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    Default The destiny strikes you (PG and PG-13 on last chaps)

    Hello! this is the first fan fiction that i made and im very nervious! *sighs* allright here i come!

    PG-13

    Chapter 1: A new boy in the group and the return to Pallet



    Ash was really happy for getting back from Hoenn after all his hard work he beated his toughtest opponent: Brendan. And after the victory, Brendan was thinking about joining to Ash's gang (i like to call it like that). Brendan asked Ash:
    "Hey Ash, man the battle that i made with you was really good and i didn't felt bad for losing and i want to be your friend, well... what do you say?

    "Hey we are already friends" Ash said with a happy face "So then, would you like to come with me and May, Brock, Max and Misty?"

    "Yeah i'd like to!" Brendan said very happy.

    "Ok so we got another guy in our group right?" Said May, Max, Brock and Misty getting up from the chair they were.

    "Yeah and he like too to come with us to Pallet town!" Ash said with a high voice.

    "Thanks a lot Ash!" Said Brendan

    After a time Ash was going to the forest and May followed him without asking him first (she followed him to spy him) then Ash stoped and got a book out of his Pack. May knew that she had to hide before Ash see her and she hop on a tree quickly and then she was seeing what Ash was writing.

    July 25th

    "here is another good day and im happy to get another boy in my group! his name is Brendan Birch and he's from Littleroot Town. He wanted to join with us to go to Pallet Town and to meet a new region: Kanto. Im so happy to get a new friend! now when i get there i hope that we can travel to a new region after all this!"

    Then Ash heard a noise from the nowhere and he went to see.

    May got down the tree and she picked up Ash's diary.

    "No i don't have to do this" May was thinking. "But what's bad to read Ash's diary"

    May began reading as she know more about Ash's trip at all the begigning (im wondering.... is Ash lost to don't know where did he left his things?)

    Then May noticed something that she readed it and after that she blushed:

    "1 year have passed since i have arrived in hoenn and i met a girl named May. When i met her she was about to start her Pokemon journey and when Pikachu was overloaded with electricity appeared team rocket and helped him to get rid from his problem but there was something that still is worrying me: about May's bike! Pikachu destroyed it (like Misty's) and now im trying to get the money to get her back her bicycle or have a way to fix the mistake! And that's not all... i was getting a weird felling towards her... i didn't fell this before im felling somewhat like i love her... and i'm not sure..."

    May was thinking: "How it can be? Does Ash really loves me? Im confused!" she said that with a red face. Then she saw Ash coming. May had to escape now and she went to the pokemon center.

    Ash got up his things and get back to the pokemon center and go to his room to take a sleep.

    Brock was thinking: "Ash was too late for dinner! Why did it took so long? He said that he went to do something important but he took so much time! What's wrong with him?"

    Misty looked and asked Brock:" Hwat's wrong Brock?"

    "What? Oh nothing!" Brock said

    "Maybe Brock is thinking..." Max said

    "Oh brother" Said Brock

    May come with the group and then she started to comment:

    "Hey! isn't great that we are gonna go to Pallet town? Is so exciting!"

    "Yeah" Max said " It will be great to know about Ash hometown!"

    "Hi everybody!" Said Brendan

    "Hi" Said all in unsion

    "Well i know Ash, May and Max but... i want to know about you!" Brendan pointed at Brock and Misty.


    "Well im Brock, from Pewter City. I was a gym leader but i decided to left the gym to my little brother Jiroo to travel with Ash in hoenn! And i really like to cook. My dream is to become a great Pokemon breeder" Brock told Brendan.

    "It's my turn. Im misty from Cerulean City. Im the younger of 4 sisters and i'm also Cerulean's Gym leader. My dream is to become a Water Pokemon Master!"

    "Oh just like me" Said Brendan.

    "Really?" Asked Misty with a very happy tone.

    "Yeah! That's why i started my journey with Mudkip!"

    And they keep their conversation for long time.

    At next morning Ash woke up very early and go to buy something.

    What will be that thing? When will the ferry to Pallet will come? That will come next time bye!!

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    Well this is it i hope you like it or maybe some guys can give me a hand.
    Also: I know that i need to work better on my english cos this notice is for you. I talk spanish to be honest but im giving my best for this! Maybe you can tell me my mistakes.

    And maybe you can help me with the second part!
    Last edited by Kiori; 4th May 2005 at 2:35 AM.

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