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    Truth, Ideals, Egoism, and Casteliacones is a story about 3 friends, and the power that drove them apart. A tale of love, power, Casteliacones, and random cheeky humor. I will submit parts with some space between, since i have social stuffs to do. I really appreciate any opinions, and adore replies. If you have any suggestions, keep them to yourselves, please. I do this because i like to do this, not because i get money for it.

    "He does!"

    "Shut up, boss, i'm writing here!"
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    Cast:
    SPOILERS(sort of)
    Natalie: A truthful girl with a passion for Psychic types
    Current Team: Gothita

    Stan: A hard-working, kind boy, and has a thing for Fighting types.
    Current Team: Timburr

    Dakren: A shady, egoistic boy, with a preference for Dark types.
    Current Team: Deino

    Hydreigon: The author. "Hello, i'm the author!"

    Arceus: The publisher/boss. "Hey, i'm much more than that, you idiot!"

    AUTHORS NOTE: If anyone knows how to make that spoiler thingy, let me know. I'll give you a Casteliacone.
    Also, be sure to leave a reply and tell me what you think. It helps alot! And for every 10 replies i get, my boss gives me a Casteliacone!

    "Hey, hey, did you call me merely a boss?"

    "More or less. Shall i get on with the story?"

    "Only if you give me a more fitting title."

    "Okay, later."

    "Nice that we sorted that out. GET BACK TO WORK!"

    Ugghhh......fine."

    "*whispers* as you can hear, i haven't got the best boss in the world."

    "I HEARD THAT!"

    "Uh oh."

    "Uhh, I DID NOT SAY ANYTHING!"



    The First Chapter (If it was not that obvious)

    In Nuvema, three kids were running around, playing, and pretending to be Pokémon, while eating Casteliacones. The youngest was a girl, with blond hair, blue eyes, pretending to be a Munna. Her name was Natalie, who had a thing for psychic types. The oldest was a black-haired boy, with red eyes, running around, pretending to be a Scraggy. His name was Dakren, and adored dark types. The last child, who was a boy, with brown hair, green eyes, was also running around, pretending to be a Mienfoo. His name was Stan. As you can probably guess, he loved fighting types. They were all three very eager about that they had been told that they would receive a Pokémon each. Then, their mother came out of the door, telling them to come inside. Inside, in the livingroom, on a table, lied three pokeballs. Their mother gave them one each, and told them to open them. Natalie threw hers, and out came a Gothita. Natalie was overly excited, and gave it a large hug, and a kiss. Stan threw his, and out came a Timburr. He was excited, and shaked it’s hand. Dakren threw his, which contained a Deino. The three were wery excited, and decided to test their strength, and arranged a little tournament.
    Natalie, Stan, and Dakren decided to have a battle. Natalie, and her Gothita, Stan and his Timburr, and Dakren with his Deino. They then ended up thinking of their own battle mode, 3-way battle. Then, they began. Natalie ordered a Psybeam, aimed at Timburr. Timburr evaded, and launched a Brick Break. But halfway into it, Timburr was struck by a Dragon Rage from Deino. Timburr was hit hard, but did not stop, and hit Gothita. Despite it being a bad matchup, Gothita took a large amount of damage. Natalie turned her attention to Deino, and ordered a Psybeam, but Deino took the Psybeam without even taking damage. Before Natalie could think of why, Deino knocked out Gothita with a Slam. Stan took the opportunity, and ordered a Brick Break. Deino was hit, and was clearly on its last legs. Stan ordered a Brick Break, while Dakren ordered a Slam. The two pokemon collided in midair, causing them to create a large explosion. When the dust cleared, both pokemon had fainted.
    “Oh, seems like it’s a tie.”
    “Darn, I could easily beat you if it were 1-on-1.”
    “Oh, really? I doubt that.”
    “Boys, quiet. You know that I will be Champion way before you.”
    “Hah, a FEMALE Champion? Ridiculous.”
    “More likely than a stupid Champion, Stan.”
    “Stan, you and Natalie will be cannon fodder for me.”
    “Boys, let’s make a promise. We will go on a journey in 3 years, when we are teens. We will become stronger, and fight once more.”
    “Great idea!”
    “Yea, I am looking forward to it!”
    “Now, let’s have some Casteliacones!”
    “Stan, do you ever change?”
    “Never! A toast to our future battle!”

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    You do know that the first post MUST contain the first chapter, right?

    You have read the rules like I've pleaded with you to do many times now, right? Right?

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    You said before that you would read over the rules before posting again. Clearly, you did not.

    As Dilasc said, the first post must contain the beginning of the story. An introduction to the story does not count.

    In addition, each chapter must be at least two pages long on Microsoft Word, and there should be a space between each paragraph to make it easier to read. A story also shouldn't be just paragraphs followed by just dialogue; you need to switch it up, include dialogue tags (like "he said," "she asked with a smirk," "he exclaimed, hands balled into fists and jaw clenched").


    Please read the fan Fiction Rules properly before posting here again. And don't ask other people to advertise your story as you did before.

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