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    Hey what's up you guys! this is my first time posting my story in this thread.
    I hope you like it!

    Just to let you know that there will be side stories and some other shipping moments in my story.



    Chapter 1: Until we meet again

    A Yoshi/Dani and Ash/May story


    After Yoshi finished the Hoenn league and battled Ash and defeated the former Pokemon champion Steven, Yoshi started to miss Dani in the Johto region. She was Yoshi’s first

    friend and first crush. He missed her so much that Yoshi went back to his hometown

    New Bark Town. Before Yoshi was about to leave, he went to say goodbye to Ash

    and his friends. “That was a great pokemon battle we had Ash” said Yoshi. “Your pokemon got stronger since the last time I battle you” said Yoshi. “You and your pokemon got stronger too” said Ash. “I hope we meet again someday” Ash said.

    “You too Ash” said Yoshi. May came over and gave Yoshi a good bye hug and said,

    “If we ever meet again, can you show me to make really good combos for pokemon contest?” May said. “Sure I’ll show the best fire combos for your conbusken” said Yoshi.

    “Hey where’s Brock and Max Ash?” Yoshi said. “Brock went to the Ever Grande Citie’s beauty contest to check out the beautiful girls and Max is hanging out with May’s exboyfriend Brendan” Ash said. “Exboyfriend? Since when you broke up with Brendan

    May?” Yoshi said. “He was being a jerk and a pervert she said, but to be honest I never liked him anyway” she said. Before May continue her story, Ash saw Gary pass by and went to talk to him about something. “Sorry May I got to get home before the boat to New Bark Town leaves” Yoshi said.

    “Before you go I want to ask you about something” May said. “I want to know if Ash has a girlfriend or not” May said. “He use to but he said Misty broke up with him and left to see Rudy in the orange Islands, she broke up with Ash because she loves Rudy more than

    Ash and he was heart broking for two weeks” Yoshi said. “Why do you ask?” He said

    “Because I’m starting fall in love with Ash”, May said. “When did this happen?”,

    Yoshi said. “I started falling in love with him since the day I meet Ash in Little Root Town, he teaches me how to use pokemon, He came to cheer me up when I lost

    My first pokemon contest, he rescues me when I’m in trouble, in my second pokemon

    Contest when I was in the finals, I was losing to Drew till I heard Ash in the audiences,

    He was cheering loud for me and gave me the strength to beat drew and I won.

    If it weren’t for pikachu and his electrical discharge, I wouldn’t had meet Ash and any

    Pokemon contest. And that’s why I love him” May said. Yoshi was crying over

    May’s story. “Why are you crying Yoshi?”She said, your story was very touching, it reminds me of Dani and I he said.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadow Bankotsu
    Hey what's up you guys! this is my first time posting my story in this thread.
    I hope you like it!

    Just to let you know that there will be side stories and some other shipping moments in my story.



    Chapter 1: Until we meet again

    A Yoshi/Dani and Ash/May story


    After Yoshi finished the Hoenn league and battled Ash and defeated the former Pokemon champion Steven, Yoshi started to miss Dani in the Johto region. She was Yoshi’s first

    friend and first crush. He missed her so much that Yoshi went back to his hometown

    New Bark Town. Before Yoshi was about to leave, he went to say goodbye to Ash

    and his friends. “That was a great pokemon battle we had Ash” said Yoshi. “Your pokemon got stronger since the last time I battle you” said Yoshi. “You and your pokemon got stronger too” said Ash. “I hope we meet again someday” Ash said.

    “You too Ash” said Yoshi. May came over and gave Yoshi a good bye hug and said,

    “If we ever meet again, can you show me to make really good combos for pokemon contest?” May said. “Sure I’ll show the best fire combos for your conbusken” said Yoshi.

    “Hey where’s Brock and Max Ash?” Yoshi said. “Brock went to the Ever Grande Citie’s beauty contest to check out the beautiful girls and Max is hanging out with May’s exboyfriend Brendan” Ash said. “Exboyfriend? Since when you broke up with Brendan

    May?” Yoshi said. “He was being a jerk and a pervert she said, but to be honest I never liked him anyway” she said. Before May continue her story, Ash saw Gary pass by and went to talk to him about something. “Sorry May I got to get home before the boat to New Bark Town leaves” Yoshi said.

    “Before you go I want to ask you about something” May said. “I want to know if Ash has a girlfriend or not” May said. “He use to but he said Misty broke up with him and left to see Rudy in the orange Islands, she broke up with Ash because she loves Rudy more than

    Ash and he was heart broking for two weeks” Yoshi said. “Why do you ask?” He said

    “Because I’m starting fall in love with Ash”, May said. “When did this happen?”,

    Yoshi said. “I started falling in love with him since the day I meet Ash in Little Root Town, he teaches me how to use pokemon, He came to cheer me up when I lost

    My first pokemon contest, he rescues me when I’m in trouble, in my second pokemon

    Contest when I was in the finals, I was losing to Drew till I heard Ash in the audiences,

    He was cheering loud for me and gave me the strength to beat drew and I won.

    If it weren’t for pikachu and his electrical discharge, I wouldn’t had meet Ash and any

    Pokemon contest. And that’s why I love him” May said. Yoshi was crying over

    May’s story. “Why are you crying Yoshi?”She said, your story was very touching, it reminds me of Dani and I he said.
    Wow Shadow! Great fic! Good luck with the next chap, although you pretty much did it aleady in FanFiction.net

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    Great Fic! Good luck with your next chapter! Does this mean you're going to continue writing this story? *goes to Fanfiction.net to read more*

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    Hey thanks you two! I'm glad you like it. the next chapter will be up this weekend.
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    I know its eary but here's the next chapter and its alitte short.

    Chapter 2: Memories



    “My story reminds you and Dani!” said May. “Yeah ever since we were kids, we

    promise to stick together at all times,” said Yoshi. “Wow so how long did you two

    know each other?” said May. “We knew each other since childhood” said Yoshi,

    When we were kids, we always go to professor Elm’s lab to play with the pokemon”

    Said Yoshi.” Till one day, Professor Elm gave Dani and I an Eevee for being kind

    to the pokemon” said Yoshi.

    “He told us to keep them wisely at all cost and that’s all he said,” said Yoshi. “After a couple days, Our Eevees started to evolve” Yoshi said, “Dani’s eevee evolve into an

    Espeon and my eevee evolve into an Umbreon,” said Yoshi. “And when they evolved,

    Dani started hugging and kissing me for some reason” He said. When Dani did that

    She said “I’m glad we’re best friends Yoshi”. Yoshi started to blush like crazy,

    He said, “ Why did you hug and kiss me for” he said, “ because they evolved

    together at the same time and I hope does it to us someday” said Dani. But Yoshi wasn’t ready for this yet and said “Dani I’m not ready to does boyfriend and girlfriend thing yet.” Dani said, “I know we’re not ready for this she said, I just wanted if you liked the hug and kiss and, When Yoshi was about to say dani question, he heard the boat to New bark town is leaving in 2 mins.”A man the boat is leaving me behind, sorry May I gotta go see ya” Yoshi said. Yoshi doesn’t know that May is following him to the ferryboat.

    May’s thoughts (“Sorry Ash I’m to going to see what’s going to happen to Yoshi and Dani When they meet again, when I come back I’ll tell you how I really feel”) May started to cry and left on the boat with Yoshi to New Bark Town.
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    Nice chapter! The grammar needs a little more work though...but the story is great!

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    The first two chaps were great. I agree with dragonmaster5000 the grammar needs a little work but other than that its perfect. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. ^^

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    Thanks you guys^^ the next next chapter will be up tomorrow okay.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadow Bankotsu
    Thanks you guys^^ the next next chapter will be up tomorrow okay.
    Okay, I'll look forward to reading it ^^

    Also, I'm just asking, but is there Kenta/Marina in this?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Meganium XD
    Okay, I'll look forward to reading it ^^

    Also, I'm just asking, but is there Kenta/Marina in this?
    Yoshi is Kenta and Dani is Marina. you'll see some changes in the story.
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    Dude, I read your story on Fanfic.net and its really good!

    But the names for yoshi and Dani are Kenta and Maria in USA i think and its confusing because you made Yoshi and Kenta the same person and there are too many people. otherwise its great.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shadow Bankotsu
    Yoshi is Kenta and Dani is Marina. you'll see some changes in the story.
    I thought Kenta was Jimmy in the dub, not that I like it, it's just this is very confusing, but I got it now ^^

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    Here's chapter 3 you guys^^



    Chapter 3: Moving Away


    When the boat to New Bark Town left, Ash and the gang were looking for May at

    at the Ever Grande port. “Where could May be? “ Ash said. Everyone wanted

    to know the samething.”And where’s Yoshi?” Max said. “At this time he should

    had left on the boat to New Bark Town by now” Brock said.”Hey Max where’s

    Brendan?” Ash said.

    “Brendan went home and wanted me to give this letter to May” Max said. While the gang

    is still on a search for May, Let go see how Yoshi and May are doing. On the

    boat to New Bark Town, May was searching for Yoshi in the dining room.”

    Where could Yoshi be?” May said. When May was looking for Yoshi, she started to miss Ash a lot.

    “Oh no” she said, “I didn’t tell Ash and the others that I’m on the boat to New Bark Town” May say.” I know I’ll send a letter to them and they will come looking for me at

    New Bark Town but first I got to find some paper and a pencil” May said. May looked

    everywhere for them on the boat till she finally ran into Yoshi.” May what are you doing

    here” Yoshi said. “I followed you here because I want to see you and Dani get together

    plus I want to here the rest of the story” May said. “Let me ask you something May does Ash and the others know you’re here? He said. “A man I

    totally forgot about that, Yoshi

    do you have any paper and pencil?” May said “Yes I do” Yoshi said. Yoshi took out

    some paper and a pencil and gave it to May. After 10 min she finish her letter and took

    out Beautifly from her belt.

    “Beautifly come on out” she shout out.”Beauuuutify” it said, “Beautifly I want you to give this to Ash and the others at Ever Grande seaport o.k.” May said. Beautifly nodded

    yes and was happy about it. She tied a ribbon around Beautifly’s neck with the letter and its poke ball and Beautifly flew away to the seaport like a jet. “ O.k. Yoshi now tell the

    rest of the story” May said. “There’s one problem? I forgot the rest of story,” he said.

    “WHAT!” May said,” Don’t worry once we get to New Bark Town Dani and I might tell you the rest of the story,” Yoshi said. “Alright then” May said, when

    Yoshi and May finish talking they reach New Bark Town. Yoshi’s thoughts (Finally we’re here, now I can tell Dani how I feel about her). May’s thoughts

    (Finally we’re here, now I can get to see Yoshi and Dani get together). When Yoshi and May got off the boat, Yoshi started

    running to find the nearest video phone booth.”Yoshi wait for me” May said,

    “Sorry about that May I just wanted to call my mom that I’m here right now” Yoshi said. “Before you do it what’s your mom’s name?” May said. “Her name is Nikki” Yoshi said.

    Yoshi finally found a video phone booth and to called his mom right now.

    The ringing was taking a long time till a picture finally showed up.”Hey big brother its

    been a while”? said.” Hey sis long time no see” Yoshi said, “Who’s she

    Yoshi?”May said. “Oh this is my little sister Allenby” he said, “ Hey nice to meet you and who are you? Allenby said. “Oh my name is May I’m good friend

    of your brother” May said.” Well any friend Yoshi’s is a friend of mine” Allenby said,” Hey sis where’s mom? He said.” She went to the market to get some

    food for your welcome back party,” she said.”Hey sis is Dani with with her? Yoshi said. “……………..”Allenby said, “Hey Allenby what’s wrong” he said. “………………Yoshi there’s something you need to know about Dani” she said “Sis

    what happened to Dani?” Yoshi said. “I’m sorry big brother it’s just that Dani moved away while your in the Hoenn region” Allenby said.”WHAT!” Yoshi said.
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    Another great chap Shadow! I hope you don't mind me calling you that ^^

    Anyway, I hope you have good luck with the next chaps! ^^

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    Very good chapter, Shadow Bankotsu!!! The grammar got a bit better. The description was okay too, though it could use a little more work. There were many extra spaces in between the lines that I suggest fixing. The storyline and plot were as good as usual. This story keeps on getting better.

    On a side note, I read this story at Fanfiction.net and it was good! I spoiled myself with spoilers though. XD

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    Thanks you guys! Here's the next chapter.



    Part 4:A letter to a new journey

    “Sis why did Dani moved away?” Yoshi said, “Because Dani’s mother is having a baby

    and needed a bigger place to live” Allenby said.” So where did Dani moved to” May said,

    “She told that she moved to Crystal Island in the Rainbow Island area,” Allenby said.

    When Yoshi, May, and Allenby finish talking, Allenby went get the letter for her big brother from Dani.”Here big brother this is for you from Dani” Allenby said, “Thanks

    Sis” said Yoshi. “Come on Yoshi read it to us so we can hear what your girlfriend wrote to you” May said”. “ SHE NOT MY GIRLFRIEND!” Yoshi said,

    “Whatever” the girls said. When Yoshi started to read the letter out loud, it said:

    Dear Yoshi,

    By the time you get this letter, I have already moved away to Crystal Island.

    I’m sorry that I didn’t tell you that I was moving away. I wanted to go with

    you on your journey to the Hoenn region but my parents wouldn’t let me.

    The reason they didn’t let me go because I found out that my mom was having

    a baby soon and needed my help. Because of the baby, we have to move to a bigger

    place to live. If I tell you about this, you would try to stop your journey to become

    a Hoenn league champion and try to stop my parents from moving. I care about you

    too deeply to let you get involved. I wanted to thank you so much for your

    friendship and kindness that we had after all these years and I’m really lucky to have met you. And I always love you no matter what.

    Love and forever,

    Dani


    “That was the saddest but sweetest letter that I ever heard” the girls said. “Ya I didn’t know she loved me so much” Yoshi said, “You got that right Yoshi you should tell

    her how you feel about her next” May said.” Ya what she said” Allenby said.

    “Well what about you May!” he said,” Are you going to tell Ash how you feel

    About him?” Yoshi said.” Well of course I well” May said. “Well gets what girls,

    I’m going to enter the Rainbow League and tell Dani how I feel about her.”Yoshi said. “I’m Going with you Yoshi I heard there’s a pokemon contest in the Rainbow Islands

    and I going to win it all” May said. “ No your not because I’m going to win those

    Pokemon contest” Allenby said. “WHAT you’re a pokemon coordinator too, Yoshi

    you didn’t tell me she a pokemon coordinator too”. May said, “Well you see my little

    Sister followed me hear in the Hoenn region with her Flareon and wanted to try

    to be a pokemon coordinater. I’ve been teaching her to be one and she’s been wining

    some contest ever since.” Yoshi said

    “O.k. girls we’re in the first thing in the morning at 7:00am”. Yoshi said

    “ALRIGHT!” said the girls.
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    Great chap! The letter was very sweet, and I'm full of suspence! Keep up the good work! ^^

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    Excellent chapter! The grammar could use just a little more work, but it keeps getting better and better each time I read it!

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    That's the same with me. But of corse im being honest. I wonder how will the ending of the story will be like.

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    Hey big bro, Great story! I'm reading it over again from when I read it on ff.net. It seems like you always miss things the first time you read it and then get it the second time. ^^; Anyways, keep up the great work Shadow!

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    wow thanks you guys! here's the next chapter:

    Chapter 5:Enter the Rainbow Island League

    After reading Dani’s letter, Yoshi, May, and Allenby needed some supplies for their journey to the rainbow Islands and left to the pokemart to get ready.

    “O.k. girls all we need is some potions, fuel heals, food, and Kurt’s new pokeballs.”

    Yoshi said. “Hey Yoshi is it o.k if we get some new clothes too” May said.

    “Ya please big brother can we gets some new clothes pleasssssse” Allenby said

    “Ooh fine then but nothing over $100.00 got it” Yoshi said “OKAY!” the girls said.

    The girls went to get some new clothes and Yoshi was thinking about getting some

    new clothes too.” Hmmmmm maybe I should get some new clothes too” Yoshi said.

    After searching for new clothes, the three trainers had finally found what they were looking for,”Hey Yoshi how do I look?” May said.” Wow you look great but it’s the

    same as your old clothes” Yoshi said, “ Ya I know but it’s a different style and color.

    May is wearing a green bandanna, orange shirt, a small green bag around her waist,

    same gloves but in green, same black shorts, and orange shoes.”Hey big brother

    how do I?” Allenby said, “Ahhhhh you look cute in that sis” Yoshi said. Allenby

    is wearing a red cap, cute red and black shirt, blue and black gloves, cute sky-blue shorts,

    dark green backpack, and cute white and black shoes.”Okay now it’s my turn” said Yoshi. 5 minutes later, “So girls how do I look?” Yoshi said.” IT’S THE

    SAME THING THAT YOU WORE RIGHT NOW,” said the girls.” I know but its in a different color” Yoshi said. Yoshi is wearing a blue and black cap, blue and

    white sweater with a black shirt underneath, and black and blue shorts. Same backpack but green, and black, blue, and white shoes.

    “Now we have some new clothes, potions, and some fuel heals lets go get some new

    poke balls from Kurt” Yoshi said. “Yoshi who’s Kurt?” said May,”Oh I forgot you

    never meet Kurt before” Yoshi said. “Well Kurt is a famous craftsmen for making

    different kinds of pokeballs” Yoshi said, “Wow I wish I could try to get some new

    pokeballs from Kurt” said May. “But Yoshi, Kurt lives in Azalea Town how are we

    going to get there it will take us weeks to get there,” Allenby said.

    “I know sis that’s why I’m going to call Kurt and he will transfer the pokeballs here”

    Yoshi said.

    After the gang left the pokemart, they left to the pokemon center to call Kurt.”Okey what was Kurt’s video phone number…………..ooh now I remember it was 678-0104” Yoshi

    said. The videophone started to ring and Kurt’s face had showed up.” Hello who’s there?” said Kurt, ”Hey old-timer it’s been awhile,” Yoshi said. “ Oh Yoshi long time no

    see I haven’t seen you since you left to the Hoenn region” said Kurt. “ Ya its been a long

    time….hey Kurt do you still have those new pokeball I gave to you when I left?” said

    Yoshi. “Ya I got them they are all done too” said Kurt, “Sweet! can you transfer them here Kurt?” said Yoshi.” Sure I’m transferring them right

    now……okay they should be there right now,” said Kurt.” Yep there right here with me Kurt and thanks for saving them for me” said Yoshi,” No problem let

    me know if you want me to make more pokeballs for and what’s your next journey Yoshi?” said Kurt.

    “Well Kurt the girls and I are going to the Rainbow Islands tomorrow morning” said Yoshi, “Wait did you say you three are going to the Rainbow Islands?” said Kurt.

    “Ya that’s right why?” said Yoshi, “Well I heard there’s new types of apricorns in

    the rainbow Islands so can you and your friends find some new apricorns for me

    because I’m too busy making pokeballs here,” said Kurt.” Sure we could right girls!”

    said Yoshi, “YAAAAA!” said the girls.” Great thanks hope you three have a good trip

    and try to find some new apricorns okay” said Kurt.” You got it Kurt and we will see

    you later bye and take care” said Yoshi.” Ya you too and good luck on your journey

    and finding your girlfriend” said Kurt.

    When Yoshi hang off the phone, he was shock when he heard what Kurt said.” Okay which one of you told Kurt that I was looking for my best friend?” said

    Yoshi” Well while you were buying some medicine bro, May and I called Kurt earlier and told him everything what we were doing and your little secret about you and Dani kind a funny

    huh big brother?” said Allenby. Yoshi hit Allenby on the head,” Ow what was that for

    bro!” she said.” For talking behind my back little sister” Yoshi said,” and sis promise me you will never talk behind my back again okay” Yoshi said. “Okay big brother I promise”

    said Allenby.”And that goes for you too May” said Yoshi, “Oh fine then” said May.

    Both May and Allenby were crossing their fingers.

    When the gang left the pokemon center, they were started to head home to get some

    rest. “ Man I’m hungry I hope mom is home right now” said Yoshi, “You said it bro

    I’m hungry as well,” said Allenby.”May you gotta meet our mother she the best mom

    we ever got,” said Allenby, “Ya and her cooking is the best as well,” said Yoshi.

    “Wow now I’m really excited to meet your mom” said May

    When they finally got home, they found the door unlock.” Big brother why is the door unlock” said Allenby.”I don’t know sis either Kiyona is home or mom

    is,” said Yoshi.”Yoshi who’s Kiyona?” said May.” I’ll tell you later first I got to know who’s home or not” said Yoshi, When Yoshi went inside the lights went

    on.” WELCOME BACK YOSHI!” ? said.”Mom? Kiyona?” Yoshi said, Kiyona gave Yoshi a really big hug and Yoshi’s face was changing colors.” Sis I can’t breathe” said Yoshi,” Oops sorry little brother its just that I missed you so much since you left to the Hoenn region” said Kiyona. After Kiyona gave Yoshi

    a hug, his mom gave him a big hug too.” Mom I…. can’t …breath” said Yoshi, “Oops sorry son, ooohhhh I missed you so Yoshi” said

    Nikki.”Oh Allenby you been with your brother for the whole time” said Nikki.

    “Ya I went with him and his friend to the pokemart to get some supplies for our

    journey to the Rainbow Islands” said Allenby.When Nikki heard that, she started

    to cry.” Mom whats wrong” said Allenby,”Well I’m glad he came back and that makes

    me very happy but we he goes off to a new a journey, it makes me miss him a lot”

    said Nikki. “Oh sorry about that and who might you be?” said Nikki,” well my name

    is May and I’m a good friend of Yoshi,” said May.” well May would you like to join

    us for dinner? She said, “sure I love to” said May. After dinner, everyone went to bed

    and getting ready for the big day tomorrow. At 6:00 in the morning, everyone got up and

    went to the kitchen.” Okay girls are ready to go to the Rainbow Islands?” said Yoshi,

    “you bet big brother I’m all set,” said Allenby.”Ya me too Yoshi” said May.

    At 6:50am, Yoshi, May, and Allenby were all ready to the Rainbow Islands.” Okay are we all set?” said Yoshi, “all set Yoshi” said May and Allenby, “Yoshi before you go, mom and I want you to have this” said Kiyona. Nikki and Kiyona gave Yoshi a brand new poke gear for his new journey.” Wow thanks mom! thanks sis!” said Yoshi

    “your welcome Yoshi” said Nikki and Kiyona.”Yoshi you make sure you look after your

    little sister and promise me you see Dani on Crystal Island, she really misses you a lot

    while your gone” said Nikki.” I will mom I promise I will see my best friend again”

    said Yoshi, “Do you mean your girlfriend big brother?” said Allenby.”sis well you be

    quiet” said Yoshi. Everyone started to laugh about Allenby's joke.” Well mom and Kiyona we’re off to New Bark Town’s seaport now” said Yoshi, “Good luck on your

    journey little brother and you too baby sister and May” said Kiyona, “Yoshi make

    sure you tell Dani how much you really feel about her and good luck honey,” said

    Nikki.”Oh mom” said Yoshi.
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    Whoa this chapter is better than I tought. It's very good. I wish just like this one (not insulting) all Advanceshipping stories to be a bit longer inculding those one-shoots, but that's how it is.

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    Hey thanks. The next chapter will be up in the next couples of days
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    Nice chap! ^^ Look forward to the next one

    Also, one thing:How do ya make those " diffrent?

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    Another nice chapter! I can't wait for the next one. BTW, the new Chapter 14was great. I read it on Fanfiction.net.

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