Well, here's my messed up drawings. ^^;
Spoiler:- This is Lilian:
Critiques welcomed. ~
I like the drawings they look really nice and if you keep drawing them they'll get even better
I can say is that you have skill. They're pretty good too, but yeah, If you focus more and also have practice, then you'd be pretty good.
Your last one was definitely a big improvement that's for sure. It's pretty cute and the colors are good too.