"Here is the arguable point I have noticed.
You write"Donphan lies on the floor", and then Tyson returns it. But, it is not clear that Donphan was KOed. I mean, it can be lying on the floor, but still be able to battle.
There were many examples of this:
1)Ash recalled Muk, who was lying (against Blastoise)
2)Ash recalled Donphan (against Schuckle)
Write "with spiral eyes", (Donphan gets knocked out), (Sharpedo's Surf attack hits Donphan hard, making him unable to battle/to continue the battle)"