Very nice one-shot, though I think I would've understand it better if I read the latest chapters of The Legendarian Chronicles (and while we're on the subject...Write another one-shot that isn't related with your story!!! :P)
I found one spelling error (on board-onboard) though the way it was spelled in the one-shot can also be correct. There was also a grammatical mistake that I'll show in the following example:
You forgot the last quotation mark:
“Humans did that. They are destroying themselves, and we do not have to prevent it.
And that's about it in the grammatical aspect.
I found the plot of this one-shot to be quite interesting, though the story: 'Almighty Pokemon God who hates humans because they're destroying the world' has been done before (though of course, this was done much better than most of those stories).
I liked Lugia in this (quite believable) and his narration, but my favorite line from this one-shot doesn't come from him:
“If we keep waging war upon the humans, then both they and we will fall in time. Why add to the inevitable suffering?”
I found that line to be quite profound, but the best thing about it is that one could analyze it.
Ok, now I'm really lost in the storyline... ;_;Well, yeah, I had a random idea all of a sudden and just had to type it, but for LC readers, this explains why Lugia saved the Rebellion members and really has nothing whatsoever to do with the chosen eight, but Latias’s dialogue is perhaps the biggest plot hint of all time.