Hello, this is my first fan fiction that I made. I want feedback on this fanfiction, so I could make it better so yeah....... Enjoy!
Rated PG-13 or below or not....depends
Genre: Comedy and Action
EDIT: This is the Prologue Arc, there Arcs in this story so I recommend that you would read all of the story so far before you review it.
Once upon a time, there was a boy named Idolon, he is from Lentimas Town in Unova. He is 10 years old and lives in a lonely house next to the Pokemon Centre.
He lives alone in that house ever since he was born. His parents have left him in that house with nothing but food, money, books, toiletries, appliances and......you get the point.
Idolon wears a white buttoned shirt with a red tie that is long enough to cover up the buttons , a deep black vest, a completely black businessman's hat and a completely black jeans with black and grey shoes. He has black eye mains and had a pale skin.
It may seemed that Idolon lives alone, that is until one fateful day.
When he was young, a group of kids dared him to enter the Strange House. Idolon initially refused but the kids kept calling him names. Idolon finally gave in and went into the house.
Idolon was somewhat afraid of entering the house, at first he wanted to enter the house when he was ready, because he heard that there are Ghost-type Pokemon over there.
Idolon loves Ghost-type and Dark-type Pokemon but he knows that entering a house filled with one of those types is not a smart move, but the kids pried him into entering the Strange House.
When Idolon first entered the Strange House, he immediately sense presences all over him, the Strange house has weird looking plants and old furniture that seems to be shaking, torn walls and a big messy carpet in the center.
At first Idolon was immobilized but then the sounds of the kids parents shifted him to reality, the kids outside then ran back to the town leaving Idolon in the house.
Idolon began investigating the pots and furniture. He then found a Pokemon floating above him, giving a surprise of a lifetime, giving him a fall on the butt to the wooden floor.
It was a Banette. Idolon have always wanted a Ghost-type Pokemon as his starter since he likes Ghost-types but he also wants a unique starter Pokemon that is not a Snivy nor an Tepig and not even an Oshawott. Idolon bought 5 Pokeballs so he could catch one. Idolon does not want to have Banette as his starter because it doesn't suits him and that he finds Banette a not good enough Pokemon.
The Banette was staring at Idolon as Idolon stare it back and felt a shiver down his spine. Idolon is afraid that the Pokemon would attack him, but it didn't. Instead the Banette left. Idolon thought he was safe until a lady appeared in front of him. It is a ghost.
Idolon had heard rumors of human ghosts appearing in the Strange House, but he thinks its an illusion made by Ghost-type Pokemon but the rumors turn out to be true.
Idolon was about scream, run, cry, then run again like a Skitty but then the ghost women talk
"Who are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupieuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupoopuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu"
Idolon responded "I a-a-a-am Idolon, who are y-y-you? And did you just said poop?"
"What are you talking about? I did not said poop hehe........ I MA GHOST!! OOOoooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh!
"Erm, Okay...." (She's one dang crazy ghost)
"I am err....."
".................................................. ......................................... DON'T JUDGE ME!!! I HAVE FEELINGS!! EVEN THOUGH I HAVE NO BODY AND NERVES!!!"
Idolon fidget and said"Okaaaaaaaayyyyy....... I don't know whether to feel scared or feel awkward..."
"Yeah I feel awkward as well, So why are you here young nosepicking one?"
"Okay, I do NOT pick my nose!"
"Whatever, why are in my crib son?!"
"Are you trying to Moder-"
"ANSWER THE QUESTION!!!!!!"
"I'm here because some guys dared me to come here and see whether or not I'm a wimp please don't hurt me please" Idolon answered as quickly as possible
"Grr... Dares...Kids...potatoes.... grr...."
"Err... Okay.. and I'm also here for a Ghost-Type Pokemon for a starter so..." Idolon tries not to questioned the ghost about the potatoes since he valued his life.
"Are you too young to get a starter Pokemon?"
"Okay.. Yes but I wanted a Pokemon not only for a starter but also......for a friend, I live alone and I am lonely, I got no siblings nor parents so I figured I should get a Ghost-Type Pokemon as a friend"
"Wow, that sadder that how I die.. its even more sad to think my death is less sad than your story" sniffs the ghost.The ghost starts forming spectrum tears
"So how do you die again?"
"I trip and fell..."
"I HAVE A CONDITION!!!! plus why would you want a Ghost-Type Pokemon as a friend? "
"I like Ghost-Types and Dark-Types"
"Oh, okay that's fine. Actually I think I have a Pokemon just for you!"
"Yeah, come out Misdreavus!!" whistled the ghost
A Misdreavus appeared as it phased through the wall
"This is Misdreavus"
"Misdreavus, is also alone, there are other Ghost-Types here but Misdreavus is the only one of his kind to be here and is quite lonely. I think he is suitable for you is he?"
Idolon looked at the Misdreavus and the Misdreavus looked back
"I figured he might be, so Misdreavus do you like to be his friend?"
"Well, it looks like you have a new partner!"
"Yes!! Erm... so do I catch him or something?"
Misdreavus and the ghost began talking about that and came up with an answer
"Do you need catch him to own him?"
"Actually, I do!" said Idolon after remembering the Pokemon Rules
"Okay, Misdreavus *pulls out a pokeball* are you ready?"
Idolon threw the pokeball at Misdreavus, the ball didn't even move and then the ball clicked indicating the Pokemon has been captured.
"Well, I'm gonna miss Misdreavus, but hey he got himself a friend now"
"Yeah" Idolon pressed the button on the Pokeball and out came forth Misdreavus
"I think I should let him out most of the time so that we can actually be best friends, is that okay to you Misdreavus?"
"Miss!!" cried Misdreavus happily
"Alright, now I can finally go back to sleep... Oh wait, I can't. BECAUSE I'M FREAKING DEAD!!"
And Idolon went out of the house away from that awkward crazy lady ghost with his new friend Misdreavus and went towards town.
And the house has gained a new resident.
And that's the end of the Prologue! I will be adding more chapters that is about Idolon's adventure.
PLEASE REVIEW!!!! Tell me if you liked the story so far and correct me of any mistakes so I can make this fic better
So Dormant signing off...