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25th November 2005, 8:21 PM
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Back and better then ever…
From now (08.08.06) on, one-line-posts will be ignored, every reply should be Constructive Critisism. I've already seen my last TPJ thread getting locked, because it turned into THE Spam Thread of SPPF and I'd like to keep this one as clean as possible... The Pokémon Journey Season One Character Bios ----- Latest Episode Spoiler:- Latest episode: ----- Story Related Specials The First Rocket War Warning, not for 13 and younger Sorrow The Chronicles of Puranas --- Other Specials --- TPJ Quiz Take this quiz to test your TPJ knowledge. Thanks to www.quizyourfriends.com --- Movie stuff Spoiler:- Movie Stuff: --- Fan stuff Spoiler:- Fan Stuff: --- Credits Spoiler:- Credits: Thanks for reading my comic Thanks for replying Last edited by Beco; 13th September 2009 at 4:17 PM. 
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#2
25th November 2005, 10:14 PM
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Why didn't Growlithe use flamethrower on bellsprout. Just asking. Oh I liked how you made it look like night time, What'd be cool is that when they enter the radio tower. (if that happens in the movie) Can you make a cool full moon cause that be cool and it fit the movie
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#4
25th November 2005, 11:16 PM
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Obviously you people still don't understand why this comic was closed, and if you keep it up you'll have it happen again.
Your recent comic has a nice night effect, but this battle is dragged out much like every other one, Plus with Gangar surving it say that your simply ignoring him, or he is using Beco's body as battle. Your thundershock attacks are from a game and not just using an effect on paint, which is what you should do with ever attack.
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25th November 2005, 11:54 PM
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Alright I read Movie 2. Its not so great, grammar needs improvement, your sprites are still basic recolors and or real easy edits, a cliche about talking about comics in a comic, battle effects could be better and pokemon sprite need to be smaller. Also one more thing, when making them return or send out or throw a pokeball, make it more interactive. Like actually showing them doing it. One more thing I understnad your grammar may be bad because your from another country, but that doesn't change anything. You get a 5.5/10.
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#7
26th November 2005, 6:52 AM
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Nice night Background. I like the Background, but I thought Bellsprout used a Powder attack, so you need to make it look like leaves. Also, Beco, it is spelled Growlithe not Growlith. Please do some changes on Pokemon Spelling. But since you're trying speech bubbles, this shall be much better.
Also: Quote:
*Reports* If you want this thread to continue, don't post like that pichu gal, as the thread will close if you do that.
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#10
26th November 2005, 2:20 PM
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Spoiler:- Other Specials:
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 It's good to have an end to journey towards. But in the end it's the journey that matters the most.  Spoiler:- Friend List: Last edited by Beco; 6th December 2008 at 2:23 PM.
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26th November 2005, 3:46 PM
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I loooooove this comic! You obviously put a lot of hard work into this- and it really paid off! The design is wonderful, the recolors are awesome! Keep at it, Beco!
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#14
26th November 2005, 7:02 PM
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I would also like to warn anyone who is posting useless things like "tpJ iS finnally bak!!! yAY" to stop. You can be happy to see that there is a new thread, but perhaps a review of some of Beco's newer episodes, along with your w/b message, would be better. I would also like to warn Beco that he is STILL spamming, and that if it continues I'll see that this thread is closed again. CoF took the words right out of my mouth a few posts up. Griping about a low rating won't do anything but make you look egotistical. So what? It's a rating. And I think that 3.57 is high. That's why I've rated it down.
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Last edited by blueguy; 26th November 2005 at 7:09 PM.
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#16
26th November 2005, 8:27 PM
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Try making better the razor leaf (somebody had already post this)
Put the speech bubbles in your comic, they're pretty good. Nice episode. So Gengar has something special...
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#18
26th November 2005, 10:19 PM
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Cool!!
Your comic rocks! It has great pictures and your characters are very interesting! There is just 1 thing you have to do....You should put more exclamation marks.
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#20
26th November 2005, 10:44 PM
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Hey Beco! I'm back...so too much spam and you got it closed huh? Your getting better though
Your graphics are getting better your spelling is improving *cough* jk Your plots are sorta improving Your talking should be in bubbles that's all I got you get a 1/10 JK!! you get a 4/7
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