Quote Originally Posted by Yveltal96 View Post
well since you are asking about grammatical errors, the only one i found was instead of attacking you said attaching
i liked it though nice short story :3
i was thinking of writing one about scizor and heracross
Actually, Joltik's Species Type is the Attaching Pokemon. I forgot to add the part when Dawn scans Joltik & Dwebble much earlier on in the chapter. Also, it's an excerpt from my fiction, not a short story. Anyways, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

On your Scizor and Heracross short story, is it Scizor VS Heracross or Scizor + Heracross vs xxx or is it just a non-battling story.

Btw, did you like the strategy used?