Starkrai: Sorry, but I'm gonna have to say this one is DENIED. The story is very Stu-ish: mysterious orphan is found by a powerful entity, given over to a peasant family, then grows up to be a war hero (never mind the fact that a fisherman's son couldn't afford proper schooling in this era)? Not only that, but he ascends through all the ranks of Knighthood, from page to squire to Knight to general, in only four years? That's about how long it takes to complete your initial apprenticeship. Read through some of the other SUs to get an idea.
Secondly, your SU is nowhere near high-enough quality to qualify you for a legendary Pokemon. The formatting is wonky, the details are practically non-existant, and frankly the Pokemon itself seems like an attempt at a self-insert, which simply will not do. In addition, you've disregarded the cardinal rule for choosing a partner - they must be a Pokemon that is found in Unova. Feel free to make a new SU though, we'd still love to have you be a part of the game.
RefreezePR: That is perfectly acceptable - as Ysavvryl has said a few times, Armor and Weapons can have any ability a Pokemon can use, be it an Ability or a natural skill or trait, such as a Ghost's immunity to Normal or Fighting type moves. You're RESERVED!
TO EVERYONE: The game begins later today! I don't have time to make the first post now, but I'll be back to do so later this evening. After I make the first post as Ernst, kindly wait for Ysavvryl to maker her first post as Aleksandr before writing your own posts. Thank you.
EDIT: THE GAME IS AFOOT http://www.serebiiforums.com/showthr...of-Unova-PG-13