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    *laughs* That was so funny! I loved the hilarious moments! Should ahve known it would be Alfonso. Anyway, this was a good chapter with action and humor=loving it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by PokeProphet
    Kiori: A pokedex entry about Advanceshipping hints? Farfetch’d, as the Pokemon that symbolizes Advanceshipping? On the Pokeshipping thread? Jokes!?!? You have a twisted sense of humour.
    Huh? XD I seriously never thought that I'd be in here, until Jo-Jo pointed it out just recently. But I still didn't get that part. XD;; Ah...I get confused too easily sometimes. >.>;; Anyone want to explain it to me? ;-;

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    -rolls over laughing- This fic gives me a good laugh. -bubbly eyes- I'm a Pokeshipper! Not a very active one, but one nonetheless! >_<;; -coughs- Can I~~~ be a part of it?

    -gnaws on sugar packet- I have to choose Meatloaf. xDD But I LOVE this fic.

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    Like I said before, the characters included must make themselves known at the pokeshipping thread, where PokeProphet and I will judge their worthiness. If your a big enough shipper, your in.

    Chapter Four won't be up 'till next weekend if I don't finish by Tuesday. I have a great idea, but need the right chracters. A little writers block.

    *Goes off and watches Star Trek next Generation.*
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kiori
    Huh? XD I seriously never thought that I'd be in here, until Jo-Jo pointed it out just recently. But I still didn't get that part. XD;; Ah...I get confused too easily sometimes. >.>;; Anyone want to explain it to me? ;-;
    An incident awhile back in the Pokéshipping thread where they were talking about what Pokémon represented Pokéshipping, and they made that comment as a side comment.
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    Thanks everybody for all your heart-warming reactions. I'll answer some of your questions right now:

    I'll tell you now that both me and WS agree that there is nothing going on between us. We're just really good friends.
    Well, I needed some pairings for the story, and PokeshipperVeteranshipping was the first one I thought of. I'm glad you don't want me to get it out of the fic. By the way, don't worry that you're the only one who's getting paired. I'm thinking of some very, very surprising pairings myself.

    Hard to believe Alfonso was the one. Then again, he did say that he loves to hear the sound of Pokeshippers hearts being broken in the morning. (He said that when Misty only made a Cameo appearance at the start of the Houen League.)
    Alfonso's character was perfect for the plotline. I'm really happy he wanted to participate.

    Can I be on the Contestship? Pretty please?
    Sorry, but no. I have other plans for you. Be patient for a few chapters, I promise you will make an appearance.

    By the way... Whatever happened to Mindripper? Did he just stop watching pokemon, or become another shipper or what?
    I have no idea. He's a name on the long list of Pokeshippers Who Just Went Missing. Maybe one of the older Pokeshippers knows. I'm glad you're enjoying this fic too, by the way.

    Ah ha ha, ah ha ha, ah ha...ha...*coughs* Yeah. Well, I got the PM about a few days before the post was actually posted, which confused me greatly.
    Sorry for the inconveniece! There was a bit of a misunderstanding between me and Kojho, which was totally my fault. He thought I would post the chapter right away, while I needed access to the computers at school, where I saved the document. Hence the delay. Again, a thousand apologies.

    Loved all the contestshipper angst DM13 had; just like him, no?
    Hey! I remember that one! So your taking real-life happenings and putting them in here? How weird is that? But in a good way, I mean...
    The story is a mix between things going on on the forum and things Kojho and I thought up for the plotline. We try to stay true to the characters, while creating the story.

    good update. I'm looking forward to chapter 4. May I suggest that you put the update in the first post, so the entire fic is in one post.
    I'm glad you like it buddy. But I think we will keep posting the story like this. This way works better for us. Sorry.

    Huh? XD I seriously never thought that I'd be in here, until Jo-Jo pointed it out just recently. But I still didn't get that part. XD;; Ah...I get confused too easily sometimes. >.>;; Anyone want to explain it to me? ;-;
    Well, it's sorta like this: I didn't want myself to be the Captain anymore. It was fine when this story was just a sig, but I didn't want to keep it up because I thought it would be arrogant. Which ment I needed two things; Somebody with the power and authority to relieve me from my function and a reason for the powerful person to be angry with me. I ended up with you for the powerful person. Since you're a mod AND a Pokeshipper, it would make sense for you to be my supreme commander. The reason for you to be angry with me was harder to think off. Then I remembered the two jokes I made a while ago about Advanceshipping in the Pokeshipping thread, and how you always disagree with behaviour like that. So I decided that that should be the reason for you to be angry with me.

    -rolls over laughing- This fic gives me a good laugh. -bubbly eyes- I'm a Pokeshipper! Not a very active one, but one nonetheless! >_<;; -coughs- Can I~~~ be a part of it?
    Like I said, we're trying to put as many people in the fic as possible, and there will be some (guest-)appearances, but it's really impossible for us to include every Pokeshipper on this forum. We would have a cast of over a hundred people. Still, we'll see what we can do.
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    Sorry for the inconveniece! There was a bit of a misunderstanding between me and Kojho, which was totally my fault. He thought I would post the chapter right away, while I needed access to the computers at school, where I saved the document. Hence the delay. Again, a thousand apologies.

    Yeah, there was kind of a mix up. I had the PMs ready, and I was going to wait until the chapter was actually posted. But my computer got a virus, and everything had to be erased, My documents, files, pics, everything, including the PM list. So I just sent them out before the chapter was posted, and hoped PokeProphet would get it up before anyone read it. My fault.

    I'm still waiting on confirmations from some members. I need them as characters, but also I need their permission. So the next chapter is delayed until they get back to me. Once they do, it should be a matter of minutes.

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    Yes, this fic captures the real me....

    Please, continue on. I won't stop you.

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    Oh, gosh! I had no idea that happened! I'm sorry for acting so stupid about that. *sweatdrops* *bows* Please forgive!
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    Please, if you like the fic, don't choose meatloaf. We're not getting an accurate response for a rating when people do that.
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    I must've read this fic like...Ten times?
    I support all shipping XD except Advance Shipping >.< *torches advance shippers houses* ..oops... >_>
    The U.S.S Pokeship rocks ^^

    (This is the first time I've posted on something besides fan art requests x_x)
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    Dragonmaster gasped. So this was it then. He saw his whole life just flash before his eyes. Playing Pokemon Yellow at elementary school. Playing Pokemon Silver at junior high. Playing Pokemon Ruby at high school. Wow, he certainly played a lot of Pokemon!
    Actually, I'm in my last weeks of middle school.

    I'd actually like to see some more drama over my *ahem* shipping preferences.

    Would be better if it was like "Star Wars", but this is fine the way it is. ^_^

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    Actually, the next chapter is going to have alot more StarWars in it, seeing how I am a StarWars freak. Some of it you might not recognize the elements, since its from the New Jedi Order Series.
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    Melody: Captain, we need reinforcements. The advance shippers down here have been joined by Altoshippers, we’re outnumbered.
    Oh come on, there are barely any altoshippers here. XD

    PokeProphet: Keep your eyes open people. We don’t want to be getting stuck in an altoshipping fanfic or something.
    Poor altoshippers. XD They get battered around here too. Mehwell, all fun and games. Love the concept too. I would've never thought of something like this. Despite being from another ship, its still fun to read. Keep going!


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    I think it would be funny if there was a U.S.S. Hoennship somewhere. (I /do/ know that most Hoennshippers are in fact, Advanceshippers, but I and Commander Cody [I DON'T CARE ABOUT GRAMMAR!!] are one of the few Pokeshippers there...) Then the crew of the Hoennship would be fighting and eventually separate--heeeey! Like The Voyages of the U.S.S. Leagueship, there could be another spin-off! xDD

    -coughs- Anywaaaay...can I be on the contact list for the next chapter? ^^ If you can, it'd be very great. -gnaws on something random- Arigatou-su!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Draconic Mage
    There is probably a ship or two for each ship(that sounded odd), and I think that it would seem alot more realstic to the forum if you put actuall members who support said ship on the other ships(I'm almost confusing myself here)
    What the hell? All the people who have appeared on the SS. Pokeship have been Pokeshippers. >_> And I'm pretty sure all the other people have been representatives of their respective pairings. -_-

    More Alfonso and Slash Star at some point! I'm too much of a b*stard to NOT appear again! ;D

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alfonso
    What the hell? All the people who have appeared on the SS. Pokeship have been Pokeshippers. >_> And I'm pretty sure all the other people have been representatives of their respective pairings. -_-

    More Alfonso and Slash Star at some point! I'm too much of a b*stard to NOT appear again! ;D
    you know, flygonboy69 had you make a little guest appearance in the leagueshipping spinoff too ^_^ He needs to update.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kojho
    Okay, the next chapter should be up tommorow night. It has a huge battle scene in it, with almost all the major ships. if anyone here has read Destiny's Way, a Star Wars book, you'll be obliged to compare this to the battlescene, since alot of it is based off of it.
    There has been a little change of plans, and the chpter will have to wait, because I kind of scrapped it...

    As I was reading it, I realized it suc*ed, so a started over. I moved the big battle to the end of the fic, but this chapter should have a pretty interesting twist I think you'll like.
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    Ahhh... finally I can review this. ^__^

    Firstly, I have to say that I truely love this fic and I really like how well both of you are co-ordinating the story in such a fluent way. ^__^ The first chapter was a great opening to the story and enlightened us well on the purpose and opening characters of the story.

    Chapter 2 was fantastic and I am honoured that you dedicated the chapter to me PokeProphet. *bows* ^___^ That was very kind of you and I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed it. And the pokeplayer/WS shipping have returned! XD I'm interested to see where that goes but on the whole, a truely great chapter and I loved Alfonso as the villian. ^___^

    Originally posted by pokeplayer

    I'll tell you now that both me and WS agree that there is nothing going on between us. We're just really good friends.
    We are? We did? *gets elbowed in the stomach by pokeplayer* OW! Huh? Ohhhhhh..... yeah..... we did! XD

    Originally posted by pokeplayer

    (I hope no one looks in my thread! Oops!)
    Need I say more?

    Originally posted by kojho

    There has been a little change of plans, and the chpter will have to wait, because I kind of scrapped it...

    As I was reading it, I realized it suc*ed, so a started over. I moved the big battle to the end of the fic, but this chapter should have a pretty interesting twist I think you'll like.[/QUOTE]

    Oh no! Aww... I was really looking forward to reading it today. Oh well, I hope everything goes well for you as you do it again and if you need any help, don't hesitate to send me a PM. ^___^ I'd be happy to help you.

    OK then, good luck and look forward to reading more!

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    Here is long-awaited chapter four:

    Bridge crew:

    Capt: WaterSpirit

    Weapons Officer: DM13

    Strategist/ Sheilds: Pokeplayer984

    Helm: General Solcray

    Internal tactical officer: gladdecease

    Melody: Captain of ship’s guard

    Hakajin: Medical Officer/Doctor

    PokeProphet: First officer



    Fighter pilots of Hope Squadron:

    Kojho: Hope Leader

    Blacknite: Hope 2

    Carina: Hope 3

    DM13: Hope 4 (temporary)

    Pichufan05: Hope 5

    Mistymix89: Hope 6

    Stacee: Hope 7


    Chapter 4



    We join our hero’s aboard the USS Pokeship, as they receive a distress call from the distant USS Contestship.



    Capt. Coral Eye: Mayday! Mayday! This is the USS Contestship, requesting aid. We are under assault by approximately 30 Gymshipping fighters! Heavily outnumbered! Repeat…



    WaterSpirit: Okay people, we are the only friendly ship in range, and its up to us to help. Plot the coordinates General Solcray.



    General Solcray: Aye Captain, course set, flame engines online.



    WaterSpirit: Commander Kojho, prepare to scramble Hope Squadron.



    Kojho: Aye Captain.


    The squad leader rushed to the hanger bay to ready the fighters.



    DM13: Captain, requesting permission to aid Hope squadron in its fight.



    WaterSpirit: Permission granted. PokePlayer, take the helm.



    DM13 rushed after Comm. Kojho while PokePlayer slid into the pilot’s chair.



    WaterSpirit sunk into the Captain’s chair, puzzled by DM13’s spontaneous action. It wasn’t like him to willingly put his life on the line.





    There was a flash as the USS Pokeship exited hyperspace and fired its primary engines toward the distant battle.



    Kojho: All pilots to your stations, STAT. I repeat, all pilots to your stations, this is not a drill.



    The faithful starfighter pilots of Kojhos’ personal Hope squadron rushed to their fighters, and one by one the ground crews moved away as their canopy’s snapped shut. (Imagine the scene where the snowspeeders are taking off in Episode 5)


    In minutes, the starfighters of Hope squadron were pouring out of the launch bay.



    Kojho: This is Hope leader, all wings report in.



    Blacknite: Hope 2, standing by.



    Carina: Hope 3, standing by.



    DM13: Hope 4, four lit and ready to go.



    Pichufan05: I’m all green, Hope 5 out.



    Mistymix89: Hope 6 standing by.



    Stacee: Hope 7 online.



    The squadron started to form up as Commander Kojho was receiving the coordinates.



    Kojho: Hope squadron, alter course to sector 5,0,0,6. Bank 60 degrees on my mark. Three, two, Mark!



    The squadron sped of at top speed towards the floundering Contestship.



    Meanwhile aboard the USS Pokeship, the crew was manning battle stations.



    Pokeplayer984: All hands to battle stations, man the hint turrets.



    General Solcray looked doubtfully at the view screen, which was currently showing an already helpless Contestship getting weaker by the moment.



    General Solcray: Captain, are you sure Hope Squadron can handle this. Their still using outdated Kanto hints. They don’t have enough firepower!



    WaterSpirit: Pokeplayer984?



    Pokeplayer984:I really don’t know the specs, I’m just subbing for DM13!



    WaterSpirit: Well, I just got back; do we have any secret weapons or something?



    Gladdecease: DM13 would be the one to know, he is the weapons officer.



    WaterSpirit: Can we reach him?



    Gladdecease: We only have one-way communications, there’s too much interference.



    Suddenly, there was a loud explosion coming from the comm. Unit, which happened to be set to Hope squadron’s frequency.



    Stacee: 2, pull up, they’re on your tail!



    Blacknite: Where are they, I can’t see them! Help!



    There was another loud explosion that was identified as Blacknite’s fighter being vaporized by a Gymshipping loyalty missile.



    Kojho: 4, did he make it out?



    DM13: Roger that Hope leader, he ejected right before it blew, thank god.



    Carina: Hope 5, bank right, there’s a bogie on your six!



    Pichufan05: I can’t shake’m!



    DM13, swung his fighter around as he looked for the rookie. There, he saw him. 5 was juking this way and that, trying to shake the enemies of his tail.



    DM13 tightened his grip on the stick, trigger finger ready.



    DM13: 5, break left on my mark. Now!

    5 pulled away just as DM13’s Maiden’s Peak hint connected. The enemy fighter disintegrated.



    Pichufan05: Thanks, sir.



    DM13: That’s why I’m here.



    Back aboard the bridge, PokeProphet wondered if it was worth it. Aw, shucks, might as well give it a try.



    PokeProphet: Captain, I’m defying a direct order from Starfleet, but I can’t stand by and watch more people die. We do have one weapon that could turn the tide. But a lot of it is dubbed, so it’s risky.



    WaterSpirit: What?



    PokeProphet: Gotta Catch ya later. It is an episode packed full of awesome hints, and contains enough power to destroy a whole fleet. Only I and DM13 know of its existence.



    WaterSpirit: okay, give it a shot.



    PokeProphet: Powering hints now.



    WaterSpirit: Fire at will.



    Suddenly, a huge burst if fire erupted from the Pokeship’s gun batteries, and when it died down, there were no more enemy ships for light years.



    WaterSpirit flopped down, almost missing the chair.



    WaterSpirit: I-I guess that did it.


    Haha, a slight cliffhanger!
    What will happen in the aftermath? That is up to PokeProphet...



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    Sorry, the PM list got deleted.
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    That's why I didn't know that chapter 4 was up.

    Anyways, I'm really looking foward to chapter 5 now, PokeProphet.

    Hope 4, standing by. (Sorry, couldn't resist!)

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    Ohhhh im enjoying this!
    Hope 7. I like that cause 7 is my fave number XD
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    -claps- Another awesome chapter! ^^

    Ehhh...I remember I was on the PM list. ^^;

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    Strategist/ Sheilds: Pokeplayer984

    Ah, you made a good choice about where to put me.

    Pokeplayer984:I really don’t know the specs, I’m just subbing for DM13!
    You put in a very good line, along with a good situation, and put in my charcter quite well. I must say, I am impressed.

    Loved the battle scene. Imagined it quite alot like Star Fox Assault. (I've been playing the demo so much, I badly want that game.)

    Nice way to end it too. Though something was a little vauge. I'm guessing the WS in this fic didn't keep updated with hints like the one in real life.

    Well, got a new PM to check out. See ya.

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