Ok let me spell it out for you:
1. Personality needs to be a good and long paragraph minimum.
2. History needs to be two paragraphs minimum, enough for me to understand the character.
3. You are missing a writing sample.
4. Please do not make a new post, but edit your old post. Delete the new post and just edit your original post.
5. The origin of your powers should be included in History.
I'll give you a couple more chances because I see you're new and you're really trying.