inside. Dalton looked around. This Pokémon Center was quite a bit larger than the one in Accumula Town.

    Dalton racked his brains. He should have been able to remember – he’d just seen her in Accumula the day before. He shook his head. “Dammit. Started with a ‘B’.”

    “But you have seen her before, right?” she asked.

    “Yeah – back in Accumula Town. She’s friends with that Whitlea girl. I think she was in the room next door to ours at the Pokémon Center, too,” Dalton said.

    “What’s with her calling you ‘homeless’?” she asked. Dalton rolled his eyes and let out a growl-like utterance of frustration.

    “They all found me on that park bench and…” Dalton shook his head. “It’s not important.”

    Talia’s lips were drawn in a strange way. It looked like she was trying very hard not to smile. “So now they all think you’re a hobo.”

    Dalton frowned. “Technically… they’re not wrong,” he reasoned. “I don’t have a home. Not here, anyway.”

    As they approached the desk where the Pokémon nurse had been at the last Pokémon Center, Dalton scoffed to himself.

    “McCourt said ‘adventure’… I bet he didn’t have a damn clue this was gonna happen…”

    “Hmm?” Talia uttered questioningly.

    “Nothing,” replied Dalton, just as they reached the semicircular desk. Dalton pulled up short; a pink-haired nurse was there to greet them with a warm smile.

    “What are you doing here?” he uttered without thinking. In doing so, he managed to get the pale-faced young woman to stop smiling. Her expression was more confused than upset.

    “…I work here,” she said slowly, as though determined not to rush for fear that her listener might not get the whole message.

    “But we just saw you in Accumula Town,” Dalton reasoned. She shook her head, the smile returning to her face.

    “You’re not the first person that’s made that mistake,” she said. “A lot of people say my second cousin and I look just alike.”

    “Second cousin?” Dalton repeated, his jaw slightly unhinged. “You look like identical twins. How can – you know what? Never mind. So you’re the nurse here, Miss –”

    “Call me Joy,” she said with a nod.

    “What?” replied Dalton flatly, looking at Talia.

    “I don’t know, either,” she said. She approached the desk herself. Dalton promptly backed away, figuring he’d done enough damage. “We – that is to say, Dalton and I – both have Pokémon that we’d like to have looked at. Do you think you can help us?”

    “I hope so,” she said seriously. “Are you traveling here from somewhere?”

    “Accumula Town,” Talia replied.

    “Accumula Town, that’s right,” Nurse Joy said hastily. “For the League, I’m guessing?”

    “He is, not me,” Talia said, pointing with her thumb behind herself and at Dalton, who suddenly felt like he’d had a spotlight shone upon him.

    “Really, now?” Nurse Joy asked. “I thought a Pokémon Trainer would know all about the Joy family. How long have you been at this now?”

    “…About a day or two,” Dalton muttered, not meeting her eyes. “It’s a long story.”

    Joy opened her mouth, perhaps to ask. Talia must have sensed the danger, because she immediately echoed, “A really long story. Please, Nurse Joy, could we just get a room?”

    “One room?” Nurse Joy looked from Talia to Dalton, then back to Talia.

    “Two rooms,” Talia said hastily.

    “We don’t have two rooms,” Nurse Joy answered.

    “Again? Okay… one room,” Talia groaned.

    “You’ll be fine, won’t you?” asked Nurse Joy. “You seem friendly enough. Now, about your Pokémon – will it be a quick health scan or a full check-up? If you do the second, it’ll be overnight.”

    “Might as well do the full check-up,” Dalton reasoned. “We’re gonna be here overnight anyway.”

    He put the Pokéball containing Nina onto the desk.

    “Speak for yourself,” Talia said, following suit with her Vulpix’s ball. “I’d like Sionna back, thanks.”

    “Well, you’re not getting ready for a Gym battle, so…” Dalton murmured. Talia nodded in grudging assent and walked off. Dalton watched her leave and waited until she was well out of earshot. Then he turned back to Nurse Joy.

    “Something else I can help you with?” she asked.

    “What time does the Gym open tomorrow?” Dalton queried.

    Nurse Joy’s answer seemed well-rehearsed and, frankly, a bit canned. “All Pokémon League Gyms in Unova are open from seven in the morning until dusk unless otherwise noted. But…

    She had said somewhat forcefully, as Dalton had tried to leave. He stopped and turned on a time, facing her again. Her face said very clearly that she thought Dalton was quite bizarre, but she went on anyway:

    “Chili sometimes opens the Gym a bit earlier,” Joy answered.

    “Chili? Does this Chili person run the Gym, then?” Dalton asked.

    “Yes and no,” answered Joy. Seeing Dalton’s bemused expression, she explained, “Chili is one of the three Gym Leaders of Striaton City Gym.”

    “Three?” repeated Dalton.

    “Yes…” Joy nodded. She seemed to be wordlessly acknowledging that it wasn’t a normal thing for a Pokémon Gym to have three leaders. “The boys’ father died suddenly several years ago, and the League couldn’t decide which one of them would run the Gym.”

    “So Chili’s one of the brothers?” Dalton asked.

    “Yes. Along with Cilan and Cress – but those two are much more… well, reserved,” explained Joy. “Chili’s very eager, but he’s also very capable. He specializes in Fire-type Pokémon.”

    “Fire-type Pokémon,” repeated Dalton. Talia’s explanation about Pokémon types rang in his head:

    “ There are seventeen types of Pokémon. A type is…well, it’s almost like the kind of energy that fuels a Pokémon’s essence.”

    A bit absentmindedly, he wandered away from the desk to see where Talia had gone. After a few moments, he found her near the PokéMart’s long counter, talking to a trio of teenagers. They were all likely younger than she, judging by their heights. (Then again, Talia was somewhat tall.) She was holding what looked like a piece of paper in her hand that the younger children were eyeing intently. They all shook their heads, almost in stereo. She pocketed the paper just as Dalton approached and the children departed. She made no attempt to hide her expression of disappointment.

    “Ugh… had to figure that wouldn’t work,” she muttered to herself.

    “Getting something from the shop?” Dalton asked, indicating the nearby counter with a jerk of his head.

    “Are you kidding? We’ve barely got enough money for food as is,” she said distractedly.

    “Is this going to be a problem we’re going to have the entire time?” Dalton asked, finally giving a voice to a concern that had plagued him for the last day or two. Talia didn’t answer him for a moment.

    “Probably,” she muttered, shaking her head as she brushed past Dalton and walked elsewhere. He didn’t understand why she was so agitated all of a sudden, but it was clear that she had no interest in talking to him at the moment. So he turned to the two male shop workers and asked the question he’d meant for Talia.

    “Excuse me… guys?” he uttered. The two young men turned in his direction. “I was kinda wondering… how does a Pokémon trainer manage to keep money in his pocket?”

    “Most of ‘em don’t,” one of them said, sounding a bit cynical. “That’s why a lot of ‘em give it up as a career after about a year… or less. They go back home, start working on getting normal jobs they don’t really like all that much…”

    Dalton could tell from this youth’s tone that he was speaking from firsthand experience. He wasn’t going to go digging, though.

    “But it’s doable, right?” he asked. “To make a career out of being a Pokémon trainer?”

    “Sure, it’s doable,” the cynical young cashier said. Dalton could almost hear audibly the unspoken part of the sentence. It sure as hell isn’t easy, though.

    “You’ve gotta be good. That’s the simple fact of the matter,” the other young man finally piped in. The first shot him a resentful expression. “Trainers usually wager money against each other in unsanctioned matches. Gyms pay out pretty well for a victory, too. But you have to win. If you can’t win, you can’t make money.”

    Dalton looked over his shoulder. Talia was conversing with more people, holding up the glossy paper which Dalton now figured to be a photograph. Her earlier comment now began to make sense.

    A sudden upsurge of dislike for the red-haired girl welled up within him. He resolved to suffer with her one more evening, then no more.

    Talia made things surprisingly easy on him. She didn’t talk much, apparently frustrated by something. They ate a dinner provided by the Pokémon Center (which, to Dalton’s surprise, actually wasn’t quite horrible) and went up to their room. It was at this point that Talia finally spoke – and it was a strong admonishment to him not to attempt to peek at her while she took a shower in the small, adjoining bathroom. Dalton was all too happy to oblige her; she was now a hideous beast as far as he was concerned. When she emerged, Dalton switched places with her, with him showering and leaving her in the main room to stare at the ceiling from her bunk. When he came out, black hair still limp and dripping with water, he found her staring at her photograph and muttering to herself – or perhaps to it. Dalton ignored her strange supplications to the picture and toppled into his bottom bunk bed, where sleep claimed him fairly quickly.


    It had been a sign of how much he had wanted to get away from Talia that, with no alarm, Dalton awoke quite early indeed. Muted light was coming in through the room’s one shuttered window, and Dalton took this to mean that it was dawn at the latest. Nevertheless, he arose (stifling his initial yawn to make sure Talia did not hear her) and departed, leaving her behind and inside the room alone.

    A strangled sound, halfway between a moan and a sob, escaped the covers on the top bunk as the form within them rotated restlessly.

    He trudged languidly into the main atrium of the Pokémon Center, which he saw was very nearly empty in the middle, except for a pair of brown-haired teenagers that were seated at one of the atrium’s many tables. As close as their faces were to each other – Dalton would have called it near-kissing position – Dalton supposed they might have been a couple. Although they did look awfully alike…

    The girl drew back, and Dalton’s heart instantly jolted. Her hair was long and wild and the clothes she wore were unmistakable. But she had her arms folded vaguely across her belly and was not smiling.

    “My stomach hurts, Blake,” she whined.

    The boy opposite her was wearing a cap that seemed only to highlight further the wildness of his own brown hair. The name rang a bell and Dalton’s heart jolted again. He had seen this boy in the strange dream. This was Whitlea’s brother – the youth that chose to stand against Ghetsis and N, but loved his sister too dearly to destroy her for the sake of his victory.

    He had hesitated… and he had paid for it with his life.

    “It’s just nerves – that’s all,” he said. His voice was a bit lower than Dalton would have expected for a boy his age. “You’ll be fine.”

    “What if I’m not fine?” Whitlea moaned. “You know I don’t have your talent, Blake.”

    “Don’t say that,” Blake replied, his voice becoming more firm but not harsh. “You’ll be fine. You need to get something to eat, though. If you don’t eat, you’ll be hungry and you won’t be able to think straight.”

    “…And if I do eat, it all might come back up during the match,” she said morosely, gripping her stomach with her forearms. “I’m sure the Striaton Gym crew wouldn’t like that.”

    The word ‘Gym’ jolted Dalton out of watching the scene and reminded him immediately of his own intentions. He backpedaled a bit and turned to face the Nurse’s counter.

    “You’re up early,” she remarked. Dalton caught an ever-so-faint whiff of coffee on her breath. Not that he could blame her; coffee was usually how he got through his mornings, too.

    “Uh, yeah…” he muttered. “My Nidoran?”

    “Nidoran…” she repeated, typing something in the computer. “Dalton Gregg, right?”

    “Yes.”

    “Your Nidoran didn’t show signs of anything wrong besides the usual battle fatigue,” she said, crouching out of sight for a moment. She produced a Pokéball from under the counter and placed it on the surface for Dalton to take. “Are you planning on meeting Chili this morning?”

    “That’s the plan,” he said. “Except… I’m not entirely sure where the gym is.”

    “It’s easy to miss,” Nurse Joy explained. “Just go to the Café Striaton and ask for the breakfast special.”

    And she went back to her work. Dalton frowned. He felt she’d been a bit terse with him. Nevertheless, he turned and started his walk from the Pokémon Center. Looking over at the two brown-haired teenagers, he caught the eyes of the boy, whose gaze seemed to be following him very intently.


    Arriving at Café Striaton didn’t take long. Dalton remembered passing it the day before, and simply had to retrace his steps. It stood out among the buildings of Striaton City with its rustic architecture. Taking a deep breath, Dalton walked up to the door. He gave the handle a hard tug, but instantly felt the lock resisting him.

    “Sorry, breakfast doesn’t start until seven,” called the voice of a young man from behind Dalton. He whirled around. Standing there was a tall, skinny teenager wearing a waiter’s outfit. Red hair erupted like a flame from the top of his scalp, and the morning breeze only served to add to the effect.

    “But I’m here for the breakfast special,” said Dalton. The red-haired youth’s eyes lit up.

    “Really?” he asked. “Awesome. Name’s Chili.”

    “Dalton,” Dalton replied, as Chili went to his pockets. Dalton stepped aside as the other teenager produced a set of keys and unlocked the front door with one of them. He pulled it open and disappeared into the darkness. Dalton, after a moment’s hesitation, followed him.

    Blackness pressed in on Dalton’s vision for a quick moment before lights switched on above. They were in a quite large room in what looked like a fancy restaurant. Empty, well-set tables dotted the room for most of its length. The last quarter of it, however, looked to be left bare. Sand-colored, hard ground occupied the last portion of the room.

    “I can’t wait,” Chili was muttering to himself. “After all these rookies – finally, a trainer with some experience! Just the thought’s got me fired up!

    Dalton remembered what the Nurse Joy in Accumula Town had said about his being old for a first-time Pokémon trainer. For a moment, he contemplated telling Chili that it was his first Gym battle… but he thought better of it.

    “We might have to wait a while,” Chili said. “There’s no one here to referee for us.”

    “We’re gonna battle… in here?” Dalton asked.

    “Right over there,” Chili said, sitting down at one of the tables and pointing over his shoulder with his thumb to the bare floor at the far end of the room. “Maybe one of my brothers will be here soon…”

    Just after he said that, a young man with somewhat droopy, blue hair appeared in the doorway.

    “Cress!” Chili jumped to his feet. The blue-haired teen responded with a loud, gaping yawn.

    “Don’t yell so loud,” he murmured.

    “I’ve got a trainer here ready for a battle!” Chili said impatiently. “Come on, let’s get it warmed up!”

    “Chill out, man,” Cress groaned in annoyance, trudging forward. His voice was slow, and so relaxed that it bordered on lethargy. Dalton supposed it was because it was so early in the morning. Still, the last time he’d heard a voice so blissfully apathetic… well, special plants had been involved. “Why are you so impatient all the time? Just go with the flow… When’d you get into this habit of showing up half an hour before opening time? Cilan’s not gonna be happy…”

    “Well, last time I checked, Cilan wasn’t the boss of me,” Chili snapped. “C’mon – before the place fills up for breakfast. This shouldn’t take long, right?”

    Cress sighed. Dalton had a feeling Cress was used to Chili pushing him around a bit.


    “This official Unova League Gym Match will now begin,” Cress said about two minutes later, once he had gone to collect a pair of flags. Chili and Dalton were standing on opposite sides of the bare floor. “Between Chili, Leader of the Striaton Gym, and the challenger… what’s your name, man?”

    “Dalton Gregg,” Dalton replied.

    “Dalton Gregg from… wherever,” Cress uttered a bit lazily. “Each trainer will use one Pokémon only. No time limit. You guys ready?”

    “Yeah,” Dalton uttered calmly, trying to resist the soporific power of Cress’s voice. He wondered whether Chili used his brother as a secret weapon to lull his challengers to sleep.

    “Flame on!” screamed Chili so loudly that he might have just awoken half of Striaton City.

    “Lame,” yawned Cress flatly, staring at his brother. “You stole that from a movie.”

    Never mind that, Dalton thought. Chili’s hyper enough for the both of them.

    “So what if I did?” Chili replied loudly. “Let’s get on with this!”

    He produced a Pokéball from his hip and reared back with it so far Dalton felt an urge to duck. “Pansear, let’s turn up the heat!!”

    He launched the ball into the air. From it came a small, orange monkey.

    “Pan! Pan!” the primate creature screeched.

    Dalton tilted his head… he’d certainly never seen one of those before. He threw his own Pokéball. “C’mon out, Nina!”

    Dalton caught the ball as the light that had exploded from it shaped itself into his Nidoran. She bounced up and down on all fours (“Ran! Ran!”) and looked eager to fight.

    “Whoa, that’s interesting,” Cress commented lazily. “I don’t think that species is from Unova, bro.”

    “Yeah, you’re right,” Chili answered. “You’re one of those trainers from a foreign country, aren’tcha? We get a few every year.”

    “Foreign country?” Dalton smiled ironically. “You could say that.”

    “Whatever,” chuckled Chili. “Pansear, open up with Scratch!”

    “Nina, dodge it!” Dalton yelled – but Pansear was too quick. In a flash, the reddish monkey Pokémon was upon the horned rodent, swiping her with suddenly sharp claws. Dalton cringed. Nina fell to the ground with a pained squeak, but bounced up to her feet straightaway. “Nina!!”

    “Ran-ran…” She shook her head.

    “Watch out, it’s coming again!” Dalton warned.

    “Scratch!” Chili cried out a second time. Nina was able to react and clear herself just in time, but the Pansear was relentless; turning on a dime, it lashed out and attacked again. This time, Nina caught the claw across her face, letting out a horrible screech as she fell to the floor.

    “Damn!” snarled Dalton. He felt powerless to stop this onslaught. Pansear kept coming and coming, and all he could do was warn Nina to dodge, which was very little help. Fresh bruises, cuts, and scrapes blossomed around Nina’s small body with each blow. At one point, Pansear sent her flying halfway across the battlefield with a hard strike. She landed on her flank and bounced as Pansear stalked backward, putting some distance between itself and its battered opponent.

    “Time to turn up the heat for real this time,” Chili said. “Pansear, use –”

    “Okay, Chili, that’s enough.”

    Chili looked to Dalton’s left. Dalton’s eyes turned in that direction as well. A youth with green hair and eyes stood several feet away, about as tall and as skinny as Dalton himself.

    “Cilan, when’d you get here?” Chili asked.

    “Cress, call it,” Cilan didn’t answer the one brother, but turned instead to the other. Cress nodded.

    “Nidoran is unable to battle. Pansear is the winner. Match goes to Chili, the Striaton City Gym Leader,” he announced, pointing one of his flags in the direction of his red-haired brother. Pansear flipped itself over and started walking on its hands by way of celebration. But Dalton only had eyes for Nina, who lay broken and unconscious in the middle of the floor. Some of the cuts on her flesh had started to purple and ooze with something that couldn’t have been anything but blood. One of her eyes appeared to be swollen shut. He walked over to the fallen Pokémon and knelt in front of her. His first thought was to scoop her into his arms, but he felt unworthy to touch her. This had been all his fault. He returned her to her ball and, swallowing a great, boulder-sized lump in his throat, stood up to his full height.

    Cilan, the green-haired brother, was standing in front of him. “You probably want to get that Nidoran to a Pokémon Center. You’re allowed to challenge the Gym again in three days – but given how things went this morning, I’d advise you to think about w—”

    “Thanks,” Dalton said in a dead, hollow voice, departing through the middle of the restaurant.


    Dalton handed his Nidoran over to Nurse Joy at the Pokémon Center, who directed him to the waiting area, where he waited. And waited. And waited. It must have been about an hour. Dalton started thinking terrible thoughts. What did it look like if a Pokémon ever died? Would Nina ever be the same again?

    “Dalton Gregg?” Dalton heard his name and stood up. He walked up to Nurse Joy’s desk to find her smiling a bit grimly (if such a thing was possible.) “Your Nidoran will be fine. She’ll have to stay the night, though. That was quite a beating she took. What happened? Most trainers don’t do that badly against the Striaton Leaders, even if it is their first serious battle.”

    “He choked, pretty much,” a voice came from behind Dalton, who whirled around. It was the brown-haired boy from earlier – Blake. “I got there just in time to watch the end. He just stood there, not ordering an attack and letting his Pokémon get the crap beaten out of it.”

    Blake was glaring at him.

    “How’s that your business?” Dalton asked.

    “My business?” snapped Blake suddenly. “I should have you reported!”

    “Reported?”

    “Blake—” Whitlea had appeared from out of nowhere, trying to restrain her brother.

    “No, get off me – people like you make me sick!” Blake snarled. “If you’re so weak, find a way to get better or just stop the cruelty!”

    “How am I cruel?!” questioned Dalton.

    “If you need me to answer that question, you don’t need to be training Pokémon! You had no idea what the hell you were doing – and you probably knew that! But you insisted on making your Pokémon battle anyway… that’s cruel! Pokémon are living creatures. It’s guys like you that make the rest of us look bad! It’s no wonder there are people like that Ghetsis hanging around, trying to tell the rest of us that Pokémon have no place with human beings!”

    Blake was spitting mad now – Whitlea was trying to hold him back.

    “It’s pretty clear you’re hopeless as a trainer,” Blake finally said, his voice deathly quiet. “So spare yourself the embarrassment, and more importantly, spare your Pokémon the pain. Just… go home.”

    “Blake, no!

    Anger started coursing through Dalton’s veins. He could barely keep himself from shaking. Everything that had happened to him, all the confusion at what had happened to him the last few days, everything that he’d been keeping buried under his veneer of stoicism… all of it came to the surface.

    “You… you…” he muttered. “You wouldn’t get it.”

    “I wouldn’t get wh—” Blake started to ask, but Dalton exploded:

    “I – CAN’T – GO – HOME!!”

    “Stop!!”

    He reared back, balling days – and perhaps years – worth of rage into a clenched fist. He saw a quick movement of brown hair as he sank his punch into a jaw and knocked his target to the ground.

    “Whit!” He heard Blake’s voice.

    Dalton snapped out of his rage and staggered backward. Nurse Joy had her hands clasped over her mouth.

    …And it was Whitlea who had fallen, and Blake who was kneeling over her.

    Dalton felt the throbbing in his knuckles and studied them for a second. He turned and bolted, tripping over himself as he ran. He heard a bellowed string of oaths, then a roar of “YOU’RE DEAD, YOU –” and then more swears. He didn’t dare look behind himself. He wouldn’t have seen much, anyway; his eyes were already swimming and he was running half blind.


    He finally ran out of breath in the middle of an area of flowered green that looked nothing like the rest of the city. He sank down into a bench, and with no regard for who or what was around him, inhaled through his sobs and screamed an ear-splitting curse to the heavens.

    If only that rifleman’s bullets had taken his life. That was what was supposed to happen. That was what would have happened, if the cosmos itself didn’t hate his guts. With each day that passed, it seemed to be contriving new, fresh ways to make his existence miserable.

    Maybe they should have shot him in the head instead. There wouldn’t have been any coming back from that…

    Out of all the questions he had about life itself, there was one that was starting to pierce his consciousness: What good reason did he have to live in this or any other world?

    “There you are!” Dalton looked up. It was that hideous beast… he looked down again.

    “Come to gloat, have you?” he muttered.

    “Gloat?” Talia – or Fox, or whatever the hell her name was – assumed a voice of (more than likely) mock confusion.

    “You said last night I wouldn’t be good enough to be a Pokémon trainer, and you were right!” Dalton snapped. “You were right! You happy now?”

    “I never said—”

    “Yeah, but you were thinking it, weren’t you?” retorted Dalton. “You know what? Just go away. I’ve already got enough messed up in my life without you making things worse.”

    “If you’d just stop and listen for a second—” Talia started – but Dalton had reached the end of his patience. He started to get to his feet.

    “Stop? I can’t stop! You don’t understand what it’s like—”

    SMACK. Dalton fell back into the chair, holding his face.

    “NO! I’m sick of people talking down to me!” Talia was beside herself. “You’re going to sit on that bench and you’re going to listen to me, you – miserable, stubborn, ungrateful son of a *****!

    She was breathing like a bull in the middle of a rampage.

    “You’re not gonna be able to keep up the way you’re going right now!” she went on. “That Blake kid was being a jerk, but he was right – how far do you think you’re gonna get going into battle half-cocked over and over like you’re doing?! I mean… God, you don’t even know any of Nina’s attacks!

    “What the hell am I supposed to do, huh?” asked Dalton. “I have to do something to survive in this world.”

    “Is that your attitude, huh? Survival?” Talia spat. “Just scraping by? Sounds like a pretty miserable way to live.”

    Dalton looked up, but Talia headed him off.

    “Yes, you’re miserable, and if you say anything different, you’re lying to yourself. I’ve only known you a couple of days and I’ve never seen anyone so unhappy.”

    “You try living the last week of my life,” Dalton said bitingly. “See if it doesn’t dampen your spirits just a little bit.”

    “Don’t be stupid, you weren’t happy where you were,” Talia said, slumping into the bench right next to Dalton. “A world with no Pokémon that sounds like it’s run by some sort of weird dictatorship… I’d be surprised if anybody that comes from that could be happy at all. Now you get to travel, see new places, experience new things… you’ve got some freedom. Can’t you enjoy that just a little bit?”

    “I think you’re a hypocrite,” Dalton said. “You didn’t sound too happy this morning when you were crying in your sleep.”

    Talia made a sour face for a moment. “I never said I pretended all the painful things in life didn’t exist. But I also treat the good things in life the same way…”

    “Good things in life… hah,” scoffed Dalton. “Like what?”

    “You get to experience what it’s like to be around Pokémon,” Talia said. Taking a deep breath, she added, “You’re about to travel Unova. It’s spring, so the weather’s nice. And… if you’d stop pushing them away… you’d have some friends, too.”

    Dalton paused for a moment. Talia spoke no further. They sat in silence for what seemed like forever, until Dalton grimaced and shook his head.

    “Why did you come along, anyway?”

    “Like I said, to look for my father,” Talia answered briskly.

    “Why’d you really come along?” asked Dalton.

    “Because I was lonely, and bored, and I hated my life,” she said flatly. “I mean… if I stayed home, I’d probably get a decent job in one of the stores. Then I’d meet an average guy and we’d get married. Maybe I’d have a couple of kids, I’d raise ‘em… everybody would grow old… and maybe, if I was really lucky, my children would think enough of me to help me through my last few years with some dignity.”

    “Well…” Dalton asked. “…what’s so wrong about that?”

    “There’s nothing wrong with it,” Talia answered. “I just don’t know why it has to be that way.”

    She took a deep breath.

    “You can choose something other than what’s obvious to you,” she said. “It may not be as easy, but… I think you’ll be happier in the end.”

    She stood up and started back (Dalton guessed) toward town. She halted for a moment and looked over her shoulder.

    “We’re both fighting futures we don’t want, aren’t we? Rebels gotta stick together.”

    Dalton studied Talia’s face for a moment.

    “‘Rebels’, huh…?”

    He rose to his feet.

    END

    Dalton Gregg was a mostly-ordinary university student from the region once called Johto.
    Then a fateful encounter set him on a quest to change history.




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    Typical... you try to stop a fight and you get knocked down instead. While Talia and Blake made good points, Blake was extraordinarily tactless. Well, at least this butt-whupping made for a good wake-up call. Dalton needed one. Badly.

    Cress and Chili made me smile: their interactions further set their personalities at odds and made for a refreshing look at the triplets. No matter what Chili says about not marching to Cilan's fife, it's clear to see just who's in charge at the Striaton Cafe.

    Well, time to regroup, rebuild and and try harder, I guess. I wonder if Dalton will get the monkey (or if he'll even accept it)...

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    Yeah, yeah... I know... "a month!? A MONTH!? WHAT THE @$#& WERE YOU DOING WITH YOURSELF?!"

    Well... other projects, then getting my *** kicked by writers' block... then getting my *** kicked by what I'm pretty sure was one mother of a flu bug that rendered me completely unproductive for about a week and a half... and then writers' block.

    Quote Originally Posted by Air Dragon View Post
    Typical... you try to stop a fight and you get knocked down instead. While Talia and Blake made good points, Blake was extraordinarily tactless. Well, at least this butt-whupping made for a good wake-up call. Dalton needed one. Badly.

    Cress and Chili made me smile: their interactions further set their personalities at odds and made for a refreshing look at the triplets. No matter what Chili says about not marching to Cilan's fife, it's clear to see just who's in charge at the Striaton Cafe.

    Well, time to regroup, rebuild and and try harder, I guess. I wonder if Dalton will get the monkey (or if he'll even accept it)...

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    Well... let's take this in one swoop, shall we?

    Blake's a bit abrasive... okay, unless you're counting his sister and anyone he truly cares about, he's a di- well... yeah. I'm sure you know this guy/girl that you look at and you're like "your friends are saints for not hating your guts, let alone hanging around you." Blake's that guy.

    As for Whitlea's fate... that's actually inspired by a real life event I saw in middle school. If you MUST break up a fight, the smart move is to pick whoever looks lighter, then get behind them and hold them back - as opposed to trying to jump smack dab in the middle, which can result in... well, in my real life case, the full-grown man who tried to break up the fight getting knocked out cold by a 13-year-old girl.

    As for Cress... sometimes you just have a vision in your head and you can't do anything about it but go with it. No matter how many times I re-wrote that scene, he was either slightly effeminate, or a total stoner. So I went with the latter. He may or may not have taken a drag from Seemore's shrooms right after he woke up that morning. Or he's just not a morning person. Whatever you find more entertaining.

    As for the monkey... welp, won't give anything away.

    And with that... it's (finally) time for a new chapter. :-)


    9. The Glad and the Indomitable

    “…I can’t believe you let her punch you in the face.”

    Evening had fallen, and Dalton and Talia had again taken up refuge in the lodgings at the Striaton City Pokémon Center. Talia was sitting at the small table, her legs upon it; Dalton was in the bottom bunk with a bag of ice on his jaw.

    “Well, what was I supposed to do?” he uttered. “It’s not like I thought she’d hit that hard.”

    “Was it really even necessary, though? I mean… not to be a jerk, but she kinda brought it on herself, didn’t she?” Talia queried. “You weren’t aiming at her. You were going for Blake’s face and she stuck hers in the way.”

    Dalton shook her head. It was almost humorous when Talia put it like that. “I shouldn’t have thrown the punch. But I wouldn’t have felt so bad if it had been him.”

    “So you just walked up, turned your cheek to her and gave her a free shot. That’s sweet of you,” Talia commented with a chuckle. “Or, at least as sweet as someone could be in this situation…”

    “Can we move on now?” groaned Dalton. “That was kind of the point.”

    “I still think Blake’s gonna hate your guts for the rest of eternity,” Talia remarked.

    “Who cares about him? I hate his guts, too. You hear what he said to me?” Dalton asked incredulously. “‘It’s only because Whit asked me not to that I’m not beating your ***.’ And then I offered to battle him, and he just goes, ‘Nope. You’re not worth my time. Macy and I have better things to do.’”

    “Maybe that’s not a bad thing. He might have wiped the floor with you,” Talia murmured haltingly.

    “Who cares?” groaned Dalton, his expression lemon-juice sour. “He’s a cocky little –” and then he called Blake a word that made Talia snicker guiltily. “Next time I see him, I’m gonna bring him down a peg.”

    “Can we just worry about Chili first?” sighed Talia. “Before you start picking fights with everyone else?”

    Dalton frowned. “How do I avoid what happened this morning? I didn’t even do any damage to Chili’s Pansear… I think it’s called a Pansear…”

    “Well…” Talia grimaced, obviously wondering about what she was going to say next. “Did you order Nina to attack it?”

    “I don’t know what attacks Nina can use,” groaned Dalton, covering the non-iced half of his face with his free hand. “It’s like you said… I don’t really know what I’m doing when I battle. Unless there’s some… Pokémon battling school around here somewhere…”

    “Yes.”

    Dalton sat up, letting out a high-pitched whimper. Talia pursed her lips and looked away, trying hard not to laugh. In his haste, Dalton had let the ice pack slip from his grasp. It slid off his face and landed directly in the crotch of his cargo shorts. Dalton threw it aside.

    “‘Yes’?” he repeated. “You mean, there is a school like that?”

    Talia nodded. “It’s just up the road. You probably ran right past it and didn’t even notice, huh?”

    Dalton sighed heavily.

    “I’m really making a mess of this.”

    No,” said Talia a bit too brightly. Then her eyes dropped. “Well… yeah. But… I guess I couldn’t blame you. You didn’t grow up with Pokémon as a part of your life, after all.”

    Dalton threw himself back onto the bed.

    “Are you just gonna lay there and mope forever?” Talia asked.

    “I’m not moping,” replied Dalton, covering his face with his forearms. “I’m… thinking.”

    “…It’s not gonna do you any good to dwell on what happened, you know,” Talia remarked, trying too hard to sound offhand.

    “And you know what would do me some good?” asked Dalton, a bit more forcefully than he’d meant to out of frustration.

    “Food, probably,” Talia remarked. “It’s almost lunchtime.”


    They found a nice little café-type place toward the center of town, with a covered terrace where they could eat while enjoying the spring air. Thankfully, it wasn’t terribly expensive. They were running extremely low on money and had to find some way to stretch that money for at least three days. Dalton ate – or, rather, nibbled – his food, watching Talia eat a sandwich that was quite large but seemed to have more lettuce and tomato than meat.

    She looked up from it a moment. “Are you actually going to eat or what? No wonder you’re so skinny.”

    Dalton frowned. Talia, of course, was right; and the clothes she had gotten for him, which were all a size too big, had worsened the effect.

    “You don’t talk much, do you?” she asked, putting her sandwich down entirely.

    Dalton grimaced. “Well, what do you want me to say?”

    “I dunno,” admitted Talia. “Something. Eating with someone that just won’t talk is worse than eating alone.”

    “There’s not a whole lot to say,” Dalton said, shrugging. “I mean, unless you want to hear about Harmonia, which you don’t…”

    “Did you have any hobbies?” asked Talia. “Before you came here?”

    Dalton had to resist the urge to laugh. “Hobbies? Who’s got time for that? I was too worried about getting through school.”

    “So you ate, slept, and did schoolwork – nothing else?” Talia asked. “I have a hard time believing that.”

    “Believe it,” Dalton advised her. “My friend Evan tried to get me into skateboarding, but it wasn’t my thing.”

    “Was it not your thing,” Talia queried coyly, “or did you just suck at it?”

    “Both,” Dalton replied flatly. “First time I ever did it, I got my weight too far forward and slammed my face right into solid concrete.”

    Talia made a face like she was wincing but also trying very hard not to laugh. “Your face didn’t win that battle, did it?”

    “Nope,” Dalton answered, raising his eyebrows.

    “Don’t worry about it,” she laughed. “I don’t think you got any lasting damage.”

    “…Good to know,” murmured Dalton, returning to his sandwich. It wasn’t easily occurring to him what to say to Talia to keep a conversation going. Keeping conversations going – or starting them, for that matter – wasn’t one of Dalton’s strong points. It had never been much of a problem with Evan. Evan was the type of person you just let talk, and eventually, he’d settle on something mildly interesting – then you could chime in. She buried her face in her sandwich and Dalton took that opportunity to study her for a moment…

    “Did you have…” he started a bit uncertainly. “I dunno… career goals?”

    “Career goals?” echoed Talia, looking up from her lunch.

    “Yeah, I mean… was there anything you wanted to be when—” Dalton stopped himself. He’d almost said, “when you grew up,” which would have sounded patronizing at best. “I mean, after you got done with school?”

    Talia grimaced. “Never thought about it. I probably should have. I mean, I’m sixteen, after all. But honestly, what is there to do in Accumula Town? I know an okay bit about Pokémon. Maybe I would have helped run the shop at the Pokémon Center or… someth—you know, isn’t it stupid how we have to always conform to whatever society we live in?”

    Dalton made a bewildered face. That had come out of nowhere.

    “I mean… there’s always the illusion that you can be an individual,” she said. “March to the beat of your own drum… but when you have to grow up, you realize that’s all it is – an illusion. That’s when it hits you – there’s no such thing as dreaming for grown-ups.”

    “That why you don’t have any dreams, then?” he asked. “Is that your way of trying to seem more… mature, I guess?”

    “You don’t have any dreams,” she commented a bit defensively. Dalton gave one of his ironic chuckles again.

    “You’re joking, right?” he asked. “My dreams are pretty much all I have left.”

    Talia and her blue eyes gave Dalton a glowing look for a split second and then stared down at the tablecloth. “I didn’t have you pegged for an idealist.”

    “I’m not an idealist,” Dalton said seriously. “I’m just really, really desperate.”

    A giant slurping sound came from the other table. Talia was trying to sip a drink that had been empty a long time. As she did it, she looked up at Dalton with an expression that made her eyes look a bit bigger than normal.

    “I wonder if Pokémon dream?” she asked.

    Dalton raised his eyebrows.

    “I mean… they’re not too much different than human beings in a lot of other ways,” Talia went on with an almost childish innocence. “I wonder if they dream, too?”

    “I’m certain they do,” came a voice from nearby. Talia started horribly and turned around. Sitting by herself at a table right next to them was a bespectacled woman. She was still quite young and quite beautiful, with dark hair that was so long that it almost touched the ground. She was wearing a long, white coat that at least looked like a lab jacket. “Oh… I’m sorry. I couldn’t help but overhear.”

    “Yeah… sure…” said Talia, eyeing the young woman a bit nervously.

    “My name’s Fennel,” she said, smiling. “I’m a Pokémon researcher, and my main area of interest just happens to be that of Pokémon dreams.”

    “I’m Talia Renard,” Talia answered. Fennel gave her a strange look.

    “You’re not related to Andreas Renard, are you?”

    Talia’s eyes went wide. “My father? You know him?”

    “‘Know’ is probably too strong a word,” admitted Fennel. “We’ve met once or twice, and correspond every so often. But I haven’t gotten anything from him in about a year. I didn’t even know he had a daughter.”

    “A year?” repeated Talia. “I haven’t seen him in three. What do you know?”

    “Not much,” said Fennel, obviously a bit put off by Talia’s aggressiveness. “Just that he was looking into the relationships between humans and Pokémon. He wanted to see what effect, if any, that human dominance of an area had on those relationships. So he went to the most human-dominated area he could find in Unova – that is, the largest urban area.”

    “Castelia’s the largest city,” said Talia hungrily. It wasn’t a question.

    “By most reckonings, yes,” replied Fennel, still apparently wondering if Talia was going to eat her alive. “Like I said, though… that was a year ago, and if you’re looking for him, there’s no guarantee he’s still there.”

    “It sounds like a good place to look, though.” said Talia.

    “It’s very strange…” Fennel mused. “Some sciences are filled with politicking and rivalry – but Pokémon research has always been a cooperative, communal venture. We share our findings with our fellow researchers, hoping to find links or connections. So any researcher worth his salt wouldn’t simply disappear for a year without communicating with anyone…”

    “Are you saying my father’s not a good researcher?” asked Talia. Dalton could see her ears turning red. He didn’t know her all that well, but his gut said that this probably wasn’t a good sign.

    “Exactly the opposite,” said Fennel. “I believe he was, which is why it’s so strange that no one’s heard from him in a while. I mean… Amanita, even if she leaves, calls in every hour. But I guess that’s different…”

    “Who’s Amanita?” asked Talia.

    “My assistant… who also happens to be my little sister,” she said. “Right after I left school, our parents died in a car accident, so I had to take care of her…”

    “Fennel?” Dalton piped in. She looked at him with a surprised expression. “Sorry… I’m Dalton Gregg. You say you’re a Pokémon researcher?”

    “…Yes,” Fennel answered slowly, as if this should have been obvious.

    “Do you have any information on what attacks certain species of Pokémon learn?” he asked. Fennel frowned.

    “Not off the top of my head. That’s more Professor Juniper’s field,” she admitted.

    “Sorry… Professor Juniper?” repeated Dalton. Talia winced.

    “He’s, erm… not from the area,” she interjected.

    “Oh,” Fennel uttered, looking like she thought this was a poor excuse. “Well… Professor Aurea Juniper happens to be a classmate and friend of mine. She lives in Nuvema Town. Actually, a couple of her protégés are off helping me with a project – and, actually, I need to see to that now.”

    She stood up.

    “If you could do me a favor, though, I may be able to get my hands on a Pokédex for you,” she said, looking straight at Dalton.

    “What’s a –”

    “Almost anything you need to know about Pokémon,” Talia interrupted to explain, “you can find in a Pokédex. They’re supposed to be expensive, though. You’d really do that?”

    She was looking up at Fennel, who gazed down at her from her standing position.

    “I can’t promise anything,” Fennel said. “But if you can fetch Amanita for me, I might be able to help. She’s usually at the Trainer’s School.”

    “That’s so sweet,” mewled Talia. “She really must like learning about Pokémon.”

    Fennel laughed. “Actually, she’s probably there tutoring someone. She’s very bright, my little sister.”

    “Well… I guess that’s convenient,” Talia said, looking at Dalton as if waiting for him to protest. “We were just planning on heading over to the Trainer’s School. What’s she look like, your sister?”

    “She’s twelve years old,” Fennel answered. Dalton didn’t see how this information answered Talia’s question. “But she’s very, very small, so she looks younger. She’ll have blonde hair – probably in pigtails – and glasses a little like the ones I’m wearing… even though she doesn’t really need them.”

    “Small, blonde, glasses,” repeated Talia.

    “Well, if you’ve got all that…” Fennel commented. “I’ve got to get over to the Dreamyard, so… see you later?”

    Talia nodded. “Later.”

    Fennel departed, leaving the two teenagers with one last smile. Talia turned to Dalton.

    “I guess now’s as good a time as any,” he sighed.


    The Trainer’s School was on the west side of town, and quite a smaller building than Dalton had anticipated. It was no wonder that Dalton had walked right past it once. The way the desks and blackboard were set up, it did remind him vaguely of his primary school in Johto – which was ironic, given his old school’s aversion to anything having to do with Pokémon.

    To Dalton’s surprise, the age groups seemed to vary inside the building. There were small children, probably about as young as nine or ten, walking around with tiny, basic-looking books. There were teenagers as old as Dalton himself – including a familiar, blue-haired fellow standing at the front near the blackboard.

    “Hold on, that’s Cress,” remarked Dalton, pointing him out to Talia. “The Striaton Gym leader… or one of them, anyway.”

    “I guess it’d sorta make sense, the Gym leader coming to teach a class here,” she replied. Dalton, however, thought Cress looked somewhat tired and disinterested. Then again, that might have just been his normal facial expression…

    “But you know who I don’t see?” asked Dalton darkly, scanning the room again in case he was wrong. “This Amanita girl. I wonder if Fennel sent us on a wild goose chase?”

    “Why would she do that?” asked Talia. “Honestly, Dalton, you’re too paranoid.”

    “Better that than too trusting.” Dalton scanned the room again. No sign of a girl matching Amanita’s description. Groaning in frustration, he settled into a chair, in front of a desk clearly designed for someone a bit shorter than six feet tall. Talia glanced at him semi-apologetically.

    “Well… might as well learn something while you’re here, I guess,” she said, whisking away. Moments later, she’d come back with a rather thin book. The front cover read “Basics of Pokémon Battling” and honestly looked like it was designed to be read by someone half Dalton’s age.

    “What… seriously?” he uttered. The book landed in front of him with a light smack instead of the dull THUD he was used to hearing.

    “You have to start somewhere,” she said, shrugging and sitting upon one of the desk. He grumbled to himself as he opened it. Talia heard him; she added, “It’s really basic concepts. You should be able to get them in about fifteen minutes, right?”

    He was flipping through the pages, absorbing information as he went. Until, at last, something stopped him. “Sometimes Pokémon get special conditions during a battle. Not all of them are good.” The picture featured a couple of Pokémon obviously in the middle of fighting each other. One of them – a Patrat from what Dalton could tell from its back – looked a sickly purple color. “What’s happened to this Patrat?”

    “Poison,” a smaller voice answered instead of Talia’s. Dalton turned his head to his right very slowly.

    Amanita – or at least a girl looking very much like Fennel described – was standing right over his shoulder, peering over half-moon spectacles.

    “Uh… Amanita?” Dalton asked. The little girl (and Fennel was right, she was indeed little) looked taken aback.

    “You know my name?” she queried. Dalton stared at her for a moment, thinking this was obvious.

    “What do you mean, ‘poison’?” asked Dalton.

    “It’s exactly what it sounds like,” Amanita explained. “A substance has invaded a Pokémon’s body that doesn’t belong there. End result, it pumps through a Pokémon’s body and gradually drains away its energy the longer it goes unchecked.”

    She’d said all of this off the top of her head. The flabbergasted expression Talia was giving indicated that even she wouldn’t have been able to come up with an explanation nearly that thorough.

    There was something… vaguely… familiar about Amanita. Dalton simply couldn’t put his finger on it.

    “Do you need help with anything else, Mister…?” she asked.

    “Dalton. Just Dalton,” Dalton replied. “And no. Actually, Fennel sent me here to find you. She says to come home.”

    Dalton thought Amanita would have protested, but instead her eyes went wide, as if this was the best news she had heard all day.

    “Really? It must be real this time,” she said, wide-eyed. She whisked away for a moment and reappeared with a small purse, from which she produced what couldn’t have been anything other than a cellphone. (Dalton had to remind himself that Amanita, as petite as she was, was very nearly a teenager.)

    “Sis?” she spoke into the receiver. Dalton couldn’t hear the response on the other end, but Amanita nodded and said, “Yeah. I’ll be back by two.”

    She hung up.

    “Should we show you back?” asked Dalton, just trying to be polite. This didn’t go over well with Amanita.

    “I’m not a child,” she said indignantly, folding her arms. “I come here by myself all the time.”

    “It’s kind of a moot point, isn’t it?” Talia pointed out. “Fennel said she wanted to see us anyway.”

    “And you don’t know where we live, do you?” Amanita asked. Both Dalton and Talia shook their heads. Amanita smiled a mischievous smile. “I guess I’m the one that’s leading you, then.”

    Dalton stood and, along with Talia and Amanita, made to walk out. But Talia suddenly snatched something from his grip. Dalton turned to give her a dirty look, but immediately saw “Basics of Pokémon Battling” dangling from Talia’s hand.

    “There’s no need to steal books from the Academy,” Amanita remarked. “I’ve got that same book at home if you’d like to see it. I might have to dig it out, though… I haven’t read it since I was about six.”

    Dalton’s face fell. He couldn’t tell whether Amanita was making fun of him. But she grinned and gave him a wink. It was then that it occurred to Dalton that he’d seen that face – or one very like it – before.

    But… he thought to himself. Nah… that’s impossible, right?


    The three of them (a motley crew if Dalton had ever seen one) strode out onto Striaton’s Main Street. Amanita, in fact, went to the middle of the road, squinting and looking at something. Meanwhile, Dalton saw something bearing down on the girl from her left.

    “Hey, kid!” an approaching form screamed. “Move it!!”

    Dalton sprang to action before he even knew what he was doing. “Amanita!”

    He got there right before the other runner did, and flung Amanita aside. He felt a tremendous force barreling into him soon after, and he and another human being collapsed in a heap in the road.

    Once Dalton had cleared the cobwebs from his brain, he realized he was looking upon a very strangely dressed individual who was scrambling to his feet. He was wearing a helmet and a cheap imitation of courtly attire. He looked vaguely like a knight out of one of Kallen’s old bedtime stories…

    Then Dalton saw it. The electric-blue monogram.

    “You…” he murmured.

    “Dalton, are you okay?” he heard Talia ask vaguely. Something must have cowed the other young man, because he took one look at Dalton, turned tail, and ran. Dalton stared blankly at his back, watching his form shrink into the distance. “Dalton? Dalton!”

    Talia’s yell brought him back to earth. She was looking straight at him, and a fair bit of color had drained out of her face. Her brow was creased in a frown of concern.

    Dalton thought for a moment of giving chase; but his hesitation had cost him. There was almost no way he would catch up now…

    “I…” he uttered blankly. He felt his face contorting, almost against his will. Snarling (Talia jumped) he tore his eyes away and set them on Amanita.

    “Are you okay?” Talia asked, once Dalton failed to find his voice. Amanita stood, dusting herself off.

    Meanwhile, Dalton stared blankly into the distance, his eyes trying to pursue a target he could no longer see…



    Dalton knocked gently on the door to what Amanita said was Fennel’s apartment. He drew back. There was no response. He tried again, knocking three times on the door.

    “Fennel?” called Talia. Amanita rolled her eyes.

    “You’re both doing it wrong,” she said. “Fennel gets so focused… you have to act like you’re going to storm the place.”

    And with that, she stepped in between the two of them. Raising a fist, she hammered the door with it harder than Dalton thought possible. The door visibly shook on its hinges. Amanita put her mouth to the keyhole and shouted loudly, “Open up!!”

    “Coming!!” a voice shouted from within. The door swung open several minutes later, revealing Fennel, who was still in her lab coat but also noticeably barefoot. She ogled Dalton and Talia for a moment, as if wondering what they were doing there.

    Amanita must have saw the look, because she frowned and asked, “Didn’t you invite these two? To go fetch me? Which, by the way, was completely unnecessary.”

    Without preamble, Amanita stepped across the threshold. Dalton and Talia looked at each other for a moment before the latter went in. Dalton brought up the rear, hands in the pockets of his oversized cargo shorts.

    The goosebumps broke out on his pale legs and arms as soon as he was across the threshold. He managed to stop himself from looking utterly pathetic by shivering, but it was a close thing. Talia must have noticed it too; she subtly held her arms closer to her body.

    “I’m not a little child anymore, Fennel. You could have just called me instead of sending a pair of strangers.” Amanita continued to scold her older sister, which Dalton found a bit comical. Still, though, there was something so, so familiar about this little girl and her bearing: something that made Dalton feel nostalgic, and at the same time extremely uncomfortable.

    “Well, you might’ve had your phone off,” Fennel answered. It was obvious that the sisters went back and forth like this fairly often.

    “Why would I – never mind. So, what’s the story? What’s so important?” Amanita asked. Dalton looked around the room, wondering inwardly (because he’d never have the guts to do so aloud) where, exactly, Fennel and Amanita slept. The kitchen, if it could be called that, was nestled in a corner of the apartment. Everywhere else seemed to be occupied by books and computer equipment, the most prominent of which was a monstrous machine that chugged and whirred quietly opposite the kitchen.

    “We found it,” Fennel said.

    “You’re joking!” explained Amanita. “The Dream Mist and everything?”

    “Yep!” exclaimed Fennel.

    “Well, where’s…” Amanita looked around. “Um, what’s-her-face? Whitney?”

    “You mean Whitlea? She’s left already,” Fennel said.

    Dalton glanced at Talia again. She was thinking the same thing he was; Fennel and Amanita had forgotten about them.

    “Um… excuse me?”

    Amanita and Fennel turned toward them, in that order.

    “What’s Dream Mist?” asked Talia - but Dalton would not be distracted.

    “Sorry if I’m being blunt, but do you have the PokéDex?” he asked.

    “You need a PokéDex?” blurted out Amanita, disappearing into a door that Dalton wouldn’t have seen if he hadn’t been looking right at her walking into it. A few seconds later she emerged with a small, red device. Fennel let out a gasp. “You can use this one.”

    “But that’s your modified –” Fennel started.

    “No,” Amanita interrupted her. “And even if it is, why’s that any of your business?”

    Fennel nudged Amanita with her hip, and for just a split-second, Dalton couldn’t help noticing that Fennel’s lab coat was not doing her justice. Amanita looked up at her sister, decided to ignore her, and handed the red device to Dalton.

    “Well… turn it on,” Amanita said, after Dalton spent several seconds staring at it blankly.

    “Turn it on?” Dalton repeated. “I’ve never seen one of these before.”

    Amanita’s jaw unhinged slightly. “What do you—”

    “Long story,” interrupted Talia, who didn’t seem to appreciate having been ignored.

    “Oh, okay…” Amanita conceded, taking the device from Dalton and pushing the largest button. Dalton frowned at his own inability to figure out the obvious. Suddenly, Amanita started speaking again. “Welcome to the PokéDex Version Five Point One.”

    The voice was a bit distorted, as if being forced through a small speaker. Dalton realized after a split second – the voice he was hearing was Amanita’s, but it was coming from the PokéDex instead of her.

    “You’re really going to give him that?” Fennel sounded surprised. “After all the work you did on it?”

    “Well, if I’m going to get Miss Aurea to make my modifications official, I need to find out if it works, right? And to do that, I need a beta tester,” Amanita explained.

    “So this… PokéDex… it’s not like other ones?” asked Dalton.

    “They’re mostly the same in basic function,” replied Amanita. “But I tried a few new experiments on mine. Ask it the weather here.”

    Dalton stared at Amanita. “You mean, talk to it?” He looked askance at Talia, who shrugged.

    “Go ahead – do it,” Amanita urged him.

    Feeling a bit foolish, Dalton held the PokéDex close to his mouth and asked, “What’s the weather in Striaton City?”

    “The current weather in Striaton City is: Mostly sunny, current temperature is seventy-one degrees Fahrenheit, approximately twenty-two degrees Centigrade,” the PokéDex said in Amanita’s voice.

    “Why’d you record your voice onto it?” asked Talia. “Seems a little bit… I dunno, vain to me.”

    “Well, I’m easier on the ears than the creepy phantom robot woman, right?” answered Amanita briskly. Talia grimaced, obviously feeling like the younger girl had a point.

    Dalton turned the device over in his hand. “So, does it know anything about my Pokémon?”

    “I should think so,” Amanita said. “That PokéDex has data on most well-known Pokémon – even Pokémon native to other regions. It’s got at least some info on mostly every Pokémon species that’s been discovered.”

    “How many is that, exactly?” Dalton asked curiously. He’d seen a fair handful in the several days since he started journeying.

    Amanita, to Dalton’s surprise, looked at Fennel, who answered Amanita with, “Why are you looking at me? You know I never remember.”

    “Nobody remembers,” groaned Amanita.

    “Well, that’s because the number keeps going up every two or three years,” said Fennel in exasperation. “A couple of generations ago, people only knew about a hundred fifty or so different species – so researching them was a heck of a lot simpler.”

    “Will it know anything about a Nidoran?” asked Dalton.

    “Why don’t you ask it?” Amanita queried.

    Dalton looked down at the device and, still feeling a bit stupid for talking to a machine, asked clearly, “What do you know about Nidoran?”

    He watched as the screen went white for a moment. Images of two Pokémon appeared on it soon afterward. One might as well have been Nina’s twin, its buck teeth exposed in a rodent-like grin. The other was a bright pink and much spinier and aggressive-looking. “Nidoran is known as the Poison Pin Pokémon. It is most commonly found in the Kanto/Johto landmass. Nidoran is the first Pokémon discovered to have sexually dimorphic traits.”

    “…Um… translation?” asked Talia, looking at Amanita – but it was Dalton who answered.

    “Sexual dimorphism,” he said. “It’s when the two sexes of the same species have very visible contrasts. I mean, besides the obvious. Probably even more obvious than the obvious.”

    “That’s the long way of saying things,” Amanita replied. “Basically, it usually means that the male and female of a species look completely different.”

    “Like… wait, I thought you explained this to me,” Dalton said, staring at Talia. “I mean, you’re the one that told me that you knew my Nidoran was female because of her blue coat. So I’m guessing the male is this spiky, pink one.”

    That’s all that means?” Talia replied. “Well… geez, why do you have to use such a long term for something so simple?”

    “No idea. If you’re gonna be a scholar or scientist, it’s part of the job description…” Fennel said, shrugging.

    “Never mind that,” said Dalton, looking down at the PokéDex and thinking of something. “Can this thing tell me what attack techniques the female Nidoran can use?”

    Amanita’s voice, from her and not the Pokédex, immediately answered, “Nope.”

    Dalton frowned. It had been worth a try.

    “The attack database is so large, that’ll probably require a device all its own one day,” Amanita went on. “But, right now… I just don’t have the time.”

    “You’re twelve years old and don’t have any time?” said Talia, frowning. “Geez. Get out and live a little.”

    “Well, what were you doing when you were twelve?” asked Amanita, her hands on her utterly shapeless hips. “Probably worrying about makeup or your first bra, while I’ve been modifying world-changing technology.”

    “Hey, nobody gives a sh—” Talia suddenly started, looking aggressive.

    “Shouldn’t we get going?” interrupted Dalton. “I mean… back to the Academy.”

    Talia looked at Dalton for a moment, and then at Amanita. With a huff, she turned on her heel and made for the door.

    “And I’m thirteen, by the way!” Amanita shouted after her.

    Fennel looked down at her. “Since when?”

    Amanita looked up at her sister coolly. “Since today.”

    “Tod-oh, my gosh…” Fennel put her hands to her mouth, looking horrified. “Oh, my gosh. Amanita, I completely forgot. I’m so sorry…”

    “Wouldn’t expect you to remember,” Amanita sighed. “Not with you wrapped up in your research all the time. And you wonder why you’re still single…”

    “Hey – that’s a cheap shot,” Fennel replied, her face going pink about the nose area.

    Feeling awkward, Dalton haltingly murmured, “I… think I’ll just show myself out. Thanks for all your help.”

    He’d made it outside the apartment and halfway down the stairs when he heard someone calling his name uncertainly.

    “Hey… Dalton, was it?”

    It was Amanita.

    “Hmm?” he uttered.

    “There’s something weird about you…” she said, taking a couple of steps down toward him. “But I can tell you’re pretty smart. I like smart.”

    “Uh… that’s good,” muttered Dalton, not quite sure what to do with this information.

    “So, you know…” She leaned her head against the stairwell’s railing, wearing a very demure expression Dalton was sure he’d seen before. “If you’re ever ready to chuck Miss Hothead down there and have an intelligent conversation with someone… you know where to find me.”

    Dalton chewed on absolutely nothing for a couple of moments. “I’ll, uh… keep that in mind, I guess?”

    “You’d better,” Amanita replied. “And make sure to remember anything weird my Pokédex doesn’t do right, so you can tell me about it when you come back. Bon voyage!

    She winked at him and skipped up the stairs. Dalton turned around, half mortified and half amused, if that was at all possible.

    “Was she coming on to me just now? That was creepy… and where have I seen that expression before?”

    “Dalton!!” A loud exclamation made him jump. Talia had yelled back up the stairs for him. “Are we going back to the Academy or what? We’re wasting time here!”

    Dalton sighed to himself, shaking his head. “Women…” he muttered. “…as if I didn’t have enough weirdness to deal with…”

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    Dalton Gregg was a mostly-ordinary university student from the region once called Johto.
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    The weirdness is never enough, Dalton. Never enough... :P

    So, other than 12/13-year olds hitting on him (and slightly older girls just plain hitting him. Freaking priceless, even if gallant) Dalton has now become the test-dummy for the new PokeDex. And with Amanita's voice admonishing him every step of the way together with Talia's, the poor guy's journey hasn't even begun yet. Speaking of which...

    “You’re twelve years old and don’t have any time?” said Talia, frowning. “Geez. Get out and live a little.”
    Ouch.

    “Well, what were you doing when you were twelve?” asked Amanita, her hands on her utterly shapeless hips. “Probably worrying about makeup or your first bra, while I’ve been modifying world-changing technology.”
    Touche.

    When those two meet again, all hell will break loose. Just saying.

    Well, it looks like Dalton and Talia are on their way back to the Academy. Hopefully, for Nina's sake, Dalton will learn enough to help her survive future battles. Again, just saying.

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    Ah, an update. Have I mentioned yet that I love those? This one was especially conveniently timed, since I lost all my bookmarks, including those linking to fanfic. One less I have to find right now

    Anyway, two little things that got me confused here. One might be because of me not being native, the other is more, I suppose you could cal it a logic problem.

    Talia started horribly and turned around.
    This is the possibly not native problem. What I assume here is that started should be startled, then it would make sense to me, even though I'm still not completely sure that it'd be correct English.

    The door swung open several minutes later,
    Of course, this might just be because she's so adsorped in her research, but still. A few minutes to open a door that's almost unhinged? Sounds somewhat strange to me, then again, it might be part of Fennel's personality.

    Now all that's left is waiting for the next update Don't feel put under pressure, I don't mind the wait. It's worth it.
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    (TAKES IN DEEP BREATH). First off this if not a random comment. . Also note that my autocorrect kept changing Fic to Fix. Four or five years ago I was just really getting into writing. I was working on a novel at the time (Still am) and was also looking for something to read. I came upon the fan fix forums here and somehow or another found Advent Phoenix. You were probably already thirty or so chapters in (Its been so long I do not really remember) but I was a huge fan so I caught up within a night or so. I wanted more and discovered that you had a link to the first fix; Johto. I went to that and decided to read all of it before I got back to reading the second journey for Travis and crew. I did just that but than for a while I quit getting on the forum for various reasons. Every once in a while though I would check up on your story and catch up on what chapters I missed. Sometimes it would be one, and sometimes it would be ten or more. I always likes when it was more because of how much I enjoyed reading the fic. This went on for a long time but eventually I finished reading your second fic as well.

    All the while I was continuing working on my novel but sometimes I would hit a major writing block. Usually I could get past this block but when it became expessially hard or if I needed some inspiration, I would come back to read your fic. I want to be clear that I did not and do not plagiarize anything. I just find your fics to be excellent and they have really helped me. For instance if I am struggling with the structure of how to to do something I can look at how you did something similar and be like "Okay I could do it like that.... or I could do something similar to that but also do this." Another thing I like to do is see how well you mold your characters because it helps me do the same. Like I said, I do not copy any of your ideas but I look at it and can often find ways that I can incorporate something similar with mine. THAT WAS A REALLY BAD EXPLANATION. If you want a better one I would be glad to explain farther.

    Anyway... I was on another particular bad writing block. I had a whole day set aside for writing and I sat and stared at my computer literally the whole day- I wrote one sentence the entire day I believe. So I went back to try and find some artistic motivation by reading through the chapters I missed in Maverick Heart (a lot of them). It helped. I was surprised to see that you decided to put it on hiatus but I totally get that. I started off with a plan for one novel but that quickly exploded into a series. But whenever I didn't feel motivated to write that story but I still wanted to write I would work on another story and before I knew it I had a whole network of stories that I am still (happily) working on. Long story short: I totally understand where you were coming from when you put it on hiatus.

    This is my first ever post because I just joined today. I had been visiting for years but never as a member. I decided to join so I could have some constructive conversations in the Authors Cafe but I also had another reason; I have been a huge fan of your writings for years so I decided it was time I let you know that someone really appreciated your writing. I seen in an earlier comment that you said you were not sure how many people read yours and it was hard for you to keep posting because of that. Well I am proof that you can read, and REALLY LIKE it without posting or even being a forums member. Your writings have been inspirational to me for nearly half a decade (or longer) and I just wanted to tell you how much I appreciate your writing. It has entertained me for a long time now.

    As for this story. I just finished catching up and hopefully I can be a little better at keeping up now. It shines in all of the areas your fics often do. You do a great job of developing characters and making the reader understand without just sating "He is X and this is why he acts this way in this situation." Also your dialogue is awesome. The way you write conversations, especially casual ones between characters is fantastic in my opinion. I like Dalton. He is definitely different, from a trainer standpoint than any of your other characters as Travis knew plenty about training and Lucas did too (although he wasn't technically a trainer.). I like Fox too and was actually kind of wanting that to be her actual name.

    You surprised me with the Black and White game characters/ story line being present just because your fics have always been kind of an off shoot of that. They were certainly in the same cannon but I do not think they were ever this intertwined. With that being said I think you are doing a good job at it. I am going to let someone else focus on Grammar Issues (Mainly because I am not familiar enough with the site to quote specific parts of the story). If you have a P.M. list you can throw me on it and I look forward to continue reading.

    (NEARLY PASSES OUT. BEGINS TAKING HUGE BREATHS TO RECOVER FROM TALKING FOR SO LONG).
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    Well I'll be darned, finally decided I'd better post and someone with a similar idea posted just a few days before me.

    I guess I'll start by saying I really appreciate your work on all of your fanfics. I am a read-aholic and I enjoy these just as much if not more than some of my favorite books. I originally found your stuff about 5 years ago while you were in the middle of AP (dang, that is scary similar to the above post). Back then, I went back and read the entire Johto Saga and then started AP, but I was also slowly becoming less active on SPPF as I found other interests. I never got around to posting comments then and eventually went inactive on the forums. About a half a year ago, I decided to pop back on to see what had been happening on SPPF and I found at the time your latest story Maverick Heart. I started reading the first few chapters and fell in love. I had read to the current chapter and the few updates after that before it went on hiatus. I also have read all of this wonderful tale as it has been updated. Your writing has gotten me to check on SPPF for an update every week or two and I haven't even touched any pokemon stuff in a few years. I guess I want to stress that people read this even if they don't speak up. I think right now I'll probably go back and read the first story and then actually finish AP. I am a silent fan of long chapters BTW, but that's just because I enjoy having more to read.

    Enough of my insignificant tale, though, I should speak about this recent work. In my case, you have succeeded in delivering that nostalgic feeling that you set out to express. As I read these chapters, Dalton's naivety reminds me of my golden days as a child learning about the realm of pokemon. Once again, just like in all of your works, there is top-notch characterization. Dalton is interesting and different from Travis (from what I remember >.<) and Lucas. I haven't played a pokemon game since Diamond/Pearl so the world of Unova is quite interesting to me. I don't know how much personality is shown in the game, but your take on Amanita and her interactions with Dalton/Talia are quite fun. I can't wait to see more of her though I figure her voice through the Pokedex might satisfy me.

    Welp, EM1, reading your fanfics are personally important to me. I can't get enough of any of it- the characters, the story, or the occasional hilarious line (Amanita/Talia trading words). I guess its sort of selfish, but, please don't stop writing because you think there isn't an audience. I'm joining the exclusive readers of your work club now.

    /end fan(boy) rant
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    Air Dragon:

    So, other than 12/13-year olds hitting on him (and slightly older girls just plain hitting him. Freaking priceless, even if gallant) Dalton has now become the test-dummy for the new PokeDex. And with Amanita's voice admonishing him every step of the way together with Talia's, the poor guy's journey hasn't even begun yet. Speaking of which...
    I dunno. I feel like Whitlea would punch hard. Although not as hard as Blake - so Dalton got off easy.


    When those two meet again, all hell will break loose. Just saying.

    Well, it looks like Dalton and Talia are on their way back to the Academy. Hopefully, for Nina's sake, Dalton will learn enough to help her survive future battles. Again, just saying.
    It would really be messed up if I dragged this out over several chapters like certain seasons of the anime where there were about 12 episodes between a gym loss and the rematch... :P



    Emeraldfan:

    I'm glad I managed to time that update perfectly, then. Sucks you lost your bookmarks, though... that's no fun.

    This is the possibly not native problem. What I assume here is that started should be startled, then it would make sense to me, even though I'm still not completely sure that it'd be correct English.
    Actually, the word "started" as I used it was correct. That particular definition just isn't used very often in English.

    (From Dictionary.com

    5. to give a sudden, involuntary jerk, jump, or twitch, as from a shock of surprise, alarm, or pain

    And that's where the verb "to startle" comes from, actually. It essentially means, "to cause someone to start."

    Of course, this might just be because she's so adsorped in her research, but still. A few minutes to open a door that's almost unhinged? Sounds somewhat strange to me, then again, it might be part of Fennel's personality.
    Absorbed, you mean? And, yes, that's part of the reason. She did forget her own sister's birthday, after all, so the sound of a door that may not be hers (she lives in an apartment building) wouldn't really cause a blip on her radar.


    Random Comment Guy:

    First of all, your actual username is "Random Comment Guy?" And it wasn't already taken? That's freaking awesome.

    First off this if not a random comment. . Also note that my autocorrect kept changing Fic to Fix. Four or five years ago I was just really getting into writing. I was working on a novel at the time (Still am) and was also looking for something to read. I came upon the fan fix forums here and somehow or another found Advent Phoenix. You were probably already thirty or so chapters in (Its been so long I do not really remember) but I was a huge fan so I caught up within a night or so. I wanted more and discovered that you had a link to the first fix; Johto. I went to that and decided to read all of it before I got back to reading the second journey for Travis and crew. I did just that but than for a while I quit getting on the forum for various reasons. Every once in a while though I would check up on your story and catch up on what chapters I missed. Sometimes it would be one, and sometimes it would be ten or more. I always likes when it was more because of how much I enjoyed reading the fic. This went on for a long time but eventually I finished reading your second fic as well.
    O.o Holy. ****. You read 30 chapters of AP in a day or two? You deserve a medal. My chapters were long as hell back then. That's no mean feat. I'm glad I was able to keep your attention that long. And I'm sorry you had to slog through the first one first, and I applaud you for doing it. Not only was it much more necessary than it should have been to understand all the characters in AP, but it wasn't my best work, which I'll get to later.

    All the while I was continuing working on my novel but sometimes I would hit a major writing block. Usually I could get past this block but when it became expessially hard or if I needed some inspiration, I would come back to read your fic. I want to be clear that I did not and do not plagiarize anything. I just find your fics to be excellent and they have really helped me. For instance if I am struggling with the structure of how to to do something I can look at how you did something similar and be like "Okay I could do it like that.... or I could do something similar to that but also do this." Another thing I like to do is see how well you mold your characters because it helps me do the same. Like I said, I do not copy any of your ideas but I look at it and can often find ways that I can incorporate something similar with mine. THAT WAS A REALLY BAD EXPLANATION. If you want a better one I would be glad to explain farther.
    No further explanation necessary. Me and Air Dragon bounce ideas off each other all the time. And as for how many sources went into my writing of AP? Well, it'd make your head spin. Lessee, the Pokemon movies and anime, obviously (although much, MUCH more so than the games), the Gundam series (Gundam SEED in particular), a game most people have probably never heard of called Suikoden, Dragonball Z... yeah, it was pretty ridiculous. And to tell you the truth, what you take in as a creative writer is often what comes out, even when you don't plan for it to come out. Output of any art is usually a pieced-together sum from anything and everything an artist takes in. It's like making a casserole. Or not.

    Anyway... I was on another particular bad writing block. I had a whole day set aside for writing and I sat and stared at my computer literally the whole day- I wrote one sentence the entire day I believe. So I went back to try and find some artistic motivation by reading through the chapters I missed in Maverick Heart (a lot of them). It helped. I was surprised to see that you decided to put it on hiatus but I totally get that. I started off with a plan for one novel but that quickly exploded into a series. But whenever I didn't feel motivated to write that story but I still wanted to write I would work on another story and before I knew it I had a whole network of stories that I am still (happily) working on. Long story short: I totally understand where you were coming from when you put it on hiatus.
    It was probably about 15 or so chapters into MH when I realized that it wasn't a Pokemon fic. It was a fanfic with Pokemon shoehorned into it. Most times I went to use them felt forced, so I wasn't entirely satisfied with it. Not to mention I was gradually approaching critical mass for my character cast, which seems to happen to me in everything I write. :-(

    This is my first ever post because I just joined today. I had been visiting for years but never as a member. I decided to join so I could have some constructive conversations in the Authors Cafe but I also had another reason; I have been a huge fan of your writings for years so I decided it was time I let you know that someone really appreciated your writing. I seen in an earlier comment that you said you were not sure how many people read yours and it was hard for you to keep posting because of that. Well I am proof that you can read, and REALLY LIKE it without posting or even being a forums member. Your writings have been inspirational to me for nearly half a decade (or longer) and I just wanted to tell you how much I appreciate your writing. It has entertained me for a long time now.
    I'm really humbled. Honestly. Words don't do justice to how much I appreciate that. And welcome (officially) to the forums! May we possibly see some output from you in the future? ;-)

    As for this story. I just finished catching up and hopefully I can be a little better at keeping up now. It shines in all of the areas your fics often do. You do a great job of developing characters and making the reader understand without just sating "He is X and this is why he acts this way in this situation." Also your dialogue is awesome. The way you write conversations, especially casual ones between characters is fantastic in my opinion. I like Dalton. He is definitely different, from a trainer standpoint than any of your other characters as Travis knew plenty about training and Lucas did too (although he wasn't technically a trainer.). I like Fox too and was actually kind of wanting that to be her actual name.
    Character development's my favorite part of writing. I've been trying to adjust my style to trim some of the fat - you'll probably notice that my chapters here aren't nearly as long as they are in AP... partly because AP was a multiple-POV epic, a bit like A Song of Ice and Fire. And as for the dialogue, I favor deadpan, sarcastic, side-door-type humor with a dash each of wordplay and exaggeration - even in my own real life interactions with people. So, naturally, that comes out when I write.

    Dalton's an interesting character for me to write personally. Being 17 and very educated, he's dedicated himself to a singular pursuit most of his life. On the flip side, he doesn't really know who he is outside of that environment, and a big part of this journey is going to be about him finding that out. At the same time, being 17 (as opposed to 12-14 like my other protagonists) and having had to help take care of an aging widow for a while, he's naturally got a bigger grasp on responsibility. He also comes from a world that's literally the polar opposite of the one he now inhabits, though, so in that sense, he's like - or perhaps a bit worse off than - the stereotypical "kid off on his journey for the first time" because he literally has no idea what the hell is going on most of the time. It's all foreign to him.

    You surprised me with the Black and White game characters/ story line being present just because your fics have always been kind of an off shoot of that. They were certainly in the same cannon but I do not think they were ever this intertwined. With that being said I think you are doing a good job at it. I am going to let someone else focus on Grammar Issues (Mainly because I am not familiar enough with the site to quote specific parts of the story). If you have a P.M. list you can throw me on it and I look forward to continue reading.
    I'm not going to give much away, but let me say this: I'm just getting warmed up with those guys.

    Thank you so much for reviewing, and I hope to hear more from you in the future.


    OrangeDonphan:

    I guess I'll start by saying I really appreciate your work on all of your fanfics. I am a read-aholic and I enjoy these just as much if not more than some of my favorite books. I originally found your stuff about 5 years ago while you were in the middle of AP (dang, that is scary similar to the above post). Back then, I went back and read the entire Johto Saga and then started AP, but I was also slowly becoming less active on SPPF as I found other interests. I never got around to posting comments then and eventually went inactive on the forums. About a half a year ago, I decided to pop back on to see what had been happening on SPPF and I found at the time your latest story Maverick Heart. I started reading the first few chapters and fell in love. I had read to the current chapter and the few updates after that before it went on hiatus. I also have read all of this wonderful tale as it has been updated. Your writing has gotten me to check on SPPF for an update every week or two and I haven't even touched any pokemon stuff in a few years. I guess I want to stress that people read this even if they don't speak up. I think right now I'll probably go back and read the first story and then actually finish AP. I am a silent fan of long chapters BTW, but that's just because I enjoy having more to read.
    To your last comment first; if that's the case, then you'll LOOOOVE AP because the chapters are LOOOONG. D-:

    I'm really glad you circled back to the forums. Actually, if you read Pokemon Revolution: Johto, you'll probably notice a subtle upswing in quality around the chapter 25 mark. Well, that's actually because my computer broke and I was more or less forced into a hiatus for about a year and a half. Those first 24 or so chapters were written way back in 2004, so I've been doing this a fair while.

    Enough of my insignificant tale, though, I should speak about this recent work. In my case, you have succeeded in delivering that nostalgic feeling that you set out to express. As I read these chapters, Dalton's naivety reminds me of my golden days as a child learning about the realm of pokemon. Once again, just like in all of your works, there is top-notch characterization. Dalton is interesting and different from Travis (from what I remember >.<) and Lucas. I haven't played a pokemon game since Diamond/Pearl so the world of Unova is quite interesting to me. I don't know how much personality is shown in the game, but your take on Amanita and her interactions with Dalton/Talia are quite fun. I can't wait to see more of her though I figure her voice through the Pokedex might satisfy me.
    Thank you very much for your kind words. I find Unova to be one of the more interesting locales in the Pokemon-verse, also. And it doesn't hurt that it's the current region... well, until October, anyway. Hopefully people still care about Unova in seven months because I seriously doubt I'll be done by then. ^_^; I'm also glad you find my characters interesting. As much as I love working with new worlds, I believe fully that people connect to people - which is why I pay special attention to characterization. Like I said before, thanks so much for reading and I hope you continue to enjoy my work.

    - EM1
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    10. At Last, A Victory

    For Dalton Gregg, darkness and silence should have been the perfect environment for what he was trying to accomplish – falling asleep, that is. But the quieter and the darker it got, the more voices started to ring around in his head. He cursed his awful luck. Of all days, of all nights not to be able to sleep…

    “Voo… voo…” Sionna squeaked in slumber from somewhere above him.

    “Dalton?” Talia’s voice came next – as if he didn’t have enough voices in his head already.

    “Hmm?” he uttered.

    “You’re not asleep yet?” she asked.

    “Mm,” he hummed stoically.

    “You really need to sleep,” she said, sounding a bit like an overly worried mother. “Your brain doesn’t work as well when you’re tired.”

    “You think I don’t know that?” he moaned. He wasn’t trying to be cranky; he was just frustrated. “I’d love to sleep, I just… can’t.”

    More silence.

    “You know… my dad used to hum a tune to me when I had trouble sleeping,” said Talia fondly.

    “Please don’t,” pleaded Dalton. Talia let out a laugh.

    “It’s just as well. Dad couldn’t sing worth a damn, and neither can I.”

    “Voo… voo…”

    “…Hey, Talia?”

    “Hmm?”

    Dalton grimaced. This had been bothering him for the last day or two. “Suppose you lose to the same Gym a second time. What happens then?”

    “Come on, now, don’t start thinking like that,” she answered, very briskly and somewhat sternly.

    “I’m just curious,” Dalton insisted. “What happens? Do you know?”

    “Well… you go back,” Talia said. “Only this time, you have to wait a week. And if you lose a third time, it doubles again – two weeks.”

    “Brutal,” Dalton murmured.

    “I think it’s a good rule,” Talia disagreed. “Otherwise, some trainers would just come back day after day after day… and then force their Pokémon to get their asses kicked day after day after day. That’s pretty messed up, if you ask me.”

    Dalton growled.

    “What’s wrong? You don’t think so?” asked Talia.

    “…Reminds me of something Blake said,” he replied sourly.

    “…Forget that guy,” Talia advised him. “He wasn’t being helpful – so as far as you’re concerned, he can go screw himself.”

    Dalton couldn’t help but let out a bit of a laugh. “I wish it was that simple… but it’s not.”

    “I’m not gonna ask why,” Talia deadpanned. “But he’s long gone anyway, right? He won’t be watching you battle. I will.”

    “Thanks,” Dalton uttered. “But I’m not sure how much ‘moral support’ is gonna help me. Just get your sleep. I’ll handle it. Then we can move on to the next town, wherever that is.”

    “That’s chivalrous and all,” Talia murmured. “But I’ve already decided.”

    “You’re very stubborn, aren’t you?” Dalton asked a bit loudly.

    “Yes,” Talia answered very simply.

    Dalton rolled his eyes.

    “Good night, Talia.”


    “OH – ”

    Roughly seven hours later, from the same room, came a roared profanity best left unprinted.

    Dalton snarled, seemingly leaping from his bunk bed to the adjoining bathroom in one rather impressive motion. (Impressive because the bathroom door was on the opposite wall.)

    “That’s why I said to set your alarm before you fell asleep,” said Talia casually from the top bunk, in an ‘I-told-you-so’ sort of voice.

    “Vool-piiiix…” Sionna sang, swishing her six tails playfully.

    “C’mon, don’t tease him, he’s under enough stress,” Talia laughed, rising from her back to a seated position and leaping from the bunk. She had barely been on the ground for five minutes before Dalton came running out of the bathroom again, fully dressed but with his black hair sopping wet. “Did you really just shower that fast?”

    “You get a lot of practice when you’re in college,” he muttered, looking distracted. Fumbling around in the pockets of his cargo shorts, he murmured for a moment… then swore again – so loudly that it scared Sionna, who squeaked and hid behind Talia’s ankles. “Dammit!! My keys… where are my keys?”

    “Dalton? Dalton!” Talia shouted. Dalton whirled around and turned toward her, wide-eyed. “Dalton, you don’t have any keys.”

    Dalton stopped dead.

    “Yeah. Yeah, that’s right, I don’t…”

    He turned away from Talia, who frowned. “You okay?”

    “Yeah,” murmured Dalton absentmindedly. “I’m fine.”

    He didn’t move for a moment. Then he felt a hand on his shoulder.

    “You don’t have to do this, you know,” she said.

    “Yes, I do,” Dalton answered.

    “Why?” she asked. “I mean… what do you have to prove? There are other ways of testing the bond between Pokémon and human beings without being a Trainer.”

    “That’s great,” Dalton answered. “Most of my life, I’ve been losing. Losing fights, losing homes, losing friends, losing family… there’s just a point where you get sick and tired of losing. You want to win, and you don’t really give a damn what it is. You just want to win something.”

    “Hmm…” Talia uttered, a smile crossing her face. “Anyone ever told you that you’ve got a way with words?”

    Dalton smirked ironically. “That’s about the only thing anyone thinks I’m good at.”


    The last time Dalton had come to Café Striaton, it had been completely empty, and well before seven in the morning. This time around, it was half-past-eight, if not a bit later, and the restaurant was anything but empty. The steady murmur of a full house assaulted Dalton’s ears about a step or two across the threshold. The door had been left wide open to let the fresh, pleasant air of the late spring morning inside. At a podium that Dalton hadn’t noticed before – probably because it had been vacant – Dalton noticed the tall, lanky, vest-clothed form of the green-haired brother. He and Dalton exchanged glances – a flicker of Cilan’s green eyes told Dalton that the young Gym Leader recognized his face.

    “Welcome to Café Striaton,” Cilan said with a smile, seemingly trying very hard not to make any assumptions. “Will you and your, erm… lady friend be ordering anything?”

    Dalton sighed. He already had a feeling that Cilan had said “lady friend” but had been thinking “girlfriend.” There honestly wasn’t much point in trying to set that particular record straight, either.

    “I’ll be having the breakfast special,” Dalton said. Cilan smiled.

    “So you will, hmm?” he asked. “I’ve gotta be honest; after what happened last time, I wasn’t sure if we’d be seeing you again.”

    Dalton grimaced. “Well… surprise, surprise.”

    “Surprise, indeed,” Cilan repeated, stepping from behind the podium. “Let’s give these folks a good show to go with their breakfast, shall we?”

    “Where’s Chili?” Dalton asked immediately. Cilan tilted his head.

    “Chili’s already occupied at the moment.”.

    “Well, un-occupy him,” Dalton said flatly. “Please.”

    “I don’t think that’ll be necessary,” Cilan answered diplomatically – although Dalton could tell he was getting annoyed. “A match against Cress or myself carries the exact same weight with the Unova Pokémon League…”

    “It doesn’t matter,” Dalton replied. “Chili’s the one that beat me the first time. He’s the one I want.”

    “Hmm… stubborn one, aren’t you?” Cilan asked. “Keep in mind, a second loss to this Gym means you have to wait a full week before challenging it again.”

    He turned around.

    “Follow me,” he requested. Dalton and Talia did as instructed. Restaurant patrons looked up from their meals at the passing trio. All of a sudden, it hit Dalton that all of these people would likely be watching his battle. A few eaters were looking at him with interest. Dalton reminded himself that he was very obviously older than many of the usual challengers. As he looked to his left (a man wearing what looked like a lab coat looked up at him from behind a newspaper and a pair of thick glasses), a random whistling sound pierced his ears from somewhere in the opposite direction.

    “Pig,” he heard Talia mutter. Apparently, the practice of wolf-whistling at attractive women wasn’t confined to Dalton’s time. Dalton didn’t think Talia was exactly helping her cause with her choice of wardrobe… but he wasn’t about to be idiotic enough to say that to her face.

    “I’m going to have to ask you to stay here, Miss…” Cilan started politely.

    “Fox,” replied Talia. Dalton registered the renewed use of her alias. “And why? You can bring up to two others down to the Gym floor with you. It says so in the rules, doesn’t it?”

    Cilan tilted her head. “That it does… but… you’ll be a distraction for my brother. I want this to be a fair match, and I’m guessing your friend here does as well.”

    “Distraction? Go on,” Talia said, turning from Cilan to Dalton (who descended the stairs onto the arena floor) and then back to Cilan. “Why?”

    “Glutton for punishment, huh?” Chili’s voice was so loud it could be heard over the crowd’s murmuring. Dalton saw the other teenager take his place in the opposite square on the long, tawny field. Even from this distance, his shock of crimson hair was clearly visible. “You know you interrupted my breakfast, right? I’m gonna have to cook you up a double helping of pain for that one!”

    Dalton saw Chili look up at the crowd. He noticed that Talia had taken a chair right across the table from the glasses-wearing newspaper reader.

    “You flamed out pretty bad last time around,” Chili commented. “Let’s hope you bring a little bit more heat this time… or else you’re just gonna get burned again!”

    Dalton’s lips contorted. He was starting to notice Chili’s strange way of speaking. “You like fire way too much.”

    “There’s no such thing!” Chili exclaimed in response.

    “Yes, there is. It’s creepy,” Dalton said with hardly any inflection at all.

    Cilan, meanwhile, had finally gotten himself ready to carry on with the battle. “This official Unova Pokémon League Gym match will be one-on-one, with no time limit, between the challenger, Dalton Gregg from the Johto region, and Chili, leader of the Striaton Gym! At stake is the Striaton City Gym’s Trio Badge! Are both participants ready?!”

    “I sure hope so,” Dalton muttered to himself as he fingered the Pokéball containing his only Pokémon.

    “Flame on!!” Chili had thrown his Pokéball. From it emerged the familiar, crimson, simian Pokémon known as Pansear.

    Dalton looked down at the Pokéball in his hand as he enlarged it. “Well…” he murmured. “Take two.” He flicked it into the air. The spiny Poison Pin Pokémon emerged from it, looking behind herself.

    Niiiih-nih-doh-nih,” Nina squeaked. Dalton wasn’t sure how, but he could detect more than a hit of sarcasm in her tone. Not that this helped anything; if she was saying something sarcastically, he had no idea what.

    “Don’t look at me – look at Pansear,” Dalton uttered worriedly, pointing in their opponent’s direction so she would get the message. She flipped her head around.

    “Ran!?”

    “Pansear, use Lick!” shouted Chili.

    “Pan…” Pansear sprang forward, its eyes shut tight as it opened its mouth. A long tongue – seemingly much too long to fit inside a mouth that size – rocketed forward. Dalton wasn’t sure what kind of damage that tongue could do… but clearly there was more to it than met the eye.

    “Nina, dodge it! Get outta there!” Dalton shouted, surprising himself with how commanding his voice could be. Nina wasted no time, sidestepping the flicking appendage. It folded back into Pansear’s mouth. Pansear looked around.

    “Scratch, Pansear!” Chili screamed. The monkey-like Pokémon crouched low, rearing back with an arm that suddenly ended in a group of razor-sharp claws.

    “Oh, no, you don’t,” snarled Dalton. “Scratch, Nina!”

    Pansear leapt. Nina responded. A horrific metallic sound rang through the air as the two Pokémon crossed each other and landed on opposite sides. Dalton wasn’t sure at all who, if anyone, had caught the worst of that exchange. One thing was for certain – the breakfasting crowd was now eating this match up. A chorus of cheers rose from the tables.

    “Turn up the heat!” shouted Chili. “Incinerate, Pansear!”

    “Incinerate?” muttered Dalton, figuring Chili was just using another metaphor. That was up until Pansear opened its mouth and sent a jet of red-hot flames in Nina’s direction. “OH—”

    An ample explosion and a short, clipped screech drowned out Dalton’s oath. He stared at the smoking spot in utter shock for a moment. Cold sweat ran down his brow. He was sure, absolutely certain, that he had just seen Nina blown to pieces right in front of him.

    “Enough!” snapped the bespectacled gentleman at the closest table. “Pull your Pokémon back this instant. It doesn’t deserve to die for you!”

    “Shut up!” shouted Talia, leaping to her feet to tower over the seated man. “Who do you think you are?”

    “A concerned human being,” the man answered loudly, slowly rising. “Which is better than can be said for most of you! These living creatures are commanded by human beings to violently attack each other until one can no longer go on. And if that weren’t bad enough, you all treat it as sport – mild entertainment to go with your morning coffee and scrambled eggs. And you wonder why we say that Pokémon are much better off without human beings.”

    “‘We?’” Talia replied. “You and who else?”

    “The people that believe as I believe,” the man answered. “The people that have seen the light, and have refused to return to the barbaric darkness that drenches our society.”

    He walked around Talia, not bothering to avoid bumping her with his shoulder.

    “I beg of all of you – see the light!” the man said loudly. The battle had stopped. Even Chili stood transfixed on the stranger. The only one not distracted was Dalton. He was watching the dust clear. At last, the cloud of smoke finally settled, finally revealing Nina, who was not only in one piece but still standing, albeit with a few burns and bruises. “The king – the one they call N – will show us the way.”

    Dalton’s eyes flickered –

    “He’s with them!” he screamed, turning toward him. “He’s with the Party!”

    The crowd began to murmur. Talia looked at Dalton and seemed to be trying to warn him with her eyes. But Dalton would hear or see none of it.

    “I know nothing of a ‘Party’,” the man said silkily. “I only know that this world is sick… and we intend to help heal it.”

    He backed away from Dalton and turned on his heel to exit. However, by a faraway table, he crouched for a moment and paused. He seemed to be having a conversation with a pair of individuals sitting there. He rose and swiftly rushed from the building afterward. Meanwhile, the other restaurant patrons were murmuring uncomfortably amongst themselves.

    “Who the hell was that?” snarled Chili.

    “Bad news,” Dalton said sourly, turning his head back toward Chili.

    “Hmm,” Chili said with unnerving calmness. “Incinerate, Pansear!”

    “You bastard, I wasn’t – Nina, MOVE!!”

    The crowd erupted again as Nina barely dodged another sudden fireball. Out of the flames came Pansear, its claws exposed and ready to strike. Nina held her ground…

    “Use Scratch!” Dalton cried.

    Nina’s move was so subtle that the naked eye could barely perceive it, but she had drifted ever so slightly toward Pansear’s attacking arm. Dalton heard a tearing sound and a squeal and, for one panicked moment, wasn’t sure who had come off worse. It was Pansear that had hit the ground and rolled back to its feet. Nina leapt toward it, but it was able to roll out of the way and retreat to Chili’s side of the field. It was then that Dalton noticed something…

    “Nina!” he commanded. “Nina, look at me!”

    The Nidoran turned around, her head tilted askew as if she didn’t think this was quite the time. Dalton, unperturbed, tapped his right leg a couple of times with his hand, wondering inwardly whether this would work. “He’s coming again… and when he does, take it out.”

    “Don’t know what you’re planning, but it won’t work!” Chili exclaimed! “Pansear, let’s finish this! Use Fury Swipes!”

    Pansear advanced, and the difference became even more obvious. Its left arm was lagging ever so slightly. Meanwhile, the cogs in Dalton’s brain were working at double speed.

    Left arm’s hurt from the last attack… so he’ll probably lead with the right side first…

    Pansear raised his right arm this time, claws extended.

    There it is… see it, see it, please see it, Nina, c’mon….

    Nina leapt toward Pansear’s attacking arm. Pansear’s eyes lit up. Dalton cringed.

    Almost quicker than thought, Nina changed directions, scampering under Pansear’s flailing arm. She sunk her claws deep into the simian creature’s left leg, upending it and sending it to its back. Turning on a dime, she leapt into the air, claws on all fours exposed and aimed for Pansear’s downed body. Pansear, who had been writhing in pain for a moment, had the wherewithal to roll away. Nina landed on the ground. Her claws dug into the arena floor, leaving long, gritty runs. She gave a snarl of frustration, then leapt away to put some distance between herself and her injured opponent.

    “Almost…” muttered Dalton. He was starting to feel it. He could do this. He. Could. Do. This.

    “You can still attack at range, Pansear!” shouted Chili. “Use Incinerate!”

    Pansear opened its mouth and a small stream of flames blazed forth. Nina wasn’t able to dodge in time and simply turned her body to protect her face and eyes. Squinting against the heat and the pain, she locked her one open eye upon the youth with a gaze as blazing as the flames that were eating away at her. Then, with no warning, the firestorm came to an end. Pansear had stopped attacking, and was now standing limply, obvious beads of sweat running down its simian face. The monkey-like Pokémon looked like it was slowly melting toward the ground in fatigue… but Dalton wasn’t taking any chances.

    “Nina, attack!” he shouted. “Double Kick!”

    Nina sprang into a fearless but light-footed, headlong run. Approaching Pansear, she leapt at the last second, upending herself, driving both of her hind feet square into Pansear’s face. The small, orange Pokémon teetered drunkenly and directionlessly, obviously out on its feet.

    “Seeeaaarrrr….” With a last, pained squeak, Pansear fell backward, hitting the ground with a thud that seemed to echo with finality.

    “DOWN!” shouted Cilan very suddenly. “One! Two!”

    Dalton grimaced, hoping this final count wasn’t something ridiculous… like a hundred. That’d be just his luck…

    “FIVE!” Cilan yelled very emphatically. “Pansear is unable to battle! Nidoran is victorious! This match’s winner – Dalton Gregg!”

    Appreciative applause littered the restaurant; in his focus on the battle, Dalton had nearly forgotten that so many people were watching him. He caught sight of Talia sitting at the table nearest to the dividing railing, and could practically read the smile of thinly veiled smugness on her face as she applauded for him.

    Not bad… for a newbie.

    Dalton’s eyes fell on Nina, who had either collapsed in a heap of relieved exhaustion, or had simply decided that now was as good a time as any for a nap. Either way, Dalton couldn’t very well let her spread herself out on the floor of a battlefield. He trudged over toward her, hands in his pockets, feeling awkward again in clothes much too large for his gangly body. He scooped her from the ground, and she gave a start with the suddenness of the movement – he always expected her to be much, much heavier. She squirmed free of his grip and came to settle on one of his shoulders. He wasn’t quite sure what, if anything, to say to her. I mean… it wasn’t like they could really understand each other, could they?

    “I wish you knew what I was saying…” Dalton murmured, a bit sadly. “How are you supposed to be friends with someone who can’t understand your language? Maybe those guys were right… NO. They were wrong – I know it! I think I felt it – felt what Talia was talking about… it was like I was seeing things through different eyes for a second. Through your eyes, I mean… Tch. What the hell am I talking about? It’s not like you can understand all this anyway, right?”

    Nina didn’t respond. Instead, to Dalton’s great shock, she bit him on the cheek. Well, not really a bite – but she did touch her buck teeth to his face. It wasn’t until she leaned against his head slightly that he realized that the gesture had been closer to a kiss than a bite. Then, Dalton heard, in a feminine voice, clear as a bell:

    You think too much.

    Dalton whirled around, looking for Talia. She was still standing perched on the railing, as if she had half a mind to vault herself over it. She was not, however, next to him. Dalton, somehow, wasn’t surprised. The voice didn’t sound anything like Talia anyway – and, yet, sounded like someone Dalton had known for a while.

    “I must be tired…” he muttered. “I’m hearing things.”

    Dalton didn’t see Nina’s ample ears droop dejectedly.


    It was a very sad and morose-looking Nina that Nurse Joy took into her care half an hour later at the Pokémon Center. One certainly couldn’t tell by looking at her that she had won perhaps the toughest battle of her life so far. Even Dalton’s initial elation at winning his first badge (which had spent most of its time being held and ogled by Talia) was tempered by the sadness on his Pokémon’s face… and more than a bit of confusion on his part.

    Talia nudged him.

    “Hmm?” Dalton uttered.

    “You look like you’re at a funeral. What’s up with you?” she asked.

    “Nothing,” lied Dalton. “Just… thinking, that’s all…”

    Talia put her hands on her hips. “You think too much.”

    Dalton groaned. “You’re the second person to say that to me today. Or not.”

    Talia looked bewildered. “What’s that supposed to mean?”

    Dalton took a deep breath. He already knew that Talia thought that he was crazy, and he certainly wasn’t wild about reinforcing the idea… but he had no one else to ask. “When you talk to Sionna… and she talks back… can you understand what she’s saying?”

    Talia looked taken aback. “Well… sure, I can. Pokémon are smarter than a lot of humans give them credit for, you know.”

    Dalton shook his head. “Smarts doesn’t have anything to do with it, does it? I mean… I could be smart and you could be smart, but if you speak a different language than I do…”

    “Look, don’t ask me to explain it, okay? Because I don’t know,” Talia cut him off. “It’s one of the things my dad enjoyed researching. I just know that… when I first got Sionna, I didn’t understand her. Then I could pick up emotions or body language. Then… I woke up one morning and realized that I was talking to her – just like I’m talking to you right now. And she was talking back.”

    “And you don’t know how, exactly?” Dalton asked.

    “I couldn’t give you some concrete reason using science, no,” Talia answered thoughtfully. “Maybe… maybe because there isn’t one. I’ve never seen the point of questioning it.”

    “So… you just believe it?” Dalton looked at her skeptically. “I’ve never put much stock in belief, myself…”

    “Is that right?” asked Talia. Then, looking down at Sionna, who was at her ankle, she called her.

    “Pix?” The Vulpix looked up curiously.

    “Do me a favor?” Talia asked. “Go stand on Dalton’s feet.”

    Sionna tilted her head for a moment, but she did as told. Dalton looked down to find the fox Pokémon standing on his feet. Her fur was very warm against his toes.

    “Vool-pix-vool,” she mewled, looking up at Talia.

    “Sionna says your feet are cold,” Talia translated nonchalantly.

    “Yeah? Well, it’s freezing in here…” murmured Dalton. He gave a start as Sionna suddenly climbed up his leg and up to his shoulders. She leapt from there and Talia caught her out of the air.

    “Silly,” Talia giggled as Sionna settled atop her shoulder. Dalton tried to pet her atop her head. For whatever reason, though, Sionna wasn’t having any part of it. She leapt from her perch and Dalton’s hand landed right on Talia’s shoulder. “AH~!”

    “Er…” Dalton murmured, pulling his arm back as quickly as he could.

    “Mr. Gregg?” Nurse Joy, fortunately, was there to save the day, and Dalton needed telling twice. He tore his eyes away from Talia and darted up to the counter, where Nina was waiting for him, seated on the counter, ears pulled back and snout up in the air.

    “Is she okay?” Dalton asked.

    “Better than okay,” Nurse Joy answered. A rather large, pinkish cream puff of a Pokémon was standing next to her.

    “Au-di-no….” it sang sweetly.

    “You still mad at me?” Dalton asked Nina.

    “<Don’t be such an idiot,>” was the reply.

    Dalton could have burst, he was so happy. “How are you feeling?”

    Nina’s ears drooped.

    “<I’m hungry.>”

    Dalton laughed as he picked her up. “Maybe we can do something about that.”

    When he walked back over to Talia, the latter had her free hand on the shoulder where Dalton had touched her.

    Frowning, he asked, “I didn’t hurt you, did I?”

    She looked up. “Why? You think I bruise easily or something just because I’m a ginger?”

    Dalton squeaked. “What? No, I didn’t mean…”

    Talia walked up to him and very halfheartedly punched him in the jaw. “Your running away after it happened was hilarious, by the way. What are you – eleven? I thought you said you had a girlfriend back home.”

    “We weren’t going out,” Dalton groaned. “Not technically. We didn’t even…”

    “‘Didn’t even’ what?” asked Talia, a knowing glint in her eye. “It’s probably in your best interest not to trail off like that.”

    Dalton took a deep breath. “Where can we find Pokémon food? Nina says she’s hungry.”

    Talia put her hands on her hips. “She said that to you?”

    “Yes – now, can we get her some food before she starves?” Dalton replied irritably.

    Talia grinned.

    “Just checking.”

    With Sionna skipping merrily in front of her, Talia led Dalton to the Pokémon Mart at the other side of the building. Neither one of them noticed the man at the table nearly – a white-coated, tall, thin, beanstalk of an individual, removing his bespectacled face from a newspaper, eyeing their every motion…

    “Power in unity?” the man muttered placidly to himself. “Is it possible? What a curious proposition. This demands more… research.”

    END

    Dalton Gregg was a mostly-ordinary university student from the region once called Johto.
    Then a fateful encounter set him on a quest to change history.




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    Well, that chapter seemed aptly titled. About time, indeed... At least Dalton didn't choke this time. Plus his bond with Nina's getting deeper... nice.

    Also, a mysterious researcher/scientist/nerd/geek makes his appearance? Is this gonna be trouble? (I know who he is. Just not spoiling... )

    OK, will be waiting for the next one, Captain!

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    Only one thing that stood out as possibly being not right:

    “Mr. Gregg?” Nurse Joy, fortunately, was there to save the day, and Dalton needed telling twice
    It would make more sense if Dalton doesn't have to be told twice, this being a save and all.

    Then, about what you said about your chapters being long, at least back in the days of PR. I personally don't mind. It was probably about a year or so that I, via ways I don't remember, stumbled upon one of the PR fics. Since I at that time had about one hour to spare every day, I quickly finished both Johto and Phoenix, probably in about a week, and I enjoyed every second of it. Lots and lots of characters, each with a story to tell, intense battles and an intriguing story.
    I find that, when I really enjoy a story, or anything for that matter, time just flies whilst it feels like mere seconds are passing. So I suppose that the conclusion of all of this is that, as long as you like a story, long (or short for that matter) chapters really don't bother you. I might even find the longer chapters better, since it gives me more to read.

    Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, wondering how you'll make each character act, especially since I haven't yet played through Black/White 2 and some of these characters seem to be from those games

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    Well, well. EM1 comes up with another great fic. I've read the Rev trio, and Ellipse so I know your style. Or at least I thought I did.
    Amazing fic. Every aspect of it seems very good to me. Catch ya later.
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    Air Dragon:

    Well, that chapter seemed aptly titled. About time, indeed... At least Dalton didn't choke this time. Plus his bond with Nina's getting deeper... nice.

    Also, a mysterious researcher/scientist/nerd/geek makes his appearance? Is this gonna be trouble? (I know who he is. Just not spoiling... )

    OK, will be waiting for the next one, Captain!
    Naughty, naughty... you're trying to bait me into spoiling. Sorry, but no dice. ^_^


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    Only one thing that stood out as possibly being not right:
    That's because it wasn't right. That's what I like to politely term 'mental flatulence'... or, to use the more common phrase, a brain fart. *le edits*

    Then, about what you said about your chapters being long, at least back in the days of PR. I personally don't mind. It was probably about a year or so that I, via ways I don't remember, stumbled upon one of the PR fics. Since I at that time had about one hour to spare every day, I quickly finished both Johto and Phoenix, probably in about a week, and I enjoyed every second of it. Lots and lots of characters, each with a story to tell, intense battles and an intriguing story.
    I didn't mind as much, either. I didn't have a life back then, so I could write as much and whenever I pleased whenever I wasn't doing schoolwork. If I tried those chapter lengths with my current schedule (and I know people that do it, although I'm not going to name names) you'd be getting a fresh chapter roughly every 4 to 6 months. I'm not sure I'll be able to pull it, but I'd like to be done with this by the end of next year, and then pray that Gen VI has some shelf-life left. I may release the Gen VI-based fic (if I do it) in early 2014 and run it parallel to this one. Or I may go back to Maverick Heart. Or I may take some time off from writing and dedicate myself to more reviewing so I'm not so anonymous around here. I dunno what I'm doing. :|


    Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter, wondering how you'll make each character act, especially since I haven't yet played through Black/White 2 and some of these characters seem to be from those games
    Most of them... aren't. So take comfort in that. :-)


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    Well, well. EM1 comes up with another great fic. I've read the Rev trio, and Ellipse so I know your style. Or at least I thought I did.
    Amazing fic. Every aspect of it seems very good to me. Catch ya later.
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    I've been averse to PM lists because it got to the point that no one on the PM list was even reading actively anymore and I was sending them out for nothing. But I might start one up again, and if I do, you'll be on it. :-)

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    11. Adversaries and Agents
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    Dalton Gregg watched silently as an orange, six-tailed Vulpix, and a lavender, large-eared Nidoran, skipped around each other happily. Completely healthy and fed, the two new friends played with gusto as their owners sat on a bench nearby, pondering their next move… or not.

    Talia closed her eyes and let out a sigh as she stretched her arms vaguely upward. Dalton leaned away a bit as one of her clenched fists swung dangerously close to his jaw.

    “I love, love, love this time of year,” she mused. “The weather’s absolutely perfect. Warm enough… but not too hot. And it’s not rainy like the first part of spring, either. Does it feel any different to you?”

    She turned her head to look at Dalton.

    “I dunno…” the boy murmured, smoothing down his black hair – a habit of his whenever he was nervous or uncomfortable. “Never really thought about it before.”

    Talia grimaced. “You know… it’s okay to smile every once in a while. There’s no law against it. Not here.”

    Dalton looked at Talia out of the corner of his left eye. “Was that supposed to be a joke?”

    “Only sort of,” Talia answered casually. “And don’t tell me you can’t smile. I saw you smiling right after you won your match. It’s funny how much younger the simple act of moving a few muscles in your face can make you look.”

    Dalton didn’t respond. His mind was always processing, always trying to take in new information and analyze it. But this latest thing was giving him a bit of trouble. This strange, new creature in front of him was something for which his mind found itself woefully ill-prepared.

    Maybe it was because he’d had so many other pressing concerns at the time – far too many to pay attention. That would be understandable, wouldn’t it? He had been trying to find his way in a completely new world – a world that was literally the polar opposite of the place he had once called home. But this had been his first chance, truly, to breathe. He had won his first badge, and even though he knew where the second of the eight was located, he hadn’t had an immediate inclination to travel anywhere. Maybe the fact that he was still wearing ill-fitting cargo shorts and sandals not meant for long treks had something to do with that. So, for maybe the first time in years, he had taken two days to do nothing – to soak in the surroundings.

    “Hey, Dalton, you’re spacing out again,” Talia said. Dalton gave a start. “Are you sure you’re okay?”

    “I’m fine,” Dalton answered. “Just… trying to figure out what to do next.”

    “Isn’t that kind of obvious?” Talia asked. “We know where the nearest Gym is, right? Nacrene City.”

    Talia’s eyes sort of lit up.

    “I can’t wait to see Nacrene,” she mused. “I hear it’s a hub of art and music. A place like that has to be interesting, don’t you think?”

    Dalton smirked. “Unless it’s bad art and music.”

    “You’re so cynical,” chuckled Talia, shaking her head. “You don’t think you’re cynical?”

    “Everybody…” sighed Dalton, trailing off – but Talia was staring at him with interest, refusing to be deterred.

    “Go on.”

    “Everybody around me,” Dalton said, staring right at the fountain and the two Pokémon playing around it, “thought our lives were pretty much perfect. Everything was in order. But the longer I’m here, the more I start to feel like…”

    Almost involuntarily, his fists clenched with anger.

    “We were lied to. All of us. And now… now I’m not sure who or what to trust.”

    Talia didn’t respond right away. “What was life like… in Harmonia?”

    “Well… in Azalea City, it rained too damn much,” Dalton deadpanned. That was the first thing he thought of when Azalea City came to mind – all the rain. Talia apparently found this funny and stifled a laugh with her hands. “Maybe it was just me… but it seemed to rain every day. It almost made me wonder if the Party was screwing with the climate somehow. And… of course, there were no Pokémon. Well, I take that back. There were Pokémon. It’s just that we never got to see one up close. And anybody that did usually didn’t live long enough to talk about it…”

    He felt his words catch in his throat, with no warning. He shut his eyes tight.

    “Were they that good at controlling us with fear?” Dalton finally asked, looking down at his hands. “Or were we all that weak?”

    “You…” Talia seemed to be fishing for words. “They… I mean, everyone except you… didn’t know any better, did they? That’s what they were born into – that’s all they knew. It was comfortable for them.”

    “Then, what made me so different? Why was I always so curious?” snapped Dalton. “I spent my whole life feeling like an outcast… like I didn’t belong. I didn’t take any pride in feeling the way I did. I just thought I looked like a freak. I don’t belong there… but I don’t belong here, either.”

    “Really?” Talia asked.

    Dalton was so astonished, he almost had to laugh. “I don’t belong in this world, Talia. I barely know what a Pokémon is, let alone how to live with them around me…”

    “That’s not true,” said Talia, almost scoffing. Dalton scowled as he returned her gaze, but she turned away from him, smugly adding, “I’m sorry… but it isn’t.”

    “Listen, just because I’ve got this… badge or whatever doesn’t suddenly make me an expert on–”

    “You’ve – been – here – a week.” Talia’s voice was quiet, but sparks were shooting from her blue eyes as she rounded on him. “A week ago, you didn’t know what a Pokémon Center was. You’d never seen a Pokéball before. And now you’ve got a Gym Badge. You did more in the League in five days than people who have been around Pokémon their entire lives. Maybe… maybe you belong here more than you belonged there.”

    “So you’re saying I was born about a hundred and fifty years too late?” Dalton said flatly. “That’s really comforting…”

    Talia frowned.

    “So I’m to understand you seek truth as well?” Dalton heard a familiar voice. He looked up. Coming toward them at a slow trudge, carrying a book of some kind, was none other than the white-coated man who had yelled at him during his Gym match. Dalton leapt to his feet. The other man saw the aggressive motion and put up his hands. “I’m not here for a fight. I am here… simply… to talk. You seem like an intelligent young man – a young man that can be reasoned with.”

    “Have you been following us around?” Talia asked loudly, jumping to her feet. Almost on instinct, Dalton stretched his long arm out to block her.

    The man smiled. “That’s a spirited lady friend you’ve got there.”

    “Who – are – you?” Dalton asked.

    “Just a simple scientist,” the man answered. “If you must call me something… call me Colress.”

    “What are you doing here?” Dalton asked through grit teeth.

    “I suppose you could call it ‘research’,” replied Colress. Quietly, he reached inside his lab coat…

    Dalton didn’t have time to guess or wonder—

    “Talia, get down!” he snarled, shoving her backward and trying to shield her from Colress’s line of sight.

    “Easy, easy,” drawled Colress, yanking his hands out of his coat and holding them up to show that he had no weapon. “I don’t have any desire to hurt you… at least, not yet. I’d like to ask you some questions first.”

    “You’re not bringing me in,” Dalton replied, fear and hatred twisting his face into an unhinged smile. “Not alive, anyway.”

    “Hm?”

    Dalton rushed him. If Colress indeed had no weapon, it would come down to a hand-to-hand fight – a fight Dalton would win because he must. Colress jumped aside as Dalton swung wildly…

    A burning pain pierced the small of his back and spread through his entire body. Muscles were seizing in tandem; his insides were on fire. Worse than a blow from a fist, worse than a bullet (and he would know). He felt himself sink despite his will to stay standing. It was as if his entire body had frozen – as if someone had locked it, then thrown away the key. He felt grit on his lips, and now the iron aftertaste of fresh blood. His buzzing ears barely registered a piercing scream of his name. He was flipping in and out of consciousness. Spots were dancing before his eyes, which were the only things that could move.

    “Stay back!”

    “Don’t worry – he’ll live. He’ll just be numb for a while. I don’t suppose you know the answer to my question, then, Miss…?”

    Dalton struggled to move and managed a feeble sort of flail.

    “What do you want from Dalton?” He heard Talia’s voice.

    “What is it…?” Colress murmured. “This thing that allows a Pokémon to go past its natural limits? How did Dalton Gregg win against a stronger Trainer with a Pokémon that was clearly overmatched?”

    “It’s not something you would understand,” Talia replied.

    “Then help me.”

    Dalton closed his eyes. He was feeling muscles in his body start to twitch on their own. Something rubbed his face and he felt wetness.

    “Wake up… please… come on…”

    Dalton’s eyes snapped open. He recognized that voice! Whatever was talking to him had taken a step back.

    “Nina…?”

    The Nidoran was trembling furiously and not meeting his eye.

    “<You’re stupid.>”

    “What…?”

    Nina looked down at the ground for a moment. She tried to fix a hard gaze on Dalton, but fat, wet tears were obviously running down both of her cheeks.

    “<I SAID YOU’RE STUPID! You’re going to die, and then what am I gonna do!?!>”

    “Nina…”

    “Can you stand?” Now Talia was hovering over him, apparently distracted from Colress by his voice. Dalton felt a bit weak; he tried to rise to all fours. He moved gingerly, expecting one of his limbs to buckle under him. They shook, but they held. He staggered to one foot… then two.

    “Are you alright?” This question came from a most unlikely source – Colress himself. Dalton whirled around.

    “‘Alright’? What the hell did you do to me?” he snarled. Colress removed what looked like a short, black wand from his lab jacket. He pressed a button on it and a small, but very bright spark flew from the tip.

    “You made things more difficult on yourself than they needed to be,” sighed Colress, putting the strange taser-stick away. “I am not looking for a fight… well, not between us. I am simply looking for answers to my questions.”

    Dalton didn’t answer.

    “I’m not like the rest of the sheep…” Colress said. “A good scientist knows, above all other things, to think for himself. After all, that’s one of the few ways to discover something that hasn’t been discovered before.”

    “Get to the point,” asked Dalton. “What do you want?”

    “The power I’ve seen from your Pokémon was beyond anything I thought possible,” Colress said. This time, making a quick move to his lab jacket, he revealed his own Pokéball. “Are we taking the wrong approach…?”

    “You’re asking the wrong person,” Dalton muttered.

    “Am I?” Colress stared at the Pokéball in his hand briefly. Then, without further preamble, he tossed it into the air.

    Dalton watched as the Pokéball landed in front of Colress and burst open at its belly, spilling forth white light onto the cobbled ground. Even as the light began to take shape, Dalton realized he was dealing with a creature a bit larger than his own companion. The beast was black, four-legged, striped, with electric-blue eyes and a jagged mane that zigzagged up into a horn shaped like a bolt of lightning frozen in time.

    Dalton frowned, going to the pocket of his cargo shorts. “What’s that?”

    He pointed his new Pokédex at the unfamiliar creature. It took barely a second for a portrait of the creature to appear on one of the screens. “Blitzle – the Electrified Pokémon. When thunderclouds cover the sky, it will appear. It can catch lightning with its mane and store the electricity.”

    Colress’s eyes gleamed forebodingly behind his glasses. “I’ve showed you mine – now show me yours.”

    “I thought you guys’ utopia was a world where Pokémon are off-limits to human beings,” Dalton said.

    “That’s what N desires, at any rate,” replied Colress. “But then, N has the idealism and purity of a child. He questions nothing. You and I, though… we’re seekers of truth. So… it’s only appropriate that we test our truths against each other.”

    Dalton swallowed hard. “Nina, are you feeling up for it?”

    Nina approached at his ankles, looking at the rearing Blitzle. “<Is this where I’m supposed to make some sort of speech about how you protected me and earned my undying loyalty? …Fat chance.>”

    “Heh,” Colress chuckled as a smirk crossed his face. “And to think, I half expected you to back down. Blitzle, use Quick Attack!”

    Blitzle reared up onto its hind legs and closed the distance between itself and Nina so fast it looked like little more than a dark blur. Nina leapt out to meet it but the Electric-type’s speed and power were too much. It slammed into the Nidoran, sending her flying through the air in a long, slow arc.

    “Geez!” groaned Dalton as Nina landed on her feet in front of him and skidded back. “Nina, are you okay?”

    “<Don’t get all bent outta shape. I can take a hit, you know,>” Nina replied.

    “Alright, then… Scratch!” Dalton responded. Nina launched herself forth, bouncing her body off the Blitzle, who staggered backward a bit but didn’t appear to be too damaged. Her fangs bared in a snarl and she threw herself at Blitzle again, raising a claw. This time, with a panicked whinny, Blitzle jumped. Nina passed under it and hit the ground hard, rolling to a stop. Relentlessly, she bounced to her feet and again charged Blitzle, whose flank was exposed.

    A pained screech was the signal that this latest attack had hit its mark. Blitzle staggered sideways, shakily teetering on spindly, unstable legs.

    “Hold your ground, Blitzle! Quick Attack!” Colress shouted.

    Reacting quickly, Dalton cried, “Dodge and use Double Kick!”

    Nina leapt as high as her small, stubby legs would allow – just high enough for Blitzle to miss. Then, with a crunching thud, she drove all four of her feet into Blitzle’s back once – then again. She leapt away to Dalton’s side of the field.

    “Careful, Dalton!” came a warning shout from Dalton’s left. In the heat of battle, he’d almost forgotten Talia and Sionna were there. “Nina’s getting tired!”

    Dalton looked down at his Pokémon and, indeed, her breathing was heavy and labored.

    Dalton knew he had to end things quickly.

    “Nina, use Double Kick!” he shouted. Nina took a couple of deep breaths, steeled herself, then took off after Blitzle. For some reason, though her movements appeared sluggish, as if some unseen force was resisting her every motion. Blitzle dodged easily and, for good measure, sunk its horn into Nina’s back, sending her skyward, where she landed in a nearby fountain with a loud splash. After a tense second, Nina emerged, spitting and spluttering.

    “Well, looks like you’re all wet,” said Colress, a thoroughly malevolent smile crossing his pale face.

    “No!!” shrieked Talia, suddenly and desperately. “Dalton, Blitzle’s an Electric-type!”

    It took less than a second for Dalton to connect the dots. “NINA, MOVE!!”

    “Shock Wave, Blitzle!!” Colress snarled. The lightning-bolt horn on the equine Pokémon went a dazzling electric blue and began to crackle ominously. Zigzagging blue light struck the struck the water almost faster than the naked eye could track. Nina had jumped, trailing water back down into the fountain. The thunderbolt zigzagged upwards from the stirred waters, catching Nina in midair.

    “NOOOOO!” roared Dalton, his cry mingling with a hair-raising shriek of pain. He watched helplessly as his Nidoran fell, limp, into the fountain.

    “Hmm… it seems I’m left with more questions than answers,” Colress said a bit blankly, returning Blitzle in a red flash of light.

    “Nina!!” Dalton exclaimed, sprinting to the fountain and leaping into it to retrieve his Pokémon. His hands tingled a bit as they grasped her and lifted her from the water. She was shivering and convulsing.

    “I don’t necessarily agree with Ghetsis’ point… but I see it,” Colress muttered, seemingly to no one in particular. “To separate Pokémon from all human beings may be a bit extreme… not to mention terribly impractical. However, perhaps the world would be better off if we were to…”

    He looked up at Dalton through his gleaming glasses.

    “…Take that responsibility away from those not competent enough to handle it.”

    He turned on his heel and started away from them.

    Dalton fumed, eyes watery, snarling against the massive lump in his throat as he held Nina’s twitching form in his arms.

    “Vool-vool-piiiiiix,” mewled a worried-sounding Sionna.

    “Is she okay?” asked Talia next.

    “Okay?” snapped Dalton, shooting Talia a dirty look. “Let’s douse you in water and pump you with a million volts and we’ll see if you’re ‘okay’…”

    “Alright. Don’t bite my head off,” said Talia uncomfortably.

    “Well, that was slightly embarrassing, wasn’t it?” a low, silky voice sounded as Dalton waded his way out of the fountain, Nina in his arms. Both he and Talia turned toward the bench where they had been sitting a few minutes before. Relaxing there, arms and legs splayed wide, was a man with golden hair, a black fedora, and several days of stubble that didn’t quite add up to a full beard.

    Dalton went to step forward, but Talia pulled him back. Shooting a glare at the fedora-wearing man, she snapped, “I don’t know who you are, but we don’t have time for you right now. C’mon, Dalton. Let’s go.”

    And Dalton took off back toward the city at a sprint. Talia made to follow him, but stopped and whirled around.

    “If you’re following us… don’t,” she warned the mystery man, backing away before turning into a run.


    The first sign (other than Nina trembling and shaking violently) that something was seriously wrong was that Nurse Joy had taken one look at Nina and then had her ushered to the Pokémon Center’s Urgent Care Unit. Thus, Dalton and Talia ended up in the white-walled waiting room, which looked ominously more like a hospital than the rest of the Pokémon Center that Dalton had seen. In fact, this small, quiet room with hard-armed chairs and magazines seemed like the sort of place where good news was hard to come by.

    Dalton sensed Talia’s presence in the chair to his right. He’d spent nearly the whole time staring at his knees. A news channel played from the hanging television on the opposite wall, but as Dalton didn’t recognize any names, places, or things on the broadcast, it quickly became little more than background noise.

    “A new development in the case of the strange radical group that has been seen holding anti-Pokémon rallies across the region…”

    Dalton finally looked up. A suited man was explaining the situation, and Dalton caught sight of a flag with a very familiar symbol.

    “Without giving many details, the Chief of the Goldenrod City-based International Police said that the group was, officially speaking, classified as an activist group, protected by Unova’s dissent laws. He intimated, however, that a few known members of the group were being investigated for connections to several cases of Pokémon robberies – and that Interpol was closely monitoring the sect, as they do with all political extremists, for any potential ties to terrorist activity.”

    Dalton’s head dropped again. None of this information was new – nor did it surprise him at all.

    “Maybe…” he muttered. He shook his head. He couldn’t allow himself to think like that. But it was too late. Talia had heard and was staring at him.

    “Hmm?”

    “…Maybe all that stuff Ghetsis said…” he murmured in his quietest voice, as if ashamed of the notion. “Maybe…”

    Talia shook her head furiously. “No,” she said. “Of course not.”

    “Maybe Colress had a point, then,” said Dalton morosely. “At least people who can’t take care of Pokémon… shouldn’t have them.”

    “Pokémon get hurt, Dalton,” Talia said, putting a hand on his shoulder with the air of trying to explain a heavy topic to a small child. “It’s part of –”

    “The territory?” interrupted Dalton. “All part of battling? Why the hell are we battling, then? How can we – how can I…?”

    He buried his face in his hands.

    “Pokémon are living creatures,” he said quietly, shakily. “What if… what if your own family told you to go fight another family’s kid while the rest of the town stood and watched? That’s your idea of entertainment around here. It’s cruel.”

    Talia took a deep breath. “It’s only cruel if you don’t see what happ—”

    NO!” cried Dalton, leaping to his feet and away from Talia. “How can you… how dare you… there’s nothing you can say to justify this!!”

    “Mr. Gregg?” a very soft but very close voice uttered directly behind him. Dalton whirled around. He was staring right into the white hat (given the height difference) of Nurse Joy. She was half-smiling, seemingly realizing she’d walked in on an awkward situation. “Your Nidoran’s going to be just fine. Her injuries aren’t as bad as we originally feared. I’d probably recommend that she stay the night to rest up, but she should make a full recovery.”

    Dalton felt himself go weak-kneed with relief.

    “Also…” Nurse Joy added as a postscript as she walked away. “She wants to see you.”

    And, in a moment, Dalton felt steel return to his spine as his mind settled on a decision.


    It was horribly jarring to see Nina stretched out on a white bed, wires attached to machines streaming from her body. But Dalton thought of the alternative, and was instantly content – perhaps even a bit thankful. He slumped into the chair next to her bed, trying not to look at her.

    “<Are you okay?>” He could now hear and understand her speech as clear as a bell. There might as well have been another human being speaking to him.

    “Don’t say things like that,” Dalton muttered, still struggling against the lump in his throat. He stole another glance at her. She was laying on her side, curiosity in wide-open red eyes. But the sight of the dozen or so cords streaming from her tiny form made his decision that much more clear. Whether she would like it or not, he didn’t know… and, frankly, he no longer cared. He took a deep breath. “I’m letting you go.”

    “<Wait… what?>” Nina seemed very much shocked.

    “I’m going to release you back into the wild,” Dalton repeated. “Where you belong.”

    “<Wh-what?>” Nina’s voice turned into a heart-wrenching squeak. Dalton dared not look at her; he knew just by the sound of her voice that the tears were coming. “<Why? What did I do? Was it because… was it because I keep losing? Was it because I’m not good enough?>”

    “No,” Dalton tried to answer firmly, but found his own voice breaking as well. He tried to keep his eyes focused on the opposite wall. “It’s because I’m not good enough. I can’t do this. I can’t watch you keep getting hurt. I just… I just want you to protect you from getting hurt.”

    “<And you’re doing a great job, by the way,>” Nina responded bitterly. “<And after you throw me away in the nearest field a million miles away from home, then what am I supposed to do?>”

    “You can fend for yourself just like you’ve always done,” said Dalton.

    “<How can you say that?>” replied Nina. “<You know I can’t…>”

    “Then find another human, then,” snapped Dalton, jumping to his feet and making for the door. “One that will treat you a little bit better.”

    “<Do you hate yourself that much?>” Nina asked.

    Dalton stopped dead.

    “<I thought you had a dream,>” Nina said.

    “Yeah, I did, too,” Dalton answered. “But what right do I have to give a Pokémon orders? To tell it to do things that might get it hurt? Pokémon are our equals…”

    “<You don’t believe that,>” Nina growled.

    Dalton turned around.

    “<You don’t believe that,>” she repeated flatly. “<If you did, you’d let me decide what kind of job you’re doing as a Trainer… you know, since I’m the one that’s getting beat up and knows what it feels like.>”

    “I don’t need you to tell me how bad a job I’m doing,” Dalton answered. “You’re here because of me.”

    “<I’m here because of you,>” Nina repeated. “<I’m here because someone cares enough to make sure I get help whenever I get hurt. I didn’t have that on the outside. I haven’t had it… since…>”

    She shut her eyes tight and made a pained, choking squeak.

    Dalton felt his heart sink. “It’s okay. You don’t have to…”

    “<No… you need to know,>” she replied. Staring blankly ahead, she said, “<When I was really young, I lived with my parents near one of your huge camps. ‘Cities’, I think you call them. Your city kept getting bigger… and there was less food for us. Then, one day, my mother and father went looking for food… they never came back. Ever since then, I’ve been on my own.>”

    Dalton’s face fell as a terrible confirmation struck him; the gun turrets on the walls of Azalea City were never meant to be used on other human beings…

    “So, no family…” Dalton murmured. “Kind of like me…”

    “<The day we met…>” Nina went on. “<I thought you were going to die when you were lying there.>”

    “Then why’d you come back?” Dalton burst forth, realizing that he’d meant to ask this question ever since that fateful morning. “Why’d you come back after I told you to get away?”

    “<Because… I guess it was my way of saying thank you, to be there for you while…>” Nina trailed off. “<You didn’t deserve to die alone. Of course, we sort of got attacked by a strange Pokémon when…>”

    “What?” Dalton uttered. He hadn’t seen anything like that…

    Suddenly the door swung open. A head with flaming ginger hair peeked inside, wearing a serious face.

    “Dalton,” she said, “you might want to come out here.”

    And she whisked out again.

    Dalton stood. “Nina, you don’t owe me anything.”

    She had closed her eyes. She opened them. “<Has your leg healed yet?>”

    Dalton had to look – this seemed like such an out-of-left-field question. “No… it’s scarred over…”

    “<I’m sorry I hurt you,>” Nina murmured. Dalton thought this was a strange apology for her to make, seeing as neither of them had brought it up. “<I was trying to…>”

    She trailed off and turned her head away from him. She had been trying, if Dalton remembered correctly, to climb up on his knees.

    “<In the forests where I grew up…>” she said, still turned away from him. “<We used to mark things. So when other Pokémon came along and saw the mark, they’d know someone had already claimed it. I was the only one of my species in the forest. So everyone else knew, when they saw my claw marks on something… if something ever happened to it, I’d make them pay.>”

    Dalton blinked blankly as he stared at Nina’s back. He reached up and stroked her. “I’m not sure if I should be touched or scared.”

    “<Shut up,>” she said quickly. “<You’re not going to get rid of me that easy. If you leave, I’ll just chase you down.>”

    “You’re so stubborn,” sighed Dalton, standing up and heading toward the door.

    He had barely crossed the threshold back into the hallway when he saw an unwelcome sight – or at least, half of one. Talia was standing there (she wasn’t the unwelcome half), leaning against the wall as the fedora-wearing gentleman that had taunted him earlier stood there. Now that Dalton saw the man on his feet, he saw that he was a bit larger than average – about Dalton’s height, maybe an inch or two taller, and with quite a bit more bulk to him. But Dalton wasn’t so much concerned about the man’s size…

    “Took you long enough,” the blond man chuckled, finally removing his fedora. His hair was slicked back off his forehead, stopping right about his neck, at the borderline between ‘medium’ and ‘long’. “What were you doing in there – having some sort of deep conversation?”

    “Who are you?” Dalton got right to questioning, eyeing the man distrustfully. Looking down the hall, he added, “And how the hell did you get back here?”

    “On foot,” the man answered wryly. Dalton rolled his eyes.

    “I mean, past Nurse Joy.”

    “Gimme a break,” the man said sourly. “You think pretty, dainty, little Nurse Joy could stop someone if they really wanted to get in here? She’s gotta be a hundred pounds soaking wet.”

    Dalton’s eyes widened.

    “Don’t worry – Joy’s perfectly safe,” he said, trying to sound reassuring. “But it does prove my point about how lax security is in these Pokémon Centers.”

    “You didn’t answer my question,” Dalton said, undeterred.

    “Let’s just say, being me has its privileges,” the man said.

    “And who are you?” Dalton asked again.

    “Not a small-talk sort of guy, are you? Right to the point. I like that,” he replied, extending his hand. “Special Agent Phineas Assad – International Police, Unova branch.”

    Dalton stared at the hand for several seconds.

    “You’re Interpol?” Talia asked incredulously, walking around Phineas to Dalton’s side. She had her arms folded. “Prove it.”

    “Didn’t take my word for it, huh?” Phineas replied, going into his long jacket and pulling out a gleaming, silver badge. Not that Dalton would have known, but it sure looked well enough made to be real. “Not bad. They’ll have a hard time stuffing you into a van.”

    “What’s that supposed to mean?” Talia asked, hands on her hips.

    “It means it’s a good thing you have a decent head on your shoulders, because being pretty and stupid is a really bad combination. Anyway,” Phineas replied, turning to Dalton after saying this all very flatly and in one breath (Talia folded her arms and huffed very loudly), “it’s you I’m primarily interested in – completely from a personal and professional standpoint, you understand.”

    “I’m going to pretend you didn’t make things worse by saying that,” Dalton replied. “What do you want?”

    “Well… I’ve been monitoring your movements…” Phineas started – that’s when Dalton threw up his hands and groaned an oath. Phineas ignored it. “And I noticed you’ve rubbed shoulders with the group calling themselves Team Plasma a fair few times.”

    Dalton frowned. “So what?”

    “So most people that come into contact with them think they’re just a bunch of reactionary nut-jobs that celebrate Halloween year-round,” Phineas said. “Every time you come across them, you like to pick a fight. It’s pretty obvious you know something about Team Plasma that ‘most people’ don’t. But you’re not affiliated with any police force or investigative agency. In fact…”

    He paused significantly.

    “I’ve done a bit of digging and there isn’t much record of your activity before you showed up about a week ago to register for the Unova League,” he went on. “The League Registry says you’re from Johto. Is that true?”

    “Yes,” answered Dalton.

    “But something doesn’t add up…” Phineas said. “A seventeen-year-old from Johto just suddenly up and decides he wants to train Pokémon and just happens to butt heads with Team Plasma along the way? What’s your angle, really? Are you really gonna try to take down Team Plasma by yourself?”

    “If I have to,” Dalton said.

    “Why?” Phineas asked.

    “I have my reasons,” replied Dalton.

    “This is such a pain in the ***,” Phineas said, shaking his head. “Officially, Team Plasma is an activist group and not a criminal organization, so officially, to bring you in for questioning would be a huge kick to the Unova Constitution’s balls.”

    “Not to mention, you probably know more about Plasma as they are now than I do,” Dalton muttered.

    “‘As they are now’?” replied Phineas, shooting Dalton a questioning look. He shook his head. “Never mind. What I can tell you is that, ‘as they are now’, Plasma are a very strange group. Potentially dangerous. So watch your ***.”

    Dalton frowned as Phineas turned away from him. He was expecting to find out something he didn’t already know.

    “Don’t think you’re the only one that knows Plasma’s bad news, either,” Phineas added once he was several paces down the hallway. “If people know you’re fighting against Plasma, some of them will try to help you.”

    Dalton noticed the warning tone in his voice and replied, “You say that like it’s a bad thing.”

    Phineas sighed heavily. “Let me put it this way. You already have a good number of allies. Just make sure you find the right ones. Oh, and another thing; I know she’s cute, but you might want to think long and hard before dragging her along with you into this.”

    Without any further explanation, he walked away.

    Dalton’s lip curled. “I hate guys like that. What’s the use of having a conversation with someone if you’re gonna leave them with more questions than answers?”

    “Was he…” Talia uttered haltingly, walking up to Dalton’s side, “trying to hit on me?”

    “If he was, then that’s pretty sad,” Dalton said, rolling his eyes. “First off, I think he’s about thirty…”

    “Not thirty. No way he was thirty,” Talia interrupted. “And even if he was… I could pass for a young-looking twenty-year-old… couldn’t I? I mean… I look old enough. I think…”

    Talia’s eyes flickered down to her chest region before she looked up at Dalton again. Dalton, however, didn’t see this. “Uh… isn’t that beside the point? He doesn’t know you. It’s creepy.”

    “Almost as creepy as you hitting on a fourteen-year-old,” said Talia wryly, folding her arms.

    “Okay, I wasn’t hitting on Whitlea. Jeez. How many times –?” Dalton sighed. “Why are we having this conversation?”

    “Because I enjoy seeing you get flustered,” Talia replied, grinning. “It’s entertaining. So… are you okay?”

    “She’s going to be fine,” Dalton uttered. “Probably pretty soon. She’s back to cracking snarky jokes at me again…”

    “Oh… she’s the sarcastic type? Why am I not surprised?” laughed Talia. “But… are you okay?”

    There was a long pause.

    “I don’t know.”

    Talia frowned. “You look confused.”

    Dalton swallowed hard. “I am confused.”

    Talia paused for a second. Then, before he could react, she engulfed Dalton with her arms. She had a deceptively strong grip – Dalton wasn’t sure if he could have escaped even if he’d wanted to.

    “What was that for?” Dalton asked as she stepped backward.

    “For earlier,” she answered, not meeting his eye. “I mean… I know it turned out Colress didn’t have a gun, but… it’s the thought that counts, right?”

    Dalton swallowed hard. “I’m hungry.”

    “Me, too,” Talia said very quickly. “Lunch?”

    Dalton nodded wordlessly. Talia stepped closer to him and ducked, tilting her head. “You gonna talk this time?”

    Dalton’s lip twitched. “Maybe.”

    Talia smiled, apparently satisfied with his answer, and traipsed down the hallway. Dalton took one last glance over his shoulder, to the door to the room where Nina was recovering…

    Can a Pokémon choose a human being, then? I still don’t understand. Or, I don’t understand enough.

    I guess I have to keep going, then.


    END


    Dalton Gregg was a mostly-ordinary university student from the region once called Johto.
    Then a fateful encounter set him on a quest to change history.




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    Dude, really? It's meant to be YOUR birthday today, not ours... :P

    So, Colress utterly dominates. I'm surprised he didn't use a Magnemite, considering his final line-up. But then again... they don't learn Shock Wave as early, do they?

    We also see Assad, and despite the facade, methinks someone likes him... or the attention... :P

    Dalton, you silly goose, your journey's only getting started. You better get with the program before Nina does more that scalp your leg...

    L@er!

    P.S. Happy birthday! ^_^
    The Corei Quest's latest chapter: Chapter Forty Five: Game On (2 April 2013)
    PROJECT C-SQUARE STATUS = 100.00% Complete (11-12-2010, ca. 2:40pm GMT)
    HEART OF SEVEN STONES IS ON INDEFINITE HIATUS (REAPED) UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE
    Butt-ugly Banner by Me
    (Still waiting on the excellent Saffire Persian for another awesome TCQ banner!)

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