Well, well, well. Guess who's back. Although it might not do any difference *sigh* Don't worry I'll explain Sike.
Anyway, about the fic... What to say. Well, in two words, It's as superb as your first one although in a different style (somehow). As you might have guessed, IMO (too), Zyrzir's really funny. Sanaika's kinda neat too (in a different way). Reminds me both of some other people I know... Anyway, I have to say that right in the beginning (read: the first two paragraphs) It didn't really hook me up, but you took care of that in the following paragraph.
Oh well, as I suspected your fics have once again converted people into Glalie loving fans
P.S.: It don't think I stick to the "two words" there...