27th January 2013, 2:50 AM
Hi, I am Drizzle Milotic. This is my first Fan-Fic so sorry if it isn't the best. I will try to uptade to story once every week, probably on Sundays. I am open for character suggestions and I would be very grateful if you would want to help out with the overall story plot.
Chapter 1: School and Stars
"Man, what a pain. Why do we have too go to school? All they do is teach us the same old stuff year after year." whined Mizu to himself while walking to school. Mizu despised school. He thought it was boring. It was not he learning that he disliked. He got top grades in his class. That's exactly why he had loathed it. He was bullied because of it . And it did not help he was wearing his new geeky school uniform. The uniform he was wearing was a composed of dull brown shoes, boring grey creased pants, white polo shirt with grey tie and then a grey jacket to go over top. They would probably make fun of that too, even though they would be the wearing the same uniform. Finally reaching the front of Kyoto high, he opens the door only to be greeted by a flood of students wearing grey and white.
Mizu managed to get past the wall of students and his way to his assigned classroom. The classroom itself had about two dozen desks for the students and one large desk for the teacher with a whiteboard behind it. Mizu and the rest class rushed into the room. A bespectacled woman wearing a red dress then walked into the room. "Welcome, class. I am your new teacher, Ms. Kingsley." announced Ms. Kingsley. "Now let's start with introductions. Ms. K then points to Mizu. "You there, why don't you introduce yourself?" says Ms. K. "Who me?" asks Mizu. " No, not you. The tall brown-haired one next to you." Ms. K sternly responded. "Hayato. My name is Hayato Sasori." the boy sitting next to Mizu announced. "Um, pardon?" Ms. Kingsley asked him. "I said my name is Hayato Sasori. You wanted me to introduce myself, right?"
"I did. Continue."
"As I said earlier, my name is Hayato Sasori. I come from the Osaka region. Hobbies, I have none, family wise, no one worth mentioning and in terms of personality, I try to to fit in."
"Well then, it's good to meet you Hayato."
Sorry about this chapter as it is incomplete, I was in a rush when I was writing this chapter and wanted to post some of the material. The first chapter will be finished tomorrow.
Last edited by Ekans647; 27th January 2013 at 6:41 AM.
27th January 2013, 8:55 PM
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