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View Poll Results: What should my next Story Special be?
Danae Glade's (Rio's sister) Life in Johto 6 75.00%
The Story of Rio's Uncle Nicholas 2 25.00%
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Old 2nd November 2007, 4:36 PM
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Welcome Pokemon Paradise, the comic full of adventure, romance, humor, and Pokemon. Please enjoy. And don't post one line criticism or compliments. They don't really mean anything.

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Season 1: Hoenn
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Yay! Pokemon Paridise is back! I can't wait till you make more eppies! (BTW, i'm on a computer at my school so that's why I am here!)
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I liked the new epi
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Lol, how did you get on the computer? The only reason I got on is because I'm home sick and I'm on the one in my room. Oh yeah I hope you don't mind me using this idea Matt Silver but I'm going to make a PM list just like he did cuz I think it's a good idea. I'll send you a PM when I update. So who wants to be on it?
At my Middle School, they allow the students to use the computers. We have our own profiles! ^^

Anyway, I'm gonna read the new eppies right now.
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Sorry for DP, but I must say, you are really improving! The comic is getting so good and exciting. The only thing you need to fix is some of the spelling and placing the words correctly in the speech bubble.

Keep up the FABULOUS work!
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Sorry for DP, but I must say, you are really improving! The comic is getting so good and exciting. The only thing you need to fix is some of the spelling and placing the words correctly in the speech bubble.

Keep up the FABULOUS work!
The double posting isn't a problem. And yes I know the spelling. The past few comics I've been making in a rush so that may be the reason or since I usually make them at like midnight so I might be half asleep. Yeah when i put them in the speec bubbles I'm usually too lazy to fix it so sorry about that.

And thanks Famous Hunter I hope you continue to read this comic.

The new episode will either be up today or tomorrow. Probably today but the war episode tomorrow.
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Danny's right eye looks like o_O Make sure to come back to my comic EvilPikachu79 chapter 1 is done o_O
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Danny's eye just looks like that becasue his hair is down. Don't worry about that too much.

Sorry I wasn't able to update yesterday or today. I've been very busy. From now on I'll only be able to update once or twice a week.

Edit: I made a character bio page for the Special comics. It's mainly me, my friends, and my family.
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Hello! Sorry for not posting earlier, but I thought I might do it now.

The new comics are definitely improving in quality - which is awesome. I like the new trainer sprites and the fact that everyone in the comics was confused by the sudden hair stylings (Once for KD, Cyrus' hair apparently "grew" when he went shopping - that was my excuse).

Keep it up! :P
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Thanks Matt Silver. The new episode should be up probably tomorrow.
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Hi there everyone. Sorry I haven't posted in a few days. To make you all feel better I made another story special. It's called "Norman's Journey." No it isn't every single thing he did on his adventures. What it is, is I pick certain parts of Norman's journeys (from my imagination) and put them into chapters. For instance the first few are about the Hoenn League. And I might make the next chaprter about when they are in Kanto. So it doesn't cover his whole journey just certain parts I happen to like.
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So where's the new epi?
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When I say episode I don't neccasarily mean of the main comic I mean an episode of anything. But the new episode is up now.
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The comic looks good so far. I didn't realize that you had started a new thread until I noticed it was only one page. Anyways, in comic 18, you spelled "similarity" wrong, and used the wrong "their".

There - Indicating location, place
Their - Possessive Pronoun

Just a couple things I've noticed. If I were in their position, I don't think I could resist going, "Why not just do it yourself?"

Anyways, looking forward to the next one.
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Sorry! I've just been so busy so I couldn't post. But now I'm here!

.......WHERE IS THE CLAPPING?!

Just kiddin'! Anyway, the "Whismur" eppy was okay but it's just that why would he want a Whismur out of nowhere? It's kind of random, so make sure you fix that. But the good thing is you are able to take crit' and you are doing your best on this wonderful comic.

Keep up the good work! ^^
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Sorry about the spelling I was in a hurry and can someone please rate the comic at least a three star. The Whismur epi was just to get that out of the way.
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Okay. So when is the new eppy comin'?
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I have a few things to tell. Some good news but mostly bad news.
1. Sorry I haven't updated in a while I have a reason for that.
2. The reason is because I'm taking a break from spriting until next year.
3. I'm not gonna go onto Serebii Forums until next year so you don't have to keep my comic alive I'll just post a new one.
4. I will be back with more in 2008 so don't worry.
5. I hope everyone enjoys the rest of the year. I hope you all have a great Christmas when that comes and everything else.
6. I MIGHT be back on before the year ends, but probably not.

So I say goodbye to all of you. Until next year.
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