Hi all, first of all I want to say that I'm not a writer, I was just checking out some pokemon lore when I kinda realized that all the main Character trainers were named after a colour (Red, Blue, Silver, etc) so I thought of a Trainer named Grey. I will start by posting my prologue and the first 2 chapters.
So with that being said I would like to ask you all to read the fanfic I am writing.
I am writing a story about a young trainer and his adventures in the Pokémon universe. I tried to stay as true to the lore as I can possibly be. This story takes place before the events of Trainer Red (Pokemon Red and Blue).
I've posted the prequel, and the firs two chapters, I've also written chapter 3 and 4 which will be posted later. For now I'm just curious about other people's view on it. I have had some friends read it and they thought it 'wasn't bad' considering I am not a writer by profession or anything. Actually this is the first time I wrote a story ever.
But I am more interested in the opinions of people who have knowledge about writing and about Pokémon.
I would appreciate some feedback, because I want to continue writing this story.