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    Default Memories (Hoennshipping PG)

    This is just another fic of mine I wrote (or typed). Hope ya like it!

    Rated: PG
    Genre: Romance
    Couple: Hoennshipping

    Do You Remember?

    The sun shines over the region of Hoenn as I lay down on the soft grass, the wind tickling my face.

    “Brendan?” There was that angelic voice I loved. I turned around to see my childhood friend watching me with those beautiful sapphire blue eyes.

    “Yes, May?” She walked over to where I was sitting and plopped down next to me.

    “What are you doing?” She asks, her eyes curious. She always was pretty cute like that.

    “Nothing, just sitting around enjoying the day,” I reply. She nods and looks at the vast sky that goes on forever.

    “… Do you remember?” May asks all of the sudden. Now I got curious.

    “Remember what?” She giggles and ruffles my snow-white hair.

    “Do you remember when we used to play here back then when we were little?” Ah, I get it. I smiled remembering.

    Flashback

    It was a happy day as I play at my favorite spot in Littleroot. The hill was always a great place to play and see the view of Littleroot. The oak tree was great for shade, so it was nice and cool. I roll my ball seeing as I was bored. “Aw man, I wish there was someone I could play with…”

    “Hi!” said a sudden voice. I jump up in fright and turn around to see a girl with brown hair and sapphire blue eyes wearing a red dress. She sure was pretty. “Oh, I didn’t mean to startle you! Sorry about that!”

    “It’s ok. I wasn’t scared or anything!” She just giggles.

    “Really? Then, why did you jump up like that?” I blushed in embarrassment.

    “I-I was just surprised, that’s all. Anyway, you don’t seem to be familiar face around here.”

    “I just moved here! I used to live in Johto. But, my dad moved here for his work as a gym leader.” Gym leader?

    “Oh, is your dad friends with my dad Prof. Birch?” She nods in reply.

    “Yep! I’m the daughter of Norman Maple! I’m May. Nice to meet you!” May smiles and extends her hand.

    “Nice to meet you too. I’m Brendan Birch!” We shook hands and I think I felt myself blush holding her soft hand. “I heard the gym leader had a kid around my age. I didn’t the kid was a girl!”

    “Hey! That’s mean!” She said with a mock pout. I chuckled at her cute antics.

    “Don’t worry about it. I was just kidding. I’m glad I met someone new. Besides you’re really pretty.” Once I realized what I just said, we both flushed.

    “You know Brendan?”

    “What?”

    “I think you and I could be really good friends!” I smiled.

    “Sure we can!”

    “Promise we’ll be friends… forever?” She shyly held out a pinky finger.

    “Promise.” We did a pinky swear, promising we’ll be friends no matter what.

    “Kids! It’s time for dinner!” Our mother called.

    “Aww… we couldn’t play together!” May whined.

    “It’s okay. We can play together tomorrow!”

    “Really?”

    “Sure, we are friends after all!” We smiled.

    “Kids!” Our mothers called again.

    “Well, see ya later!”

    “Okay!” Before she left, she gave me a kiss on the cheek. I felt myself blush even harder.

    That meeting under the old oak tree was the start of a new friendship. It was a special place.

    End of Flashback

    “Still living up to that promise?” She asks. I chuckled softly and kissed her on the cheek.

    “Of course, dear.” It was pretty cute seeing her blush like that.

    She puts her head on my shoulder. “Forever?”

    “Forever.” I put an arm around her.

    We sat like that under the same old oak tree watching the clear blue sky.

    ~The End~

    So, is it good, bad? I feel kinda silly writing this when I haven't even finished my first Hoennshipping fic.

    Plz R+R!
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    Ya first review! It wasn't so bad. I like one of those memories fics but I hope there will something tring to break them apart!

    Not a lot a grammar mistakes.

    Once I realized what I just said, we both flushed.
    I think you meant blush, but I could be wrong.

    “Aww… we couldn’t play together!” May whined.
    I think it should be "Aww..we can't play together!" since together refers to the past.

    Size wise i think it was alright and this isn't bad so drop me a pm when you got the next chapter up.

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    Default 2nd One-Shot: Raining Dreams

    Well, this is the 2nd one-shot for the Hoennshippers. ^__^ I've been slacking off on it but I manage to get it done! Hope y'all like it. I tried my best on this.

    Note: I do not own Pokemon and Simple and Clean by Utada Hikaru. >.>

    Raining Dreams

    The thunder roars as the rain keeps pouring down on Hoenn. A girl listen to the tapping of the water on that falls on the roof and the song the radio’s playing. “Ugh… stupid rain…”

    When you walk away,
    You don’t hear me say please
    Oh baby, don’t go.
    Simple and clean is the way that you’re making me feel tonight
    It’s hard to let it go.


    She turned around in bed and saw that picture. It was a boy with white hair and those ruby eyes and me. They both look so happy… but that was before he had to leave.

    ‘Brendan…’ She thought before drifting to sleep dreaming of that day as the rain keeps falling down.

    You’ve given me too many things
    Lately you’re all I need
    You smiled at me and said:

    Don’t get me wrong I love you but does that mean I have to meet your father?
    When we are older you will understand what I meant when I said ‘no’
    I don’t think life is quite that simple.


    Flashback

    “Brendan, do you really ha-have to go?” A little girl was crying. Her sapphire blue eyes red from tears. The 5-year-old boy named Brendan Birch also had a sad look in his eyes, but he smiled for her. His father was Prof. Birch and his family had to go to Kanto to work with Prof. Oak.

    “Hey, don’t cry May. I’ll come back!” He assured me that.

    When you walk away,
    You don’t hear me say please
    Oh baby, don’t go.
    Simple and clean is the way that you’re making me feel tonight
    It’s hard to let it go.


    “B-but, I-I won’t be able to s-see you again for a really long t-time!” She started crying again. Brendan frowned seeing her cry. He got out a tissue, tilted her face up so she could see him, and wiped away the tears.

    “It’ll be okay… A trip to Kanto won’t last forever!” His eyes softened. “I’ll come back someday.”

    “Promise?”

    “Promise.” We did a pinky swear. Somehow… I feel all right. That he means it. He’ll come back, just like he said.

    “Umm…” Brendan blushed taking out something. “Here, this is for you.” It was a Torchic doll. It’s so cute… I took the plush doll and hugged it.

    “Thanks, I’ll take good care of it!” Brendan’s face turned more red.

    “May?” She looked at his crimson red eyes. Brendan smiled. “Just remember that I will come back for you. We’ll see each other someday! The doll’s a symbol of friendship.”

    End Flashback

    “Well Brendan Birch, I hope you’re a man of your words,” May muttered as she woke up from the memory. ‘Why is life so hard? I wish you didn’t have to leave me…’

    The daily things that keep us all busy
    Are confusing me
    That’s when you came to me and said

    Wish I could prove I love you
    But does that mean I have to walk on water
    When we are older you’ll understand
    It’s enough when I say so
    And maybe some things are that simple.


    May thought about what Brendan said about his point of view on life. ‘I know things in life can be confusing. If I have to prove to someone that I love her, do I have to do it by walking on lake water? Who knows? Maybe things in life are that simple.’

    When you walk away,
    You don’t hear me say please
    Oh baby, don’t go.
    Simple and clean is the way that you’re making me feel tonight
    It’s hard to let it go.


    ‘I wish you’re here, Brendan…’ May thought.

    “May!” A voice shouted. Could it be…? May looked out the window to see a shadowy figure walking through the rain. In the flash of thunder, she saw a pair of crimson red eyes.

    Hold me
    Whatever lies beyond this morning
    Is a little later on.
    Regardless of warnings the future doesn’t scare me at all
    Nothing’s like before.


    May ran out the door toward the shadow. “Is it really you?” She asked. The figure revealed himself to be a tall man with wet snow white hair and eyes filled with happiness. He chuckled.

    “Who else?”

    When you walk away,
    You don’t hear me say please
    Oh baby, don’t go.
    Simple and clean is the way that you’re making me feel tonight
    It’s hard to let it go.


    Her eyes started to fill with tears that mixed with the rain. She fell into his embrace.

    Hold me
    Whatever lies beyond this morning
    Is a little later on.
    Regardless of warnings the future doesn’t scare me at all
    Nothing’s like before.


    “Are you going to stay?”

    “Forever. I promise.” He grabbed both side of her face and gave her a soft kiss. May felt like she could cry all over again.

    ‘The future isn’t so scary now… nothing’s like before. Cause now…he’s with me.’

    Hold me
    Whatever lies beyond this morning
    Is a little later on.
    Regardless of warnings the future doesn’t scare me at all
    Nothing’s like before.


    The End

    Well, hope ya like it.

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    *squeals* Oh God! The warm fuzzies, they're everywhere! *chokes* What lovely imagery. I'm the biggest sucker for description *_*
    I'd love to see more!

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    Aww... that's cute! Great, now I soundlike a girl... sigh, that's what happens when my Hoennshippy side takes over. I recognize the songs from somewhere. Where? Who knows? Good one-shots.
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    Thanks. I love the song Simple and Clean. This was requested by Black Murder Heave-I can't spell the last part (Sorry!) back at fanfiction.net

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    it's actually spelled 'Black Murder Heavangelon'. if you sound it out, you know how it's spelled.

    anyway, i didn't exactly request this one-shot, but i only requested some one-shots with happy endings. you'd be surprised at how many hoennshipping stories out there DON'T have happy endings.

    nice one-shot. and remember, everyone oves happy endings. but it couldn't hurt seeing one based in the anime.

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    Well, does anyone have any ideas? I kinda low on some...

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