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Thread: All I Want For Christmas Is You (AAML Christmas One-Shot Special)

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    Talking All I Want For Christmas Is You (AAML Christmas One-Shot Special)

    All I Want For Christmas Is You (AAML Christmas One-Shot Special) Rated U

    EDIT: *Sees a 1 star* Before I start, may I ask not to rate me a 1 star because you're an advanceshipper, please, cos I find it annoying and I spent a lot of time on this. This is suppose to be a treat, not a torture story for you anti-pokeshippers.

    (Inspired by the song ‘All I Want For Christmas Is You’ by Mariah Carey)


    Cerulean City, Christmas Eve.

    I don't want a lot for Christmas
    There is just one thing I need
    I don't care about the presents
    Underneath the Christmas tree
    I just want you for my own
    More than you could ever know
    Make my wish come true
    All I want for Christmas
    Is you...


    Misty Waterflower, along with her sisters, Daisy, Violet, and Lily, were decorating their home, the Cerulean City Gym. Also helping them was Tracey, a friend that Misty met on the Orange Islands as he carried boxes of Christmas decorations into the gym. Knowing how big the gym is, they had a lot of decorating to do.

    It took a whole day to do this and because of that, Misty was extremely tired as she slowly walked to her bedroom and collapsed on her bed. She lay on her bed for a minute or so and then she turned towards her desk, which was next to her bed. One her desk were a number of photos showing pictures of her and her friends she travelled with before being called back to look after the gym.

    I don't want a lot for Christmas
    There is just one thing I need
    I don't care about the presents
    Underneath the Christmas tree
    I don't need to hang my stocking
    There upon the fireplace
    Santa Claus won't make me happy
    With a toy on Christmas day
    I just want you for my own
    More than you could ever know
    Make my wish come true
    All I want for Christmas
    Is you...


    You baby

    She got up from her bed and walked over to her desk. She pulled out the chair from underneath the desk. She sat comfortably on it and looked at the photos, reminding her of what adventures she had with them.

    One of them showed a picture of her and her two friends, Ash and Pikachu with Lapras in the background. Misty was wearing Ash’s jacket because of the extreme coldness of the weather. She remembered that her other friend, Brock was missing from the photo because he was taking it at the time. That photo reminded her of an adventure they had when they found a lost humanshape pokemon Jynx and returned her to Santa at the North Pole.

    Another photo was showing Ash crashing into a food table while Misty and Pikachu had embarrassed looks on their faces. It was the time when they were at a Christmas party, she was hoping a to find a ‘special someone’ to meet her under a mistletoe. It turned out to be Ash, much to his shock as he ran away to get some Christmas cookies, which he already had, and accidentally crashed into the table.

    Normally, she would ask for a lot of presents, such as toys. But on this occasion, she only wished to meet up with her friends again, especially the one she considered to be her closest. It was some time since they last met after Ash’s journey through the Hoenn region ended. She wondered if that Christmas wish would come true as she went to her bed and slept comfortably.

    I won't ask for much this Christmas
    I won't even wish for snow
    I'm just gonna keep on waiting
    Underneath the mistletoe
    I won't make a list and send it
    To the North Pole for Saint Nick
    I won't even stay awake to hear those magic reindeer click
    'Cause I just want you here tonight
    Holding on to me so tight
    What more can I do
    Baby all I want for Christmas
    Is you…

    You baby


    Christmas Day.

    As her alarm clock rang, she woke from her dream and stretched her arms out while letting out a yawn. After her morning rituals, she made her way to the kitchen and made herself a cup of hot cocoa while assuming her sisters aren’t up from their sleep yet.

    She quietly made her way to the sitting room where a bunch of presents placed beneath a Christmas tree. And to her surprise, her sisters were already there.

    “I guess you guys were waiting for me, huh?” Misty said noticeably.

    “Yeah,” Daisy said. “But, there is, like, another reason why we’re up so early.”

    “And what’s this other reason?” Misty asked in puzzlement.

    “Well, put it this way,” Violet said. “Come on out, guys!”

    At that signal, a few familiar faces came out of their hiding places, surprising Misty. “Merry Christmas, Misty!” her friends yelled.

    Completely surprised with emotion, Misty covered her mouth with her hands. “Max, May, Brock, Pikachu… Ash,” she sobbed slightly as tears began to form in her eyes.

    “Pikachupi!” Pikachu squealed happily as he leapt from Ash’s shoulders and onto Misty’s arms, hugging her.

    “Hello, Pikachu!” Misty said, hugging him back. She then looked over to Ash and then ran over to him and hugged him too, much to his shock but he was less shocked than the time he was underneath that mistletoe as he hugged her back while blushing. He looked over to Brock while Brock inaudibly joked, “I think she likes you.”

    All the lights are shining
    So brightly everywhere
    And the sound of children's
    Laughter fills the air
    And everyone is singing
    I hear those sleigh bells ringing
    Santa won't you bring me the one I really need
    Won't you please bring my baby to me…


    It was time open the presents, much to everyone’s excitement. Misty wanted to know how her friends came to Cerulean City while they were at the Battle Towers. Daisy explained that Ash had some time to spare, so he decided to surprise her and had some help from them.

    “Here’s mine, Misty,” Ash said as he handed his present over to her, which was quite small and rectangular like a box.

    Misty unwrapped her present, showing a red box. Wanting to know what was inside the box she opened it, revealing a gold necklace with a beautifully crafted golden Luvdisc, much to her astonishment. “It’s beautiful,” she said.

    “Hey, let me put on ya,” Ash said as he took the necklace and placed it round her neck. She then looked at a mirror attached to sitting room wall and looked at the necklace on her with a smile on her face.

    “Thanks, Ash,” she said.

    Oh I don't want a lot for Christmas
    This is all I'm asking for
    I just wanna see baby
    Standing right outside my door
    Oh I just want you for my own
    More that you could ever know
    Make my wish come true
    Baby all I want for Christmas
    Is you…


    Some time later, while everyone waited for their other friends and relatives to arrive, Ash and Msity decided to take a walk around the city, talking about old and lost times. As they were about to exit the gym, they spotted a mistletoe hanging above them at the entrance door.

    “Kiss under the mistletoe?” Ash asked.

    “You’re not going to run away from it again, are you?” Misty asked cheekily, remembering the time when he did.

    “Nah, not this time,” Ash said.

    “Okay.”

    Their eyes closed as their lips came closer to each other until they felt their lips touched. They planned to have a small kiss, but this felt sweet and pleasant as they held on to that kiss. After a minute or so, they slowly moved away from each other as they realised that they kissed longer than they thought while blushing.

    “Merry Christmas, Mist,” Ash said.

    “You too, Ash,” Misty replied.

    For her, the wish came true.

    All I want for Christmas is you baby
    All I want for Christmas is you baby
    All I want for Christmas is you baby…


    END!

    Two more one-shots as part of the Christmas Treat: Comedy One-Shot starring TR: Christmas Costume Calamity! and AAMayL One-Shot: Lady In Red
    Last edited by Brian Powell; 1st December 2005 at 4:03 PM.

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    Thanks for the card, Skiks
    Pokemon Impact (PG13):
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    Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!
    (Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

    Goldenrod High (Chaptered Comedy Multishipping fic PG13) Updated: 02/12/09
    Who says school is just for learning? ^^

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    I agree more one shots heck more anything would be fine. I like your style.

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    here's what i have To say AWESOME JOB!!!great One-shot (Rips up heart & gives to Brain Powell) here take my heart>
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    Ok, I'm out, this is turning into a game of spin the bottle O_o.


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    Dark Angel 87: That’s right, you are the first one. Thanks for the review. All my one-shots are good? Are they all equally good? So equal that you can’t choose which one’s the best one? Huh? Huh?

    TaZz: Thanks.

    Pokeshipping Togetic: O_O; Alright, calm down, mate. Put your heart back. A review will do. Thanks anyway.

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    Thanks for the card, Skiks
    Pokemon Impact (PG13):
    Series: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 (Cancelled)

    Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!
    (Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

    Goldenrod High (Chaptered Comedy Multishipping fic PG13) Updated: 02/12/09
    Who says school is just for learning? ^^

    Check out my other stories, and everyone else's in the Completed Fics forum!

    Been doing some singing and voice impressions too! Check me out at the Brian Random Channel Thread!

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    “Here’s mine, Misty,” Ash said as he handed his present over to her, which was quite small and rectangular like a box.

    Misty unwrapped her present, showing a red box. Wanting to know what was inside the box she opened it, revealing a gold necklace with a beautifully crafted golden Luvdisc, much to her astonishment. “It’s beautiful,” she said.
    Priceless romantic moment, there. You can just imagine the shock and amazement in her eyes as she looks upon the present.

    See, Ash? Mistletoe is nothing to be afraid of. Yes, that was certainly lovely. Kudos. *smiles*
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    Sike: Jewellery, a girl's best friend. Thanks for the review.

    Announcement: There will be five shipping one-shots coming Feburary. They are...
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    Last edited by Brian Powell; 15th December 2005 at 2:53 PM.

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    Thanks for the card, Skiks
    Pokemon Impact (PG13):
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    Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!
    (Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

    Goldenrod High (Chaptered Comedy Multishipping fic PG13) Updated: 02/12/09
    Who says school is just for learning? ^^

    Check out my other stories, and everyone else's in the Completed Fics forum!

    Been doing some singing and voice impressions too! Check me out at the Brian Random Channel Thread!

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    Is there no one-shot you cannot do Brian? Man that was good, if shorter than my regular taste. I'd seriously see about getting a job as a writer.
    Zepther is not a perfect city, filled with crime and evil. Through its dark alleys and narrows streets, a silent watcher protects the people, calling forth the darkness of metal to defend them. Cloaked in black, shrouded in the mysteries of his past, his cold heart is true as steel. His name is Chronos. He is the Dark Eye.
    The legacy begins...

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    Sweet from Ash to give her a golden necklace
    'All I Want For Christmas Is You' is my favorite christmas song!
    Good job!

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    Power Shot: Felt the roamnce, huh? Apologies for the shortness but then again a lot of my one-shots are short, because one-shots a kinda like short stories aren't they? Do I see myself being an author in future? Maybe... if I fail becoming a story writer/games programmer in future.

    Cutiej Giirl: I said it before and I'll say it again - Jewellery is a woman's best friend. I like that song as well but '12 Days of Christmas' is my favourite... I even made a parody version out of it. Check it out in my latest chapter of Pokemon Impact 3. Finally, thanks.

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    Thanks for the card, Skiks
    Pokemon Impact (PG13):
    Series: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 (Cancelled)

    Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!
    (Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

    Goldenrod High (Chaptered Comedy Multishipping fic PG13) Updated: 02/12/09
    Who says school is just for learning? ^^

    Check out my other stories, and everyone else's in the Completed Fics forum!

    Been doing some singing and voice impressions too! Check me out at the Brian Random Channel Thread!

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    Aww, it was soo sweet. Great fic, Brian Powell. I would've read it soon but I couldn't till now. You're fic really made my day. I'll try to be here more often so I can read more of your fics. Oh, and thanks for reviewing mine.
    Please read & review my Fanfiction:
    Friendship, Love, Rivalry and Misunderstandigs
    Now on Chapter 19 !!

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    Aw! It's sooo cute! And I luv Mariah Carey! And This Song! (Great Choice W/Song!) Me Gona Read More Of Your One Shots! There are good!

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    Misty Aquamaster: About reviewing your fic, no problem. I enjoy writing fics as much as you enjoy reading them, thanks. Happy B day BTW (on the 24th December as well, so it's a double special occasion for you).

    Kizara: Thanks, mate.

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    Thanks for the card, Skiks
    Pokemon Impact (PG13):
    Series: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 (Cancelled)

    Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!
    (Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

    Goldenrod High (Chaptered Comedy Multishipping fic PG13) Updated: 02/12/09
    Who says school is just for learning? ^^

    Check out my other stories, and everyone else's in the Completed Fics forum!

    Been doing some singing and voice impressions too! Check me out at the Brian Random Channel Thread!

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    Your Welcome!
    And Um...I really like your story so Me gona print it out, I hope tats ok w/you!
    Anyways
    Happy Holidays!
    Last edited by kizara; 25th December 2005 at 6:29 AM.

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    'Course I don't mind your printing it, but don't sell it or take any credit for it. Happy holidays to you too.
    Last edited by Brian Powell; 24th February 2006 at 12:13 PM.

    Check these out:

    Thanks for the card, Skiks
    Pokemon Impact (PG13):
    Series: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 (Cancelled)

    Starring Black Jack, a veteran pokemon trainer who saves the lives of others while breaking necks of his enemies in cold blood. You want action? You got action!
    (Continue or Reboot? That is the question.)

    Goldenrod High (Chaptered Comedy Multishipping fic PG13) Updated: 02/12/09
    Who says school is just for learning? ^^

    Check out my other stories, and everyone else's in the Completed Fics forum!

    Been doing some singing and voice impressions too! Check me out at the Brian Random Channel Thread!

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