22nd January 2013, 2:08 AM
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Legend of the Ten Scrolls REVISE
Hello. This is the revise of my Pokemon: Mystery Dungeon: Legend of the 10 scrolls story. Just like I said in the older version, I thought it was best sharing it with all of you. No mean comments please. I’m planning on making a trilogy of my own mystery dungeon reading series. I’m made another pokemon series called Pokemon: Experimentations. I decided to make this series comedic while the Experimentations I will be doing is more dramatic, bloodier and scarier. Also to warn you there will be some blood in some parts of this too (but it’s not like you’re actually going to see it).
My Pokemon: Experimentations series can be read here: www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?595646 The sequel to Pokemon: Experimentations called Pokemon: Experimentations 2 can be read here: www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?599619. The next sequel, Pokémon: Experimentations 3 can be read here: www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?625514 After you finished reading this fan fic, the side story sequel to this Mystery Dungeon, Journey To The Other Side Of The World fan fic can be read here: http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthread.php?627963
Here are the plot and characters:
Plot- Legends say that the Ten scrolls will lead you to a beautiful island with a temple full of mysterious and valuable treasure. To get each scroll, there are 4 gems you need to unlock each scroll. 6 heroes will take this challenge and become the first ones to succeed.
Pichu- The main protagonist. Pichu doesn’t remember who he is or where he came from except one thing. He was once a human. In order to remember again, Pichu must go on the quest to get the 10 scrolls and unlock the temple on the island and remembering about his past.
Tepig- He finds Pichu unconscious covered in sand on a beach. Likes to eat, make food, exploring and find lots of treasure.
Snivy- Wants to be better and cooler than everyone else. Afraid of heights. Like to get into trouble, get into a lot of fights and stealing things.
Oshawott- The only girl pokemon in the group. She is smart and sometimes thinks the other pokemon in the group act stupid. Likes to be in charge, observing things and being intelligent.
Pidove- The scardy cat of the group. Gets scared of even things that aren’t even scary at all. Wants to become the most bravest pokemon. Likes to fly.
Axew- The youngest and the crybaby of the group. Cries when he gets hurt all the time and gets yelled at. Likes to play games and being a copy cat.
Chapter 1: The Journey Begins.
“Huh? What… Where am I?” asked a yellow pokemon. “What is this place? It… looks like… like a beach. I see… water. Man I’m thirsty,” said the pokemon. He looked into his reflection. “What? Hold on. This can’t be… this… no… AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I’M A POKEMON. I’M A HUMAN, NOT A POKEMON! WHAT IS GOING ON?” he started to yell. He was shocked. He started to run. Suddenly he tripped on a little rock and knocked himself out against a bigger one.
“Hello? Hello?” asked another pokemon. “Anybody there? Oh… You’re awake” said a talking pig with red skin. He smiled.
“WHAT!? OH MY GOSH YOU’RE TALKING,” shouted the yellow pokemon.
“Uh… yeah… we all do,” said the pig a bit confused.
No… NO!” yelled the yellow pokemon all over the place. “WHAT AM I DOING HERE? WHY AM I HERE? WHO ARE YOU… Who… am I?” he asked weirdly.
“Whoa whoa whoa! Calm down! I’m not going to hurt you!” shouted the talking pig. The yellow pokemon calmed down.
“Hi. My name is Tepig,” said the talking pig. “Nice to meet you,” he said.
“Well hello uhh… Tepig… My name is uhh. I don’t remember,” he said with a sad face.
“Well you are a Pichu, so I’ll call you Pichu,” said Tepig and smiled again.
“Pichu… That sounds like a nice name” Pichu said. Then Pichu’s stomach growled.
“Oh… hungry?” asked Tepig with an odd look. “You know come to think of it, I’m kind of hungry myself,” he said. “I made some delicious food! But I left it near our home with our leader, Mewtwo. Let’s go, come with me,” he said. So they walked to a big house full of many pokemon. “Alright, we’re here,” Tepig said.
“You know. I was a human once,” said Pichu.
“Human?” I’ve never seen a human before, but I’ve heard of them,” Tepig said with a weird look. “So you have memory loss? Don’t worry. We’ll find out a way to get your memories back.”
“Alright,” said Pichu and smiled.
“Hello Tepig,” said Mewtwo and smiled. “Who is this pokemon you have brought here?” he asked.
“Oh, this is Pichu. He’s a little shy right now. He doesn’t remember anything,” Tepig said. "Also, were hungry and so I came to get my food.”
“Alright. Be right back,” Mewtwo said. He came back after a minute. “Here,” he said and handed them the food.
“Here you go,” said Tepig and gave Pichu a big fruit looking food. He was watching Tepig eat his fruit really fast. Then Pichu took a bite of his fruit.
“Hey!” Pichu shouted with the fruit in his mouth. “This tastes really good!”
“Thanks!” shouted Tepig. “Hey, let me show you around,” he said.
“Okay,” said Pichu. He smiled. They walked to the bedroom.
“This is where we will sleep,” said Tepig. They walked again and showed Pichu the dining room. “This is where we will eat after we complete our mission. When we finish our mission, we can eat anything and eat as much as you want.” He laughed. “Boy, you should see how much I eat,” Then he showed Pichu the game room. “This is when you have free time. You can play here as much as you want during your free.” They went outside the house. “You can do working activities out here,” he said. Then they went back to Mewtwo.
“Would you guys like to go exploring and find something for me?” asked Mewtwo with a smile.
“Oh yes! I love finding treasure and exploring!” shouted Tepig.
“Well you 2 aren’t the only ones going,” Mewtoo said.
“We’re not?” asked Tepig with a funny look.
“Nope. Say hello to your teammates on all of your missions,” said Mewtwo.
End of Chapter 1.
This chapter was 4 pages in Microsoft word.
Last edited by Tepig Pignite Emboar 969; 8th March 2014 at 11:41 PM.