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    Note: Yes, this is a shorter chapter; yes, this also the second one for the day. :3

    Chapter Six: Battle for the Basic Badge (Part 2)!


    “Battle begin!” The announcer on the sidelines screamed this. Lenora and Cheren gained their positions and started to command attacks.

    Lillipup, the Puppy Pokemon. The long hair around its face provides an amazing radar that lets it sense subtle changes in its surroundings.

    Eevee, the Evolution Pokemon. Because its genetic makeup is irregular, it quickly changes its form due to a variety of causes.


    “Focus on the battle, Brittany! We could both get our first badge here!” Purple was frustrated with the fact that she was messing with a device at a time like this”

    “Stop worrying, Purple! I know what to do. I did my research before we came here,” Brittany exclaimed.

    “Are you two done yet?” Cheren asked as he flipped his hair to the side.

    “Ho ho ho, use Work Up, Eevee,” Lenora chuckled.

    “You use Work Up too, Lillipup!” Cheren pointed towards Lillipup, and she knew what to do.

    “That’s what I mean, Purple! I was about to tell you that they work in perfect synchronization!”

    The two dog-like Pokemon glowed orange. The atmosphere in the room made it clear that there was no joking in this battle. It was a serious quarrel.

    The two were now making copies of themselves. Double Team. The two, along with their copies, all hid underground. Dig. Only the Lillipup and Eevee came up. The copies were gone.

    “What are we going to do, Purple!? If they land a hit, we’re going down!”
    “Stand back... Psychic, Solosis! Then use Trick Room!”

    The levitating Pokemon’s eyes glowed pink. So did Lillipup and Eevee’s bodies. The two bodies flew out of the holes and then slammed into opposite walls. Solosis then used Trick Room. That was Purple’s secret. Purple knew that Brittany’s Snivy was going to be slower than the opponents. That’s why he used Solosis for Trick Room rather than Ducklett or Oshawott.

    “Thank you, Purple! Let’s finish this! Snivy, oh… let’s see… Uh-oh, Purple! I need my Pokedex to see Snivy’s moves!” Brittany was franticly grabbing at every pocket on her. She was snatching everything she was carrying with her. She grabbed everything from Poke Balls to money to her Xtransciever.

    “It’s not here, Purple!” In her panic attack, Brittany fell to the ground.

    “Shadow Ball, now!” Lenora grunted this while Cheren firmly commanded this.

    Lillipup and Eevee dragged themselves back to the field from the walls.

    They both summoned up pure darkness in the form of Shadow Balls. They launched the two balls, and they hit directly against Snivy and Solosis.

    Snivy and Solosis flew back into her and knocked her over. “I see it! We have a chance!”

    Her Pokedex was four feet behind her. She couldn’t reach with Snivy and Solosis on her, though!

    “We’ll finish it before you ever get the chance to attack. Cheren, now!”
    Lillipup and Eevee jumped up into the air and launched their double Shadow Balls again.

    “Brittany, get your Pokedex. My Solosis isn’t strong enough to knock them out. I’m using Solosis to help your Snivy! Here I go again. Solosis, use Psychic to slow down their Shadow Balls and then use Shadow Ball to destroy theirs!”

    Solosis used Psychic to slow the Shadow Balls down just like Purple said. In front of the Cell Pokemon, another dark, shadowy aura ball appeared. Solosis launched it, and it destroyed the other two Shadow Balls. Solosis, proud of himself, started to grin.

    Brittany had Snivy get off of her too and grabbed her Pokedex. “Ah! Snivy, gather your opponents with Leaf Tornado!”

    Snivy jumped right back into the action. Snivy ran halfway across the field and flipped upside down, almost standing on his head. Snivy started rotating his own body, and leaves gathered in the field. All of the leaves were gathered in one tornado.

    Eevee and Lillipup were sucked into the tornado.

    “Eevee, stay strong! Cheren, help in some way!”

    “Lillipup, you stay strong too. Both of you, use Shadow Ball!”

    The failed attempts at Shadow Ball just bounced off of the leaves and exploded. With every second that passed, the two Pokemon were taking damage in the leafy tornado. “Now, Snivy, demand your Iron Tail onto their furry bodies!”

    “Nice saying, Brittany! You’re starting to sound like a connoisseur like Cilan,” Purple whole-heartedly chuckled.

    Brittany laughed, and pointed to Snivy. Snivy gave a sly smirk, and let go of the tornado. It went rampant! Snivy jumped back up into the air, and his tail turned black as night. Snivy was higher than Eevee and Lillipup now. He slung his Iron Tail, and it was a critical hit against the opponents!

    “AHHHH! CHEREEEENNNNN!”

    “Calm down, Lenora! Stop losing your cool!”

    Eevee and Lillipup hit the dirt at Lenora and Cheren’s feet. They’re done for this battle.

    “We won! Thanks, Purple for your help! We both got Basic Badges!”

    Lenora and Cheren returned their Pokemon to their Poke Balls so they could rest, and Cheren walked across the battlefield.

    “That was a nice battle,” a voice from behind exclaimed with joy.

    “Oh, Bianca! Anyway, here you two go! I present you two with the Basic Badge!”

    Bianca walked up and joined them. She was very happy for them.

    Brittany and Purple each picked up their Basic Badges. “Umm… Where do we put these?”

    “That’s why I’m here, Brittany!” Bianca reassured.

    “Huh? Bianca?” Brittany confusedly said.

    “I forgot to give you two your Badge Cases when I saw you earlier.”

    Bianca reached into her bag and pulled them out. “What are you doing!? Get back in there!”

    “What are you talking about, Bianca?” Purple had the slyest look on his face.

    A head popped out of Bianca’s bag. It was a furry, Normal-type Pokemon. Minccino!

    “Get back into your Poke Ball, Minccino!” Minccino touched the Poke Ball and went back inside. “I’m sorry, everyone. Minccino comes out of his ball every time I pick something up out of my bag. It’s a very neat Pokemon. It likes to clean.”

    “It’s alright. Ha ha ha.” Purple chuckled, and he and Brittany left the gym.

    “Brittany, I think this is where we say goodbye. I got you to your starter Pokemon, and we even had a gym battle! I had fun, Brittany.”

    “Purple… I had so much fun! What do you say about traveling together?”

    “Brittany, I don’t think I could do that. It would put you in danger. The purpose of my adventure is to stop an evil woman. I can’t let you come along. I’m sorry.”

    “Bye…” Brittany walked away, head down. She was starting to cry. She was starting to like Purple.

    Brittany headed to the Floccesy Ranch. All she could see were flowers and plants everywhere. There were trees lining the pathways. It was fall, so the trees were turning all shades of red, orange, and yellow. There was a ranch house in the middle. A woman and a younger boy were standing outside with their pet Herdier.

    She walked into the grass so she could cut through it, and she was attacked!

    Purple chose a different route. He headed back to Nacrene City. Once he got close to the entrance of Pinwheel Forest, his Ducklett came out on his own and flew into the forest.

    “ROARRR!”

    The roar startled Purple to where he almost fell to the ground.

    Without paying attention, he ran into the woods yelling, “Ducklettttttt!”
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    Awesomesause. I think Brittany will go after purple even though he told her she couldn't... it just feels like the character would do that. Nice ending: some screaming out for their pokemon, works really well in the story line.


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    You and your cliffhangers

    I love all of your references to the tv show and the manga, really creative.
    Im certianly waiting for the next chapter, keep it going!

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheSketchQueen View Post
    Awesomesause. I think Brittany will go after purple even though he told her she couldn't... it just feels like the character would do that. Nice ending: some screaming out for their pokemon, works really well in the story line.
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    You and your cliffhangers

    I love all of your references to the tv show and the manga, really creative.
    Im certianly waiting for the next chapter, keep it going!
    Thanks to you both! I don't know when I will get the next chapter up. It will probably be tomorrow.
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    Chapter Seven: Virizion and Cobalion! Encounters of Legendary Proportions!



    “Cobal, Cob! Cobalion!”

    “Ducklett, come back!”

    “Viri!”

    Purple was running into Pinwheel Forest. Little did he know that he was about to take sight of two of the infamous legendary Pokemon of Unova.

    He slowed down when he came across the entrance. Tons of Pokemon were standing around the entrance and just inside. He could see his Ducklett flying past some wild Petilil and Cottonee. Trees covered the entire forest. Some places in the forest were even inaccessible. Logs had been put there to connect one part to another.

    He could see the wild Pokemon battling. Shelmet and Karrablast were duking it out. The Pokemon he didn’t expect to see- ever- were standing right in front of him. Virizion and Cobalion were standing in the clearing.

    Purple’s Ducklett went over and started to talk to them. This obviously scared them. The two legendary Pokemon left Pinwheel Forest before Purple could even scan them on his Pokedex.

    “Land over there, Rufflet.”

    Purple asked, “Why did you fly in here, Ducklett?”

    “Your Ducklett obviously felt the presence of the legendary Pokemon,” the boy from the plane and museum said as he walked up to him. “Thank you, Rufflet. You can take a rest.” The boy put Rufflet in his Poke Ball and continued walking up to Purple. Purple didn’t know what it was, but something was ominous about this guy.

    The guy continued, “Ducklett was obviously raised well. I saw how Ducklett came out of its Poke Ball on its own to see them. My Rufflet was already out, and he didn’t even sense them. That’s really saying something about the compassion you have towards your Pokemon. Kudos to you.

    “Th-thank you! You can return too, Ducklett.” Ducklett did so, and then the guy continued on.

    He continued to add, “The reason they were here is because… something bad is about to happen to the entire Unova region. I’ve been forewarning people, but I can’t reach the entire region. Let me explain.”

    He explained the story. According to the legends he heard as a child, Cobalion is the leader of the Muskedeers- a nickname given to them since they represent the Three Musketeers and kind of look like deer. Muskedeers live in three key points in Unova. Virizion lives in Pinwheel Forest, Cobalion lives in Mistralton Cave, and Terrakion lives in Victory Road.

    “So, why was Cobalion here? This is Virizion’s domain,” Purple stated and asked.

    “That’s the thing. The Muskedeers can sense trouble. Cobalion is the leader, so he came here to recruit Virizion because he knows Unova is in danger. My guess is that their next rendezvous will be Victory Road to recruit Terrakion,” he furthered.

    “And that danger is Veronica, right?”

    “That’s my thought, also. The only way we can stop her is to get to Terrakion before Virizion and Cobalion. If we do, we can convince it to help. If it helps, the other two will too! The only downside is-“

    “-that we will both need eighth badges to get into Victory Road,” Purple finished.

    “Precisely.”

    “Karra!”

    “Shelm!”

    The Karrablast and Shelmet who were fighting before were now falling downhill towards the two boys.

    “Go, Poke Ball!”

    The unnamed boy threw a Poke Ball at the Shelmet. All that was left was Shelmet’s silhouette. Shelmet was absorbed into the Poke Ball. Karrablast looked around awkwardly, probably wondering where its sparring partner had gone.

    “I caught a Shelmet. Hmm, nice! Purple, you should catch that Karrablast!”

    “Okay, go, Oshawott!”

    Oshawott appeared before their eyes. Karrablast just looked at the two boys. Karrablast started spinning in circles, horn starting to glow.

    “I don’t know what that is, but use Aqua Jet to knock it out of spinning!”

    A veil of water splashed onto Oshawott. Oshawott swam through the air, covered in the veil of water. The cerulean tube of water hit Karrablast and did knock it out of the spin like Purple wanted.

    Karrablast wasn’t happy, however. Karrablast outlined itself in yellow and rammed itself into Oshawott. The Otter Pokemon flew back and landed in the grassy dirt of the Pinwheel Forest. Karrablast landed back to where it had previously stood, but this time it was bending over from recoil damage.

    Purple threw the Poke Ball, and, just like Shelmet, Karrablast had been caught.

    The ominous but informative boy threw Rufflet’s Poke Ball into the air to release it. Rufflet flapped its wings and came down. He grabbed Rufflet’s talons and started to fly off.

    “Oh, and Purple, my name is G-“

    The cry of Virizion cut off his sentence. By the time Purple could hear again, the boy was gone. Virizion wanted everyone to know that it was leaving the forest.

    “Oh, well. On to the Skyarrow Bridge!”

    While Purple was catching up with Ducklett and actually catching Karrablast, Brittany was under attack.

    “Snivy, please defend me!”

    Brittany was under attack by a wild Riolu! The Floccesy Ranch wasn’t as peaceful as she had thought.

    “Snivy, use your Leaf Tornado!”

    Snivy maneuvered its tail in the same way it had at the Aspertia City Gym. Riolu was sucked up just like predicted. What Brittany didn’t predict were Riolu’s amazing skills.

    “Snivy, use your Vine Whip to stop it from leaving! I’m determined to catch it now!”

    Riolu had already used its Quick Attack and Force Palm attacks to scatter all of the leaves. Snivy’s vines wrapped around Riolu’s black and blue body. Under Brittany’s command, Snivy threw Riolu into the air and Iron Tailed it into the dust.

    “Here goes nothing. My first capture!” Brittany threw the Poke Ball. She was on edge more than anyone. She had never made a capture before, and she was so scared that it would fail.

    The Poke Ball tinkered around three times and clicked.

    “I… actually… captured a Riolu!”

    She grabbed the Poke Ball and hugged her Snivy.

    “Thank you and congrats, Snivy,” she congratulated.

    When she thought her problems were solved, her eyes caught glimpse of the Pokemon of her dreams.

    “I must have you! You are the most adorable Pokemon I have ever seen! Riolu, use Force Palm on it!”

    The Emanation Pokemon ran on its tip toes across the ranch. Riolu’s palm glowed a light yellow and hit the Polka Dot Pokemon. When it made contact to the blue stomach, it unleashed the powerful after-effect of Force Palm, a strong beam that causes paralysis.

    The little, blue Pokemon bounced on the ground, unconscious.

    “Go, Poke Ball!”

    This time, when the ball hit and started rolling, it popped back open. The Polka Dot Pokemon used Bubble on Riolu and Snivy both. Both slid back a few feet back, but no real damage was done.

    Riolu hit it with a Quick Attack, and Brittany threw another Poke Ball at it. Starting to feel like a failure, Brittany was really hoping it would work this time.

    It worked.

    “That was some nice work,” and old man said when he walked up to Brittany. “I can see that you are disappointed in yourself for taking two times to capture that Azurill. Don’t be. I used to be the champion of the Unova Region, and I still can’t catch everything in one hit. Your Pokemon- Snivy, Riolu, and Azurill- all want to train hard with you. I see it in their eyes.”

    Meanwhile, in Sinnoh…

    “Cynthia, something is wrong! The researchers at each lake- Verity, Valor, and Acuity- are reporting that the legendary Pokemon are waking up and leaving their lakes. Something is wrong. I need you to investigate!”

    “Okay, Grandma Carolina. I’m on it.” Cynthia hung up her Pokegear. “That’s weird. The pixies haven’t come out of their respected lakes since the Dialga and Palkia event, and that happened years ago. Well, I guess this is a champion’s duty after all.”

    She climbed into her car and went straight toward Mt. Coronet, the location in which the pixies were headed.
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    Oooo... The spirits... Now I did not see that coming! I can't wait to see how this turns out! The boy (who I'm assuming is Grey) sounds like my kind of kid; dark, mysterious, and overall cool. Plus, adding a Riolu just makes this so much cooler.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klizcool View Post
    Oooo... The spirits... Now I did not see that coming! I can't wait to see how this turns out! The boy (who I'm assuming is Grey) sounds like my kind of kid; dark, mysterious, and overall cool. Plus, adding a Riolu just makes this so much cooler.
    I'm kind of basing Brittany's team off of my Black 2 team. -.- But, the spirits plat a vital role in this! You will just have to wait and see what happens! I'm glad you like the boy, too!
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    I had intended to write and add tonight, but I fell asleep for a couple hours. Naps are always good. I should have the next chapter tomorrow then.
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    Chapter Eight: The Venomous Virbank Gym!


    “Since you have a starter Pokemon, I assume you have challenged the gym in Aspertia City. Am I right?”

    “Yes, Mr. Alder! Me and a… close friend… had a tag battle with Lenora and Cheren. We won and both got Basic Badges!”

    “That’s quite impressive for a young trainer like yourself, Brittany. With that kind of skill and now that you have three Pokemon, I think I know the perfect place for you. Follow me.”

    Alder, the ex-champion of the Unova region, escorted Brittany off of the Floccesy Ranch and into Floccesy Town. The town had school kids going to school. It was rather early in the morning now. After complimenting Brittany the night before, Alder made a campfire and the two camped at Floccesy Ranch for the night.

    “Brittany, I introduce to you my hometown of Floccesy. Floccesy Town is full of young kids from all over Unova. They come to the school I run out of my house. My grandson stopped attending the school not that long ago, actually. Anyways, sorry for getting off-track; I’ll show you the way to the next city with a gym.”

    Alder led Brittany through the small town. When they came upon the next route, there was a strange glow in the nearby forest. Brittany saw the faint outline of a blue Pokemon. She quickly but precisely grabbed her Pokedex to see if the silhouette was clear enough to get a good reading on it.

    Keldeo, the Colt Pokemon. When it is resolute, its body fills with power and it becomes swifter. Its jumps are then too fast to follow.

    “Keldeo…”

    The blue silhouette jumped out of the forest and into the morning sun.

    “Did you say something, Brittany?”

    “Um, no, sir. Let’s keep going.”

    After a brief walk, Alder said, “There you go, Brittany. The entrance to Virbank City is right through that tunnel. Have fun, be safe, and good luck at your gym match!”

    “Thank you so much!” She gave a warm smile and ran off. She turned around and waved as a way of appreciation.

    Route 20 was a vast route. Grass covered most of it. Many trainers were gathered around at various points, looking for challengers. Brittany faced them all as training for her battle.

    “Azurill, knock out Patrat with Bubble!”

    “No, Riolu! Finish that pesky Sunkern off with Force Palm! I’m not letting you lose!”

    “Gah… Leaf Tornado that Psyduck, Snivy!”

    The battles ended with Brittany being the victor of them all. Upon entering Virbank City, she went straight to the Virbank City Gym. It was raining heavily in town, so she was trying to find her way sooner rather than later.

    Virbank City was pretty big. It was bigger than most cities Brittany had been to. She liked to think Virbank was sort of like Lilycove or Slateport back home in Hoenn. Although she wouldn’t admit it, she missed her father and all of Hoenn.

    Brittany wanted to see many places in Virbank City, such as Pokestar Studios, but she knew the gym came first. Her ultimate goal was to catch up with Purple and help in the Unova crisis. Purple had called her on her Xtransciever back at the Floccesy Ranch.

    “Hey, Brittany! I’m sorry I had to leave so abruptly. I was, and still am, dealing with something. I have to become stronger and stop the crisis that’s happening in Unova.”

    “Purple, you have to let me help you! I’m currently with the former champion of Unova!”

    “Alder!? You’re with Alder!?”

    “Yeah, that’s right. Why?”

    “He’s world famous! If Alder recognizes your skill, maybe you are a great trainer! I mean, I already knew you were, but I might just let you help.”

    “I’ll help no matter what you say, Purple! I’m getting stronger!”

    “If you really want to help, get eight gym badges and meet me in Opelucid City.”


    When Brittany thought of their conversation, she smiled. Purple was starting to have faith in her. She liked him, so it made her smile like a little schoolgirl.

    She needed to beat the gym leader of Virbank and then head to the next town.

    I can do this, she thought.

    “Hello, and welcome to the Virbank City Gym! What’s your name?”
    Without even realizing, she had walked into the gym! The gym is a… concert?

    “Umm… my name is Brittany. I’m here to challenge the gym leader!”

    “Hi, Brittany! I’m the Virbank Gym Leader. I’m Roxie. Prepare for me to sink my poisonous teeth in you.”

    The girl who approached her was as white as a ghost and had off-white hair. She carried around a guitar in the shape of a Scolipede’s horns. Her clothes were striped with purple and blue. She wore a determined look on her face, as if she was literally venomous.

    “My first Pokemon will be my steamroller of venom. Come on out, Whirlipede!”
    “What’s that Pokemon? I’ve never seen anything like it!”

    Whirlipede, the Curlipede Pokemon and the evolved form of Venipede. Protected by a hard shell, it spins its body like a wheel and crashes furiously into its enemies.

    “Whirlipede… Go, Azurill!”

    “You’re using a baby Pokemon like Azurill?” Roxie sounded like a punk. “It’s so cute!” Roxie’s attitude changed in two seconds. “Nevertheless, I won’t be holding back. Whirlipede, use Venoshock!”

    The Curlipede Pokemon started spinning. In its spinning state, multiple blasts of green slime were shot at Azurill. Azurill tried to dodge the best it could, but every blob hit.

    Azurill fell back onto the battlefield with swirly eyes.

    “Azurill! Roxie, you took out my Azurill with one hit! How is that even possible!?”

    “With enough training, you can become as punk as me! It is possible, you know.” Roxie winked after saying this and played her guitar. Her band members behind her started playing also.

    “It’s like they’re already playing a victory song. I still have two Pokemon, though,” Brittany whispered to herself. “Next up for me is Riolu!”

    Riolu came out and stood with confidence.

    “Gyro Ball!”

    Whirlipede turned itself into a ball and glowed a faint gray. Roxie’s Pokemon slammed itself into Riolu before it could attack.

    “Riolu, use Quick Attack. This is just a minor problem! Stay focused!”

    Brittany’s words didn’t even reach Riolu. Riolu was getting too angry at Whirlipede for it to listen. Whirlipede was repetitively slamming into Riolu.

    Riolu has taken a lot more damage than it was letting on.

    Riolu slammed Whirlipede back with Quick Attack, but the damage was minimal.

    “Here it comes!”

    Brittany couldn’t even watch. It was over. Whirlipede hit Riolu with Venoshock.

    “Riolu, you have to stop getting angry. Return. My third Pokemon is my faithful partner. Please battle hard, Snivy!”

    “Whirlipede, use Steamroller! Whirlipede’s signature is Steamroller. Just wait until we vamp it up with poison!”

    Whirlipede used Venoshock, but before it could hit Snivy, Whirlipede used Steamroller and ran into the attack. The Steamroller was now covered in poison!

    “You know that Snivy is weak to Poison and Bug-types. That’s why you’re combing them isn’t it?”

    She nodded.

    Whirlipede hit Snivy, and Snivy fell back.

    Brittany broke down into tears. “You were great, Snivy.”

    Brittany left the gym in a haste of tears and anger. Alder had told her of a great place to train called the Virbank Industrial Complex. That’s exactly where she went. Roxie was running after her.

    “Lady, you can’t go in there!”

    Brittany completely disregarded the warning and went into the complex. Roxie followed soon after.

    Two groups of Pokemon were fighting. It’s Electric-types versus Fire-types! Brittany ran right into the battle.

    Leading the Fire-types was a Magmortar, and an Electivire was running the Electric-types. Co-leading the teams were Arcanine and Magnezone, respectively. The Fire-type’s underlings were Growlithe, Magmar, and Magby. Magnemite, Magneton, Elekid, and Electabuzz were the underlings for the Electric-types.

    “Ahhh! Help,” Brittany yelled.
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    Chapter nine has been written, but I'm super tired. Therefore, I will post it tomorrow after school. Don't be too mad at me. :3
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    I get the feeling that you're going to start mixing the two Gen 5 story lines. Interesting. This is certainly going to be unique!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klizcool View Post
    I get the feeling that you're going to start mixing the two Gen 5 story lines. Interesting. This is certainly going to be unique!
    You're catching on. :3
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    Chapter Nine: Fire and Electric! The Toughest of Combinations!

    BOOM! An explosion lit up the entire Industrial Complex in an orange-yellow light.

    “They’re never going to stop fighting, Roxie! I’m really sorry for running into the middle of this fight. I wasn’t paying attention and-“

    Before Brittany could finish, another explosion blew up even more of the Industrial Complex.

    “It’s not your fault. The Pokemon here have always fought, but it’s never been this bad. I don’t know what’s causing it. Whatever it is, I’m going to stop it. Go, my venomous warriors!” Roxie threw three Poke Balls into the air. Out came Whirlipede, Golbat, and Seviper.

    “You have such cool Pokemon, Roxie. This is my fault, so I must help to the best of my ability. Azurill, Riolu, and Snivy, come out and help us!”

    Roxie nodded. A grin started to caress from her face.

    “Brittany, I’ll handle the Fire-types. You handle the Electric-types. Go!”

    Roxie hustled across the yard. As she ran, she yelled, “Seviper, Poison Tail on Magmortar! Golbat and Whirlipede, you two use your Venoshock attacks on the others!”

    Seviper hurled itself into the air. Its tail glowed purple, and it slammed it onto Magmortar’s head. Magmortar fell over, but it didn’t stay down long.

    Brittany was panting from the running all over and the battling. She barely managed to say, “Huff… My Pokemon.. Huff.. are fighting for… Huff… me! I can do better!” She stood up straight and got her head back in the game.

    Brittany thought back to when she and Purple had battled Lenora and Cheren. She and Purple had almost been beaten because of their unsynchronized work, but they persevered.

    “Okay! I got it! Combine your attacks at the foes! Use Leaf Tornado, Focus Blast, and Bubble, you three!”

    Azurill, Riolu, and Snivy launched their attacks at the same time. The three combined powers made on huge attack. It was headed straight towards the leader, Electivire!
    The attack was in the shape of a circle, with leaves from Leaf Tornado churning and controlling it. The Focus Blast from Riolu had broken up and made the spinning motion itself stronger. Azurill’s Bubble was inside the circle, getting stronger and stronger by the second.

    When the attack hit Electivire, it fell over in pain and fainted. The wild Pokemon that were following Electivire’s orders stopped and left.

    On the other side of the battle, Roxie was struggling.

    BOOM! CRACKLE!

    Whirlipede and Golbat hit the ground, unconscious. Seviper wasn’t far behind.

    “Magmortar is just too strong for me, Brittany. I need help,” Roxie plead.

    Brittany couldn’t even react. “A… gym leader… of all people needs my help?”

    The Blast Pokemon aimed its canon-like arm at Brittany’s Pokemon. It took aim, and launched the most powerful Flamethrower attack it could possibly muster.

    The Flamethrower hit all three of Brittany’s Pokemon, but a strange glow appeared right before it did. When the blast was over, Brittany’s Pokemon were alright! But standing in their places were…

    “Servine, Lucario, and Marill!?”

    Servine, the Grass Snake Pokemon and the evolved from of Snivy. It moves along the ground as if sliding. Its swift movements befuddle its foes, and it then attacks with a vine whip.

    Lucario, the Aura Pokemon and the evolved form of Riolu. A well-trained one can sense auras to identify and take in the feelings of creatures over half a mile away.

    Marill, the Aqua Mouse Pokemon and the evolved form of Azurill. The oil-filled end of its tail floats on water. It keeps Marill from drowning even in a strong current.


    “Wow, Brittany! All three of your Pokemon evolved just in time to save all of us!”

    “According to the Pokedex, they even have new moves! Let’s try them out, guys! Marill, you can try your new Aqua Tail. Lucario, for you, it’s Aura Sphere. Servine, your new attack is Twister! Launch them at Magmortar!”

    Lucario positioned his hands in front him and gathered all of his possible aura. He concentrated it into a sphere and launched it.

    Marill jumped up into the air. Her tail turned a cerulean blue, and she slammed it into Magmortar.

    Servine turned around and spun his tail over and over. A Twister attack and formed and sent Magmortar blasting off into the night sky.

    “That was well done, Brittany. For saving me and demonstrating amazing battle skills, I would like you to have the Toxic Badge.” Roxie held her hand out. In it was the coveted gym badge of Virbank City.

    “That’s a kind offer, Roxie, but I can’t accept it. I want a rematch!”

    “If it’s a rematch you want, it’s a rematch you’ll get.”

    The next day at the Virbank Gym…

    “Now that my Pokemon have been healed from yesterday, I’m ready to rock and roll! How about just a one-on-one this time?”

    “That sounds great, Roxie! Lucario, I need you this time!”

    “You’re using a Pokemon that’s immune to Poison-type moves. That’s smart. However, my Seviper will still shred you to pieces.”

    The announcer said on the PA, “The one-on-one match between gym leader Roxie and Brittany, the challenger, will now begin! Seviper versus Lucario. Go!”
    “Lucario, go straight for the win with Zen Headbutt!”

    Lucario’s head glowed pink, and it raced across the stage towards Seviper.
    “Seviper, stop it with Flamethrower. Give it enough power to blow it back!”

    Seviper opened its poisonous mouth and let out a Flamethrower that looked, to Brittany, just as powerful as Magmortar’s. Brittany knew that that’s what Roxie meant by shredding me to pieces.

    “Cut through the Flamethrower with your Zen Headbutt! You’re powerful enough, I know it!”

    The Flamethrower hit Lucario head on. Lucario withstood it for a minute, but it blew Lucario back to the other side of the field. Lucario was blown into the air and hit the dirt hard. The impact left quite a scratch in Lucario’s health.

    “Flamethrower again, Seviper.”

    The second round of Flamethrower was coming at Lucario. The Aura Pokemon jumped high into the air and used Aura Sphere to break up the Flamethrower.

    “Now come down with Ice Punch, Lucario!”

    Lucario clenched his hand into a fist, and ice particles covered it. Lucario was coming at Seviper faster than Roxie had ever imagined.

    “Poison Tail.” Roxie said it with such simplicity.

    “What is she doing!? She knows that Poison Tail won’t do damage to Lucario!”

    Seviper’s tail clashed with Lucario’s fist. The attacks were even. Neither Pokemon was going to give into the other.

    Lucario jumped back to his own side. Seviper landed back on Roxie’s side.

    “It’s all very simple. I wasn’t using the attack to do damage. I was using it to stop your attack, Brittany.” She laughed as if she had real venom in her blood.

    “ThunderPunch, Lucario.”

    Lucario’s feet moved across the field so quickly that nobody in the crowds even saw Lucario moving! Lucario’s fist was illuminated with pulsing electricity.

    Seviper, however, did. Seviper was one step ahead and caught Lucario’s fist in its mouth! Seviper tossed Lucario around and threw him into the air.

    “Catch yourself in the air! Use Aura Sphere when you do!”

    Lucario fumbled for a few seconds but caught himself just in time. Seviper was hurdling itself at him. Lucario gathered up another Aura Sphere and flung it at Seviper.

    “Dark Pulse!”

    Seviper opened its mouth again and this time, instead of biting Lucario’s hand, it let out the beam of dark, black-purple rings at the Aura Sphere. Dark Pulse sliced through Aura Sphere and hit Lucario in the chest. Lucario hit the ground and could barely get up. When Seviper landed, it was also winded.

    “I know exactly what I’ve got to do. Lucario, go in with Zen Headbutt again.”

    Lucario’s head glowed pink for the second time in the battle. He pitched himself at Seviper, and Seviper planned on using the same old trick.

    “Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me,” Brittany very clearly stated.
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    Quick typo, I noticed that you called Riolu A Lucario before it evolved. Other than that, Awesome!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klizcool View Post
    Quick typo, I noticed that you called Riolu A Lucario before it evolved. Other than that, Awesome!
    Did I really? That kind of ruins it. Thanks for telling me; I'll fix it.
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    Sorry to be overly critical, I'm tough into fixing up mine. By A LOT. So I'm in that correcting mood.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klizcool View Post
    Sorry to be overly critical, I'm tough into fixing up mine. By A LOT. So I'm in that correcting mood.
    You're fine, really! I'm glad you told me. If not, I wouldn't have known and it wouldn't have been fixed.
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    Alright

    I just don't want to come across as rude. I personally don't like to nit-pick at other people stuff. I'm more of a compliment kind of guy.

    By the way, You really made Roxie the way that I imagined her to be, a venomous rocker girl.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Klizcool View Post
    Alright

    I just don't want to come across as rude. I personally don't like to nit-pick at other people stuff. I'm more of a compliment kind of guy.

    By the way, You really made Roxie the way that I imagined her to be, a venomous rocker girl.
    I didn't think you were being rude at all! Honestly! And thanks! I'm really trying to portray the gym leaders and other characters well.
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    Chapter Ten: Liberation on Liberty Island!




    “Seviper is unable to battle. The winner is Brittany, the challenger,” the announcer declared as he raised the flag that proved Brittany’s victory.

    Roxie’s band stood up with a look of confusion on their face. Roxie had the same look. In fact, the thousands of people in the crowd had the same look also.

    “What happened, Brittany?”

    “I knew what you would do. It wasn’t that hard to predict. I had Lucario secretly fuse an Aura Sphere into your Flamethrower. That’s where the smoke came from. While the room was all filled with smoke, I had Lucario finish the battle with Ice Punch.” Brittany smiled. She was so pleased with Lucario and herself.

    “That’s incredible!” Here comes her venomous smile again.

    A little freaked out, Brittany said, “Thanks, Roxie!”

    Brittany picked up the Toxic Badge and added it to her Badge Case. It rested right next to the Basic Badge, the badge that she and Purple won together. The badge that Brittany cherishes so much.

    As congratulations for winning, Roxie jumped onstage and her and her band played Brittany a song. According to the locals, it was the infamous Virbank Gym Fight Song. Brittany enjoyed it a lot. After it ended, Roxie and Brittany said their “goodbyes,” and Brittany left the gym.

    Brittany was walking down the street and whistling when she noticed a couple of shady looking people. All of a sudden, Roxie agilely ran right past her and started doing battle against the thugs.

    “Where are we?”

    “Brittany, what are you doing here? This is no place for you! Leave this to me, the gym leader!”

    “I’m here to help.”

    Brittany’s Marill and Roxie’s Golbat were battling all of the thugs' Pokemon. They were attacking with Lillipup and Purrloin. There were multiple Purrloin and Lillipup, though.

    Marill was using its newly-upgraded Bubblebeam to knock them off of their feet while Golbat came through and used Air Cutter to knock them out.

    Roxie grabbed some rope and tied the goons up. She started to interrogate them, but they weren’t budging.

    “Why are you here? You all have been messing around the Virbank Shipyard for a while now. What do you want here,” Roxie interrogated.

    “We-we don’t want anything! We just thought you might know where it is,” one grunt feebly said.

    “Where what is!?”

    “Team Underworld, the organization that hired us, wants to know where Liberty Island is.”

    Roxie questioned, “Why do you want to know where Liberty Island is?”

    “We don’t know why they want to know!”

    “Yeah, right. I’ll believe that in a million years… maybe.”

    “We’ve told you everything, now let us go!”

    As she had nothing to hold them for, Roxie let them go. The Team Underworld Grunts ran off into the bulk of the city. One grunt pulled out a cellular phone and dialed a number.

    “Hello? How was the operation?”

    “It went great, Commander. Liberty Island is just off of Castelia City. It’s just out of eye-sight from the city’s point of view. It shouldn’t be hard to find.”

    “Perfect. I’ll see you soon.”

    Back at the Virbank Skipyard…

    “I owe you some explaining, don’t I? Well, those buffoons had been lurking around her for a while. Thanks to the combined powers of your Marill and my Golbat, we’ve finally stopped them. However, I noticed that my research on Liberty Island is gone. I have to maintain the gym, so will you do me a favor?”

    Brittany nodded.

    “So, this is Castelia City. It’s so big,” Purple exclaimed as he walked out of the entrance that connects Castelia City to Skyarrow Bridge.

    The orange building was the Pokemon Centre. It was right in the front of the city. The GameFreak building was close to it. Purple kept walking past the skyscrapers when he saw someone familiar.

    “Brittany! What are you doing here? The last time I saw you was in Aspertia City!” Purple ran up to Brittany and embraced her. Brittany felt like she was on cloud nine.

    Brittany and Purple went to the Pokemon Center to catch up. They sat in black chairs with red plaid seat covers to make them more comfortable. Nurse Joy greeted them when they came in and also told them when their Pokemon had been fully healed.

    Brittany started the catching up. She told him all about catching Riolu and Azurill, about how she met Alder at Floccesy Ranch, and also about the mysterious Keldeo that she only saw the silhouette of. She told him about reaching Virbank City and losing to Roxie, about the incident at the Virbank Industrial Complex, and about her Pokemon evolving at the same time to save her and Roxie. She then told Purple all about the rematch at the Virbank Gym and how she and Roxie stopped the people at the Virbank Shipyard.

    “After that, Roxie asked me to do her a favor. I was told to come to Castelia City to watch for those Team Underworld Grunts. She also told me to be careful as they might try to pull something on me since I heard their plans.”

    She continued on explaining. Roxie gave her a ride to Castelia via boat. Roxie was generous in that way.

    Purple then caught her up. He told her all about how he had witnessed Virizion and Cobalion in Pinwheel Forest. He told her about the mysterious guy and what he had to say about it. He then shared his experience with Shelmet and Karrablast and crossing Skyarrow Bridge.

    “Skyarrow Bridge is so beautiful, Brittany. You really need to see it one day.”

    The two got their Pokemon back from Nurse Joy and left the accommodations of the Pokemon Center behind as they left. When they walked outside, a mysterious man snatched Brittany from right in front of Purple’s eyes. Purple saw him put her on a boat. The boat was white and had a solid blue stripe across both sides. The grunt boarded the boat also and sped off.

    Brittany’s cry for Purple’s help was getting distant to the point where Purple couldn’t hear it anymore.

    Purple threw a Poke Ball into the air and jumped while the Pokemon was being released. It was Ducklett. Purple was holding on to Ducklett’s talons. Purple gave Ducklett the command of flying after the boat that had just left.

    Ducklett made haste.

    On any normal day, Purple would have loved looking at the wild Basculin, Frillish, and Staryu that were in the ocean, but today was different. He was fighting for Brittany today, the same Brittany that he shared so many memories with, the same Brittany that he liked.

    Purple was half way to between the boat and Castelia City. He just needed to get to Brittany, but Ducklett was feeling weak from carrying Purple. Purple could tell because of Ducklett’s panting.

    Before Purple knew it, he was racing towards the cerulean surface of the ocean.

    Ducklett, who had dropped Purple due to exhaustion, was no longer in sight.
    “AHHHHH!”

    Purple was screaming because he was falling, but it soon stopped.

    “Huh? I’ve been caught.”

    A Swanna was carrying Purple towards Liberty Island, the place where the boat had docked. Neither Brittany nor the grunt was in sight.

    "You must be the evolved form of Ducklett. Hi, Swanna!"

    “Swa, Swan!”

    Purple patted Swanna’s fur, and Swanna, with new strength and speed, jetted to Liberty Island.

    When Purple reached Liberty Island, there were grunts everywhere. Purple didn’t know what to do other than battle. So, that’s what he did.

    The island was rather small, contrary to Purple’s initial thought. There was one building on the island. The island was only big enough to support the building. Purple went straight in.

    “Oshawott, come on out and battle!”

    Oshawott came out. Purple had returned Swanna. He knew Oshawott needed some training, so this would be the best time, he thought.

    While Purple battled numerous grunts, a strange woman with red hair was holding Brittany hostage in the basement. The basement started to glow. A small portal appeared, and the legendary Pokemon Victini came through.

    Veronica walked in and said, “I knew it! The Pokemon that live in the Secret Dimension are still tied to the places that they are from. Victini used to live here, so it is tied to this island.” She laughed evilly.

    Veronica wasn’t expecting what was about to happen, though.
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