Pretty interesting character there. I find it interesting how you kind of did your own thing with his psychic powers, and overall I find his powers acceptable.
As for Ramdyne government, well I probably should've talked about this earlier. The Aradis Parliment rules over Aradis in general, but each continent besides Naku also has a governer. So it's acceptable to say a there is "a member of the Ramdyne government", since this person could be working for the governer of Ramdyne.
Anyway, Ian is Accepted.
@Flame Mistress - You don't fool me; Kareena has a British accent because you are British (at least I think so). :P And *Jean Grey* is in this RP, so you already know the answer to whether or not this RP will get a TVTropes page.